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    ilyria
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    Post by ilyria 8th May 2012, 9:21 am

    Name: Thorns Regalia
    Type: Weak/Orb/Armor
    Description: It is a green glowing orb, that once bound can turn into an armor upon the owners will. In it's dormant state, it is in an form of an orb. In orb form, it can serve as a memoir of sorts, once linked with the orb, the master can store thoughts and memory into it. In its active form, the orb transforms into an armor. The armor covers her neck and half her face, upper body, hands and lower legs. It is unknown why the armor is missing a paldron, but it is assumed that the cape attached to the upper body serves that purpose, and that the lack of there of gives the owner greater mobility. of The armor is extremely light yet very durable.






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    Strengths: Quite sturdy and useful in offense and defense. Mainly archive and defensive use but in dire situation can be used to attack.
    Weaknesses: Using the orbs ability is taxing on the owner so its often used in short duration battles.

    Abilities:
    Mind reader: The orb can use an archive spell as long as the the memory being searched is a memory with the orb present.

    Body Meld: It transforms the orb into an armor.It can absorb both physical and magical force in small quantities and store it. When the armor cannot store anymore, the armor disappears but not before releasing the energy stores to nearby enemies. The armor is strong enough to withstand normal rank d magic and physical attack easily.
    Duration: 4 posts or till the armor had absorbed enough energy, increases by one post per mage rank up
    Cooldown:
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    Post by Daichi 11th May 2012, 6:51 am

    Coding error: remove the [b] located before name.

    Please state if your weapon is a weak, strong, legendary, or an artifact. If it's weak, you can't have any abilities.

    Fix some grammar mistakes. You should put the word it in the beginning of the first sentence in the description. You also misused the word "bound". Bound means to tie or put together. So you actually meant that when the ball is with you, you can move it freely. And that sounds quite wrong.


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    Post by ilyria 14th May 2012, 7:20 pm

    Done editing and by editing a major re haul. Bound is correct, its like we are bound by our friendship, or bound by blood debt. In some sorts it binds the orb to the user till the user dies and a new owner chances upon the orb.
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    Post by Daichi 14th May 2012, 9:13 pm

    It can resist normal B rank magic? That's too op. I'm assuming that this is a free weapon. If it is, then you can only block D rank attacks. And also, post the duration and the cooldown of the armor.

    For the tendrils, how fast do they move? And also, how much distance do they cover?


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    Post by ilyria 15th May 2012, 12:34 am

    Done editing.
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    Post by Daichi 16th May 2012, 6:05 am

    You haven't added the durations and cooldown of each ability yet. Bump when done.


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    Post by ilyria 16th May 2012, 7:52 am

    Done editing. Mind reader is a non combat ability so i dint put duration and cooldown.
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    Post by Daichi 16th May 2012, 9:12 pm

    How strong are the tendrils? If it is a D-rank spell, it shouldn't do serious damage.


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    Post by ilyria 16th May 2012, 9:46 pm

    Yeah, it like whipping someone with a whip. It hurts but doesn't cause serious damage
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    Post by Daichi 18th May 2012, 12:43 am

    Sorry about this, but after reading some of the weapon rules, I saw that weak weapons can't have an ability, and only has one purpose. You should take off either the armor or the tendrils effect. The memory is alright though.


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    Post by ilyria 18th May 2012, 1:04 am

    Done Editing.
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    Post by Daichi 18th May 2012, 3:04 am

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