Ziz Magika

Name: Ziz Magika
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Birthday: April 5th
Sexuality: straight
Special Characteristics: none

Personality:
Ziz is cheerful, active and playful when she's not fighting. She likes to run around and play games like a little kid, sometimes with little kids. Ziz considers herself too weak to do anything so she doesn't go on jobs by herself. She loves it when other members of the guild praise her and when she does something right she makes sure everyone knows in an attempt to get attention. In battle Ziz is weak but fast. She usually lets the others do most of the fighting and she tries to distract the enemy using weak attacks,like a bug, to annoy them and give the others an opening. She stays out of other peoples way in the fight, and tries not to hurt the enemy, but will defend her friends with her life if things look bad. When she puts her mind to it Ziz can be a really tough oppenent.

She lost her parents at a young age and forgot everything that happened that night, so she is searching desperately for her older brother to find out the truth, even though it scares her she wants to be a family again. She is always looking for someone to play with since her brother would never play with her when they were little. She learned her magic from her father who was a very skilled Mage that never joined a guild himself. Her father had been against guilds for some unknown reason. Ziz is pretty forgetful, probably because of damage to her head on the day of her parents death, when she forgets something she gets emberresed and will refuse to talk about it. Ziz made friends with an exceed when she was younger and he helped her get over her parents death by playing games with her and that's why she loves cats. The exceed had to move on though and she was left all alone until she joined Blue Pegasus and felt like she finally had a home again.  Ziz is a bit self conciose and so she wears pretty clothes and seeks praise to reassure herself of her worth. Ziz is illiterate and can't read or right, she felt like she knew how at one point but she doesn't remember, probably due to her amnesia. She gets a headache whenever she tries to read so she just asks her friends to do it for her and aviod the trouble of trying to do it herself. Ziz tries to support all of her friends when they are down even if shes sad herself because 'as long as her friends are happy so is she' according to Ziz but truthfully Ziz would rather be comforted when shes sad she just doesn't want to seem selfish or mean, because she is afraid they will leave her and she will be all alone again. Ziz always tried her hardest for her comrades in the guild even if she's weak herself, she believes she can get stronger with everyones help.

Likes:
Cats - She had a friend who was anexceed when she was young.
Sweets - They remind her of her mother.
Girly stuff (Dresses, makeup, etc.) - She wants to impress other with her apearance.
Dislikes:
Bugs - Her father would tell her scary storied about bugs.
black - Its a depressing color.
Large animals - They're big and scary.
Motivations:
Her parents death - she wants revenge for her parents death.
Her missing brother - she wants to find him and become a family again.
Her memory loss - she wants to recover the lost pieces of her memory.
Fears:
Bugs - her father would tell her scary story's about them.
Being alone - she loves attention so the thought of being alone frighten her.
Being weak - shes afraid everyone will get stronger and move on withought her.

General Appearance


Height: 4'11
Weight: 100lb
Hair: Her hair is purple and tied in pigtails with ribbons.
Eyes: darker purple with a reddish ring around the pupil.
Skin Tone: She's very pale and can't get a tan no matter how hard she tries.
Appearance: She's very small, thin and weak phisically. She wears a pretty frilly dress that's short enough for her to run in. It has a big bow in the back and white cuffs.

Guild/Council

Guild: Blue Pegasus
Tattoo: On the back of her neck in purple.
Rank: D-rank

Mosspaw0909 wrote:Name: Ziz Magika
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Birthday: April 5th
Sexuality: straight
Special Characteristics: none

Personality: Ziz is cheerful, active and playful when she's not fighting. She likes to run around and play games like a little kid, sometimes with little kids. Ziz considers herself too weak to do anything so she doesn't go on jobs by herself. She loves it when other members of the guild praise her and when she does something right she makes sure everyone knows in an attempt to get attention.
In battle Ziz is weak but fast. She usually lets the others do most of the fighting and she tries to distract the enemy using weak attacks,like a bug, to annoy them and give the others an opening.
She lost her parents at a young age and forgot everything that happened that night, so she's searching desperately for her older brother to find out the truth, even though it scares her she wants to be a family again. Ziz made friends with an exceed when she was younger and he helped her get over her parents death by playing games with her and that's why she loves cats. The exceed had to move on though and she was left all alone until she joined Blue Pegasus and felt like she finally had a home again. She is always looking for someone to play with since her brother would never play with her when they were little. She learned her magic from her father who was a very skilled Mage that never joined a guild himself. Her father had been against guilds for some unknown reason. Ziz is pretty forgetful, probably because of damage to her head on the day of her parents death, when she forgets something she gets emberresed and won't want to talk about it. Ziz is a bit self conciose and so she wears pretty clothes and seeks praise to reassure herself of her worth. Ziz is illiterate and can't read or right, she felt like she new how at one point but she doesn't remember, probably due to her amnesia. Ziz tries to support all of her friends when thier down even if shes sad herself because 'as long as her friends are happy so is she' according to Ziz but truthfully Ziz would rather be comforted when shes sad she just doesn't want to seem selfish or mean.
Likes: Ziz loves cats, especially exceeds. She thinks there absolutely adorable and will try to get them to play games with her. She loves sweets, because her mother used to make her the 'best sweets in the world' according to Ziz. She loves girly stuff like jewelry and cute dresses, she wants to impress people with her appearance aswell.
Dislikes: Bugs, her father would tell her scary story's about bugs at night. Black, it's a depressing color and she hates it. Large animals, they frighten her because she's so small.
Motivations: Her parents death, she wants revenge for her parents death.
Her missing brother, she wants to find him and become a family again.
Her memory loss, she wants to recover the lost pieces of her memory.
Fears: Bugs, as previously mentioned her father would tell her scary story's about them. Being alone, she loves attention so the thought of being alone frighten her. Things that are signifigantly bigger than her, she is small and weak so big strong things scare her.

General Appearance


Height: 4'11
Weight: 45 pounds
Hair: Her hair is purple and tied in pigtails with ribbons.
Eyes: darker purple with a reddish ring around the pupil.
Skin Tone: She's very pale and can't get a tan no matter how hard she tries.
Appearance: She's very small, thin and weak phisically. She wears a pretty frilly dress that's short enough for her to run in. It has a big bow in the back and white cuffs.

Guild/Council

Guild: Blue Pegasus?
Tattoo: On the back of her neck in purple.
Rank: D-rank

A few things, mostly the format of the likes/dislikes/motives/ and fears

Likes:
-Cats: The only animal he isn't allergic to
-Salad: The deep emerald color makes his mouth water and he is prepared to savor the healthy dish
-Loose clothing: He doesn't like being constricted to anything *formal* in the slightest

Like, bullet;subject;sentience description of why the subject is there

That's how it should look

Also, 45 pounds is WAYYYYYYYYY too underweight for someone who's 4'11

For your personality, please format it a bit better (checked approved characters as a reference) and it must be at least 500 words

You've got a bit of word to do, but good luck and please bump when edited \o\

I'm sorry I'm not sure how wieght works. I don't check my weight and I've never really wieghed anything except for pens and paperclips in the science lab. Could you tell me how much she would wiegh if it isn't too much to ask? I tried to fix it but I'm still not sure how...

Mosspaw0909 wrote:Name: Ziz Magika
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Birthday: April 5th
Sexuality: straight
Special Characteristics: none

Personality: Ziz is cheerful, active and playful when she's not fighting. She likes to run around and play games like a little kid, sometimes with little kids. Ziz considers herself too weak to do anything so she doesn't go on jobs by herself. She loves it when other members of the guild praise her and when she does something right she makes sure everyone knows in an attempt to get attention.
In battle Ziz is weak but fast. She usually lets the others do most of the fighting and she tries to distract the enemy using weak attacks,like a bug, to annoy them and give the others an opening.
She lost her parents at a young age and forgot everything that happened that night, so she's searching desperately for her older brother to find out the truth, even though it scares her she wants to be a family again. She is always looking for someone to play with since her brother would never play with her when they were little. She learned her magic from her father who was a very skilled Mage that never joined a guild himself. Her father had been against guilds for some unknown reason. Ziz is pretty forgetful, probably because of damage to her head on the day of her parents death, when she forgets something she gets emberresed and won't want to talk about it. Ziz made friends with an exceed when she was younger and he helped her get over her parents death by playing games with her and that's why she loves cats. The exceed had to move on though and she was left all alone until she joined Blue Pegasus and felt like she finally had a home again.  Ziz is a bit self conciose and so she wears pretty clothes and seeks praise to reassure herself of her worth. Ziz is illiterate and can't read or right, she felt like she new how at one point but she doesn't remember, probably due to her amnesia. Ziz tries to support all of her friends when thier down even if shes sad herself because 'as long as her friends are happy so is she' according to Ziz but truthfully Ziz would rather be comforted when shes sad she just doesn't want to seem selfish or mean.
Likes:
Cats - She had a friend who was anexceed when she was young.
Sweets - They remind her of her mother.
Girly studd (Dresses, makeup, etc.) - She wants to impree other with her apearance.
Dislikes:
Bugs - Her father would tell her scary storied about bugs.
black - Its a depressing color.
Large animals - They're big and scary.
Motivations: Her parents death - she wants revenge for her parents death.
Her missing brother - she wants to find him and become a family again.
Her memory loss - she wants to recover the lost pieces of her memory.
Fears: Bugs - her father would tell her scary story's about them.
Being alone - she loves attention so the thought of being alone frighten her.
Being weak - shes afraid everyone will get stronger and move on withought her.

General Appearance


Height: 4'11
Weight: ???
Hair: Her hair is purple and tied in pigtails with ribbons.
Eyes: darker purple with a reddish ring around the pupil.
Skin Tone: She's very pale and can't get a tan no matter how hard she tries.
Appearance: She's very small, thin and weak phisically. She wears a pretty frilly dress that's short enough for her to run in. It has a big bow in the back and white cuffs.

Guild/Council

Guild: Blue Pegasus
Tattoo: On the back of her neck in purple.
Rank: D-rank

About 100 lbs would be fine for the weight.

Add one more fear and motivation

Check my previous comment on the personality

Please bump when you've fixed the three things

Okay so hopefully I fixed it this time!

Black is depressing?? Is your character RACIST?!?

Um.. That's not what I meant...:what:

I know. Approved <3 :D You need a name change. So you can just pick one.

A name change?

Doesn't matter, get on the cb more. be apart of the community! :D