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    The Unholy Storm - First Chain

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    Post by Guest 19th January 2020, 4:48 pm

    The Unholy Storms - First Chain


    Magic Type

    Requip-Primary (Primary, Character can have up to 3 Requip spells active at once.) | Ancient-Auxiliary: (Auxiliary, +15% to Strength)

    Description: The Unholy Storm was an extinction-level event that almost occurred millions of years ago. The people of earth-land believed it was the end of days for them except for one person. This mage wasn't going to let this be the end for them all, instead, he vowed that he would save all of earth-land even by himself if needed. And he was right, no one was going to stand up to the storm. So, he climbed to the top of a mountain and the unholy storm approached him.

    It turns out, the storm was a living thing. It was testing if the species of Earth-Land was worthy of living, and they passed it. The mage was allowed to live the rest of his days in peace and for his bravery, he was granted the power of the unholy storm. He was also given wings so, he can soar the skies with them and he can conceal them inside his body if he chose to, but one day, something mysterious had happened to the mage. There was an ominous and evil spirit inside of him, he became power-hungry and he massacred his entire town and no one stood up to him except his son.

    His son didn't know any magic except something he learned from the town shaman. It was a technique that could save his dad. So, he approached the mage, his eyes were glowing green with wrath. Before the mage could even praise him for doing such a feat, his son pierced his stomach with his two of his fingers, representing the number of chains, which activated the seal. The evil spirit was locked away and sent to the bottom of hell, but what was also taken away was most of his power. His father was knocked out once the seal was complete. When he awoke, everyone was gone except his son.

    Ever since that event, the mage's blood was passed on through generations, but for some unknown reason, it's rare for them to attain the wings of the mage. The wings act as a key to the mage's full power. The power of the mage was shown with a specific pair of wings. The least powerful will manifest as a pair of pigeon wings, as a sign of stupidity and the most powerful will as a pair of massive raven wings. The pigeon has the lowest chance of unlocking of the unholy storm, while the raven has the highest chance as well as gaining red eyes, which enhances the sight of the user and many more abilities that can be unlocked. This power could be used for great things or complete mass destruction, it's the user's choice.

    Unique Ability
    Flight: The user of this magic receives giant wings to fly with which gives them a 40% boost in speed. In addition to this, they are also able to completely hide the wings inside their body.


    D Rank Spells:

    [spoiler="advanced d rank spells"]


    [color=#6600ff]
    [b]Name: Storm Strike
    Rank: D+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: AoE
    Damage: 20HP
    Range: 45 Meters
    Speed: 25 Meters Per Second
    Duration: 5
    Description: The user summons a thunderbolt shaped as the user's choice, and strikes the target, creating a giant explosion.
    Storm Strike:


    Last edited by Monkey D. Kuma on 27th April 2020, 4:26 am; edited 6 times in total
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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    In Progress Re: The Unholy Storm - First Chain

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 29th January 2020, 7:45 am

    Hey there, so I am Nessa and I am here to grade this magic for you. All my edits will be in this colour! Once you have made the recommended edits, bump the thread and I'll take a look~

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    Post by Guest 29th January 2020, 6:44 pm

    bump
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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    In Progress Re: The Unholy Storm - First Chain

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 30th January 2020, 8:40 am

    One more tweak, bump when done.

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    Post by Guest 30th January 2020, 6:05 pm

    bump
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    Starlight Maiden

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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    In Progress Re: The Unholy Storm - First Chain

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 31st January 2020, 7:09 am

    Hey again, so the way you edited the spell wasn't actually what I meant. Requip spell must have a completed template like this:

    Requip Spell Example:

    Please amend this spell to match the template, the code for which is here;
    Code:

    Bump when done and I'll take a look.


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    Post by Guest 31st January 2020, 1:34 pm

    Are the abilities for the requip spell required?
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    Starlight Maiden

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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    In Progress Re: The Unholy Storm - First Chain

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 1st February 2020, 4:39 am

    If you want to use a requip, the spell has to be formatted as such. You already have the buff in the spell's description, which you can just move into one of your abilities. If you don't want to format it as a requip, I suggest changing the spell's type.


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    In Progress Re: The Unholy Storm - First Chain

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 30th April 2020, 5:03 am

    Spoiler:

    Archived due to character change~


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