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    Spider Queen

    jmayfie01
    jmayfie01

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    Lineage : Gold Rush
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    Posts : 47
    Guild : Fairy Tail
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    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : ‭3,487.5

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    Post by jmayfie01 29th July 2019, 6:28 pm


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    Magic Name: Spider Queen
    Magic Type: Lost (Primary) | Summon (Auxiliary)
    Description: Ariadne's magic; Spider queen allows her to create and control spider lifeforms that she can manipulate which she uses for various purposes such as attacking foes with their enhanced bodies due to them being magic, spying on people with them, having them help her make webs for traps or even shoot loads of silk to trap enemies! The second aspect of this magic though is her ability to manipulate magic spider silk that lets her do incredible feats of what a spider could do. She's learning how to do new things each day and is in the process of becoming a stronger made and figuring out the aspects of her magic though she still has a ways to go with learning how to properly control it along with making new spells.

    Her magic may be unique but she is still figuring out how to work it and how the ways she uses it could affect her allies. The magic itself is pretty good and powerful but using it includes summoning hordes of spiders to scare off weaker enemies or overwhelming stronger ones as a distraction. Some spiders are poisonous but not lethal, she can usually just cause dizziness or slight paralysis with these spiders. This is not her main form of magic though as she mostly uses the magical spider silk to fight off enemies and keep her allies safe while trying not to harm them. Ariadne is also learning how to create objects out of these webs and learning the new capacity of her abilities. However, the spider lifeforms seem to be mostly for observation and scouting rather than fighting. She does see them as friends too! While hurting them doesn't physically hurt her, her emotional attachment to them can cause her mental pain due to distress she feels for them as they die and are injured.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Arachnophobia: Ariadne does 40% more spell damage to those with a fear of spiders.
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    Last edited by jmayfie01 on 4th August 2019, 5:25 pm; edited 2 times in total
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

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    Spider Queen Empty Re: Spider Queen

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 3rd August 2019, 8:46 am

    Hey there, I'm Nessa and I'll be grading this magic for you, all my edits will be in this colour, bump when done and I'll take a look. ^^

    Edit:: Just so you know, your template has too many < /divs> at the bottom of it, and is breaking the page, I would recommend taking two out.


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    jmayfie01
    jmayfie01

    Player 
    Lineage : Gold Rush
    Position : None
    Posts : 47
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : ‭3,487.5

    Character Sheet
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    Post by jmayfie01 3rd August 2019, 6:44 pm

    Okay fixed it!


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Spider Queen Empty Re: Spider Queen

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 4th August 2019, 3:31 am

    Hey again, just missed one small edit and then should be good to go, bump when ready to review ^^


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    jmayfie01
    jmayfie01

    Player 
    Lineage : Gold Rush
    Position : None
    Posts : 47
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : ‭3,487.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill:
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Spider Queen Empty Re: Spider Queen

    Post by jmayfie01 4th August 2019, 5:26 pm

    Oops! Thank you for telling me!! It's fixed now <3


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Spider Queen Empty Re: Spider Queen

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 4th August 2019, 5:45 pm

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