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    Faust's Ice Demon Slayer Magic

    Faust
    Faust

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    Lineage : Dragon's Blood
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    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Age : 32
    Mentor : Loros the Ice Demon/ Gideon Faust
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ice Demon Slayer Magic
    Second Skill: Endless Hunger Magic
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Faust 2nd December 2013, 1:18 am

    Primary Magic: Ice Demon Slayer Magic
    Secondary Magic: Teleportation Magic
    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description:
    Ice Demon Slayer magic is a lost magic that focusing in the creation and manipulation of snow and ice based magic. The magic is founded in the roots of the demonic culture and can be considered a dark magic by some because of this. The magic has the power to use ice/snow magic to effect temperatures of the area around the user along with those in that area causing speed de-buffs to be a common occurring side-effect of its spells. The magic is highly versatile as an offensive and defensive magic along with several buff style spells though those are limited. Being a slayer based magic the user is granted heightened senses that allow them to hear, see, smell, and taste things at levels far beyond normal humans. While these could be thought to be exploited for their sensitivity the user has completely control over them allowing them to be able to filter out things rather easily. The magic also allows for Demon Force to be achieved which allows the person to have their physical attributes increased to deadly levels. The magic has command over other spells of its nature allowing the caster to consume ice based spells of all magics outside of Ice God Slaying magic. In addition, the user can consume external sources of ice to restore their body to a healthy state and regain their reserves of strength.

    Strengths:
    - Freezing / Frostbite based effects
    - Resistant to Ice Element Takes Half Damage.
    - Increases Physical Capabilities (Strength, Stamina, and Senses.)
    - Can create an icy chill around his Skin allowing for him to be colder than Ice to touch.
    - Higher Ice damage then the Ice Dragon Slayer / other Ice mages at Equal rank.
    - Able to Eat any type of there own Element Both Mixed and pure.
    - Able to Freeze water spells of Equal or Lesser Rank in their Tracks.
    - Ice glitters like a diamond due to the magic being fused with light magic.
    - Able to rip apart and shatter Plant and Wood based magic effects of Equal or Lesser Rank.
    - Able to Freeze Metal and Iron Effects of Equal or Lesser in their tracks. Even making these effects cold enough to snap in half like a twig.
    - Ice reflects, absorbs, and nullifies Light Magic Effects of Equal or Lesser Rank

    Weaknesses:
    - Can't eat its counterparts ice (Glacier God Slayer)
    - Weak against Fire Demon Slayer Magic &  Fire God Slayer magic and Fire Dragon Slayer
    - Magic is limited on buff spells
    - No healing based spells
    - Fire spell effects of Equal or Greater Rank will melt through your Ice quickly; and still deal 50% of it's full damage to you

    Passive Abilities/Powers:
    - Demon Force.
    - Enhanced Strength.
    - Enhanced Reflexes.
    - Immense Durability.
    - Enhanced Smell and Hearing.
    - Master at Close and Long range attacks.
    - Powerful side-effects from spells
    - take half damage from ALL Ice Spell Effects

    Lineage Power:
    Spirit of Corruption
    Description: Aeons ago, a noble king made a deal with a deity of deception and malice. The deal was that he would sacrifice his entire family, along with himself, in a dark ritual in honour of the being, but would have his kingdom spread across the world to become a global empire. What really was the case, however, was that the same deity had previously forged a contract with a rivalling kingdom. The deceiving god would ruin the noble king's growing country and would in turn receive the hand of the rivalling king's daughter, whom was so beautiful even the god had become captivated by her. Thus, the deity tricked the noble king to kill himself and all heirs to the throne, eventually leading to political wars for the empty throne of power which ravaged the kingdom and killed it from within.
    To this day the deceived king's angered spirit roams the world in it's quest for vengeance, sometimes possessing the bodies of children at birth and remaining dormant within them until his wrath is called upon.
    Ability:  Calling upon the power of the king, and the vast population that died upon the deal’s completion, the user can expel an energy burst outward from themself, knocking anything around the user away or unconscious. The energy blast has a range of twenty meters, in which the first ten meters from the epicenter can cause intense vertigo or loss of consciousness for anyone that is at least two ranks below the user. If one is 11 meters to 20 meters away from the epicenter, they will simply be knocked back violently.
    Usage: Upon usage the ability only lasts one post, and can only be used at a maximum of eight times a thread.

    D-Rank Spells :

    C Rank Spells:

    B rank Spells:


    Last edited by Faust on 7th January 2014, 3:04 pm; edited 33 times in total
    Faust
    Faust

    Developer/GFX Artist- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Demon Slayer- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Villain- Player 
    Lineage : Dragon's Blood
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    Posts : 298
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 32
    Mentor : Loros the Ice Demon/ Gideon Faust
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ice Demon Slayer Magic
    Second Skill: Endless Hunger Magic
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Faust 2nd December 2013, 10:52 am



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    Faust's Ice Demon Slayer Magic Faust1_by_gramcrackers-d75cx2d
    Total Experience: 750
    Experienced needed for next rank: 3000
    Character Profile
    Ice Demon Slayer Magic
    Endless Hunger Magic
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    Faust's Themes:
    Haru-senpai
    Haru-senpai

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    Post by Haru-senpai 2nd December 2013, 11:20 am

    ~You Cannot Eat your Own Ice, Remove from 'Strengths'

    ~ "Narually resistance to all natural cold temperatures and magical ice spells D rank or below (outside Glacier God Slayer Magic)" remove this completely; you already take half damage from ALL Ice Spell Effects; this is negligible

    ~- Weak against Fire Demon Slayer Magic &  Fire God Slayer magic 'add Fire Dragon Slayer too this'

    ~- Higher ice damage then the Ice Dragon Slayer. 'Add "At Equal Rank" to the end of this'

    ~-able to freeze metal spells easily (minus metal demon/god slaying magic) 'change this too 'Able to Freeze Metal and Iron Effects of Equal or Lesser in their tracks'

    ~Add into the magics 'Strengths' that all of your Ice reflects, absorbs, and nullifies Light Magic Effects of Equal or Lesser Rank

    (your ice is already infused with Holy energy; and is highly reflective  and has a high absorption of light due to the light already there)

    ~Add into your Magics 'Weaknesses' that Fire spell effects of Equal or Greater Rank will melt through your Ice quickly; and still deal 50% of it's full damage to you.

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    Name: Snow Globe, ~ Add that it increases your Ice effects damage by 50% above it's normal damage while active. ~Add into it's weaknesses that the snowfall can be blown away by a Wind effect of Greater Rank

    Name: Ice Demon’s Touch ~ Add that it does not work on Fire Dragon, Flame Demon, or Fire God Slayers due to their natural high body temperature. Add that it only affects Wizards of Equal or Lesser Rank

    "-fire demon/god slayer magic can negate this magic with a D rank spell" ~ take this out

    Name: Ice Demon's Steps

    "fire demon/god slayer magic can negate this magic with a D rank spell" ~ take this out

    ~Add that any Fire spell of Equal or Greater Rank will melt this effect away

    Name: Presence of an Artic Demon

    "-fire demon/god slayer magic can negate this magic with a D rank spell" ~ add Fire Dragon to this

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    Once these conditions are met; I believe you're ready to continue your rise, and you shall be approved; good luck.


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    Faust
    Faust

    Developer/GFX Artist- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Demon Slayer- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Villain- Player 
    Lineage : Dragon's Blood
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    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Age : 32
    Mentor : Loros the Ice Demon/ Gideon Faust
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ice Demon Slayer Magic
    Second Skill: Endless Hunger Magic
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Faust 2nd December 2013, 11:50 am

    Okay I think i got everything ^_^ bump


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    Faust's Ice Demon Slayer Magic Faust1_by_gramcrackers-d75cx2d
    Total Experience: 750
    Experienced needed for next rank: 3000
    Character Profile
    Ice Demon Slayer Magic
    Endless Hunger Magic
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    Faust's Themes:
    Haru-senpai
    Haru-senpai

    Moderator- Regular VIP Status- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Dragon Slayer- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- Hero- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Monkey King's Descendant
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    Posts : 3216
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 12
    Mentor : Igneel, & Noheme the Fox
    Experience : 11,106.25

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    First Skill: Fire Dragon Slayer Magic
    Second Skill: Dragon Force
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Haru-senpai 2nd December 2013, 2:40 pm

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    Faust
    Faust

    Developer/GFX Artist- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Demon Slayer- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Villain- Player 
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    Age : 32
    Mentor : Loros the Ice Demon/ Gideon Faust
    Experience : 0

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    First Skill: Ice Demon Slayer Magic
    Second Skill: Endless Hunger Magic
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    Post by Faust 5th December 2013, 3:05 pm

    Bumping for my C rank spells added =D


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    Total Experience: 750
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    Faust's Themes:
    Eris
    Eris

    Lich of hell


    Lich of hell

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    Lineage : Devil's Conquest
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    Guild : Grim Heresy [GM]
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    First Skill: Sunset Eclipse - The Sandstorm GS
    Second Skill: Titan Eclipse • Devil Pact
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    Post by Eris 6th December 2013, 9:36 pm

    Before I do anything I'm going to ask that it be set out that ALL strengths and weakness sections have separated independent weaknesses marked with a bullet point of some sort,  and that there always be a minimum of Three strengths with one more weakness than you have strengths.


    My posting this does not guarantee that I'll handle the app completely,  but is setting the stage so I may do so.  Others may step in at their leisure.


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    Deception | Despair | Domination
    H 1 S 7 A 7+1 B 8+1 C 9 D 11
    d a m n a t i o n
    Faust
    Faust

    Developer/GFX Artist- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Demon Slayer- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Villain- Player 
    Lineage : Dragon's Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 298
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 32
    Mentor : Loros the Ice Demon/ Gideon Faust
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ice Demon Slayer Magic
    Second Skill: Endless Hunger Magic
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Faust 7th December 2013, 10:46 pm

    Alrighty, I fixed the C rank spells weaknesses ^_^


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    Faust's Ice Demon Slayer Magic Faust1_by_gramcrackers-d75cx2d
    Total Experience: 750
    Experienced needed for next rank: 3000
    Character Profile
    Ice Demon Slayer Magic
    Endless Hunger Magic
    Bank Account

    Faust's Themes:
    Eris
    Eris

    Lich of hell


    Lich of hell

    Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Regular VIP Status- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Horseman- 11 Sinner- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Dragon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Senior [500]- Player 
    Lineage : Devil's Conquest
    Position : None
    Posts : 1471
    Guild : Grim Heresy [GM]
    Cosmic Coins : 5
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sunset Eclipse - The Sandstorm GS
    Second Skill: Titan Eclipse • Devil Pact
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Eris 8th December 2013, 12:57 pm

    Faust wrote:
    C Rank Spells:
    Name: Icy Breath of the Demon
    Rank: C
    Type: Ice Demon Slayer Magic / Offense
    Description:
    Faust will exhale causing a mist of icy magic to fill a 20 x 20 x 20 meter diameter area. The mist will be fairly thick and shimmer a bright white color making it a near blinding area. Those that are in the area or look into the area cannot see at all and become blinded for the duration they are in the mist. While a person is in the mist ice and frost will form on the enemies’ bodies cutting their speed down by 25% every post, if a person stays in the mist for 4 post they will become completely frozen the following post. The area will be so cold that it causes ice magic to be 50% more effective.
    Strengths:
    - Targets a large area
    - Slows enemies speeds to possible frozen completely if they stay there
    - Ice magic gains a 50% increase in effect.
    - Blinds those that look at the mist due to the white simmering light reflecting off of it.  Including you.  
    - plant, metal and water magic that go against it will be considered elementally weaker (minus metal/ water god/demon/dragon slayer)

    Weaknesses:
    - A fire AoE spell of equal or higher rank can stop the spell
    - A wind spell of equal or higher rank can blow the spell away
    - A person can be healed from the effect.  No.
    - Will only effect mages Faust rank or lower.
    - Ice boost can help enemy ice mages
    - Fire type slayers will be able to destroy will a lower rank aoe fire spell  You just said this -.-;
    Duration/Cooldowns  4 Post/ 5 Post




    Name: Ice Demon's Prickly Spine
    Rank:  C
    Type: Ice Demon Slayer Magic / Offense
    Description:
    Faust forms hundreds of small ice spikes all over his body. They are all roughly a size of 25-35cm Not small enough  For one , there are short swords/longknives that length. If a person is stabbed by the attack it will cut down to the muscle. This will cause people that deal melee damage to be hurt unless they break the spikes first. The areas that are struck by the attack will have frostbite for the following post causing that limb to be frozen.  
    Strengths:
    - Multiple chances to hit
    - Stronger than normal and other types of ice magic other than ice god slayer.
    - plant, metal and water magic that go against it will be considered elementally weaker (minus metal/ water god/demon/dragon slayer)
    - Covers entire body making melee attacks naturally deal C rank damage along with own's natural strength.
    - Dissuades close combat fighters
    - frostbite symptoms on mages his rank and lower that are struck by this spell

    Weaknesses:
    - Fire mages can melt the spiky armor with a C rank spell D-rank.  Ice is weak to fire,  not on equal footing with it.
    - only close combat use
    - frostbite only works on mages lower than his current rank
    - Fire type slayers will need D rank to break the spikes.  The above reference to fire invalidates this.
    - Spell can be easily avoided
    - frostbite only last for single post
    - frostbite can be cured by a C rank healing spell

    I would like to see a weakness that this lessens your mobility and speed,  for what I'd like to think are obvious reasons.

    Duration/Cooldowns 4 Post/ 5 Post



    Name: Ice Coating
    Rank: C
    Type: Ice Demon Slayer Magic / Defense
    Description:
    Covers Faust with a layer of ice that can withstand spells up to 1 rank higher than it. It will cause his physical based ice spells to have an increase of 75% in effectiveness.
    Strengths:
    - Can protect the caster from damage up to C rank
    - Normal ice magic and ice dragon slayer magic will be considered weaker when occurring against this spell.
    - plant, metal and water magic that go against it will be considered elementally weaker (minus metal/ water god/demon/dragon slayer)
    - 75% increase in overall effect from melee based ice spells No.   C-rank percent based enhancements are around 20-30% (Not that I agree with the low numbers.  If I were to design the numbers myself I'd say 75%.  But that's not how it works).  You can say it adds D-rank to melee though,  d-rank spell damage.  (Which is effectively 50% *winkwinknudgenudge*)
    Weaknesses:
    - Fire magic will break the spell if using the same rank Again.  Ice is weak to fire.  Not on the same level.   D-rank fires break it.
    - Can only withstand attacks up to its rank before breaking
    - spell gives no increase to range based attacks
    - Attacks over C rank will still deal damage to Faust though that damage is bumped down by C rank in overall damage.  Higher ranked effects tend to break right through lower ranked defenses without this issue.  Just from what I've seen.
    - Fire type slayers will deal additional damage to the ice coating breaking it with D rank spells Again,  the above fix to fire invalidates this.    I would like to see a weakness that this lessens your mobility and speed,  for what I'd like to think are obvious reasons.
    Duration/Cooldowns Up to 2 Post/ 4 post

    Red/Blue as before.


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    Faust's Ice Demon Slayer Magic NvVyM98

    Faust's Ice Demon Slayer Magic CkggyrF

    Deception | Despair | Domination
    H 1 S 7 A 7+1 B 8+1 C 9 D 11
    d a m n a t i o n
    Faust
    Faust

    Developer/GFX Artist- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Demon Slayer- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Villain- Player 
    Lineage : Dragon's Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 298
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 32
    Mentor : Loros the Ice Demon/ Gideon Faust
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ice Demon Slayer Magic
    Second Skill: Endless Hunger Magic
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Faust 8th December 2013, 6:12 pm

    okay i think i got everything...


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    Faust's Ice Demon Slayer Magic Faust1_by_gramcrackers-d75cx2d
    Total Experience: 750
    Experienced needed for next rank: 3000
    Character Profile
    Ice Demon Slayer Magic
    Endless Hunger Magic
    Bank Account

    Faust's Themes:
    Eris
    Eris

    Lich of hell


    Lich of hell

    Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Regular VIP Status- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Horseman- 11 Sinner- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Dragon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Senior [500]- Player 
    Lineage : Devil's Conquest
    Position : None
    Posts : 1471
    Guild : Grim Heresy [GM]
    Cosmic Coins : 5
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sunset Eclipse - The Sandstorm GS
    Second Skill: Titan Eclipse • Devil Pact
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    Post by Eris 8th December 2013, 6:41 pm

    Faust wrote:
    C Rank Spells:




    One red and two blue changes.


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    Faust's Ice Demon Slayer Magic NvVyM98

    Faust's Ice Demon Slayer Magic CkggyrF

    Deception | Despair | Domination
    H 1 S 7 A 7+1 B 8+1 C 9 D 11
    d a m n a t i o n
    Faust
    Faust

    Developer/GFX Artist- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Demon Slayer- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Villain- Player 
    Lineage : Dragon's Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 298
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 32
    Mentor : Loros the Ice Demon/ Gideon Faust
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ice Demon Slayer Magic
    Second Skill: Endless Hunger Magic
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Faust 8th December 2013, 6:57 pm

    okay I tink i got it all!


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    Faust's Ice Demon Slayer Magic Faust1_by_gramcrackers-d75cx2d
    Total Experience: 750
    Experienced needed for next rank: 3000
    Character Profile
    Ice Demon Slayer Magic
    Endless Hunger Magic
    Bank Account

    Faust's Themes:
    Eris
    Eris

    Lich of hell


    Lich of hell

    Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Regular VIP Status- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Horseman- 11 Sinner- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Dragon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Senior [500]- Player 
    Lineage : Devil's Conquest
    Position : None
    Posts : 1471
    Guild : Grim Heresy [GM]
    Cosmic Coins : 5
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sunset Eclipse - The Sandstorm GS
    Second Skill: Titan Eclipse • Devil Pact
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Eris 8th December 2013, 7:17 pm

    Faust wrote:
    C Rank Spells:


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    Faust's Ice Demon Slayer Magic NvVyM98

    Faust's Ice Demon Slayer Magic CkggyrF

    Deception | Despair | Domination
    H 1 S 7 A 7+1 B 8+1 C 9 D 11
    d a m n a t i o n
    Faust
    Faust

    Developer/GFX Artist- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Demon Slayer- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Villain- Player 
    Lineage : Dragon's Blood
    Position : None
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    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 32
    Mentor : Loros the Ice Demon/ Gideon Faust
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ice Demon Slayer Magic
    Second Skill: Endless Hunger Magic
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Faust 8th December 2013, 7:41 pm

    Okay took it out


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    Total Experience: 750
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    Post by Eris 8th December 2013, 7:43 pm

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    Post by Alye 17th December 2013, 5:38 pm

    Unlocked for spell additions!


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    Post by Faust 17th December 2013, 6:10 pm

    added Loros' Spite C rank spell


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    Post by Eris 18th December 2013, 9:03 am

    I dislike the blanket statement that says anyone who gets hit gets frostbite,  without regard for higher ranks or individual ability.    Logically individual ability outweighs blanket abilities of others when they meet,  but still.  


    Then "Frostbite" doesn't seem to be described,  but that seems to be a problem with the magic as a whole as Heero approved it.




    So what ever.


    Approved.


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    Post by Faust 20th December 2013, 12:40 pm

    Okay bumping for B rank spells added, I purchased 2 B rank slots from the shop hence the 2 extra spells.


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    Post by Eris 21st December 2013, 9:58 am

    You can't have any blanket effects like that in the first B-rank.
    Spells have to be dynamic, scaled in effect.   You could lower a D-rank's speed by 90%,  70% C,  and 50% B,  with 25% A,  0% S.


    Make sure all the other spells are scaled similarly as well, as applicable. 


    I'm not doing a full review right now because I lack the motivation to do so,  so I'll take it in steps because finding the motivation for smaller comments is easier on the motivation-reserves than doing the whole thing,  so doing partial things like this at least gets things done rather than waiting around for motivation to spike.


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    Post by Faust 22nd December 2013, 3:38 pm

    okay I was kinda confused on what you meant so I just have that first spell only able to freeze people and the durability decrease for those lower than my rank. If this is not what you meant then I am sorry and will redo it if need be.


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    Post by Eris 29th December 2013, 12:10 pm

    Faust wrote:
    B rank Spells:


    Second and third weaknesses are duplicates -.-;  Fourth comes close, but is fine...   Lower ranked fire spells destroy higher ranked spells they're weak to -.-  But common sense,  a small fire bolt of S-rank isn't going to rape a whole field of snow,  unless it puts out that much heat in such an area around it as described by the spell itself.

    80% is way too much -.- Don't use a percentage at all here,  directly increase the magic by a C-rank amount.  No S-ranks doing nearly H-rank damage or A-ranks doing nearly S-rank damage,  but an obvious improvement to D-ranks,  and doubling C-ranks.

    Once again describe the light better,  we have Light slayers for a reason.
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    Post by Faust 29th December 2013, 12:35 pm

    I'm requesting a different mod to check this cause your statements make literally no sense and seem like pointless nerfing. How is it a defensive spell of B rank can only block C ranks when others have D rank defensive that block B rank attacks....


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    Post by Eris 29th December 2013, 12:39 pm

    I am your Mod.


    I have made my statements and you will defend your own points and see if you can't change my mind or work to a point satisfactory to both.


    If you cannot do that much or make requested edits then it will simply be denied.


    You can't have a universally overpowering spell that rapes all spells of a higher rank than it at a moment's notice.


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    Post by Alye 29th December 2013, 3:06 pm

    I'll take over from here, Kate. Thank you for your work.

    Faust, I'm afraid that you cannot completely affect spells that are of a higher rank than the spell you are casting. Since this is an AOE effecting spell, you'll be able to stop any B-Rank or lower spells, but not A-Ranks. Also, typically AOE spells have higher cooldowns then other spells, so if you'd bump up the cool down of the spell and give it a maximum range of 100 or less feet then I can deem this spell approved.

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