Zillion Jaeks

Name: Zillion Jaeks
Gender: M
Age: 19
Birthday: 12/18
Sexuality: Straight
Special Characteristics: A x-crossed scar on his face.

Personality: Zillion is a very interesting type of person, he is respectful at times. But mostly he is a bit irritating and annoying, he is also at the most loyal to his teammates. The way he shows his affection or respect to others, is by picking a fight with anyone and test his and another's strength. He shows compassion toward his strength, charisma, and charming looks. He of all others, dislikes to fight, for the risks of killing someone would break Zillion bit my bit. But if needed to kill someone, and if any of his comrades are hurt. He would risk anything to save them at once. For Zillion the one most thing that he can't stand, is when someone is risking their own lives for him. When any moment occurs when his comrade is risking his own life to save him. Zillion would awaken his inner beast, for one moment of a friend getting closer to dying fuels him to continue fighting. As the saying goes,"Leave no man left behind" would always be in Zillion's mind.

Likes: Zillion enjoys a nice game of mercy, cause he just loves seeing someone getting their face into a constipated way. He enjoys eating meat, and most on the medium-well side. To also add, he just loves his swords. For he thinks that one cannot fight without a blade in their hand. Plus he just loves cutting up his enemies, and using his sword as fork.

Dislikes: The most disgusting thing Zillion hates, are vegetables. Of course its healthy, thats why he hates it so much to also add that its some times green for he thinks that its been molded up. But since mold can get one sick, Zillion dislikes getting sick. He enjoys to fight and do many glorious things, but when he's sick. He can't do shit.

Motivations: Zillion has one thing in his mind, in order to be the best. To surpass everyone stronger than him, for what reason? Thats all he has nothing but getting better, sad but true.

Fears: He very much is afraid of dying, yes a very strong man of his stature. But dying is something that could stop him from doing all the things that he would want to do. Second is the fear of extremely dark places, and whats worse for him is when its very small and damp. Like a cave.

General Appearance
Height: 5'9
Weight: 172 lb
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Dark Brown
Skin Tone: Light
Appearance: Zillion is a bit scrawny when it comes to a physical or muscular competition, but he is a bit muscular. He his reasonably strong, and mostly agile. With his sword he can do many things with his type of body.. So with his type of body, he can handle the heat. He has short brown hair which is a bit spiked up, dark brown eyes which turn lighter when light flashes on him. He wears a white t-shirt with nothing on it, for he enjoys seeing the blood he splattered on it or his enemies that got their blood on his shirt to be seen. White pants that Zillion also likes to see blood, a blue coat thats very elegant with white fur on the edges of the hood. He also wears a silver earring on his left ear, and a mid-sized silver chain necklace.

Guild/Council
Guild: Fairy Tail
Tattoo: A white Fairy Tattoo on his right hand
Rank: D-Rank Mage

First thing i saw wrong, birth date.
Month, Day.
Needed.

We do not want a list of what his personalities are, we want you to describe them: like how he acts in detail, not just a single word response. Revamp your personalities.

Put likes, dislikes, motivations, and fears into List format and give real explanations why he enjoys them: not smart ass "You know why" responses. Not everyone likes swords, so keep that in mind...And, also no real life references...Like that trix cereal thing. Granted it is funny, but i highly doubt that in the fictional anime world, you would find people who actually know that...or have it...

You are severely underweight for someone who is 6 foot-one.

Ok, just revamp your appearance to, follow the guidelines in the template. We do not want you adding in two bit commentary as well, just describe the character's appearance. And by your commentary, i mean this: " Anyways back to the appearance who's-a-whats-it," Use the name of your character, not what you did put.

Try for a third person, omnipotent narrative when revamping everything. Using the name of the character. And again, KEEP YOUR COMMENTARY OUT OF THIS! We want to know the character, not what you have to think. We are bias, don't add things to change that.

Hmm... I was a bit of trolling last time I made my bio, sorry. :laugh:

Bump. Someone should check D:

No bumping. We, or at least I, find it irritating. We will get to it, so please wait.

Get rid of the year in your birthday. We have no set year, so it'll make it easier on us.

Don't make observations. Something like "Since he has swords" is unnecessary. An in-depth description of your character is more than enough, but don't put in your personal observations.

Other than that, I think you're fine.

Xana wrote:No bumping. We, or at least I, find it irritating. We will get to it, so please wait.

Get rid of the year in your birthday. We have no set year, so it'll make it easier on us.

Don't make observations. Something like "Since he has swords" is unnecessary. An in-depth description of your character is more than enough, but don't put in your personal observations.

Other than that, I think you're fine.

Why thank you sir, plus I shall try not to bump. :ego1:

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