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    Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer

    Lothric
    Lothric

    Player 
    Lineage : Light of Luna
    Position : None
    Posts : 78
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 250

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Earth Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill: Lunar Arts
    Third Skill:

    Completed Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer

    Post by Lothric 3rd August 2018, 12:37 pm

    Magic

    Magic Name: Earth Dragon Slayer
    Magic Type: Slayer
    Benefits: Solitary
    Slayer Benefits:
    Description: Ever being a straightforward girl, Lothric prefers to use rocks for her magic in an all-out offensive. She is a first generation slayer, and she started when she was six and a half. Despite her time with the magic and her potency with it to boot, Lothric currently expresses a preference to only use it when absolutely necessary.


    Unique Abilities:

    • Ability: Lothric is, at her core, a sword fighter. Trained as she was with magicks, she cannot shake what love she feels for the sword. Her mana will run dry eventually. Her determination will not.
      45% increase to strength.

      Undying:

      Lineage:
      Light of Luna:



    Spells:

    Advanced Spells:

    Signature Spells:


    Last edited by Lothric on 10th November 2021, 7:17 am; edited 30 times in total
    Lester Drynedi
    Lester Drynedi

    Gentleman florist


    Gentleman florist

    Player 
    Posts : 1584
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 1
    Age : 23

    Character Sheet
    First Skill:
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer

    Post by Lester Drynedi 4th August 2018, 3:10 am

    Hey there les here, Comments are in this color. Post a reply with 'bump' when you've made the changes and feel free to ask any questions below!~

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    Lothric
    Lothric

    Player 
    Lineage : Light of Luna
    Position : None
    Posts : 78
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 250

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Earth Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill: Lunar Arts
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer

    Post by Lothric 4th August 2018, 7:21 am

    Bump.
    Lester Drynedi
    Lester Drynedi

    Gentleman florist


    Gentleman florist

    Player 
    Posts : 1584
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 1
    Age : 23

    Character Sheet
    First Skill:
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer

    Post by Lester Drynedi 4th August 2018, 2:33 pm

    Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer KvF9ieo

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    Completed Re: Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer

    Post by Guest 6th November 2021, 4:19 am

    Magic:

    Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer 9DH5Ncy
    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Completed Re: Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 7th November 2021, 12:05 pm

    Heya Lothric, Nero here to grade your magic. You know how this process goes. You will find all of my edits in this color. If you have any questions or the requested edits have been made please post in this application and I will get back to you as soon as I can.

    That said, I have one overarching edit to make:

    As your spell templates appear altered, which is, unfortunately, not allowed for the sake of consistency and ease of understanding / grading, I must ask you to rework your spells in accordance with the official spell template and remove any deviating sections of your spells. Since this is a rework of a previous magic, I assume you have not seen the new Spell Templates, which can be found here


    Find the rest of your grading below:

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    Lothric
    Lothric

    Player 
    Lineage : Light of Luna
    Position : None
    Posts : 78
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 250

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Earth Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill: Lunar Arts
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer

    Post by Lothric 7th November 2021, 12:39 pm

    Bump.
    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Completed Re: Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 7th November 2021, 3:26 pm

    After these edits you should be good. Same color as before:

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    Lothric
    Lothric

    Player 
    Lineage : Light of Luna
    Position : None
    Posts : 78
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 250

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Earth Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill: Lunar Arts
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer

    Post by Lothric 7th November 2021, 3:53 pm

    Bump.
    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Completed Re: Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 7th November 2021, 3:59 pm

    Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer HNhUsGf

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    Saraphina
    Saraphina

    The White Queen


    The White Queen

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    Character Sheet
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    Completed Re: Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer

    Post by Saraphina 9th November 2021, 3:33 pm

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    Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer J8Nltax


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    Completed Re: Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer

    Post by Guest 10th November 2021, 5:46 am

    Hey there Lothric, Med here to grade your magic. There's not much that needs to changed and you'll find my edits in blue.

    Magic:
    Lothric
    Lothric

    Player 
    Lineage : Light of Luna
    Position : None
    Posts : 78
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 250

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Earth Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill: Lunar Arts
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer

    Post by Lothric 10th November 2021, 7:18 am

    Bump.
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    Completed Re: Magic of the Earth Dragon Slayer

    Post by Guest 10th November 2021, 7:21 am

    Magic:

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