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    Necromancy

    Fausta
    Fausta

    Player 
    Lineage : Master of the Other World
    Position : None
    Posts : 23
    Guild : Elysium
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 900

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Necromancy
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill: N/A

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    Post by Fausta 16th June 2020, 8:27 pm


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    Magic Name: Necromancy
    Magic Type: Summon ● Solitary ● Character can have up to 4 Summon spells active at once.
    Description: Necromancy encompasses spells that manipulate death and necrotic energy for various effects, such as raising the dead or inflicting malicious hindrances upon others. This form of magic faces prejudice wherever aspiring necromancers practice it since observers tend to view it as unnatural, disrespectful toward the dead, and simply evil. For that reason, it tends to attract the most unruly of society but also some of the most gifted and educated given the difficulty of practicing necromancy on top of the lack of formal studies dedicated toward the field, often requiring wizards to constantly study and experiment for themselves if they wish to improve their understanding. Books that exist on the subject often get passed around underground between learned necromancers or stolen from the forbidden archives of sprawling libraries. Given that practicing with necromancy often requires one to desecrate the dead, it has become something of a rare knowledge in Fiore.

    Fausta specializes in the path of necromancy that focuses on raising the dead to a state of undeath and binding them to her will. The spells she uses for combat don't typically revolve around actually raising the dead, however. Instead, she prepares all her undead beforehand and uses her magic to summon them to the battlefield for a limited time. The undead creatures she summons understand Fausta's will through a telepathic understanding. To the summon, it feels as if her voice constantly bombards the mind and strongly compels the undead being to act upon her wishes. Despite lacking a true will of their own, these undead possess some sentience of various ranges depending on the power of the summoned creature, the length it had been dead before resurrection, as well as the allowed freedom given to it. The undead can range from anything with a corporal form such as a skeleton to the intangible such as ghosts and can come as dumb as a zombie or as intelligent as a vampire. Fausta often takes the liberty to improve upon her minions by infusing necrotic magic into their weapons and bodies as well.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Lich Necromancy ● Fausta sacrificed her humanity in exchange for longevity and natural power by becoming a lich, an undead spellcaster. This great increase in power has not only made it easier to cast spells but also increased the rate at which she gathers magic power. ● +40% to MP Cost Reduction ● +1% MP Regeneration Each Post.


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

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    Guild : Fairy Tail
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 20th June 2020, 11:07 am

    Hey Fausta, I am Nessa and I'm here to grade this for you. All my edits are in this colour. Bump the thread when edits have been made and it is ready for review.

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    Fausta
    Fausta

    Player 
    Lineage : Master of the Other World
    Position : None
    Posts : 23
    Guild : Elysium
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 900

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Necromancy
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill: N/A

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    Post by Fausta 20th June 2020, 2:59 pm

    Hey, Nessa, thanks for taking a look at things. I edited most of what you asked but I did have one thing I'd like you to reconsider regarding this part:

    Nessa Cordelia Lux wrote:Edit:: Please also state that a spell can only be copied once per post

    To quote the rules verbatim on this one, "By default, effects can occur once per post max if passive or on a spell with a duration," which means it should be implied that it can only copy a spell once per post without needing to make an explicit reminder. I mean, you wouldn't make me state that a single debuff effect from a spell applies only once per post on someone, right?

    Also, I put the duration as 3 posts because I assume if it copies a spell, then the duration of the copy is capped by the copy spell duration, but I don't want it to be a thing where a new spell is copied every post. I don't know if my spell reflects that intention but I'd like your input on it. The magic and spell rules just say, "Durations still apply," regarding copy spells without much context or any further explanation. Thanks again.
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

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    Guild : Fairy Tail
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    Dungeon Tokens : 0
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 20th June 2020, 3:19 pm

    Fausta wrote:Hey, Nessa, thanks for taking a look at things. I edited most of what you asked but I did have one thing I'd like you to reconsider regarding this part:

    Nessa Cordelia Lux wrote:Edit:: Please also state that a spell can only be copied once per post

    To quote the rules verbatim on this one, "By default, effects can occur once per post max if passive or on a spell with a duration," which means it should be implied that it can only copy a spell once per post without needing to make an explicit reminder. I mean, you wouldn't make me state that a single debuff effect from a spell applies only once per post on someone, right?

    Also, I put the duration as 3 posts because I assume if it copies a spell, then the duration of the copy is capped by the copy spell duration, but I don't want it to be a thing where a new spell is copied every post. I don't know if my spell reflects that intention but I'd like your input on it. The magic and spell rules just say, "Durations still apply," regarding copy spells without much context or any further explanation. Thanks again.

    Regardless, your magic should reflect what I as your grader see as necessary to ensure PVP rules are reflected. Due to site history of circumventing when it comes to magic, as a rule, I make sure that any spell that includes a negation, copy or reflection effects include the necessary mechanics assigned to that ability. Therefore, I will not be removing that edit. And considering you were already intending on following this rule with the ability, then it shouldn't be an issue to include it in your spells description, right?

    Also, The 'Durations' section of the template reflects the duration of the spell cast initially not it's effects and must reflect so. The copy spell is a D rank and should state 3 Posts because this indicates how many posts it will be used for before it is required to be cast again and as such that the mana is paid for doing so.

    Once you've made the required edits, bump the thread and I'll take another look.


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    Fausta
    Fausta

    Player 
    Lineage : Master of the Other World
    Position : None
    Posts : 23
    Guild : Elysium
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 900

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Necromancy
    Second Skill: N/A
    Third Skill: N/A

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    Post by Fausta 20th June 2020, 4:02 pm

    Nessa Cordelia Lux wrote:Regardless, your magic should reflect what I as your grader see as necessary to ensure PVP rules are reflected.

    I can't argue with, "Because I said so," so I altered the description. I wasn't trying to circumvent anything as you suggested; it was more so me worried that I'd have to figure out when something is assumed in a spell and when it needs to be written out in the description, but it sounds like you only reserve this kind of thing for certain spells anyway so I guess I don't need to worry about that. I did also change the duration to 1 post though since, like I said, I just wanna use it once before recasting since it feels weird making the guy copy spells for 3 posts straight (assuming I understood you right anyway).
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


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    Guild : Fairy Tail
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    Dungeon Tokens : 0
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 20th June 2020, 4:18 pm

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    [adm]In future, I would advise being more considerate of your words when you discuss your grading. Staff take time out of their lives to grade and work with you on your magic and as per the rules, we do have the final say on matters. Your response to my feedback was passive aggressive and that isn't something that we tolerate on the forum. Consider this in informal warning, and please refrain from continuing such behaviour in the future.[/adm]


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    Shen Kadokawa
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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 25th August 2020, 7:58 am

    Archived due to player inactivity

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