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    Zachary Tempest Magic

    Rhazien Cromwell
    Rhazien Cromwell

    Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Swords
    Position : None
    Posts : 25
    Guild : Eclipse Soul
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Rhazien
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Demonic Lacrima Magic: Sathanus
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill:

    Zachary Tempest Magic Empty Zachary Tempest Magic

    Post by Rhazien Cromwell 9th October 2014, 12:28 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Negative Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Negative Magic is a rather unique magic which gives its user the ability to negate, subtract, divide, separate and remove things and magic around them. This magic can prove to be very dangerous because of it's ability set, allowing the user to take away things such as air or gravity or even earth in a certain area around him, his allies or even his opponents. This magic also has the capability to open walls or other obstructions by dividing it into two halves and passing through it. The user could also create zone's where magic is weakened or negated, he can subtract ranks and damage from spells, separate magic from his opponents or allies rendering them useless for a short amount of time. Negative magic manifests its self in a white sort of aura.
    Strengths:

    • Negative Magic is strong against most all forms of magic as it has the ability to power-down the opponents spells making them cause less damage.
    • Negative magic has a strong defense with it's ability to create negation fields, negation shields and it's single target spell damage reductions.
    • Offensively Negation magic is strong because it can separate magic from it's opponents allowing them to not be able to use magic for a short period of time.

    Weaknesses:

    • Negative magic is weak against any type of 'reversal' magic as it is capable of undoing the effects of his magic.
    • Negative magic is weak against any type of 'positive' magic as it is capable of undoing and doing the exact opposite of his magic.
    • Negation magic is weak against creation types of magic because while he can keep using his magic to negate/remove etc. the magic, creation magic in its own nature is able to keep being created and thus never fully stopped.

    Abilities/Powers:

    Negative Control: Zach is capable of manipulating his magic around himself allowing him to subtract from things that pertain to him, for instance Zach could negate/reduce his own gravity allowing him to float to great heights, he could also negate/remove water around him mouth/head in order to create a pocket of air to breathe under water.

    Negation Bubble: Zach is able to use his magic to create a bubble of Negative magic force 3 meters around himself allowing him to block one spell of equal rank to himself, after doing so he cannot use his bubble again for posts equal to the cool down of the spell he had blocked.


    D rank spells:


    Last edited by Zachary Tempest on 11th October 2014, 12:12 am; edited 3 times in total


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    II Rhaziel II Sathanus II

    Rhazien Cromwell
    Rhazien Cromwell

    Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Swords
    Position : None
    Posts : 25
    Guild : Eclipse Soul
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Rhazien
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Demonic Lacrima Magic: Sathanus
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill:

    Zachary Tempest Magic Empty Re: Zachary Tempest Magic

    Post by Rhazien Cromwell 10th October 2014, 3:12 pm

    Complete :)


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    Zachary Tempest Magic Donkey2_by_gramcrackers-d8h7q82
    II Rhaziel II Sathanus II

    Indiana Jones
    Indiana Jones

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    Post by Indiana Jones 10th October 2014, 11:01 pm

    Hello Zachary, i'm Indiana and i'll be going over your magic. 

    So firstly, i'm sad to say but you can only have 4 spells at start, unless you have purchased more. I couldn't fit a purchase, so you will need to remove one of your spells. Sorry about this. Bump the thread when you are done. And i'll get back to you.


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    Rhazien Cromwell
    Rhazien Cromwell

    Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Swords
    Position : None
    Posts : 25
    Guild : Eclipse Soul
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Rhazien
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Demonic Lacrima Magic: Sathanus
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill:

    Zachary Tempest Magic Empty Re: Zachary Tempest Magic

    Post by Rhazien Cromwell 10th October 2014, 11:15 pm

    Bump~ Removed Area removal


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    Zachary Tempest Magic Donkey2_by_gramcrackers-d8h7q82
    II Rhaziel II Sathanus II

    Indiana Jones
    Indiana Jones

    Void Tyrant


    Void Tyrant

    Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- God Slayer- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- Player 
    Lineage : Caine's Descent
    Position : None
    Posts : 1380
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 1
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Experience : 350

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ragnarök
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    Third Skill:

    Zachary Tempest Magic Empty Re: Zachary Tempest Magic

    Post by Indiana Jones 10th October 2014, 11:40 pm

    This is an awesome magic and i only see some small issues here. It's only cooldowns and durations. So on your 2nd spell, reduce the duration to 2 and cooldown to 4. Also on your 3rd spell reduce duration and cooldown by one second each as well. If that is all done, bump the thread and i'll be ready to approve it.


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    Zachary Tempest Magic 18jWfhn


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    Main Theme Battle Theme 1 Battle Theme 2
    Rhazien Cromwell
    Rhazien Cromwell

    Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Swords
    Position : None
    Posts : 25
    Guild : Eclipse Soul
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Rhazien
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Demonic Lacrima Magic: Sathanus
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill:

    Zachary Tempest Magic Empty Re: Zachary Tempest Magic

    Post by Rhazien Cromwell 11th October 2014, 12:12 am

    bump~


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    Zachary Tempest Magic Donkey2_by_gramcrackers-d8h7q82
    II Rhaziel II Sathanus II

    Indiana Jones
    Indiana Jones

    Void Tyrant


    Void Tyrant

    Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- God Slayer- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- Player 
    Lineage : Caine's Descent
    Position : None
    Posts : 1380
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 1
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Experience : 350

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ragnarök
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Zachary Tempest Magic Empty Re: Zachary Tempest Magic

    Post by Indiana Jones 11th October 2014, 1:27 am

    All looks good. So...

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