Seishin

Name: Seishin Akuma
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Birthday: 2/7
Sexuality: Bi
Special Characteristics: She has a cat tail, the same color black as her hair, and small, pearly white kitty fangs.

Personality: Seishin can be social sometimes, but she doesn't do anything she disagrees with, it's her way or the highway. She's extremely protective of her brother, SeiShi, and would give her own life in order to protect his. She is a good runner, but is slowed in bright light, the more the light, the greater it's effect. She tends to act a bit cat-like and has a strong, somewhat creepy, bond with the creatures. She dreams of a canine-less world ruled by darkness and evil where she can live in bliss. She can get quite mad and go a bit looney sometimes if pushed to her limit. She is really nice to those that she gets to know, but will often give outsiders the cold shoulder. She misses her mother like crazy, but never had a very good relationship with her father, he was never around her and she grew a general dislike for him. Seishin cherishes a silver chain bracelet that her mother gave her as a young girl and would protect it with her life as well. When her parents died, Seishin took to the darkness, it was her new friend, and she came to know being submerged in cold shadows as a warm welcome into the land of fantasy. She grew a deep (sisterly) love for her brother and made him her everything in life because she had lost all else and figured it was her job to protect him. She has a passion for music and has a pretty singing voice, but personally thinks it’s a useless talent in the real world. Seishin doesn't take kindly to traitors though, if you break her trust it is nearly impossible to gain it back a second time. She doesn't get along very well with fire or light users either, and will almost never approach them in battle unless it is to protect something or someone that she cares about.

In battle she gives it her all. She doesn't give up no matter what the circumstances. The only reason for her to go easy is if her fighting somehow put her brother in danger. She is a bit fragile, but she doesn't let the pain hold her back. She won't give up unless she is forced to. She uses darkness to her advantage whenever it is possible. If one of her allies is in danger though, she will switch to defensive and work to protect them, rather than just working on beating up the enemies. She tends to get dispirited sometimes on whether or not she’s fighting for the right cause and it can affect her battle skills in a negative way, making her less motivated and unable to react as efficiently. She fights like a cat, light on her feet and sharp witted, hard to catch, but when you do, somewhat easy to keep maintained. Seishin doesn't do well fighting in small spaces though and will often freak out and fail awfully. Her power slowly drains when in direct sunlight and after too long she will have to surrender or retreat to darkness, or risk extreme pain. She tries to save her magic but will often end up going all out, then she pays for it through severe pain.

Likes:
Her brother:
He has always been there in her opinion and is the one person she fully trusts.

Darkness:
It is her element so she has a deep care for it, she took to it when there was nothing else to take to, and has since become far too attached to ever leave.

Cats:
She can connect with them better than with other people, she doesn't find the need to kill them, and she likes the silent and mysterious aura about them.

Dislikes:
Intense lighting:
It hurts her, so to speak, and makes her weak, taking her out of her element, there for she despises it and prefers the comforting chill of darkness.

Dogs or things with dog-like characteristics:
She dislikes them partially because of her cat instincts,and partially because she's scared to death of them, but she also just finds them disgusting and stupid creatures, willing to give their lives for some meaningless humans.

Children under the age of one:
She doesn't like them simply because they just bother her, they are disgusting and gross, drooling little beasts who pull her tail.

Elderly people:
She does not like to be reminded of her own young age and would rather think of herself as an adult, but when they come around she realizes she has a long way before adulthood and it comes as sort of an ego blow.

Motivations:
Her dream of a dark land:
She is motivated by her dream because if it came true she would be free of the light and the sickening goodness of others, instead she could feel at home in a place where she could finally fit in.

Her brother:
Seishin is motivated by her brother because he's always been the one living being that she could trust and cry to, she now feels the need to protect him and is motivated to keep strong for his sake even when she feels like caving in.

Demons and dark creatures:
She finds them beautiful and wonderful, their strength and will, they motivate her that even the dark beings can find power, and that one day she might be strong as well.

Fears:
Dogs:
She fears anything to do with them, no wolves, no coyotes, no chihuahuas, they are all terrible in her perspective, they are brutal beasts that serve in the light. She wouldn't dare go near them, everything about their bodies, the way they move, breath, hunt, it scares her.

Bright Light:
Light kills the darkness that she so openly loves and she would much rather stay in the shadows where she can defend herself, rather than go where she is weak and vulnerable.

Deep water:
Seishin likes to know her surroundings, but is unable to when in deep water, she is not a strong swimmer and doesn't want to die out at sea or somewhere where she'll most likely never be found.

General Appearance


Height: 5"3
Weight: 94 lbs.
Hair: Seishin's hair is jet black and flowing, it's length is down to her waist, she wears a blue flower in it and refuses to wear hair bands.
Eyes: Her eyes are a crystal, sky-dust, blue.
Skin Tone: She's somewhat paler than most people, but not too light.
Appearance: She has a pretty face and long black hair, she is quite slender and fit, she wears a grey dress that goes to her knees, it's fitted to her curvy body. She wears a blue ribbon around her neck and has an old silver chain bracelet her mother gave her.

Guild/Council

Guild: Devine Torment
Tattoo: It is jet black and on the under side of her wrist.
Rank: Seishin is D rank.

skyler277 wrote:Name: Seishin Akuma
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Birthday: 2/7
Sexuality: Bi
Special Characteristics: She has a cat tail, the same color black as her hair, and small, pearly white kitty fangs.

Personality: Seishin can be social sometimes, but she doesn't do anything she disagrees with, it's her way or the highway. She's extremely protective of her brother, SeiShi, and would give her own life in order to protect his. She is a good runner, but is slowed in bright light, the more the light, the greater it's effect. She really likes cats and has a strong, somewhat creepy, bond with them. She hates dogs to death though and won't go anywhere near one. She dreams of a canine-less world ruled by darkness and evil. She can get quite mad and go a bit looney sometimes if pushed to her limit. She is really nice to those that she gets to know, but will often give outsiders the cold shoulder. She misses her mother like crazy, but never had a very good relationship with her father, he was never around her and she grew a general dislike for him. Seishin cherishes a silver chain bracelet that her mother gave her as a young girl. When her parents died, Seishin took to the darkness, it was her new friend, and she came to know being submerged in cold shadows as a warm welcome into the land of fantasy. She grew a deep (sisterly) love for her brother and made him her everything in life. She has a passion for music and has a pretty singing voice, but personally thinks it’s a useless talent in the real world. Seishin doesn’t take kindly to traitors though, if you break her trust it is nearly impossible to gain it back a second time. She doesn’t get along very well with fire users either, and will almost never approach them in battle.
In battle she gives it her all. She doesn't give up no matter what the circumstances. The only reason for her to go easy is if her fighting somehow put her brother in danger. She is a bit fragile, but she doesn't let the pain hold her back. She won't give up unless she is forced to. She uses darkness to her advantage whenever it is possible. If one of her allies is in danger though, she will switch to defensive and work to protect them, rather than just working on beating up the enemies. She tends to get dispirited sometimes on whether or not she’s fighting for the right cause and it can affect her battle skills in a negative way, making her less motivated and unable to react as efficiently. She fights like a cat, light on her feet and sharp witted, hard to catch, but when you do, somewhat easy to keep maintained. Seishin doesn’t do well fighting in small spaces though and will often freak out and fail awfully. Her power slowly drains when in direct sunlight and after too long she will have to surrender or retreat to darkness, or risk extreme pain. She tries to save her magic but will often end up going all out, then she pays for it through severe pain.

Could you remove the likes and dislikes from the personality, those things have their own section.

Likes: Seishin likes her brother because he has always been there in her opinion, darkness is her element so she has a deep care for it, she loves cats because she can connect with them better than with other people, and butterflies represent freedom and harmony to her.
Dislikes: She despises intense lighting as it hurts her and she doesn't care to be around dogs or things with dog-like characteristics because of her cat instincts, she doesn't like children under the age of one because they just bother her, nor does she like elderly people because she does not like to be reminded of her own young age.
Motivations: Seishin is motivated by her dream of creating a dark land ruled by evil, her brother motivates her though, even if their causes are conflicting, she is also motivated by demons and dark creatures.
Fears: Seishin deeply fears dogs and anything to do with them, no wolves, no coyotes, no chihuahuas, they are all terrible in her perspective. She fears light that is too extreme because of her love of the dark and she fears deep water because of her cat like-ness.

You need 3 likes, dislikes, motivations, and fears. All in list form like so:

Likes
-Cake: [sentence reason]
-Apples: [sentence reason]
-Pears: [sentence reason]

General Appearance


Height: 5"3
Weight: 94 lbs.
Hair: Seishin's hair is jet black and flowing, it's length is down to her waist, she wears a blue flower in it and refuses to wear hair bands.
Eyes: Her eyes are a crystal, sky-dust, blue.
Skin Tone: She's somewhat paler than most people, but not too light.
Appearance: She has a pretty face and long black hair, she is quite slender and fit, she wears a grey dress that goes to her knees, it's fitted to her curvy body. She wears a blue ribbon around her neck and has an old silver chain bracelet her mother gave her.

Guild/Council

Guild: Devine Torment
Tattoo: It is jet black and on the under side of her wrist.
Rank: Seishin is D rank.

Nice app so far, you just need to change a few things and you will be set.

Is that better?
Thank you, by the way. ^.^

skyler277 wrote:Name: Seishin Akuma
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Birthday: 2/7
Sexuality: Bi
Special Characteristics: She has a cat tail, the same color black as her hair, and small, pearly white kitty fangs.

Personality: Seishin can be social sometimes, but she doesn't do anything she disagrees with, it's her way or the highway. She's extremely protective of her brother, SeiShi, and would give her own life in order to protect his. She is a good runner, but is slowed in bright light, the more the light, the greater it's effect. She tends to act a bit cat-like and has a strong, somewhat creepy, bond with the creatures. She dreams of a canine-less world ruled by darkness and evil where she can live in bliss. She can get quite mad and go a bit looney sometimes if pushed to her limit. She is really nice to those that she gets to know, but will often give outsiders the cold shoulder. She misses her mother like crazy, but never had a very good relationship with her father, he was never around her and she grew a general dislike for him. Seishin cherishes a silver chain bracelet that her mother gave her as a young girl and would protect it with her life as well. When her parents died, Seishin took to the darkness, it was her new friend, and she came to know being submerged in cold shadows as a warm welcome into the land of fantasy. She grew a deep (sisterly) love for her brother and made him her everything in life because she had lost all else and figured it was her job to protect him. She has a passion for music and has a pretty singing voice, but personally thinks it’s a useless talent in the real world. Seishin doesn't take kindly to traitors though, if you break her trust it is nearly impossible to gain it back a second time. She doesn't get along very well with fire or light users either, and will almost never approach them in battle unless it is to protect something or someone that she cares about.
In battle she gives it her all. She doesn't give up no matter what the circumstances. The only reason for her to go easy is if her fighting somehow put her brother in danger. She is a bit fragile, but she doesn't let the pain hold her back. She won't give up unless she is forced to. She uses darkness to her advantage whenever it is possible. If one of her allies is in danger though, she will switch to defensive and work to protect them, rather than just working on beating up the enemies. She tends to get dispirited sometimes on whether or not she’s fighting for the right cause and it can affect her battle skills in a negative way, making her less motivated and unable to react as efficiently. She fights like a cat, light on her feet and sharp witted, hard to catch, but when you do, somewhat easy to keep maintained. Seishin doesn't do well fighting in small spaces though and will often freak out and fail awfully. Her power slowly drains when in direct sunlight and after too long she will have to surrender or retreat to darkness, or risk extreme pain. She tries to save her magic but will often end up going all out, then she pays for it through severe pain. Press enter to space the personality and likes
Likes: Her brother - He has always been there in her opinion and is the one person she fully trusts.
Darkness - It is her element so she has a deep care for it, she took to it when there was nothing else to take to, and has since become far too attached to ever leave.
Cats ` She can connect with them better than with other people, she doesn't find the need to kill them, and she likes the silent and mysterious aura about them.
Dislikes: Intense lighting - It hurts her, so to speak, and makes her weak, taking her out of her element, there for she despises it and prefers the comforting chill of darkness. Dogs or things with dog-like characteristics - Partially because of her cat instincts,and partially because she's scared to death of them, but she also just finds them disgusting and stupid creatures, willing to give their lives for some meaningless humans
Children under the age of one - Just because they just bother her, they are disgusting and gross, drooling little beasts who pull her tail.
Elderly people - She does not like to be reminded of her own young age and would rather think of herself as an adult, but when they come around she realizes she has a long way before adulthood and it comes as sort of an ego blow.
Motivations: Seishin is motivated by her dream of creating a dark land ruled by evil, her brother motivates her though, even if their causes are conflicting, she is also motivated by demons and dark creatures.
Fears: Seishin deeply fears dogs and anything to do with them, no wolves, no coyotes, no chihuahuas, they are all terrible in her perspective. She fears light that is too extreme because of her love of the dark and she fears deep water because of her cat like-ness.

By list, I meant imitate the way I did it, like, each have their own lines, like so.
Likes
Cake:
The color orange:
Cats:

General Appearance


Height: 5"3
Weight: 94 lbs.
Hair: Seishin's hair is jet black and flowing, it's length is down to her waist, she wears a blue flower in it and refuses to wear hair bands.
Eyes: Her eyes are a crystal, sky-dust, blue.
Skin Tone: She's somewhat paler than most people, but not too light.
Appearance: She has a pretty face and long black hair, she is quite slender and fit, she wears a grey dress that goes to her knees, it's fitted to her curvy body. She wears a blue ribbon around her neck and has an old silver chain bracelet her mother gave her.

Guild/Council

Guild: Devine Torment
Tattoo: It is jet black and on the under side of her wrist.
Rank: Seishin is D rank.

Check other approved apps if you're still confused about the 'list' form for the likes, dislikes, motives, and fears. Good luck and bump when edited~

I think I understand?
I edited ~ ^.^

You've got it, just put the likes and dislikes under the word itself

Likes
Here
here
and here

Also, you gotta do it for fears and motivations

Alright~ Edited again :)

skyler277 wrote:Name: Seishin Akuma
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Birthday: 2/7
Sexuality: Bi
Special Characteristics: She has a cat tail, the same color black as her hair, and small, pearly white kitty fangs.

Personality: Seishin can be social sometimes, but she doesn't do anything she disagrees with, it's her way or the highway. She's extremely protective of her brother, SeiShi, and would give her own life in order to protect his. She is a good runner, but is slowed in bright light, the more the light, the greater it's effect. She tends to act a bit cat-like and has a strong, somewhat creepy, bond with the creatures. She dreams of a canine-less world ruled by darkness and evil where she can live in bliss. She can get quite mad and go a bit looney sometimes if pushed to her limit. She is really nice to those that she gets to know, but will often give outsiders the cold shoulder. She misses her mother like crazy, but never had a very good relationship with her father, he was never around her and she grew a general dislike for him. Seishin cherishes a silver chain bracelet that her mother gave her as a young girl and would protect it with her life as well. When her parents died, Seishin took to the darkness, it was her new friend, and she came to know being submerged in cold shadows as a warm welcome into the land of fantasy. She grew a deep (sisterly) love for her brother and made him her everything in life because she had lost all else and figured it was her job to protect him. She has a passion for music and has a pretty singing voice, but personally thinks it’s a useless talent in the real world. Seishin doesn't take kindly to traitors though, if you break her trust it is nearly impossible to gain it back a second time. She doesn't get along very well with fire or light users either, and will almost never approach them in battle unless it is to protect something or someone that she cares about.

In battle she gives it her all. She doesn't give up no matter what the circumstances. The only reason for her to go easy is if her fighting somehow put her brother in danger. She is a bit fragile, but she doesn't let the pain hold her back. She won't give up unless she is forced to. She uses darkness to her advantage whenever it is possible. If one of her allies is in danger though, she will switch to defensive and work to protect them, rather than just working on beating up the enemies. She tends to get dispirited sometimes on whether or not she’s fighting for the right cause and it can affect her battle skills in a negative way, making her less motivated and unable to react as efficiently. She fights like a cat, light on her feet and sharp witted, hard to catch, but when you do, somewhat easy to keep maintained. Seishin doesn't do well fighting in small spaces though and will often freak out and fail awfully. Her power slowly drains when in direct sunlight and after too long she will have to surrender or retreat to darkness, or risk extreme pain. She tries to save her magic but will often end up going all out, then she pays for it through severe pain.

Likes:
Her brother:
He has always been there in her opinion and is the one person she fully trusts.

Darkness:
It is her element so she has a deep care for it, she took to it when there was nothing else to take to, and has since become far too attached to ever leave.

Cats:
She can connect with them better than with other people, she doesn't find the need to kill them, and she likes the silent and mysterious aura about them.

Dislikes:
Intense lighting:
It hurts her, so to speak, and makes her weak, taking her out of her element, there for she despises it and prefers the comforting chill of darkness.

Dogs or things with dog-like characteristics:
She dislikes them partially because of her cat instincts,and partially because she's scared to death of them, but she also just finds them disgusting and stupid creatures, willing to give their lives for some meaningless humans.

Children under the age of one:
She doesn't like them simply because they just bother her, they are disgusting and gross, drooling little beasts who pull her tail.

Elderly people:
She does not like to be reminded of her own young age and would rather think of herself as an adult, but when they come around she realizes she has a long way before adulthood and it comes as sort of an ego blow.

Motivations:
Her dream of a dark land:
She is motivated by her dream because if it came true she would be free of the light and the sickening goodness of others, instead she could feel at home in a place where she could finally fit in.

Her brother:
Seishin is motivated by her brother because he's always been the one living being that she could trust and cry to, she now feels the need to protect him and is motivated to keep strong for his sake even when she feels like caving in.

Demons and dark creatures:
She finds them beautiful and wonderful, their strength and will, they motivate her that even the dark beings can find power, and that one day she might be strong as well.

Fears:
Dogs:
She fears anything to do with them, no wolves, no coyotes, no chihuahuas, they are all terrible in her perspective, they are brutal beasts that serve in the light. She wouldn't dare go near them, everything about their bodies, the way they move, breath, hunt, it scares her.

Bright Light:
Light kills the darkness that she so openly loves and she would much rather stay in the shadows where she can defend herself, rather than go where she is weak and vulnerable.

Deep water:
Seishin likes to know her surroundings, but is unable to when in deep water, she is not a strong swimmer and doesn't want to die out at sea or somewhere where she'll most likely never be found.

General Appearance


Height: 5"3
Weight: 94 lbs.
Hair: Seishin's hair is jet black and flowing, it's length is down to her waist, she wears a blue flower in it and refuses to wear hair bands.
Eyes: Her eyes are a crystal, sky-dust, blue.
Skin Tone: She's somewhat paler than most people, but not too light.
Appearance: She has a pretty face and long black hair, she is quite slender and fit, she wears a grey dress that goes to her knees, it's fitted to her curvy body. She wears a blue ribbon around her neck and has an old silver chain bracelet her mother gave her.

Guild/Council

Guild: Devine Torment
Tattoo: It is jet black and on the under side of her wrist.
Rank: Seishin is D rank.

Nice job. Approved~