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    Mindbender

    Lemony.Boy
    Lemony.Boy

    Player 
    Lineage : Brute of Fiore
    Position : None
    Posts : 189
    Guild : Errings Rising
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 10,343

    Character Sheet
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    Mindbender Empty Mindbender

    Post by Lemony.Boy 9th March 2020, 10:52 pm

    This will be statless

    Magic

    Magic Name: Mindbender
    Magic Type: Solitary Caster
    Description: The Mindbender is a rare form of magic with which the user can control psychic forces and alter mental states.  It is incredible precise and specialized towards inflicting pain physically and emotionally.  With it, the user can alter foes' perceptions and cause illusions, inflict mania, and generally torment enemies.

    Milo is one of the cruel users of this magic, primarily using it to interrogate and obtain information for jobs, plot escapes, or torture as a form of fear mongering.  Milo is fairly agile and cunning, and uses this magic in elaborate combos to knock foes off their game.  This magic is effective at dismantling strategies due to its general unpredictable nature, which Milo uses to his advantage against more intelligent foes, i.e mages.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Dominion: The user can move objects around with his mind with this ability.  Essentially: telekinesis.  (Plot Ability)


    Spells:

    Name: Cerebral Thunder
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Duration: 6 Posts
    Description: The user snaps his fingers and causes space to burst around enemies’ heads, sending electricity throughout their body and weakening their nerves.  For a while, foes become less agile and rather clumsy with their movements.  The sound caused by this ability resembles thunder, and constantly echoes through an opponents head until the duration runs out.

    Name: Vertebrae Slice
    Rank: A+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Duration: 6 Posts
    Description: The user arcs his arm and slices through space, cutting through the enemy’s nervous system and stunning them.  Depending on the user’s level control, this spell can be fatal.  Temporarily (or permanently if the user deems it necessary) the enemy’s senses will be distorted and coordination lost.  Hearing and touch will be intensified, while sight and smell will be extremely weakened.

    Name: Ghost Dance
    Rank: A
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: AoE
    Duration: 7 Posts
    Description: The user conjures several wispy figures to form out of the ground, taking the form of 'ghosts' from enemies' pasts, or people involved in traumatic events.  While they do not do damage, they constantly torment enemies, allowing the user to either escape or incapacitate their target.

    Name: MANIA
    Rank: A+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single-Target
    Duration: 8 Posts
    Description: When cast, pink blossoms descend from the sky in slow, jagged and eerie patterns.  With a snap, they will suddenly flash and form stationary lasers, and the user enters a manic state and split into several clones, battering the opponent at great speeds and knocking them into the searing lasers.  

    Name: Madness Wavelength
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Duration: 6 Posts
    Description: The user's hand becomes charged with red bolts of lightning that cause madness.  When an enemy is struck, they begin to hallucinate and attack non-existent things.  For mages, this spell can cause a temporary disconnect between them and their magic, causing mages to struggle to control as well as become slightly unhinged and reckless in their attacks, sometimes causing collateral damage to themselves.

    Name: Negative Space
    Rank: A
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: AoE
    Duration: 6 posts
    Description: The user fires a transparent but negative-colored beam from their hand, causing struck areas to be inverted in color.  Within the inverted space, support and auxiliary spells have their effects inverted; healing now damages, boosts are reversed.

    Name: Twilight Zone
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Burst
    Duration: 6 Posts
    Description: The user causes a spotlight to descend on opponents and alters their perception so that they are surrounded by nighttime darkness, but not pitch black.  Within the zone, nightmarish, monkey like figures rise from the ground and attack enemies.  Though, this spell can easily be broken by wary mages and light spells.

    Name: NerveFire
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Burst
    Duration: 5 Posts
    Description: The user conjures a pink fluid to float in their hand that causes foes that come into contact with it to experience heightened pain and chemical burns.


    Last edited by Lemony.Boy on 12th March 2020, 8:27 am; edited 1 time in total
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

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    Mindbender Empty Re: Mindbender

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 12th March 2020, 8:22 am

    Hey Lemony.Boy, I'm here to grade this for you. Everything looks good, the only issue is that you have 3x A+ spells and the max permitted per magic is 2x. Please amend this and bump when done~

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    Lemony.Boy
    Lemony.Boy

    Player 
    Lineage : Brute of Fiore
    Position : None
    Posts : 189
    Guild : Errings Rising
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 10,343

    Character Sheet
    First Skill:
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Mindbender Empty Re: Mindbender

    Post by Lemony.Boy 12th March 2020, 8:28 am

    Gotcha. Thanks for catching that cause I didn’t even notice
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Mindbender Empty Re: Mindbender

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 12th March 2020, 8:30 am

    Spoiler:

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