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    Ania
    Ania

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Inuki: The Demon Dog
    Position : None
    Posts : 74
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Illusion Magic
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    Post by Ania 12th May 2014, 9:42 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Illusion Magic
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Illusion magic is a magic that distorts the senses. This magic may occur to any of the human senses (eg sight,hearing etc). Visual illusions are the most well known and understood making the easiest spells to perform. The emphasis on visual illusions occur because vision often dominates the other senses.
    A high form of illusion is hallucination which is a distortion in the absence of a stimulus whereas basic illusion spells needs to have a medium to perform, since it only distorts a misinterpretation of a true sensation.  

    Ania does not remember where she got her Illusion magic. She was sold to con-artists, after her memories were erased. These swindlers were not mages and didn't know how magic works, they forced Ania to use her illusions to make money for them. Money that was almost real, an illusion that would distort not just one, but different senses. Ania's ability, at that time did not cover what they demanded, so they beat her, imprisoned her, and didn't feed her for weeks. Ania tried, until she got it right. Though every time she does it her life was put into the line. The spell would be too strong for her that she would immediately pass out and exhaust her magic.


    Strengths:
    - Large range magic
    - Spells doesn’t need to be spoken to perform
    - Caster can make something even out of her imagination
    - Other spells can be made into mediums

    Weaknesses:
    - Mediums need to have the same component as the illusion. (solid medium to solid illusion)
    -Spells are weak when figured out.
    - Larger mediums takes time to turn into illusions
    - A non-living medium could only be turned into a non-living illusion, same goes for living mediums.

    Abilities/Powers:
    - Mage can choose who can hear or see the Illusions
    - Caster can sense other illusions
    - Mage can conceal ones presence making her extremely unnoticeable.

    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS

    Name: Letter change
    Rank: D
    Type: Illusion
    Description: Ania thinks of words to exchange with certain writings. Paper would glow a faint yellow light before changing. It would only take 2 seconds for the spell to work. Any distance would work for the spell, given that Ania could see the letters.
    Strengths:
    -It’s a fast working spell
    - Any distance would do
    - It is not easily detected.
    Weaknesses:
    - People who have seen the real words can easily dispel the spell if the verbally recite all its contents
    -The real words and the illusion should have the same length
    - Ania must see the letters to perform the spell
    - The spell lasts for 6 posts with a cooldown of 6 posts

    Name: Solid Change
    Rank: D
    Type: Illusion
    Description:
    An illusion which changes any solid object to another (illusion) solid object, given that they have the same size. For a mage to do this spell, they must imagine the object they want the medium to look like. Medium would glow an orange light before changing. Caster can change any solid object 5 meters away from them.
    Strengths:
    - Medium can be solid people
    -Spell can be casted on other solid spells
    - It can be based on casters imagination
    Weaknesses:
    - It can be easily detected by senses other than sight
    - Visual impressions are only changed, materials are still the same.
    - I takes 2 seconds per feet to change an object
    -Duration: 5 posts Cooldown: 5 posts

    Name: Auditory Illusion
    Rank: D
    Type: Illusion/offense
    Description: This spell distorts a person’s sense of hearing. It is much harder to do than visual illusions and needs greater focus. To do this, caster would need to stare at the target, repeating in her mind the words she wants the target to hear. The sounds surrounding the target would be the casters medium. This spell can also serve as an offensive attack, caster can change the volume of surrounding sounds that can deafen the target.  
    Strengths:
    - Spell is strong in noisy surroundings
    - Caster can change the sounds surrounding the target with a range of 4m
    - Caster can change the volume of surrounding sound.
    Weaknesses:
    - Caster needs to have great focus and unwavering thoughts despite noisy surroundings
    - Spell is weak in quiet surroundings
    - Can only be useful to one target
    - Duration: 3 posts Cooldown: 4 posts

    Name: Money-make
    Rank: D
    Type: Illusion
    Description:
    Money-make spell is a combination of visual illusions and tactile (touch) illusion. This is a combined sensory illusion, which takes a lot of effort to do, especially for D-rank mages. But because of Ania’s past she is able to do this spell with a lot of consequences.
    Strengths:
    - Jewels looks too real, since tactile illusion is involved.
    - Paper used to convert the money doesn’t need to be the exact size as jewels.
    - Paper spells could be changed into jewels

    Weaknesses:
    - Ania will collapse after doing this spell
    - It takes time to do
    - Ania would need to touch medium to change it.
    - Ania would be too exhausted after doing this spell.
    - Duration: 3 posts Cooldown: 5 posts


    Last edited by Ania on 15th May 2014, 3:03 am; edited 1 time in total
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    Post by Guest 14th May 2014, 2:54 pm

    Hey Ania, I'm Legacy and I'll be reviewing your magic application =]

    So far I'm liking the look of this magic, as it seems like a quirky little skill, although it seems to lack much (if any) offensive output. This could cause you big issues if you're planning on doing jobs.

    My immediate issues with your magic are mainly the durations and cooldowns. Your cooldowns should always be equal to or more than your durations (usually more if they're offensive based or grant massive buffs). As your magic is solely illusion-based and doesn't do much in combat your cooldowns would be fine being equal to your spells.

    My other issue is your magic's description. Although she doesn't know where she got her magic, you could add a little more on how her magic has been abused through the aforementioned bandits, as this would give some insight onto how her magic works in particular.


    Let me know when you've made these edits and bare in mind what I said about the lack of offensive options. All the best! =]
    Ania
    Ania

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Inuki: The Demon Dog
    Position : None
    Posts : 74
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Illusion Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Ania 15th May 2014, 3:11 am

    I put an offensive option into my auditory illusion spell :D
    also changed the cooldowns and added stuff to my desc... Hope it's alright 。◕‿◕。
    Ania
    Ania

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Inuki: The Demon Dog
    Position : None
    Posts : 74
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Illusion Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Ania 18th May 2014, 2:17 am

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    Post by Guest 18th May 2014, 5:22 pm

    Sorry for the delayed reply on this.

    I have no issues in regards to this so have fun with your new magic! =]

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