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    ThornsQueen
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    Post by ThornsQueen 2nd June 2012, 1:21 am

    Primary Magic: Celestial Maiden
    Secondary Magic: None yet
    Caster or Holder: Take over/caster
    Description:
    Celestial Maiden is special type of take over magic than can only be attained by women. It is magic that allows the user to transform into one of the Celestial Maidens, gaining their armaments and skill. Daenarys has two celestial maidens, The Maiden of the Moon, Luna and the Maiden of the Sky, Aurora.
    Strength:
    -It allows the caster to borrow some of the Celestial Maidens power and make it her own.
    -It has a variety of magic spells, all different and suitable for different scenarios.
    -Her spells are increased to an extent when she is in full body take over.
    Weaknesses:
    -While under full body take over, using her other spells drains her magic greatly, and may cause her to really on manual combat as a result.
    -While under full body take over, she can only use spells for each maiden respectively, meaning if she is in the Moon Maidens take over form, she cant use any of the Sky Maidens spells.

    Appearance:


    Spoiler:

    Abilities/Powers:





    D Rank Spells
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    C Rank Spells
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    B Rank Spells
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    A Rank Spells
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    S Rank Spells
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    Post by King Zenshin 2nd June 2012, 8:08 am

    Fix the spoilers please.

    Also, for moon maidens sword, it cuts flesh but it's not harmful to living things? Fix that.

    Takeover, you can't summon things, summoning is a different magic, fix your shikigami's summon.

    You're S-Rank spell needs a cooldown of 10 or higher

    Bump it when you fixed it


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    Post by Daichi 3rd June 2012, 4:23 am

    Adding on to what Zen said, state how your spell reacts to defenses or spells of lower, same, or higher rank.


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    Post by ThornsQueen 3rd June 2012, 8:45 am

    Fixed the spoilers(spoilers within spoilers doesn't work), It says can't meaning it cant cut flesh, sorry for the confusion but its not a total take over magic that's why it is indicated take over/caster on the description, I did put how my magic reacts to others be it same and higher but not all since i find it unnecessary to put it since not all spells are meant to interact with others specially support magic.

    Question, can an area magic ranked C be dispelled by single focus attack of ranked A, given the attack had already detonated and has an area of 10 meter.
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    Post by Daichi 4th June 2012, 5:52 am

    Answering your question, the spell will detonate depending on how it is used. If that area spell has a source and that source is hit by an A rank move, it will most likely dispel. But if it is like a passive aura and doesn't have any particular source, I'm sure that it can last until the end of the duration, but it might have weaker effects than those with sources. (Though I'm not so sure about this.)

    And now with the review. The interaction with other ranks of magic is only done by offensive or defensive spells. Supportive spells don't need these. But some of your offensive spells, like Lunar Beam, still need these. You should also add how defensive blocking spells react when hit by your offensive attacks. I know that this is just a minor thing, but some spells have piercing damage that can be particularly different from others, so it might be necessary. Add how this magic reacts to defenses and I'll be alright.

    The duration of your S rank spells seem to be too much. S ranks have a standard duration of 3-5 posts. Your spell seems to be too powerful for 10 posts. Your A ranks should also have a longer CD. A ranks should have around 8 posts cooldown. For your summons, please follow the summoning rules for their usage. I think that summoning might actually be allowed for your magic, but if a mod disagrees, feel free to say so.


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    Post by ThornsQueen 4th June 2012, 5:59 am

    Its rank s take over magic, if my spell was normal holder or caster magic yeah it would be, plus i can only use my my lower ranked spells. I did indicate that.
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    Post by Daichi 4th June 2012, 6:10 am

    I think that I'll allow that since it limits your powers, but I'll see if a mod intervenes. As for now, focus on the other things I have stated.


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    Post by ThornsQueen 4th June 2012, 6:21 am

    Done, Did everything except the summon spell.
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    Post by King Zenshin 4th June 2012, 1:50 pm

    For Lunar curtain, if it's a C-Rank spell, it should be able to defend against C or below, not A and above. Lower it. Also, is the moonlight curtain stationary or does it move with the target? Also specify that.

    Space Infinite Sky and Summon Shikigami's and for the Shikigami's, remember, they are still an A rank spell, lower the 6 A rank attacks and 3 S rank, that's just too much. Also, duration for the Shikigami's, you put instant, 1 post? And, how are the Shikigami's lightning? Change the spell type. In addition, to weaknesses add that ice is weak to fire attacks and vice versa.

    Please, be more specific with eclipse, how it is casted and if you can destroy it at her will. Also, if it takes up magic as long as it's in effect.

    That is all for now, bump when edited.









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    Post by ThornsQueen 4th June 2012, 6:15 pm

    Done, revised eclipse by the way
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    Post by ThornsQueen 5th June 2012, 9:54 pm

    Bump.(zenshin told me to bump it i dont know why)
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    Post by King Zenshin 6th June 2012, 7:12 am

    Specify distances a bit more, "meters" doesn't mean much for people who don't know distances.

    For Shikigami's, it gets destroyed by 1 S rank spell or 2 A-Rank spells

    Bump when fixed.








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    Post by ThornsQueen 6th June 2012, 10:16 pm

    Bump. I also followed the new rule for cooldown.
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    Post by King Zenshin 7th June 2012, 5:47 am

    Like I said, please change meters on moon maidens glove.

    Other than that, looks good.

    Bump when fixed.


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    Post by ThornsQueen 7th June 2012, 6:16 am

    Bump
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    Post by King Zenshin 7th June 2012, 6:18 am

    I am going to hold on the approval so I can get another mod's opinion, please be patient.


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    Post by ThornsQueen 7th June 2012, 6:22 am

    its ok.
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    Post by Daichi 8th June 2012, 6:32 am

    Does your S rank spells get damaged by the time of the day? Like most of your other spells that get weaken by a certain time, like lunar beam being weakened by sunlight, your S ranks might be like this as well. Just answer this and this will be fine.

    EDIT: I'll go move this since the question is answered.


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