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    Drake Blackthorn

    Griffon Knighthunter
    Griffon Knighthunter

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    Post by Griffon Knighthunter 27th April 2014, 3:43 pm

    Name: Drake Blackthorn
    Rank: Legendary
    Species: Wyvern
    Type: Combat Pet
    Description:
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    Drake is a serious but loving Wyvern. It has been with Rose ever since it was born so it shares a strong connection with her. It is protective of her and whenever she gets into a fight he stays by her side the whole time. It is as big as it shows in the picture (I don't know how long it really is and I don't feel like trying to find a good size). After Defeating an enemy Drake has the habit of eating them. Drake is very lovable to people he likes. It doesn't take a lot to get Drake to like you. All you need to do is give him some meat or help out Rose with something and he will like you.
    Abilities:
    It can Roar loudly, often scaring random people.
    It can speak telepathically with Rose.

    Strengths:

    • Does not listen to anyone else but Rose.


    • It can be strong and gets stronger with Rose.


    • I can scare people with its roars.

    Weaknesses:

    • Cannot speak to anyone but Rose.


    • When it speaks it roars so it often scares people without meaning to.


    • When Rose is in trouble it will attack without any commands given making it more dangerous for him.


    • Wind attacks can counter and block all attacks made by this.


    Name:Wyvern's Fury
    Rank: D
    Description: Drake flaps his wings and makes 2 sharp Talons come out of each. The Talons speed toward the enemies in front of him. Each Talon that hits causes a D-rank damage. This ability has a cool down of 4 posts. The Talons are 3 feet in length and 3 feet in width. The speed these Talons travel are 25 MPH.
    Strengths:

    • The Talons are strong and are able to do some damage.


    • The Talons Are long.


    • The Talons are fast.

    Weaknesses:

    • Can be blocked or countered by any C-rank spell.


    • Can be dodged by any wind move because it can blow the Talons away.


    • Cannot hurt anyone in the same guild.


    • Cool down for 3 posts and a duration of 1.


    Name:Wyvern's Scratch
    Rank: D
    Description: Drake used his sharp claws to try to scratch the foes apart. The claws can do a D-rank damage when hit with them(Half a D-rank for one scratch, Full D-rank for two). The claws are about 3 feet long in height and can scratch at a speed of 2 scratches per second. This ability has a cap of 3 seconds.
    Strengths:

    • The claws are sharp and can do some Damage.


    • The Claws are long


    • The Claws are fast.

        Weaknesses:

        • Can be blocked by any C-rank spell.


        • Cannot hurt anyone in the same guild.


        • Can be broken by any fire move.


        • Cool down for 3 posts and a duration of 1.





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    Post by Guest 27th April 2014, 4:23 pm

    1) Please add dimensions to the Talons your Wyvern can summon (length and width)
    2) Specify the amount of speed these Talons can travel in your Wyvern's first ability
    3) Add more detail to your Wyvern's personality. For a Legendary Pet, you should have a paragraph (6+ sentences recommended) about your pet. Include more traits, if you can.

    I should be able to approve this after the above changes are made.
    Griffon Knighthunter
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    Post by Griffon Knighthunter 2nd May 2014, 4:36 pm

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    Post by Guest 2nd May 2014, 8:16 pm

    Alright, one last thing, and my apologies for not including this earlier:

    3 strengths and 4 weaknesses for each spell (Cooldown being one of the weaknesses)
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    Post by Griffon Knighthunter 2nd May 2014, 8:49 pm

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    Post by Guest 2nd May 2014, 11:40 pm

    Correct the grammatical error in your second weakness for your Wyvern's first ability. I assume you mean it cannot dodge (counter, block, etc) any wind move?

    Make this change, and your approval is indefinite
    Griffon Knighthunter
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    Post by Griffon Knighthunter 3rd May 2014, 11:02 am

    Bump. Thanks for looking at this!
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    Post by Guest 3rd May 2014, 11:37 am

    Still not done. For your first two weaknesses for your second spell, the wording choices you used make these particular weaknesses look like benefits. Do you mean that the Wyvern cannot dodge Wind moves or C-Rank spells. You'll also have to explain the reason why he cannot dodge these two things.
    Griffon Knighthunter
    Griffon Knighthunter

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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Hell summon
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    Post by Griffon Knighthunter 4th May 2014, 12:36 pm

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    Post by NightDrivenEn7 8th May 2014, 5:54 am

    can you please be a bit more descriptive with its second ability?

    Also, please label what strengths and weaknesses this pet provides as it also is a combat pet.



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    Post by Griffon Knighthunter 11th May 2014, 2:30 pm

    bump
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    Post by Samus Aran 19th May 2014, 5:42 am

    For your first spell, I'd like for you to increase the speed to 25 MPH. Being fair, what you have currently is actually really slow.

    For the second one, state that every two scratches deal D-rank damage. Also, cap out the amount of seconds it last for at 3.

    Bump and I'll check it again.


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