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    Ai's Magic ring

    Ringo Noyamano
    Ringo Noyamano

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    Guild : Lamia Scale
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    Mentor : Ashara
    Experience : 7600

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    Ai's Magic ring Empty Ai's Magic ring

    Post by Ringo Noyamano 25th May 2012, 12:46 pm

    Name: Ring of shrouds
    Type: Ring/weak
    Description: A gold band ring with foreign inscriptions on it. The inscription says "I belong to the dead, and the dead belongs to me"
    Spoiler:
    Strengths: Can shield the wearer from harm in certain occasions
    Weaknesses: Changes the owners attribute to darkness meaning wearer is more susceptible to light attacks of course this also makes the wearer a bit resistant to dark magic
    Abilities:
    -Creates a rank D barrier around the wearer, barrier can stand two D rank attacks an would break if attack is higher than D
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown 3 posts

    Non battle ability
    -Summons one shade, shades are ethereal and invisible and serves as spy or scout only


    Last edited by sai on 1st June 2012, 10:05 am; edited 4 times in total
    King Zenshin
    King Zenshin

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    Ai's Magic ring Empty Re: Ai's Magic ring

    Post by King Zenshin 1st June 2012, 9:25 am

    Fix the BBC error next to name

    Elaborate on "Changes owners attribute to darkness", like if the new attribute comes with new spells or no

    Add a duration and cool down to the vanishing

    Bump when fixed





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    Ringo Noyamano
    Ringo Noyamano

    Guild Master- S-Rank- A-Rank- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Caine's Descent
    Position : None
    Posts : 241
    Guild : Lamia Scale
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Mentor : Ashara
    Experience : 7600

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Arc of Souls
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    Ai's Magic ring Empty Re: Ai's Magic ring

    Post by Ringo Noyamano 1st June 2012, 9:33 am

    done, made changes as percentage is a bit confusing


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    King Zenshin
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    Ai's Magic ring Empty Re: Ai's Magic ring

    Post by King Zenshin 1st June 2012, 9:36 am

    Be more specific with shades. As in, if they're invisible or what do they look like, then you should be good.

    and how long barrier lasts and cooldown

    Bump when fixed


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    100 Year: 1
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    Ringo Noyamano
    Ringo Noyamano

    Guild Master- S-Rank- A-Rank- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Caine's Descent
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    Posts : 241
    Guild : Lamia Scale
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    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Ashara
    Experience : 7600

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Arc of Souls
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    Third Skill:

    Ai's Magic ring Empty Re: Ai's Magic ring

    Post by Ringo Noyamano 1st June 2012, 10:05 am

    bump


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    King Zenshin
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    Lineage : Aspect of Neptune
    Position : None
    Posts : 3222
    Guild : N/A
    Cosmic Coins : 25
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    Age : 26
    Experience : 263,160

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Knight of Space
    Second Skill: Paladin's Armaments
    Third Skill:

    Ai's Magic ring Empty Re: Ai's Magic ring

    Post by King Zenshin 1st June 2012, 10:10 am

    I see nothing else wrong except a few minor grammatical errors.

    Approved.


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    Missions Completed
    100 Year: 1
    10 Year: 1
    S-Ranked: 1
    A-Ranked: 4
    B-Ranked: 4
    D-Ranked: 3
    Event Experience: 57,562.5
    Dungeon Experience: 2,325
    Total Experience: 263,160

    Character / Vincent Gauss
    Primary Magic / Knight of Space
    Secondary Magic / Paladin's Armaments
    History & Notebook | Bank
    Golden Lacrima | Expires 7/9/2019

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