Blood Tentacle Magic

Magic

Primary Magic:Blood Tentacle Make
Secondary Magic: N/A
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Tentacle Make magic is a magic that Rose learned secretly because her parents didn't like mages all that much. With Tentacle make magic Rose is able to make a part of her body form into tentacles or make tentacles come out of her hands. She can make anything from swords to even animals. Her magic comes from her hands so it requires a lot of hand motions to do it. The Tentacles are made out of pure blood so they are red but they can solidify and take on any form.

Rose puts her hands together for most of the magic spells being cast.

Strengths:
Blood clotting - The user takes less physical damage. The user takes 5% less physical damage each rank.

Solidifying - The blood tentacle makes it so that it starts out as a liquid formation but it solidifies into an actual attack.

Retractable blood - After the spell is done if it hasn't broken the spell goes back into her as blood.
Weaknesses:
Water - Just because they can solidify does not mean they are not made out of blood. Water can easily wash the spell away.

Made of blood - The tentacles are made out of the persons blood so if it gets broke or destroyed HP gets lost depending on the spell rank.

Range - Cant make any long range attacks. Spells cannot go past a 5 mile radius.  

Ice - If it touches the blood then spells become fragile and break when hit by one spell lower than usual.

Abilities/Powers:

Blood clotting - Physical attacks to less damage each rank. D takes 5% less. C takes 10% less. B takes 15% less. A takes 20% less. and S takes 25% less. It goes up 5% each rank.

Blood Heal - When Rose drinks blood it makes her HP and MP heal by 5%.

Tentacle making - Rose can make Tentacles that can do just any random thing except hurt someone. Only tentacles made by spells can hurt people.

Blood sense - She can smell someone's blood and Identify them if she knows them and they are in a 5 mile radius. She has also had to taste their blood before to have this ability work on them. She can also smell someone to see if their blood would be sweet or sour (This is her opinion). She can also smell someone and tell if they are a demon, god or dragon.

Blood loss - When a spell gets broken or washed away rose loses an amount of HP determined by the spells ranking. D deals 5%. C deals 10%. B deals 15%. A deals 20%. S deals 25%. The percent it takes off goes up by 5 each rank.

Blood regulation - If blood is to hot or to cold she when she drinks it she is able to regulate it so it can be warmer or colder.

D-rank Spells:

Is this ready for review?

Not yet I still need some spells to be made :)

Ok I think it is ready... bump...

I personally, a stinger for detail, would like you to be more indepth with your strengths and weaknesses to form an official sentence in each of them; as well as talking lightly about them in your description of the spells.

Next, you need to add cooldowns and durations onto your spells; as I see most of them do not have this yet.

we will work on your magic once these two things are done. Also, your primary magic name is "Tentacle" but you state "Blood Tentacle" Everywhere else....May you please fix this small lapse of consistancy?

I hope the detail is better and the cool down is ok....

Since Night hasn't posted a reply on this for a while now and the user has asked me to review this, I shall.

I've discussed the required changes with you on Skype and you've made them.

'Tis approved!