Whisteria Frostflare

Name: Whisteria Frostflare
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Birthday: 10th of December
Sexuality: Straight
Special Characteristics: Even though they are covered, she has a few scars on the back of her hips.

Personality: When meeting Whisteria, the first thing that most people notice is her lack of emotional expressions, even though she has many ways of expressing herself through talk and body language she hardly ever shows emotions two her face. Because of this, she will easily send out sad or boring wibes that makes it hard for her to communicate with those who is easily offended or gets bored easily as well as people who wants to talk to a person instead of a wall which some people have referred her to in the past. This doesn't mean that she never shows emotions, she cries, laugh and smile.
When getting to know her, she is a kind and caring girl but can easily be upset and angry by small things. She is hardworking and loves to talk and be social, but she has a hard time letting people inn and doesn't share secrets unless it's something like a surprise party or enything in that category. People often ask why she is still so skinny while eating like a starving wolf, but she doesn't have an answer herself. She can come out as mysterious and suspicious, but hurting enyone or demanding great power isn't in her interest.
Love is something that doesn’t really bother Whisteria, she has been in love before but childhood sweethearts doesn’t really count. She has had a few guys confess to her, but she has never been able to share those feelings. She isn’t very good at talking with guys unless she knows them well, but love doesn’t really concern her eny of the time. But some days when there is festivals or celebrations, she often envys the couples around her holding hands and being together.

When meeting Whisteria in battle, she is very focused and serious. She never steps down from a challenge or battle and always has to end what she started or she will be bothered with it. She is a swift mover and doesn't talk much while under a battle and tries to make things as quick as possible, even though she enjoys it, because of her back tecnique on how to use her stamina so she wont get tired quickly.
If she could choose to either be the leader or be leaded, she would choose to be leaded. She is quite bad at planning and commanding and being told what to do gives her a goal she wants to achive and feel good about if she makes it. She has never tried being a leader to a group of eny kind and would like it to stay that way for now.
Some of her biggest weaknesses in battle is speed. She doesn't attack very quickly, even though she moves fast around and is good at dodging attacks. But when it comes to her attack in first or doing a surprise attack, she just isn't fast enough. The other can be that if the opponent is someone she knows or cares about, or looks like them, her instinct will tell her to help them and not hurt them. She has always been caring and protecting to her friends and wouldn’t want them to get hurt.


Likes:

• Communication and being social is something she enjoys, sometimes she only sits there to listen but she still wants to feel like she is part of a group.
  
• Exotic fruits is something she is facinated of, specially if they are eatable! She loves fruits and to try new ones, and she has learned her lesson to research it before taking a bite.
  
• She has something called Nyctophilia, it is something that controls the feelings. It makes her have some kind of love to darkness and finds relaxtion and comfort with it, it will also have her be attrackted to dark-magic mages.
  

Dislikes:

• She doesn't have weak eyes, but rather sensitive ones to very strong light. She always waits a bit before she goes outside if it's sunny.
  
• Many people likes it, but running or walking downhill hurts her feet and she can't stand it.
  
• The noise of when someone cracks their fist into their hand and the sound of the bones cracking gives her unpleasant chills up her spines.
  Motivations:
  
• She gave a promise to herself when she was little to never avoid what will come and always face faith, so holding onto the promise and always working forwards is a great motivation.
  Fears:
  
• Because it has happend to her before, she fears it would happen again. Being alone, even thou it's crowded, but around strangers she will eventually feel smaller and scared.
  

General Appearance


Height: 4 and a half feet tall, but wears high-heels that makes her a bit taller.
Weight: 103 lbs
Hair: Purple hair. Her bang is drawn back to the backside of her head and a few locks curling out and up on the sides, it reaches down to her lower back.
Eyes: Spring green
Skin Tone: Quite pale, people often ask if she is feeling okay because of her pale skin.
Appearance: She is light clothed with a top reaching just pass her bra with straps lower then her shoulder, and followed on her arms with sleeves reaching to her hands. Hot pants with a blue belt which has the skirt/cape attached to it that goes over the back and tall high-heels. She carries herself with her back straight and moves swiftly in battle, she is silent in her walk but the clopping sound of her shoes gives her off.
She is used to the cold as she was trained on snowy mountains, so when there is a cold weather she doesn't bother to dress up with enything but mabye a white scarf around her neck. For other clothes, she has a green bikini if needed and a beige sun-hat.
For formal attire, she wears a gray, strapless dress reaching down to her knees and a pair of flat shoes in black. She hardly ever uses this since she thinks her normal wear is pretty enough, and accessories like necklats or earrings isn't her style.
She is isn't very picky on how to have her hair, but having it in a ponytail makes it uncomfortable for her and she is very touchy with her hair.
Guild/Council

Guild: Blue Pegasus
Tattoo: The Blue Pegasus council tattoo in a sky-blue color placed on the right side over her hip on the front, you can spot the top of it from the rim of the pants.
Rank: D

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thatcreepypencil wrote:Name: Whisteria Frostflare
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Birthday: 10th of December
Sexuality: Straight
Special Characteristics: Even though they are covered, she has a few scars on the back of her hips.

Personality: When meeting Whisteria, the first thing that most people notice is her lack of emotional expressions, even though she has many ways of expressing herself through talk and body language she hardly ever shows emotions two her face. Because of this, she will easily send out sad or boring wibes that makes it hard for her to communicate with those who is easily offended or gets bored easily as well as people who wants to talk to a person instead of a wall which some people have referred her to in the past. This doesn't mean that she never shows emotions, she cries, laugh and smile.
When getting to know her, she is a kind and caring girl but can easily be upset and angry by small things. She is hardworking and loves to talk and be social, but she has a hard time letting people inn and doesn't share secrets unless it's something like a surprise party or enything in that category. People often ask why she is still so skinny while eating like a starving wolf, but she doesn't have an answer herself. She can come out as mysterious and suspicious, but hurting enyone or demanding great power isn't in her interest.

When meeting Whisteria in battle, she is very focused and serious. She never steps down from a challenge or battle and always has to end what she started or she will be bothered with it. She is a swift mover and doesn't talk much while under a battle and tries to make things as quick as possible, even though she enjoys it, because of her back tecnique on how to use her stamina so she wont get tired quickly.
If she could choose to either be the leader or be leaded, she would choose to be leaded. She is quite bad at planning and commanding and being told what to do gives her a goal she wants to achive and feel good about if she makes it. She has never tried being a leader to a group of eny kind and would like it to stay that way for now.All right, this is goes so far, except personalities have a word minimum of 500 ^^, and you only have 350 words

Likes: Communication and being social is something she enjoys, sometimes she only sits there to listen but she still wants to feel like she is part of a group. Exotic fruits is something she is facinated of, specially if they are eatable! She loves fruits and to try new ones, and she has learned her lesson to research it before taking a bite. She also has something called Nyctophilia, it is something that controls the feelings. It makes her have some kind of love to darkness and finds relaxtion and comfort with it, it will also have her be attrackted to dark-magic mages.
Dislikes: She doesn't have weak eyes, but rather sensitive ones to very strong light. She always waits a bit before she goes outside if it's sunny. Many people likes it, but running or walking downhill hurts her feet and she can't stand it. The noise of when someone cracks their fist into their hand and the sound of the bones cracking gives her unpleasant chills up her spines.
Motivations: She gave a promise to herself when she was little to never avoid what will come and always face faith, so holding onto the promise and always working forwards is a great motivation.
Fears: Because it has happend to her before, she fears it would happen again. Being alone, even thou it's crowded, but around strangers she will eventually feel smaller and scared.
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General Appearance


Height: 4 and a half feet tall, but wears high-heels that makes her a bit taller.
Weight: 103 lbs
Hair: Purple hair. Her bang is drawn back to the backside of her head and a few locks curling out and up on the sides, it reaches down to her lower back.
Eyes: Spring green
Skin Tone: Quite pale, people often ask if she is feeling okay because of her pale skin.
Appearance: She is light clothed with a top reaching just pass her bra with straps lower then her shoulder, and followed on her arms with sleeves reaching to her hands. Hot pants with a blue belt which has the skirt/cape attached to it that goes over the back and tall high-heels. She carries herself with her back straight and moves swiftly in battle, she is silent in her walk but the clopping sound of her shoes gives her off.Can i get two more paragraphs in her appearance? Does she wear any other clothes, have her hair a certain way? Does she have astonding facial features? ect.

Guild/Council

Guild: Blue Pegasus
Tattoo: The Blue Pegasus council tattoo in a sky-blue color placed on the right side over her hip on the front, you can spot the top of it from the rim of the pants.
Rank: D

There, all fixed :)
Enything else you would like me to add? Sorry if the general appearence is still a bit short though..

Looks much better ^^ I can tell you put hard work into this, keep it up!!!

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