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    Knight of Space

    Jiyu Kazehime
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    Post by Jiyu Kazehime 18th June 2017, 1:12 pm

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    Post by Hania 26th June 2017, 11:12 am

    Hello Zenshin, my name is Tamashi and I will be your grader this time around. Anything I request of you will be in this wonderful colour. Any and all concerns, worries, problems or questions can me messaged to me and I'll get to them as soon as I can.

    With all that being said, lets get started...

    The Grading:

    Once everything I have requested is dealt with please bump or message me.


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    Post by King Zenshin 26th June 2017, 12:19 pm

    Bump:
    Added a strength and weakness to the overall magic as suggested
    Ability: Enhanced Perception replaced with Disruption
    Ability: From the Dark clarified and modified
    Spell: The Reaper edited
    All spells now only have one effect unless modified by "From the Dark"


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    Event Experience: 57,562.5
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    Primary Magic / Knight of Space
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    Post by Hania 26th June 2017, 2:48 pm

    Hello again Zenshin I hope you're ready for round two. As before I am Tamashi your grader, all edits and suggestions while primarily be in this wonderful colour. If I need things moved it will either be in blue or pink if other colours are required. Again you are free to message me with any concerns, worried and questions and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.

    With the above being said, lets start round two...

    Grading Round Two:

    Bump when the required changes have been made or message me whichever is easier.


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    Post by King Zenshin 26th June 2017, 3:56 pm

    Bump


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    Missions Completed
    100 Year: 1
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    S-Ranked: 1
    A-Ranked: 4
    B-Ranked: 4
    D-Ranked: 3
    Event Experience: 57,562.5
    Dungeon Experience: 2,325
    Total Experience: 263,160

    Character / Vincent Gauss
    Primary Magic / Knight of Space
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    Post by Hania 27th June 2017, 3:29 pm

    Hi again Zenshin, it's time for round three... by now you should know the drill anything I request will be in this wonderful colour. Should I happen to need other colours for moving purposes they will be this shade of blue or this shade of pink. As always any question, concerns, worries and the likes can be messaged to me.

    That being said, lets begin...

    Grading continued:

    When required edits are made bump or message me


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    Post by Hania 27th June 2017, 4:56 pm

    For future records:

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    Post by Guest 28th June 2017, 9:30 am

    moved upon user's request.

    King Zenshin wrote:Primary Magic: Recreation: Eldritch Manipulation
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Recreation is a very particular kind of magic that wasn't meant for use by humans. They had other plans and a baby was born with the inability to use any magic: Aegis Bright. As he grew, he eventually became aware of his powers as the only recreationist in existence, being able to bend reality to his will, in a sense. Of course, even this has limits. The only things that are able to be created are things that the caster has seen before and are nonliving, such as rocks, food, weapons, ect. Eventually, a mage approached Aegis in pursuit of the powerful magic and paid the ultimate price: his magical ability. For half a year, Zenshin trained relentlessly and without magic until finally he achieved his goal: mastering recreation. Since having found what could only be described as a strange tome, his recreation has been altered. How exactly is unknown, though what is known is that it has somehow altered his magic.

    Recreation

    According to Aegis, past recreation users had their own theories as to how and why an object is what it is, and passed on his theory to Zenshin. Essentially, it allows the user to look at any object, analyze it, and "store" it in his or her memory to be recreated at a later time; not a copy of the object, but rather to "recreate" the original object. Certain conditions must be met to recreate an object. The original object in question must be destroyed, for no two copies of an original object may exist at once. Furthermore, the recreation must be perfect, for if it isn't exactly the same as the original the object will disappear for reasons similar to the first condition.

    There are five parameters in addition to the prior conditions in order for a recreation to succeed. One: One must visualize the object as a whole. Two: Knowledge of what material an object is made of. Three: Knowledge of the physical history of the object. Four: Knowledge of the reason that item was created. Five: Knowledge of the conceptual history of the object.

    Because such knowledge would be impossible to get through normal means as well as the knowledge being so intertwined with recreation working properly, users have a unique ability to "scan" inanimate objects to acquire such knowledge. How they scan varies, but Zenshin does so by closely examining the item with his blind eye.

    Zenshin, The Eternal Student

    In his search for knowledge, Zenshin met Aegis Bright. Aegis Bright humbly agreed to mentor him and teach him Recreation, but warned Zenshin that it would require great sacrifice. Foolhardy and with a lust for knowledge that burned hot, he agreed to an ancient ritual whose origin is still shrouded in mystery. Aegis Bright warned him once more before performing this ritual, though Zenshin, with great conviction, agreed regardless.

    Then everything went white.

    He awoke on the Serene Cliff side with a pounding headache and the inability to use his previous, trademarked ice magic. For the first time, he knew how it felt to be without magic - like a piece of his identity was violently ripped from him. Aegis, who seemed a bit surprised that Zenshin survived the ritual, informed him that he'd be receiving training and that if he couldn't make it through, he would never be able to use magic again, but if he continued there was a good chance of death. Zenshin took on the half a year of training head on and learned things that he would never have dreamed of knowing. Over the course of this time period, he received many wounds, though the most prominent manifested itself as a blindness in his left eye. Although the vision to his left eye was lost, he gained a new vision that regular sight would pale in comparison to, the ability to access his magical circuit.

    Once his body and mind hit their peak, he was able to sustain the toll of recreation successfully and produced a simple weapon, "The Reaper", which was an average scythe from Aegis' many, many weapons. Although Zenshin the Ice-Make mage from Eclipse Soul came to Aegis, he left as Zenshin the Recreationist mage from Sabertooth and has since bore that title proudly.

    Zenshin's use of Recreation

    If reality was a fabric, it would be made of up strings called "leylines." It is these leylines that Zenshin can affect with his magic, disrupting them or changing their properties with sufficient stimulation using his mana. Not only that, but he can use the mana to strengthen his existing weapons or body parts to make them as strong as steel. Because of this, he strayed from the path that his master went down and became more focused on the controlling and weaving of leylines and the learning how to most efficiently transfer his magical energy to strengthen the initially weak recreations of his.

    Upon coming into contact with a strange tome, his pure magical aura was altered and using his magic now feels alien, rather than natural. Zenshin has since come up with a new theory of recreation. Rather than knowing these five aspects of items and recreating the original flawlessly, he has theorized that perhaps these five parameters are subject to one root aspect: an object's "essence". With the essence of an object, Zenshin is no longer restricted by the original original object or technique, but rather he in now able recreate the original object or technique in his own image.

    Strengths:
    -Unpredictable and grants the user great power to shape the world around them at will
    -Since the strain that Recreation puts on the user is great, Zen has a much higher endurance, strength, and speed level to support the use of it
    -His perception allows for the prediction of trajectories and allows for ease when searching for 'hard-to-find' objects, such as a needle in a haystack. Allows Zenshin to "scan" objects in order to recreate them.


    Weaknesses:
    -After Zenshin has used up 50% of his magical power, he is subject to losing his memory, blacking out, or even dying. The severity of the negative effects are dependent on his much magical power he has left.
    -Very few support abilities
    -Zenshin cannot change his magic from Recreation
    -Living entities with a sufficiently powerful magical power cannot be "scanned" which means he cannot "scan" any other magi.  

    Abilities/Powers:
    Magic Resistance:

    Disruption:

    From the Dark:

    Mana Infusion:

    Non-combat Abilities:


    Spells

    D-Rank Spells:
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    Post by King Zenshin 28th June 2017, 11:08 am

    Moved: "Living Recreation - The Reaper" to signature spell and replaced with "Leyline Manipulation - Burst"
    Added: C-Rank spells and Ability: "Their Eye"


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    Missions Completed
    100 Year: 1
    10 Year: 1
    S-Ranked: 1
    A-Ranked: 4
    B-Ranked: 4
    D-Ranked: 3
    Event Experience: 57,562.5
    Dungeon Experience: 2,325
    Total Experience: 263,160

    Character / Vincent Gauss
    Primary Magic / Knight of Space
    Secondary Magic / Paladin's Armaments
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    Post by Hania 3rd July 2017, 5:38 pm

    For the records:

    Grading was done over discord and requested edits made.

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    Post by King Zenshin 6th July 2017, 12:22 pm

    Changed:
    First signature spell's scaling and ranges
    Vector, Break, Burst, and Endless Blades have all had their speed and ranges adjusted
    Break's strength and weaknesses were altered


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    Missions Completed
    100 Year: 1
    10 Year: 1
    S-Ranked: 1
    A-Ranked: 4
    B-Ranked: 4
    D-Ranked: 3
    Event Experience: 57,562.5
    Dungeon Experience: 2,325
    Total Experience: 263,160

    Character / Vincent Gauss
    Primary Magic / Knight of Space
    Secondary Magic / Paladin's Armaments
    History & Notebook | Bank
    Golden Lacrima | Expires 7/9/2019
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    Experience : 206,450

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    Post by Hania 8th July 2017, 4:01 am

    So we meet again Zenni, by now you know the drill; I'm Tamashi and I'll be grading you this time around. In case you've forgotten anything I ask will be in this shade of purple. As always any concerns, worries or questions you have you can send me a private message or direct message on discord.

    With the reminders and formalities out of the way, lets get started... shall we...

    The grading:

    When said changes have been made let me know and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.


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    Post by Hania 8th July 2017, 10:50 am

    For the records:

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    Post by Lester Drynedi 10th May 2018, 11:30 am

    Unlocked & Moved at users request

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    Post by Guest 10th May 2018, 10:35 pm

    All edits will be in this color.

    King Zenshin wrote:Primary Magic: Archmage's Sanctum
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Requip
    Description: The Archmage's Sanctum is the name of the pocket dimension which Vincent uses to house his various magical equipment. Unlike other Requip users, Vincent doesn't store conventional weaponry or armor with varying degrees of magical properties that they bestow upon their user. Instead, Vincent crafts equipment with striking similarity to the magi he's encountered through historical documents. In his home nation, the wizards of old would use wands, staves, spell books, and other such oddities to amplify and better control their own magical power which was comparatively raw and difficult to harness otherwise. As a sign of respect for those powerful wizards that came before him, as well as to use a magic which best reflects his own motivations, Vincent learned how to craft those magical artifacts which excel in channeling elemental magic.

    elements:

    Strengths:
    - Allows the user an unparalleled control over and protection from the elements of nature
    - Magical artifacts of varying types allow for a high degree of flexibility in and out of combat
    - The nature of the Requip makes it unique and likely to catch off enemies who expect a more conventional set of spell weapons or spell armor

    Weaknesses:
    - Only able to control one element at a time
    - Slayers are able to negate entire blocks of spells due to their elemental nature
    - Ability to cast spells is heavily dependent on external forces. For example - if Vincent cannot read his spell books they won't can't activate their spells. Similarly, if Vicent loses hold of his wands or staves he cannot use their active nor passive ability.
    - The variety of the magic is a weakness as well as a strength since there are many more elements and variations of those elements than he has ability to access. This weakness is alleviates as he increases in proficiency, however.


    Abilities/Powers:
    Elemental Resistance:

    Magical Transportation:

    Force of Nature:


    Spells


    D-Rank Spells:

    Every active needs it's own separate cooldown and duration from the requip itself
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    Age : 26
    Experience : 263,160

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    First Skill: Knight of Space
    Second Skill: Paladin's Armaments
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    Post by King Zenshin 11th May 2018, 6:31 am

    Bump

    Changed all of the Requip proper duration/cooldowns to 4/5
    Added a duration and cooldown to all active abilities
    Changed Natural Nightmare from a 20 HP boost to a 10 HP boost


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    Missions Completed
    100 Year: 1
    10 Year: 1
    S-Ranked: 1
    A-Ranked: 4
    B-Ranked: 4
    D-Ranked: 3
    Event Experience: 57,562.5
    Dungeon Experience: 2,325
    Total Experience: 263,160

    Character / Vincent Gauss
    Primary Magic / Knight of Space
    Secondary Magic / Paladin's Armaments
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    Post by Guest 11th May 2018, 9:32 am

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    Post by Lester Drynedi 12th May 2018, 10:45 am

    Unlocked and moved at users request

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    Post by King Zenshin 12th May 2018, 5:32 pm

    Alright, I'm ready for round two!

    Changes made:

    Ability Added -
    Wizard's Tools

    Signature spells added -
    Apprentice's Robes
    Crystal Waters
    Magic Bolt

    C-Rank spells added -
    Wand of Storms
    Thunderclap
    Black Sauna
    Blessing


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    10 Year: 1
    S-Ranked: 1
    A-Ranked: 4
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    Post by Guest 12th May 2018, 7:47 pm

    All comments will be in this color.

    King Zenshin wrote:Primary Magic: Archmage's Sanctum
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Requip
    Description: The Archmage's Sanctum is the name of the pocket dimension which Vincent uses to house his various magical equipment. Unlike other Requip users, Vincent doesn't store conventional weaponry or armor with varying degrees of magical properties that they bestow upon their user. Instead, Vincent crafts equipment with striking similarity to the magi he's encountered through historical documents. In his home nation, the wizards of old would use wands, staves, spell books, and other such oddities to amplify and better control their own magical power which was comparatively raw and difficult to harness otherwise. As a sign of respect for those powerful wizards that came before him, as well as to use a magic which best reflects his own motivations, Vincent learned how to craft those magical artifacts which excel in channeling elemental magic.

    elements:

    Strengths:
    - Allows the user an unparalleled control over and protection from the elements of nature
    - Magical artifacts of varying types allow for a high degree of flexibility in and out of combat
    - The nature of the Requip makes it unique and likely to catch off enemies who expect a more conventional set of spell weapons or spell armor

    Weaknesses:
    - Only able to control one element at a time
    - Slayers are able to negate entire blocks of spells due to their elemental nature
    - Ability to cast spells is heavily dependent on external forces. For example - if Vincent cannot read his spell books they won't can't activate their spells. Similarly, if Vicent loses hold of his wands or staves he cannot use their active nor passive ability.
    - The variety of the magic is a weakness as well as a strength since there are many more elements and variations of those elements than he has ability to access. This weakness is alleviates as he increases in proficiency, however.


    Abilities/Powers:
    Elemental Resistance:

    Magical Transportation:

    Force of Nature:

    Wizard’s Tools:



    Spells

    signature spells:
    Normally you only get 2 sig spells unless you give up a weapon/armor/item slot, so going to have to ask you specify what you're forfeiting in order to get the extra one


    D-Rank Spells:


    C-Rank Spells:
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    Post by King Zenshin 12th May 2018, 9:03 pm

    Bump

    All requested changes have been made and Blessing has also been changed due to the previous version of the spell granting reduced mana cost. The extra signature spell is there because of the lineage which grants a water based signature spell, or is that supposed to be a replacement for the usual one?


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    Post by Guest 12th May 2018, 10:02 pm

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    Post by Lilium 24th May 2018, 4:06 pm

    Spoiler:

    Unlocked and moved upon the user's request.


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    Post by King Zenshin 24th May 2018, 9:30 pm

    Changes:

    Abilities

    Typo in "Wizard's Tools" fixed
    "Scholar's Gambit" Added

    Signature Spells

    Magician's Robes:
    "Apprentice's Robes" name changed to "Magician's Robes"
    Rank changed to B
    Magician's Robes passive ability "Magician's Armaments" added per its other passive ability "Growing Knowledge"
    First weakness made clearer
    Duration and Cooldown increased by one post each

    Crystal Waters:
    Rank changed to B per lineage
    Healing changed from 60 to 120

    D-Rank Spells
    Whirlpool Staff active and passive abilities both completely changed

    C-Rank Spells
    Black Sauna replaced by Element Swap

    All B-Rank spells are new

    I think that's all the changes I made, though I did make quite a few ^^'.


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    Post by Lester Drynedi 25th May 2018, 3:26 pm

    Hey Zen Lester here, gradings are in this color. Feel free to ask any questions and once you're done give it a bump.

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