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    Stormcaller Magic

    Nova
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    Post by Nova 21st August 2013, 11:48 pm

    Primary Magic: Stormcaller
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: A powerful offensive magic, the Stormcaller school of magic focuses on using wind, water, and electricity to create devastating attacks.  The Storm element deals with the combination of water and lightning energy into a singular form of technique; appearing essentially as arcing beams of electric energy. The laser-like energy created from this release retains the speed of the lightning element and flexibility of water, making this magic very precise.
    Strengths:
    -Combination of elements types
    -Very destructive magic
    -Long and Short range attacks
    Weaknesses:
    -No debuffs
    -Limited defensive abilities
    -Lightning spells are considered 1 rank lower versus Earth magic
    -Wind Spells are considered 1 rank lower versus Fire magic
    Abilities/Powers:

    D-rank:

    C-rank:

    B-rank:

    A-rank:

    S-rank:

    Stun:


    Last edited by Nova on 28th August 2013, 12:10 pm; edited 7 times in total
    Nova
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    First Skill: Stormcaller Magic
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    Stormcaller Magic Empty Re: Stormcaller Magic

    Post by Nova 22nd August 2013, 11:46 am

    Ready for review
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    Post by King Zenshin 23rd August 2013, 12:30 pm

    Nova wrote:Primary Magic: Stormcaller
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: A powerful offensive magic, the Stormcaller school of magic focuses on using wind, water, and electricity to create devastating attacks.
    Strengths:
    -Combination of elements types
    -Very destructive magic
    -Long and Short range attacks
    Weaknesses:
    -No debuffs
    -Limited defensive abilities
    -Weak against Earth magic
    -Weak against high powered fire magic
    Abilities/Powers:

    D-rank:

    C-rank:

    B-rank:

    A-rank:

    S-rank:
    Sorry, but if you are going to use elemental magic like this, you can't control more than one element.


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    Post by Guest 23rd August 2013, 2:29 pm

    Policy has changed Zenshin, we now allow it. We have numerous examples showing. The only elemental magic not allowed is Twilight Magic. Proceed without that in mind.
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    Post by King Zenshin 23rd August 2013, 4:14 pm

    Nova wrote:Primary Magic: Stormcaller
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: A powerful offensive magic, the Stormcaller school of magic focuses on using wind, water, and electricity to create devastating attacks.
    Please add much more detail to the description, one liners can't pass as it
    Strengths:
    -Combination of elements types
    -Very destructive magic
    -Long and Short range attacks
    Weaknesses:
    -No debuffs
    -Limited defensive abilities
    -Weak against Earth magic
    -Weak against high powered fire magic
    Abilities/Powers:

    D-rank:

    C-rank:

    B-rank:

    A-rank:

    S-rank:
    Sorry, I wasn't aware. Anyhow, anything that doesn't have a range, do it. I'll also be checking this one category of spells at a time, since it's so big. Comments are in cyan, good luck and bump when edited~


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    First Skill: Stormcaller Magic
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    Post by Nova 25th August 2013, 11:48 am

    D-ranks edited
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    Post by King Zenshin 25th August 2013, 12:10 pm

    Nova wrote:Primary Magic: Stormcaller
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: A powerful offensive magic, the Stormcaller school of magic focuses on using wind, water, and electricity to create devastating attacks.  The Storm element deals with the combination of water and lightning energy into a singular form of technique; appearing essentially as arcing beams of electric energy. The laser-like energy created from this release retains the speed of the lightning element and flexibility of water, making this magic both accurate and precise. Accurate and precise are the same thing : /
    Strengths:
    -Combination of elements types
    -Very destructive magic
    -Long and Short range attacks
    Weaknesses:
    -No debuffs
    -Limited defensive abilities
    -Weak against Earth magic Explain how this is a weakness, as there is no system in place that makes one element more powerful than another. Examples being like : Against earth magic, the rank of the spells are lowered. This also goes for your other weakness saying it's weak to fire
    -Weak against high powered fire magic
    Abilities/Powers:

    D-rank:

    C-rank:

    B-rank:

    A-rank:

    S-rank:
    Commented on the C ranked spell, good luck and bump when edited~


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    Total Experience: 263,160

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    Nova
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    First Skill: Stormcaller Magic
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    Post by Nova 25th August 2013, 1:03 pm

    C-ranks edited
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    Post by King Zenshin 27th August 2013, 1:46 am

    Nova wrote:Primary Magic: Stormcaller
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: A powerful offensive magic, the Stormcaller school of magic focuses on using wind, water, and electricity to create devastating attacks.  The Storm element deals with the combination of water and lightning energy into a singular form of technique; appearing essentially as arcing beams of electric energy. The laser-like energy created from this release retains the speed of the lightning element and flexibility of water, making this magic very precise.
    Strengths:
    -Combination of elements types
    -Very destructive magic
    -Long and Short range attacks
    Weaknesses:
    -No debuffs
    -Limited defensive abilities
    -Lightning spells are considered 1 rank lower versus Earth magic
    -Wind Spells are considered 1 rank lower versus Fire magic
    Abilities/Powers:

    D-rank:

    C-rank:

    B-rank:

    A-rank:

    S-rank:
    Comments made. Good luck and bump when edited


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    Total Experience: 263,160

    Character / Vincent Gauss
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    Nova
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    First Skill: Stormcaller Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Nova 27th August 2013, 2:12 am

    B-ranks edited
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    Age : 26
    Experience : 263,160

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    Post by King Zenshin 28th August 2013, 3:14 am

    Nova wrote:Primary Magic: Stormcaller
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: A powerful offensive magic, the Stormcaller school of magic focuses on using wind, water, and electricity to create devastating attacks.  The Storm element deals with the combination of water and lightning energy into a singular form of technique; appearing essentially as arcing beams of electric energy. The laser-like energy created from this release retains the speed of the lightning element and flexibility of water, making this magic very precise.
    Strengths:
    -Combination of elements types
    -Very destructive magic
    -Long and Short range attacks
    Weaknesses:
    -No debuffs
    -Limited defensive abilities
    -Lightning spells are considered 1 rank lower versus Earth magic
    -Wind Spells are considered 1 rank lower versus Fire magic
    Abilities/Powers:

    D-rank:

    C-rank:

    B-rank:

    A-rank:

    S-rank:
    There isnt much left, all you need to do is edit the few S-Ranked spells and add a "system" for stunning, since we dont have one and a lot of your spells feature it as a strength.


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    Character / Vincent Gauss
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    Nova
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    Age : 34
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Stormcaller Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Stormcaller Magic Empty Re: Stormcaller Magic

    Post by Nova 28th August 2013, 11:24 am

    Updated~
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    Age : 26
    Experience : 263,160

    Character Sheet
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    Third Skill:

    Stormcaller Magic Empty Re: Stormcaller Magic

    Post by King Zenshin 28th August 2013, 12:10 pm

    Nova wrote:Primary Magic: Stormcaller
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: A powerful offensive magic, the Stormcaller school of magic focuses on using wind, water, and electricity to create devastating attacks.  The Storm element deals with the combination of water and lightning energy into a singular form of technique; appearing essentially as arcing beams of electric energy. The laser-like energy created from this release retains the speed of the lightning element and flexibility of water, making this magic very precise.
    Strengths:
    -Combination of elements types
    -Very destructive magic
    -Long and Short range attacks
    Weaknesses:
    -No debuffs
    -Limited defensive abilities
    -Lightning spells are considered 1 rank lower versus Earth magic
    -Wind Spells are considered 1 rank lower versus Fire magic
    Abilities/Powers:

    D-rank:

    C-rank:

    B-rank:

    A-rank:

    S-rank:

    Stun:
    Great job! Approved~


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    Missions Completed
    100 Year: 1
    10 Year: 1
    S-Ranked: 1
    A-Ranked: 4
    B-Ranked: 4
    D-Ranked: 3
    Event Experience: 57,562.5
    Dungeon Experience: 2,325
    Total Experience: 263,160

    Character / Vincent Gauss
    Primary Magic / Knight of Space
    Secondary Magic / Paladin's Armaments
    History & Notebook | Bank
    Golden Lacrima | Expires 7/9/2019

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