Abyss Foundation Magic

Veil Yami wrote:Magic

Magic Name: Abyss Foundation Magic
Magic Type: Lost Magic/Abyss (Prevalent) May you state if this is Solitary, Primary, or Auxiliary please?
Description: Abyss magic is one of the oldest of the Lost Magic types, drawing on the abyss itself it has a highly fluid nature allowing the mage to cast a variety of spells, each one unique to itself. A form of Magic that is centered around the Abyss. It allows the user to conjure, control, and manipulate the Abyss as they will it. It can take many forms from the most simplest of teleportation magic to creating new dimension.

Strengths:

• Masterful fluid of spell types
  
• Large number of spells
  
• being a non elemental type it has no known weaknesses.
  

Weaknesses:

• Calling into the abyss can pull things that seek to control the caster, a dangerous magic.
  
• Abyss magic is volatile, careful control is needed to keep it from destroying the caster.
  
• An all consuming magic, it can turn on friend as easily as foe. Requires intense focus and preparation.
  

Unique Abilities:

• Ability:Focused Drawing (Passive): Abyss magic is a fluid type allowing it to do a variety of magic spells including attack, defense, support, area, and summon.
  
• Ability:Formulation Matrix (Passive): Grants Veil perfect detailed memory regarding knowledge, such as books, history and spells. It grants him proficiency in a variety of knowledge-based skills, such as injury treatment, medicines, navigation etc. This stacks and synergies with his spells that allow him to analyse magic. In character, it takes shape as a mind library.
  
• Ability:Ancestral Superiority (Passive/Social): Abyss is a powerful magic, easily one of the oldest, being the very magic that created all magic it is theorized, which have become a fundamental aspect in almost all magic today. This age results in the invoked magic possessing a very large level of intimidation factor as most beings can feel that the mere presence of this Lost Magic is pressing down on them and, for mages, disturbing their own magic, as if readying it to be broken down.
  
  

At D rank, you only get one UA, two of these will have to be locked till B and S rank. These UAs also can be considered plot abilities instead ^^

Spells: As a starter character at D rank, you start off with 4 spells.


Name: Abyss Gate
Rank: D
Type: Summon Please include Single Target, Multiple Target, Area of Effect, or Burst as the Type
Damage: 10 hp D rank summons only deal 5 HP damage
Range: Can Summon the monster anywhere in a 90 meter radius
Speed: 60 meters p/s
Duration: Till defeated D rank spells have a max 3 posts
Downside: N/A
Description: A black gate opens and allows a single minor abyss creature to emerge, it can fight by using sharp claws or 2 D rank spells, one being a mouth beam and the other a radius blast of 90 meters to self destruct. May you clarify this a bit please? Is the spell able to deal 2x D rank spell damage or cast 2 D rank spells from the magic?
Strengths: Physically strong, can handle double damage
Weaknesses: Weak against holy magic
You need to either change this spell or add Summoning in to your magic type as a Primary or Auxiliary. If you do change the magic type, this will need to use the Summoning/Requip spell template instead. Please bare in mind that summons themselves use burst ranges and speeds, and the abilities follow the summon ability tables.

Name: Abyss defender
Rank: D
Type: Defensive/Counter Please include Single Target, Multiple Target, Area of Effect, or Burst as the Type
Damage: Absorbs 40 hp damage Defensive spells can take a maximum of three spells of their rank.
Range: 60 m/s
Speed: 60m/s
Duration: 3 posts
Downside: 2 post cooldown
Description: A orb of blackness covers the magic user, absorbing the damage into itself and transferring half the magic to the caster You can't take damage and convert it to MP. Please rework this spell, and bear in mind that adsorptions need percentages.
Strengths: Absorbs half the magics spell

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Weaknesses: Higher Ranked spells can shatter the barrier
Unless this is an AoE spell, you can have only 1 effect, Counter and absorption are both separate effects.

Name: Abyss Slashers
Rank: D
Type: Multiple persons
Damage: 30 hp per hit
Range: 45 meters
Speed: 30 meters/s
Duration: 3 posts
Downside: 1 post cooldown
Description: A black wind blows in, visible to the eye and screams across the battlefield in a eerie voice, the black wind slashes anything it touches
Strengths: Can cause severe bleeding

Weaknesses: Visible to the naked eye

Name:Abyss Field
Rank:  D
Type:  AoE
Damage: 0
Range:  30 m/s
Speed: 15 m/s
Duration: 3 posts
Downside: 2 post cooldown
Description: The caster coats a entire area in the abyss, this spell blocks all senses of D and C mages except the user, even slayers noses are blocked
Strengths: Blocks all senses

Weaknesses: holy magic can cut through the darkness

Name: Abyss Enhance
Rank: D+
Type:  Burst.
Damage: none
Range: 22.5 Meters
Speed: 25 meters p/s
Duration: 3 posts
Downside: 2 post cooldown
Description: While in darkness, the casters physical strength and speed are increased by 75% Please include 'for the spells duration' here.
Strengths: Physical enhancement

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Weaknesses: Only works in the dark.