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    Rose Thorn

    RoseThorn
    RoseThorn

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 21
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Superscript
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    Rose Thorn Empty Rose Thorn

    Post by RoseThorn 4th May 2014, 5:29 pm

    Name: Rose Thorn
    Gender: Female
    Age: 19
    Birthday: 12/18
    Sexuality: Bi
    Special Characteristics: N/a

    Personality: Out of battle Rose is a sweet caring girl. At least that's how she appears. In reality she is always scheming and plotting on how to best protect her guild mates and advance her own position in the Guild. She always puts others first, unless it comes to rank improvements. She is also very analytic when she thinks of others intentions. She does her best to overcome every challenge in her way. Unfortunately she is a perfectionist who doesn't rest until she gets the exact outcome she wants, which sometimes hinders her during her exploits. Her goal is to someday become the most powerful wizard in all of Fiore! Gaining a team is currently one of her top priorities, right after becoming part of a guild of course.

    To become one of Rose’s friends you have to be loyal and trustworthy, even though she values her own power she only cares about being able to trust those around her. For her to put her trust in someone they have to have proven themselves in one way or another, such as saving her in a dodgy situation or helping her to win an important battle. When around her friends Rose becomes quite perverted in her jokes. She is also a big flirt to those she is already close to. She also lets her friends know about her analytical mind that she hides behind a sweet smile. Her friends are the only ones who know how smart she actually is.

    In battle the Rose becomes a weapon of mass destruction. When in battle her scheming and plotting comes to the surface while being kind and caring gets thrown to the wind. She tries to plan out every move that her and her opponent will make, relying on her strength and knowledge to overcome. Although she shoves down her caring side she will still put the safety of her guild mates above her own. When she believes she is beaten she gains a raging personality that makes her throw caution to the wind and start attacking with everything that she has, even if it could get her killed. When she is battling with her friends beside her she reigns in her BAMF side and let’s herself rely on them as much as she can, whilst getting the job done of course.

    In battle she is also an exceptional leader using her knowledge to her advantage. When leading she normally makes elaborate and insane strategies that would only work if everyone can pull their weight in time. Although she may lead well her following capacity is very limited. When she is put under a leader she will do everything in her power to take control from that leader. If she cannot take control of the group she will try to shove her ideas down everyone's throats until they agree.

    If Rose ever feels that she is weak she starts to break down, her world crashes around her and she takes up the fetal position. The only way to get her out of this state is to slap her and give her a pep talk to rouse her spirits.

    Likes:

    • Cats  When she lived with her parents they always had a cat.
    • Sense of Humor  She loves to be around those who can make her laugh in the darkest hour.
    • Purple  It has always been her favorite colour.

    Dislikes:

    • Untrustworthy People  She cannot stand those who she can't trust with her life.
    • Brown  She finds it a dirty color.
    • Pigs  She can't stand animals that wallow in their own filth.

    Motivations:

    • Power  She wants to be the most powerful wizard in Fiore!
    • Love  She wants to find someone to share her life with.
    • Friendship She wants to build a team of trustworthy and loyal friends.

    Fears:

    • Bugs  She has been afraid of bugs since she found a spider in her crib at the age of one.
    • Weakness  She is afraid of being weak, of having no power to defend herself.
    • Darkness  She is afraid of people succumbing to the darkness that works every day to invade their hearts.


    General Appearance


    Height: 5'6"
    Weight: 125 lbs.
    Hair: Lavender hair styled in a long curling ponytail.
    Eyes: Silver
    Skin Tone: fair-skinned
    Appearance: Rose has a nice hour-glass figure with a c-cup bust. She is normally outfitted in a short, strapless, dark gray dress that reaches to halfway down her thighs, a black belt with rose buckle, and knee-high black high-heeled boots.

    Guild/Council

    Guild: Blue Pegasus
    Tattoo: Dark Purple Located on her right shoulder-blade.
    Rank: D


    Last edited by RoseThorn on 4th May 2014, 6:16 pm; edited 2 times in total
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    Rose Thorn Empty Re: Rose Thorn

    Post by Guest 4th May 2014, 5:46 pm

    Hey there, I'm Legacy and I'll be reviewing your form.

    So far it looks to be a good form, and kudos to you for having three likes/dislikes etc. along with brief descriptions for each of them.

    The only real issue I see is with your personality. Right now it is just over 300 words long. The personality must be at least 500 words. To add to your personality, perhaps you could make more of a note on how Rose acts around her friends and fellow guild members when outside of battle. You could also make a note perhaps of how she reacts when she does feel weak, such as if she's surrounded by mages who are considerably stronger than her.

    These are just a couple of ideas to help you reach the 400 word count =] Good luck! Please post a short bump when your application is completed and I will re-review it!
    RoseThorn
    RoseThorn

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 21
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Superscript
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Rose Thorn Empty Fixed It

    Post by RoseThorn 4th May 2014, 6:04 pm

    Thanks. I believe that I fixed it.
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    Rose Thorn Empty Re: Rose Thorn

    Post by Guest 4th May 2014, 6:23 pm

    Nice work =] approved!

    Get on with yer magic lass!

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