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    Karite Tentei (Kotetsu weapon)

    Kotetsu Gensou
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    Post by Kotetsu Gensou 5th May 2014, 6:51 pm

    Name: Karite Tentei (Reaper of Gods)
    Rank: Weak
    Type: dual ninjato's
    Description:
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    Strengths:

    • fast(where they are smaller than original swords, they can be swung faster
    • Needs less room(they can be swung in tighter spaces)
    • Connectible (they can be connected to each other at the hilt to make a double bladed staff. The handle is 1 foot in length while each blades is 1 1/2 footv each

    Weaknesses:

    • short(less reach than a regular sword)
    • strength(where they are small and swift, they lack on strength)
    • connectible (while connected they are slower)

    Abilities: none


    Last edited by Kotetsu Gensou on 5th May 2014, 7:21 pm; edited 2 times in total
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    Post by Guest 5th May 2014, 7:02 pm

    Hey there, just reading through this and there are just a couple of things I'd like to ask to change.

    You need to have 3 strengths and 3 weaknesses to your weapon. Also, could you possibly bullet point each one so that it's clear when one strength/weakness ends and the next begins?

    Finally I feel the ability is too much for a weak weapon. In fact, I don't think weak weapons can have an ability now. You can look to upgrade the weapon later, so bare in mind that the changes I request now can always be changed again at a later date =]
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    Post by Kotetsu Gensou 5th May 2014, 7:22 pm

    Edited and fixed
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    Post by NightDrivenEn7 8th May 2014, 8:57 am

    sorry for wait, approved.


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