Blane Fairfield

Personality: Blane is a very affectionate young man, he cares deeply about everyone he meets and is not much of a fighter, much preferring to care about peace and more relaxed things than picking fights. He is somewhat shy to begin with but is very much a ladies man and he has no fear speaking in public if the needs for it is addressed to him. As far as family goes Blane's parents were wealthy land owners working in the cotton industry, Blane had no wish to follow in his father's footsteps and so was exiled and cast aside by the family. Although this was traumatic for him at the time he now bodes his family no ill will. Blane has always admired beauty, poetry, arts and everything serene that can come with life, knowing to never take it for granted. This is why he chose to apply for the guild Blue Pegasus as it held among its ranks, exceptional Wizards as well as the refinery that he sought within his soul. His main goal in life is to collect the extremely rare golden Gate keys that contain the Zodiac spirits of whom hold great magical power, his spirits are all, well, for most part well behaved and act with a sense of decorum, however they do sometimes display the sides that Blane often does not show in public.

Personality Wise blane is a very open and honest young man, he cares little for peoples thoughts on him and will speak his mind, he loves to find out peoples stories as well as tell his own. He can be a bit heavy headed from time to time and is like a rottweiler unwilling to drop a subject, which is another form of his belief in always being a gentleman and chivalrous. Blane does have a temper but it is rare for him to ever let it show or to effect his judgement on anything, finally his love for his friends is what makes him function, without his friends he doesn't feel much point in being anywhere as he will give his life to protect his friends and will often act out of character making rash and sometimes stupid decisions if it means protecting them.

Blane as a fighter is capable. He does have some physical strength from keeping fit as well as being quite capable with a sword. Blane's magic is however celestial Spirit Magic to which he adores. He is capable of balancing which keys he uses and which would have a greater effect on the battlefield, his cunning and ability to lul his opponent into a sense of false security is his greatest trait as he says his biggest regret; "If you are capable of breaking a ladies heart, you are capable of breaking anything." These are harsh but true words in his eyes and he truly believes that the hardest thing to ever do is to break a woman's heart. Being a Celestial Mage Blane is fast on his feet and has had to build his stamina and speed to match his opponents who use magic via their own hands he must call upon others to fight in his place unless using a blade in which he will fight along side his beloved spirits, He will juggle between fighting himself and then switching out with a spirit or to bring forth a spirit that would allow him to make his move. He works more as a team with his spirits on equal levels rather than to fight as commander and soldiers. Blane's psyche whilst in battle changes from that of a caring young man to one for the desire to win, whilst fighting Blane is still calm and collected almost emotionless excluding the task at hand. His confidence within himself whilst in battle reinforces his strong mental attitude in battle as well as outside of the fight. Blane was taught how to use a blade from a young age fencing with his father, he also knows how to joust, do archery and duel wield. He was supposed to be wedded to a beautiful princess from another region of earthland but the royal family refused the marriage in the end when Blane explained he would not give up his Magic to become a prince. Blane prefers to use duel Katanas when fighting in hand to hand combat purely because of the strength of the metals used but also from the balance of the blade in his hands. Blane relies on his cunning to win fights due to the type of magic he uses, simply running into battle does not win fights when using Celestial Sprits. It is much better to fight alongside your spirits and have a plan of attack rather than to charge blindly like an animal.

Blane is content to follow anyone into battle as he is much more the brains than the brawn, willing to follow orders to the letter and also with a dedication to his commander that is unwavering he is the 'perfect soldier' in respects of loyalty but he is also able to take command and will do so if he is required to do so. He will not choose to lead for the weight of being one to put his friends into danger is not something he wishes for but he will take charge to seal a victory.
Likes:

• Magic - He finds magic mystifying and wondrous with what can be achieved through the creation of ones own will power.
  

• Love - Blane will do anything for one he loves and although he has had many girlfriends he still waits for the girl he will truly love.
  

• Dedication - Without dedication to ones pursuits and the heart to under go them why should someone indulge in adventures?
  

• Milkshake - Chocolate milkshake with hazelnut if you please, with an extra one on the side!
  

Dislikes:

• Liars - Why should anyone need to lie? It is utterly unnecissary and not something a gentleman should do.
  

• Perverts - Although Blane is flirtatious he isn't perverted and tries to be as diginfied as possible at all times.
  

• Cruelty - He believes that freedom is owned by all and should not be forced, that is why Blane takes a long time to make his contracts with his celestial spirits. He would certainly never permit anyone to hurt them.
  

Motivations:

• Wizard Saints - It is a long shot that he wishes to make come true but he dreams to one day be the best Celestial mage in all of Earthland.
  

• Love - Blane's wish to meet the girl of his dreams will fuel his passion to travel and to help those in need.
  

• His Spirits - The connection that Blane has with his spirits is so relaxed he see's them more like family that tools for fighting. He wants to spread that feeling with all celestial mages.
  

Fears:

• Losing his Spirits - Blane gets very paranoid about leaving his keys anywhere, he sleeps with them next to his bed, refusing to let them out of his sight.
  

• Betrayal - Blane give EVERYONE a fair chance, regardless of their past choices, but that chance if betrayed will spell bad news for them.
  

• Dark Guild - Blane finds the magic purposes of Dark Guilds despicable and uncontrollable with something like magic, it should never be used for selfish purposes.
  

Height: 5' Foot 10 Inches
Weight: 140 Lbs
Hair: Blone shaggy hair cut short.
Eyes: Light amber.
Skin Tone: Light.
Appearance: Blane has mid length, blonde hair that is always a blend of purposeful messy, He wears a tight White vest top and over it a blue half jacket that has a gold trim and is cut off just under the rib cage. He also wears a pair of slim fit blue jeans which are fastened with a white leather belt with a silver clamp. His celestial Keys are always fastened to his best as he does not lose them. On his feet he wears a pair of mens black fashion military boots.

Blane hold himself physically as a proud young man, he did at one point come from a well established family and does walk as such, but his time away from that life makes him seem much more relaxed and now seems more like a young man with good posture rather than walking with snobbery. He is very light on his feet and can tend to glide when necessary, but can be more masculine in the tone of his voice that can be soft when being polite and more rough when battling opponents. His eyes are always searching and full of hope and optimism as well as having a defined jaw and strong masculine features for his age.

Guild/Council

Guild: Blue Pegasus
Tattoo: Right pectoral in blue
Rank: D

OK here you go! I made my notes in teal. Your personality paragraph was long enough but I would a few problems with it, and added pointers on how to fix it inside ~ PM if you need more info/help and bump this when you're done.

Keys wrote:

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Name: Blane Fairfield
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Birthday: January 6th
Sexuality: Straight
Special Characteristics: He has a scar across his chest where his heart is from a jousting competition.

Personality: Blane is a very affectionate young man, he cares deeply about everyone he meets and is not much of a fighter, much preferring to care about peace and more relaxed things than picking fights. He is somewhat shy to begin with but is very much a ladies man and he has no fear speaking in public if the needs for it is addressed to him. As far as family goes Blane's parents were wealthy land owners working in the cotton industry, Blane had no wish to follow in his father's footsteps and so was exiled and cast aside by the family. Although this was traumatic for him at the time he now bodes his family no ill will. Blane has always admired beauty, poetry, arts and everything serene that can come with life, knowing to never take it for granted. This is why he chose to apply for the guild Blue Pegasus as it held among its ranks, exceptional Wizards as well as the refinery that he sought within his soul. His main goal in life is to collect the extremely rare golden Gate keys that contain the Zodiac spirits of whom hold great magical power, his spirits are all, well, for most part well behaved and act with a sense of decorum, however they do sometimes display the sides that Blane often does not show in public.

Personality Wise blane is a very open and honest young man, he cares little for peoples thoughts on him and will speak his mind, he loves to find out peoples stories as well as tell his own. He can be a bit heavy headed from time to time and is like a rottweiler unwilling to drop a subject, which is another form of his belief in always being a gentleman and chivalrous. Blane does have a temper but it is rare for him to ever let it show or to effect his judgement on anything, finally his love for his friends is what makes him function, without his friends he doesn't feel much point in being anywhere as he will give his life to protect his friends and will often act out of character making rash and sometimes stupid decisions if it means protecting them.

Blane as a fighter is capable. He does have some physical strength from keeping fit as well as being quite capable with a sword. Blane's magic is however celestial Spirit Magic to which he adores. He is capable of balancing which keys he uses and which would have a greater effect on the battlefield, his cunning and ability to lul his opponent into a sense of false security is his greatest trait as he says his biggest regret; "If you are capable of breaking a ladies heart, you are capable of breaking anything." These are harsh but true words in his eyes and he truly believes that the hardest thing to ever do is to break a woman's heart. Being a Celestial Mage Blane is fast on his feet and has had to build his stamina and speed to match his opponents who use magic via their own hands he must call upon others to fight in his place unless using a blade in which he will fight along side his beloved spirits. Blane was taught how to use a blade from a young age fencing with his father, he also knows how to joust, do archery and duel wield. He was supposed to be wedded to a beautiful princess from another region of earthland but the royal family refused the marriage in the end when Blane explained he would not give up his Magic to become a prince. Blane prefers to use duel Katanas when fighting in hand to hand combat purely because of the strength of the metals used but also from the balance of the blade in his hands.
This whole part is the one that's causing me some problems. This is under the personality section but most of this paragraph seems like a description of Blaines combat skills and physical abilities with not much description of his psyche in combat. You could fix that by talking about his psyche regarding combat, usual thought process, what balance does he have between hand to hand combat and the use of his spirits and more importantly why, why does he rely on being cunning, is he more brains or brawl etc. You have a lot of information in this paragraph you can work on, all you need really is to explain the thought process behind his usual behavior in combat. For the rest it all seems good, I like the under leadership part~

Blane is content to follow anyone into battle as he is much more the brains than the brawn, willing to follow orders to the letter and also with a dedication to his commander that is unwavering he is the 'perfect soldier' in respects of loyalty but he is also able to take command and will do so if he is required to do so. He will not choose to lead for the weight of being one to put his friends into danger is not something he wishes for but he will take charge to seal a victory.
Likes:

• Magic - He finds magic mystifying and wondrous with what can be achieved through the creation of ones own will power.
  

• Love - Blane will do anything for one he loves and although he has had many girlfriends he still waits for the girl he will truly love.
  

• Dedication - Without dedication to ones pursuits and the heart to under go them why should someone indulge in adventures?
  

• Milkshake - Chocolate milkshake with hazelnut if you please, with an extra one on the side!
  

Dislikes:

• Liars - Why should anyone need to lie? It is utterly unnecissary and not something a gentleman should do.
  

• Perverts - Although Blane is flirtatious he isn't perverted and tries to be as diginfied as possible at all times.
  

• Cruelty - He believes that freedom is owned by all and should not be forced, that is why Blane takes a long time to make his contracts with his celestial spirits. He would certainly never permit anyone to hurt them.
  

Motivations:

• Wizard Saints - It is a long shot that he wishes to make come true but he dreams to one day be the best Celestial mage in all of Earthland.
  

• Love - Blane's wish to meet the girl of his dreams will fuel his passion to travel and to help those in need.
  

• His Spirits - The connection that Blane has with his spirits is so relaxed he see's them more like family that tools for fighting. He wants to spread that feeling with all celestial mages.
  

Fears:

• Losing his Spirits - Blane gets very paranoid about leaving his keys anywhere, he sleeps with them next to his bed, refusing to let them out of his sight.
  

• Betrayal - Blane give EVERYONE a fair chance, regardless of their past choices, but that chance if betrayed will spell bad news for them.
  

• Dark Guild - Blane finds the magic purposes of Dark Guilds despicable and uncontrollable with something like magic, it should never be used for selfish purposes.
  

Height: 5' Foot 10 Inches
Weight: 140 Lbs
Hair: Blone shaggy hair cut short.
Eyes: Light amber.
Skin Tone: Light.
Appearance: Blane has mid length, blonde hair that is always a blend of purposeful messy, He wears a tight White vest top and over it a blue half jacket that has a gold trim and is cut off just under the rib cage. He also wears a pair of slim fit blue jeans which are fastened with a white leather belt with a silver clamp. His celestial Keys are always fastened to his best as he does not lose them. On his feet he wears a pair of mens black fashion military boots.

Blane hold himself physically as a proud young man, he did at one point come from a well established family and does walk as such, but his time away from that life makes him seem much more relaxed and now seems more like a young man with good posture rather than walking with snobbery. He is very light on his feet and can tend to glide when necessary, but can be more masculine in the tone of his voice that can be soft when being polite and more rough when battling opponents. His eyes are always searching and full of hope and optimism as well as having a defined jaw and strong masculine features for his age.

Guild/Council

Guild: Blue Pegasus
Tattoo: Right pectoral in blue
Rank: D

Alright then mate, since you've asked me to take a look over this, and Gemma has a bit on her hands currently, I shall.

And...

'Tis approved!