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    Phantom Deliverance

    Zincarla
    Zincarla

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    Post by Zincarla 12th July 2021, 2:23 pm

    Phantom Deliverance

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    Magic Name: Phantom Deliverance
    Magic Type: Summons (Primary), Ancient Magic (Auxillary)
    • Character can have up to 3 Summon spells active at once
    • Character has +10% to Damage Reduction
    • Spell Slots Proof: Link 1 Link 2 Link 3

    Description:

    This ancient magic is a gift traditionally passed down through family blood, though some may find that the spiritual world reaches out to them and the ancient magic may present itself to those who recognize and accept it. To those given this gift, the spirits beyond the Veil seek out guidance to rest or help with tasks that left them unfulfilled. Occasionally, magic users may even be contacted to deliver justice on a spirit's behalf. Magic users can be good or evil in nature as spirits are not always good with identifying specific alignments, nor do they always have a choice in whom they ask for help. Spirits may share their personal powers as summons or through a casting type to assist the magic user in their endeavors. This includes bestowing auras of luck and love, dark curses like the Evil Eye, communicating with the dead, protection spells or charms, psychic prowess, fortune and future reading, hypnosis, and for the most masterful of users the resurrection of a body or healing of spiritual damage. Many users utilize a mind's eye concept to connect and leave the spirits in a non aggressive way, but misusing your talents, abusing the gifts given, or not living up to your end of the bargain can cause the spirits to remove gifts, mana power, or even perform acts of aggression towards them.

    Zincarla uses this magic dutifully to aid spirits and in return the spirits powers' assist her in her own endeavors. She may summon spirits for information, defensive barriers, or offensive attacks while on missions. She may communicate with the dead for information and help as well. Zincarla can use spirit's death touch to damage others through her own body and cast curses or perform psychic damage to enemies. Hypnosis and future reading is a powerful way to get a lead and a serious advantage for any task she might face. The spirits may reach out to her for help as well through dreams or meditations. Zincarla can heal bodies of mental damage, spiritual damage, and even recall spirits to recently deceased bodies to prevent death (as taxing as that is for her to do). So far, she has not angered the spirits or caused them to go against her.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Evil Eye: Zincarla can cast a basic curse on others through her glowering gaze. This curse makes the target particularly unlucky, clumsy and liable to bump into foes of all kinds (drunks in the alley, rabid animals, monsters). The curse lasts for one day or until Zincarla removes it (OOC permission required).
    • Spectral Body: Zincarla can take on an incorporeal form for up to two posts, gaining the ability to move through walls or become immune to any attacks that don't damage the spiritual form. In turn, Zincarla sacrifices her ability to injure others in physical ways (such as a sword which if held would become incorporeal and no longer affect a living body). While incorporeal, Zincarla is not invisible, just looks outlined and ghost-like. This requires OOC permission.
    • Phantom Alliance: To activate this ability, Zincarla clasps her hands and becomes surrounded by a quickly-expanding silvery cloud, lifting seamlessly from her skin in swirls of translucent matter. The spell suggests that nearby minds (ally or foe) within nearby range work to protect, heal, or buff the user with their own magical spells or abilities. The spells can be of any rank and are up to the choice of the target, and this also requires OOC permission to function. The duration is for 1 post and can only be done 1 time per thread.

    Plot Only Abilities:

    • Spirit Reading: When within close range, Zincarla can pick up on the spiritual aura of others. It requires that she focuses upon that person and not be casting other spells at the same time. Zincarla can sense emotions, intentions and energies around others in a general sense.


    Signature Spells

    Aka-Manto:

    The Mad Seeress:

    Door Into Tartarus:

    Advanced Spells

    D+ The Investigator:

    C+ Object Possession:

    B+ The Pirate:

    A+ The Bard Prince:

    S+ Uzaine the Resplendent:

    H+ Archphantom State:


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    Zincarla
    Zincarla

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Neutral Guild Ace- S-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Character Application Approved!- Obtain A Lineage!- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Kohl's Plague
    Position : None
    Posts : 631
    Guild : Luminous Rose
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 960,162

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    Post by Zincarla 15th July 2021, 5:19 pm

    Normal Spells

    B Rank
    Summons

    Moaning Margot:

    Ghost of Hallows Past:

    Headless Hessian of the Hollow:

    Fat Tom:

    Eloise the Friendly:

    Ancient Spells

    Communicate with the Dead:

    Spectral Vision:

    Hands of the Dead:

    Rattlecage Armor:


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    Zincarla
    Zincarla

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Neutral Guild Ace- S-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Character Application Approved!- Obtain A Lineage!- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Kohl's Plague
    Position : None
    Posts : 631
    Guild : Luminous Rose
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 960,162

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    Post by Zincarla 15th July 2021, 5:21 pm

    Normal Spells

    A Rank
    Summons

    Mother Mayuree:

    Thutmose the IV:

    Yukina of the Ice:

    Alanna of the Flame:

    Tsarlis the Beastmaster:

    Ancient Spells

    Death Touch:

    Phantom Chains:

    Crystal Talisman:

    Curse of the Deep:

    S Rank
    Summons

    Sirenia the Druid:

    Guild Mage Aidan:

    Zevran the Assassin:

    Ancient Spells

    Plague Curse:

    Curse of the Blood Lamb:


    Curse of the Beast:

    H Rank
    Summons

    Thaumaturge Lapidary:


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    Post by Guest 17th December 2022, 6:28 am

    Hey there Zincarla, Med here to grade this, before I go through the magic spell by spell, there's an overarching comment that I need to make.

    I'm not entirely sure if this is meant to be a stat or statless magic, as some spells have percentages and figures in the descriptions while others don't. You can have a mixture if you like but you'll need to add the range, speed, MP costs etc to any spell that does use stats.

    If this is an entirely statless magic, then you need to go through and remove numbered figures such as range, speed or buff percentages. A buff to healing for example would be written as simply "This spell buffs the targets healing" instead or something like that. You can also remove the category and type too, as all you need are name, rank, duration and description for statless spells.

    Once that's sorted out, I'll go through and grade your magic proper.
    Zincarla
    Zincarla

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Neutral Guild Ace- S-Rank- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Character Application Approved!- Obtain A Lineage!- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Kohl's Plague
    Position : None
    Posts : 631
    Guild : Luminous Rose
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 960,162

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    Post by Zincarla 17th December 2022, 9:14 am

    @medeia I think I fixed them all up! I may have mentioned I'm really confused by magic rules, so thanks for working with me


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    Post by Guest 17th December 2022, 9:28 am

    Ok doke. I'll take it one post at a time. Edits will be in blue. Just a couple of small things in this one.

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    Small edits on Warrior Shield.

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    This one's perfect. Nothing to change at all. :3

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    Zincarla

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    Guild : Luminous Rose
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    Post by Zincarla 17th December 2022, 9:43 am

    @medeia I think I made all the changes you noted!


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