Fairy Tail RP

Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

• Patch Notes •                 • New User Guide •                • Guild Information •

    Rainbow Magic

    Niji
    Niji

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 18
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Noppera-bo
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Rainbow Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Rainbow Magic Empty Rainbow Magic

    Post by Niji 3rd August 2015, 8:46 pm

    Rainbow Magic Sting_13

    Rainbow Magic

    Secondary Magic: N/A

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description:
    Niji's rainbow magic is used in a very unusual way. Instead of using all of the colors together for a single attack, Niji is able to reach inside himself & manipulate each color of the rainbow to perform different assignments. This magic is very flexible, being able to generate offensive & defensive spells, as well as self-buff & inflict debuffs on enemies. Each hue that Niji uses is a representation of an emotion. These emotions are rage, greed, fear, willpower, hope, compassion, and love.

    With Niji's magic he can cast ranged projectile spells, enhance certain body parts for melee combat, or even channel spells on himself to increase stats or protect. Most of his spells are casted with his arms, so they are a vital part to his combat style. Although he uses emotions to power his magic, these emotions can sometimes overtake him, changing his current psychological state. This is sometimes a good thing & sometimes a bad thing depending on what emotion it is.

    Strengths:
    -Very versatile, each color has a different effect.
    -Strong against dark based magic. Deals 50% extra damage.
    -If water magic is used on Niji his spell damage is amplified by 25%.
    -In any rainy environments Niji deals 25% more damage.

    Weaknesses:
    -Dark based magics deal 50% extra damage to Niji.
    -Because his spells are emotion based, Niji can sometimes be overpowered by them.
    -Most of Niji's spells require him to be in melee range.
    -Reflector magic can counter Niji's magic.
    -Other than fusion spells, Niji can only have one color activated at a time.


    Unique Abilities


    Rainbow Dash: Passive 25% movement speed increase.

    Nightlight: At night Niji emits a natural rainbow light.

    Taste the Rainbow: If a rainbow is present he can manipulate it for casting spells, reducing spell cost by 5%.

    Spells


    Greed's Hammer


    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive-Light
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts

    Description: Niji is overcome with greed as an appendage of his choosing is enveloped in orange light. As the light comes in contact with his target, D rank damage is delt & 2% of his opponent's mp is sapped. Niji then gains the mp that was taken from the target for himself. This spell's sap effect has no effect on wizards B rank or higher.

    Strengths:
    -Drains magic power as well as dealing damage.
    -Can encase more than one appendage at a time.
    -Niji can use any appendage to attack.

    Weaknesses:
    -Has to be in melee range.
    -Has to make contact with the target to have an effect.
    -Can be overpowered by greed after use, changing behavior pattern.
    -Requires a body part to cast spell.

    Will's Blessing


    Rank: D
    Type: Defensive-Light
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts

    Description: Niji's body is fully engulfed in green light, protecting him from incoming damage. This shield can withstand two D rank spells or one C rank spell before its no longer effective, but is more vulnerable to dark based magic.

    Strengths:
    -The shield moves with Niji wherever he walks.
    -Protects against two D rank spells or one C rank spell before shattering.
    -Protects from all angles.

    Weaknesses:
    -Niji can not attack while the shield is activated.
    -He is easily identifiable at night when this spell is active because of the green light he is encompassed in.
    -All light slayers can eat the shield.
    -Can be destroyed by one attack less than normal if attacked by dark based magics.


    Fear's Touch


    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive/Debuff-Light
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts

    Description: Niji's arms are shrouded in fearful yellow light. Upon making contact with his illuminated arms, movement speed is decreased by 25% for 2 posts & D rank damage is dealt.

    Strengths:
    -Reduces movement speed of target aside from dealing damage.
    -Both arms can be used for this spell.
    -Upon making contact with Niji's strike, the target sees what they are most afraid of.

    Weaknesses:
    -Niji's arms are needed for this spell
    -Needs to be in melee range for this attack.
    -Must make contact with target for the spell to take effect.
    -After using this spell Niji can be consumed by fear, trying to install fear into all hearts of those surrounding him.


    Love's Hymn

    Rank: D
    Type: Buff-Light
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts

    Description: Pink rays flow beneath Niji"s feet. With this lovely display of lights, Niji's movement speed is increased by 50%.

    Strengths:
    -Movement speed is increased.
    -Jump height is increased.
    -While moving with this spell, Niji does not get fatigued.  

    Weaknesses:
    -No damage is dealt with this spell.
    -It can only be casted on the user.
    -Light slayers can consume this magic, nullifying its effect on Niji.
    -No other spells can be used while Niji has this one active, aside from fusion spells.


    Last edited by Niji on 6th August 2015, 11:22 pm; edited 2 times in total
    Natalia Wolf
    Natalia Wolf

    Snow Angel


    Snow Angel

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Windswept General
    Position : None
    Posts : 307
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1287.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Blizzard Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Rainbow Magic Empty Re: Rainbow Magic

    Post by Natalia Wolf 5th August 2015, 10:33 pm

    Hi I'm Nat and I will be looking over your magic today, anything in this color is a note that you should take into consideration.

    Niji wrote:
    Rainbow Magic Sting_13

    Rainbow Magic

    Secondary Magic: N/A

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description:
    Niji's rainbow magic is used in a very unusual way. Instead of using all of the colors together for a single attack, Niji is able to reach inside himself & manipulate each color of the rainbow to perform different assignments. This magic is very flexible, being able to generate offensive & defensive spells, as well as self-buff & inflict debuffs on enemies. Each hue that Niji uses is a representation of an emotion, that can sometimes even take over Niji. These emotions are rage, greed, fear, willpower, hope, compassion, and love.

    With Niji's magic he can cast ranged projectile spells, enhance certain body parts for melee combat, or even channel spells on himself to increase stats or protect. Most of his spells are casted with his arms, so they are a vital part to his combat style. Although he uses emotions to power his magic, these emotions can sometimes overtake him, changing his current state. This is sometimes a good thing & sometimes a bad thing depending on what emotion it is.

    Strengths:
    -Very versatile, each color has a different effect.
    -Strong against dark based magic. Deals 50% extra damage.
    -If water magic is used on Niji his spell damage is amplified by 25%.
    -In any rainy environments Niji deals 25% more damage.

    Weaknesses:
    -Dark based magics deal 50% extra damage to Niji.
    -Because his spells are emotion based, Niji can sometimes be overpowered by them.
    -Most of Niji's spells require him to be in melee range.
    -Reflector magic can counter Niji's magic.
    -Other than fusion spells, Niji can only have one color activated at a time.


    Unique Abilities


    Rainbow Dash: Passive 25% movement speed increase.

    Nightlight: At night Niji emits a natural rainbow light.

    Taste the Rainbow: If a rainbow is present he can manipulate it for casting spells, costing 0% mp. This is way broken, even I who has something similar with snow can't remove the spell cost completely, I will allow a flat reduction of a spells cost but we can't allow spells for free, and no that does not mean you can gain magic power when you cast a spell that is already at 0 MP, the maximum spell cost reduction will be 5%

    Spells


    Greed's Hammer


    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive-Light
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts

    Description: Niji is overcome with greed an appendage of his choosing is enveloped in orange light. As the light comes in contact with his target, D rank damage is delt & 5% of his opponent's mp is sapped. mp drain is an iffy subject as it usually hits higher ranks harder considering that 5% mp is an A rank spell for an H rank where as 5% mp is a D rank for a B rank, reduce that to 2% for this spell, also judging by your wording you also gain that much mp as well which should be stated in other words for better understanding

    Strengths:
    -Drains magic power as well as dealing damage.
    -Can encase more than one appendage at a time.
    -Niji can use any appendage to attack.

    Weaknesses:
    -Has to be in melee range.
    -Has to make contact with the target to have an effect.
    -Can be overpowered by greed after use, changing behavior pattern.
    -Requires a body part to cast spell.

    Will's Blessing


    Rank: D
    Type: Defensive-Light
    Duration: Instant You can have a duration for this spell, and it would probably be beneficial to you to have a duration I would be disappointing if I didn't get to use the full potential of my defensive spell, maximum durations for D rank spells are 3 posts with 4 post cooldowns.
    Cooldown: 2 posts

    Description: Niji is engulfed in green light, protecting him damage. you seem to have made a few typos in your description you also didn't describe how much damage it can absorb in the description itself. Details are your friend, even if you have to restate them.

    Strengths:
    -The shield moves with Niji wherever he walks.
    -Protects against two D rank spells or one C rank spell before shattering.
    -Protects from all angles.

    Weaknesses:
    -Niji can not attack while the shield is activated.
    -He is easily identifiable at night when this spell is active because of the green light he is encompassed in.
    -All light slayers can eat the shield.
    -Is destroyed one less attack if struck dark magics.


    Fear's Touch


    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive/Debuff-Light
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts

    Description: Niji's arms are shrouded in fearful yellow light. Upon making contact with his illuminated arms, movement speed is decreased by 25% & D rank damage is dealt. How long does the slow last?

    Strengths:
    -Reduces movement speed of target aside from dealing damage.
    -Both arms can be used for this spell.
    -Upon making contact with Niji's strike, the target sees what they are most afraid of.

    Weaknesses:
    -Niji's arms are needed for this spell
    -Needs to be in melee range for this attack.
    -Must make contact with target for the spell to take effect.
    -After using this spell Niji can be consumed by fear, trying to install fear into all hearts of those surrounding him.


    Love's Hymn

    Rank: D
    Type: Buff-Light
    Duration: InstantAs stated with your defensive spell you should add a duration to maximize potential cooldowns will always be one post longer than duration.
    Cooldown: 2 posts

    Description: Pink rays flow beneath Niji"s feet. With this lovely display of lights, Niji's movement speed is increased by 50%.

    Strengths:
    -Movement speed is increased.
    -Jump height is increased.
    -While this buff is active  

    Weaknesses:
    -No damage is dealt with this spell.
    -It can only be casted on the user.
    -Light slayers can consume this magic, nullifying its effect on Niji.
    -No other spells can be used while Niji has this one active.

    Final Note, I really like your magic, it is very unique and interesting though I see a lot of your stuff is simply just instants which isn't a problem but for things like buffs and defensive spells it's generally a good idea to use durations. Just note that a duration is not your cast time, should you ever have to channel a spell it would fall under the description and not under duration so you can still have instant cast buffs with a duration. Once your edits are complete I will return to look over the changes.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Niji
    Niji

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 18
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Noppera-bo
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Rainbow Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Rainbow Magic Empty Re: Rainbow Magic

    Post by Niji 6th August 2015, 8:42 pm

    All changes have been made. Bump!


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Rainbow Magic WfEHPo2

    Natalia Wolf
    Natalia Wolf

    Snow Angel


    Snow Angel

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Windswept General
    Position : None
    Posts : 307
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1287.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Blizzard Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Rainbow Magic Empty Re: Rainbow Magic

    Post by Natalia Wolf 6th August 2015, 9:58 pm

    Niji wrote:
    Rainbow Magic Sting_13

    Rainbow Magic

    Secondary Magic: N/A

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description:
    Niji's rainbow magic is used in a very unusual way. Instead of using all of the colors together for a single attack, Niji is able to reach inside himself & manipulate each color of the rainbow to perform different assignments. This magic is very flexible, being able to generate offensive & defensive spells, as well as self-buff & inflict debuffs on enemies. Each hue that Niji uses is a representation of an emotion. These emotions are rage, greed, fear, willpower, hope, compassion, and love.

    With Niji's magic he can cast ranged projectile spells, enhance certain body parts for melee combat, or even channel spells on himself to increase stats or protect. Most of his spells are casted with his arms, so they are a vital part to his combat style. Although he uses emotions to power his magic, these emotions can sometimes overtake him, changing his current psychological state. This is sometimes a good thing & sometimes a bad thing depending on what emotion it is.

    Strengths:
    -Very versatile, each color has a different effect.
    -Strong against dark based magic. Deals 50% extra damage.
    -If water magic is used on Niji his spell damage is amplified by 25%.
    -In any rainy environments Niji deals 25% more damage.

    Weaknesses:
    -Dark based magics deal 50% extra damage to Niji.
    -Because his spells are emotion based, Niji can sometimes be overpowered by them.
    -Most of Niji's spells require him to be in melee range.
    -Reflector magic can counter Niji's magic.
    -Other than fusion spells, Niji can only have one color activated at a time.


    Unique Abilities


    Rainbow Dash: Passive 25% movement speed increase.

    Nightlight: At night Niji emits a natural rainbow light.

    Taste the Rainbow: If a rainbow is present he can manipulate it for casting spells, reducing spell cost by 5%.

    Spells


    Greed's Hammer


    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive-Light
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts

    Description: Niji is overcome with greed as an appendage of his choosing is enveloped in orange light. As the light comes in contact with his target, D rank damage is delt & 2% of his opponent's mp is sapped. Niji then gains the mp that was taken from the target for himself. One thing I forgot to touch on, this spell will probably have issues when it comes to hitting those of higher rank than the spells ranking, as such anything higher than C will be ineffective for this spell.

    Strengths:
    -Drains magic power as well as dealing damage.
    -Can encase more than one appendage at a time.
    -Niji can use any appendage to attack.

    Weaknesses:
    -Has to be in melee range.
    -Has to make contact with the target to have an effect.
    -Can be overpowered by greed after use, changing behavior pattern.
    -Requires a body part to cast spell.

    Will's Blessing


    Rank: D
    Type: Defensive-Light
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts

    Description: Niji's body is fully engulfed in green light, protecting him from incoming damage. This shield can withstand two D rank spells or one C rank spell before its no longer effective, but is more vulnerable to dark based magic.

    Strengths:
    -The shield moves with Niji wherever he walks.
    -Protects against two D rank spells or one C rank spell before shattering.
    -Protects from all angles.

    Weaknesses:
    -Niji can not attack while the shield is activated.
    -He is easily identifiable at night when this spell is active because of the green light he is encompassed in.
    -All light slayers can eat the shield.
    -Can be destroyed by one attack less than normal if attacked by dark based magics.


    Fear's Touch


    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive/Debuff-Light
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts

    Description: Niji's arms are shrouded in fearful yellow light. Upon making contact with his illuminated arms, movement speed is decreased by 25% for 2 posts & D rank damage is dealt.

    Strengths:
    -Reduces movement speed of target aside from dealing damage.
    -Both arms can be used for this spell.
    -Upon making contact with Niji's strike, the target sees what they are most afraid of.

    Weaknesses:
    -Niji's arms are needed for this spell
    -Needs to be in melee range for this attack.
    -Must make contact with target for the spell to take effect.
    -After using this spell Niji can be consumed by fear, trying to install fear into all hearts of those surrounding him.


    Love's Hymn

    Rank: D
    Type: Buff-Light
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts

    Description: Pink rays flow beneath Niji"s feet. With this lovely display of lights, Niji's movement speed is increased by 50%.

    Strengths:
    -Movement speed is increased.
    -Jump height is increased.
    -While moving with this spell, Niji does not get fatigued.  

    Weaknesses:
    -No damage is dealt with this spell.
    -It can only be casted on the user.
    -Light slayers can consume this magic, nullifying its effect on Niji.
    -No other spells can be used while Niji has this one active, aside from fusion spells.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Niji
    Niji

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 18
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Noppera-bo
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Rainbow Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Rainbow Magic Empty Re: Rainbow Magic

    Post by Niji 6th August 2015, 11:23 pm

    Bump!


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Rainbow Magic WfEHPo2

    Natalia Wolf
    Natalia Wolf

    Snow Angel


    Snow Angel

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Windswept General
    Position : None
    Posts : 307
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1287.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Blizzard Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Rainbow Magic Empty Re: Rainbow Magic

    Post by Natalia Wolf 6th August 2015, 11:41 pm

    Rainbow Magic Nat1_by_ravenart5-d8m6e1z


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Rainbow Magic Empty Re: Rainbow Magic

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 13th February 2021, 1:59 pm

    Moved and unlocked at the user's request

    Spoiler:


    _____________________________________________________________________________________


      Current date/time is 17th November 2024, 1:19 am