Ventum Arctica

Vanita Narcista wrote:Name:
Ventum Arctica

Rank:
Mythical

Type:
Sword

Proof of purchase:
Here

Description:
A sword named for the freezing north winds themselves, for the weapon can be just as deadly if wielded correctly. Forged in an iceberg by a master magicsmith from Enca, the weapon is no ordinary blade. In fact, embedded within its hilt is a lacrima that constantly cools down and freezes its surroundings, producing a blade of pure ice akin to an icicle that extends from the hilt itself. This ice, magically enhanced by the enchantments placed upon the weapon, makes it all the more deadly. Harder than any ordinary steel and imbued with magic so skillfully made even advanced scholars of the subject struggle to comprehend its intricacies the blade is an extremely useful tool both when wielded in combat and when used to channel its inherent abilities, easily turning most surroundings, even the scorching hot sands of Desierto, into a frozen wasteland.



Abilities:

Name: Shock Frost
Rank: D
Category: Auxiliary
Type: AoE, Immobilization
Damage: N/a
Range: 30 m
Speed: 15 m/s
Duration: 1 posts
Description: The user swings the weapon through the air, thereby unleashing some of its inherent frosty enchantments instantly. This cools down the air within the ability's range rapidly and so much so that any opponents caught within it will begin to freeze up. While the spell cannot uphold the state of freezing cold for long, it nevertheless is enough to immobilize all opponents within the ability's range for a single post, bypassing all shields and counter-effects to immobilizations. This ability can only be used to freeze a given opponent every other post.

Name: Arctic Bite
Rank: User Rank (Up to C)
Category: Auxiliary
Type: Multi Target, MP Drain, HP Drain, Debuff
Damage: N/a
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: User Rank Max
Downside: 1 additional effect in exchange for range and speed
Description: Channeling the lacrima's magical energy through the blade of the sword, the icy weapon begins to glow in a deep ice-blue, flakes of snow and frost appearing in an aura of cold around it. For the duration of the ability, every melee strike delivered with the weapon inflicts an almost burning magical frostbite, inflicting targets hit with the blade with a user rank active debuff to speed as well as a 5% drain to both MP and HP that occurs once per post for the duration of the ability. Both the drains and the debuff cannot stack if a given target is hit multiple times, but can be reapplied should the target rid themselves of these effects. The strong enchantment makes both the debuff and the drains unaffected by counter-effects designed to lessen their effectiveness.

Name: Glacial Ice
Rank: User Rank (Up to B)
Category: Defensive
Type: Single Target, Anti-Piercing
Durability: User Rank Single Target Damage + 50%
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Duration: User Rank Max
Downside: 50% more durability in exchange for range and speed
Description: The user twists the handle of the blade, ice and frost streaming over their body and clinging to their form, covering it almost entirely. This forms a layer of magical ice around the user that acts as a defensive shield, protecting the user from outside attacks and harm. This shield is especially strong thanks to the enchantment placed on the sword, the shield thus being granted the ability to be unaffected by spells and abilities utilizing piercing effects.

Name: Frozen Prison
Rank: User Rank (Up to A)
Category: Offensive
Type: Burst
Damage: 100HP
Range: 75M
Speed: 75M/S
Duration: User Rank Max
Description: The user slams the blade into the ground and causes a large pillar of ice to burst up from the ground, trapping all targets caught inside it and immobilising them for a single post, as well as have their physical and magical resistance lowered by half an user rank active debuff each. Edit:: Please state 'for the remainder of the spell's duration' here for the debuff.

Name: Ice Wave
Rank: User Rank (Up to S)
Category: Offensive
Type: Burst Edit:: You've written burst here, but the damage, range and speed all say Multi-target, please amend them so they are the same.
Damage: User Rank Multi Target Damage
Range: User Rank Multi Target Range
Speed: User Rank Multi Target Speed
Duration: User Rank Max
Description: The user swings the blade and causes a wave of ice to fly in the direction of their choice. All enemies struck by the wave will have spell speed and range lowered by half an a user rank active debuff each. They will also lose 5% of their maximum HP per post. The debuff and additional damage last for the duration of the spell.

Name: Warrior Of The Frozen Lands
Rank: User Rank (Up to H)
Category: Auxiliary Edit:: Auxiliary spells don't do damage, please change this category to 'Offensive'.
Type: Single Target
Damage: User Rank Single Target
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: User Rank Max
Description: By touching their back with the blade of the sword, the user sprouts a pair of large ice like wings. While this spell is active, the wielder is granted an user rank active buff to their spell damage and every strike from Ventum Arctica will do single target user rank damage instead of physical damage and as such, scales off of the user's magical buffs rather than physical. Edit:: Whilst it is acceptable for spells to allow spell damage over melee, as you've stated this is Single target, I would like you to clarify that this can only strike once per post, alternatively for mutliple strikes per post it would need to be amended to a Multi-target spell. At H rank, attacks from the blade will also drain the foe of 5% of their maximum HP Edit:: Please state the drain lasts for the remainder of the spell's duration.

Vanita Narcista wrote:Name:
Ventum Arctica

Rank:
Mythical

Type:
Sword

Proof of purchase:
Here

Description:
A sword named for the freezing north winds themselves, for the weapon can be just as deadly if wielded correctly. Forged in an iceberg by a master magicsmith from Enca, the weapon is no ordinary blade. In fact, embedded within its hilt is a lacrima that constantly cools down and freezes its surroundings, producing a blade of pure ice akin to an icicle that extends from the hilt itself. This ice, magically enhanced by the enchantments placed upon the weapon, makes it all the more deadly. Harder than any ordinary steel and imbued with magic so skillfully made even advanced scholars of the subject struggle to comprehend its intricacies the blade is an extremely useful tool both when wielded in combat and when used to channel its inherent abilities, easily turning most surroundings, even the scorching hot sands of Desierto, into a frozen wasteland.



Abilities:

Name: Shock Frost
Rank: D
Category: Auxiliary
Type: AoE, Immobilization
Damage: N/a
Range: 30 m
Speed: 15 m/s
Duration: 1 posts
Description: The user swings the weapon through the air, thereby unleashing some of its inherent frosty enchantments instantly. This cools down the air within the ability's range rapidly and so much so that any opponents caught within it will begin to freeze up. While the spell cannot uphold the state of freezing cold for long, it nevertheless is enough to immobilize all opponents within the ability's range for a single post, bypassing all shields and counter-effects to immobilizations. This ability can only be used to freeze a given opponent every other post.

Name: Arctic Bite
Rank: User Rank (Up to C)
Category: Auxiliary
Type: Multi Target, MP Drain, HP Drain, Debuff
Damage: N/a
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: User Rank Max
Downside: 1 additional effect in exchange for range and speed
Description: Channeling the lacrima's magical energy through the blade of the sword, the icy weapon begins to glow in a deep ice-blue, flakes of snow and frost appearing in an aura of cold around it. For the duration of the ability, every melee strike delivered with the weapon inflicts an almost burning magical frostbite, inflicting targets hit with the blade with a user rank active debuff to speed as well as a 5% drain to both MP and HP that occurs once per post for the duration of the ability. Both the drains and the debuff cannot stack if a given target is hit multiple times, but can be reapplied should the target rid themselves of these effects. The strong enchantment makes both the debuff and the drains unaffected by counter-effects designed to lessen their effectiveness.

Name: Glacial Ice
Rank: User Rank (Up to B)
Category: Defensive
Type: Single Target, Anti-Piercing
Durability: User Rank Single Target Damage + 50%
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Duration: User Rank Max
Downside: 50% more durability in exchange for range and speed
Description: The user twists the handle of the blade, ice and frost streaming over their body and clinging to their form, covering it almost entirely. This forms a layer of magical ice around the user that acts as a defensive shield, protecting the user from outside attacks and harm. This shield is especially strong thanks to the enchantment placed on the sword, the shield thus being granted the ability to be unaffected by spells and abilities utilizing piercing effects.

Name: Frozen Prison
Rank: User Rank (Up to A)
Category: Offensive
Type: Burst
Damage: 100HP
Range: 75M
Speed: 75M/S
Duration: User Rank Max
Description: The user slams the blade into the ground and causes a large pillar of ice to burst up from the ground, trapping all targets caught inside it and immobilising them for a single post, as well as have their physical and magical resistance lowered by half an user rank active debuff each for the duration of the spell.

Name: Ice Wave
Rank: User Rank (Up to S)
Category: Offensive
Type: Multi Target
Damage: User Rank Multi Target Damage
Range: User Rank Multi Target Range
Speed: User Rank Multi Target Speed
Duration: User Rank Max
Description: The user swings the blade and causes a wave of ice to fly in the direction of their choice. All enemies struck by the wave will have spell speed and range lowered by half an a user rank active debuff each. They will also lose 5% of their maximum HP per post. The debuff and additional damage last for the duration of the spell.

Name: Warrior Of The Frozen Lands
Rank: User Rank (Up to H)
Category: Offensive
Type: Multi Target
Damage: User Rank Multi Target
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: User Rank Max
Description: By touching their back with the blade of the sword, the user sprouts a pair of large ice like wings. While this spell is active, the wielder is granted an user rank active buff to their spell damage and every strike from Ventum Arctica will do single target Edit:: Please amend this to Multi-target to match the stats above. user rank damage instead of physical damage and as such, scales off of the user's magical buffs rather than physical. At H rank, attacks from the blade will also drain the foe of 5% of their maximum HP for the remainder of the spell's duration.

Vanita Narcista wrote:Name:
Ventum Arctica

Rank:
Mythical

Type:
Sword

Proof of purchase:
Here

Description:
A sword named for the freezing north winds themselves, for the weapon can be just as deadly if wielded correctly. Forged in an iceberg by a master magicsmith from Enca, the weapon is no ordinary blade. In fact, embedded within its hilt is a lacrima that constantly cools down and freezes its surroundings, producing a blade of pure ice akin to an icicle that extends from the hilt itself. This ice, magically enhanced by the enchantments placed upon the weapon, makes it all the more deadly. Harder than any ordinary steel and imbued with magic so skillfully made even advanced scholars of the subject struggle to comprehend its intricacies the blade is an extremely useful tool both when wielded in combat and when used to channel its inherent abilities, easily turning most surroundings, even the scorching hot sands of Desierto, into a frozen wasteland.



Abilities:

Name: Shock Frost
Rank: D
Category: Auxiliary
Type: AoE, Immobilization
Damage: N/a
Range: 30 m
Speed: 15 m/s
Duration: 1 posts
Description: The user swings the weapon through the air, thereby unleashing some of its inherent frosty enchantments instantly. This cools down the air within the ability's range rapidly and so much so that any opponents caught within it will begin to freeze up. While the spell cannot uphold the state of freezing cold for long, it nevertheless is enough to immobilize all opponents within the ability's range for a single post, bypassing all shields and counter-effects to immobilizations. This ability can only be used to freeze a given opponent every other post.

Name: Arctic Bite
Rank: User Rank (Up to C)
Category: Auxiliary
Type: Multi Target, MP Drain, HP Drain, Debuff
Damage: N/a
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: User Rank Max
Downside: 1 additional effect in exchange for range and speed
Description: Channeling the lacrima's magical energy through the blade of the sword, the icy weapon begins to glow in a deep ice-blue, flakes of snow and frost appearing in an aura of cold around it. For the duration of the ability, every melee strike delivered with the weapon inflicts an almost burning magical frostbite, inflicting targets hit with the blade with a user rank active debuff to speed as well as a 5% drain to both MP and HP that occurs once per post for the duration of the ability. Both the drains and the debuff cannot stack if a given target is hit multiple times, but can be reapplied should the target rid themselves of these effects. The strong enchantment makes both the debuff and the drains unaffected by counter-effects designed to lessen their effectiveness.

Name: Glacial Ice
Rank: User Rank (Up to B)
Category: Defensive
Type: Single Target, Anti-Piercing
Durability: User Rank Single Target Damage + 50%
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Duration: User Rank Max
Downside: 50% more durability in exchange for range and speed
Description: The user twists the handle of the blade, ice and frost streaming over their body and clinging to their form, covering it almost entirely. This forms a layer of magical ice around the user that acts as a defensive shield, protecting the user from outside attacks and harm. This shield is especially strong thanks to the enchantment placed on the sword, the shield thus being granted the ability to be unaffected by spells and abilities utilizing piercing effects.

Name: Frozen Prison
Rank: User Rank (Up to A)
Category: Offensive
Type: Burst
Damage: 100HP
Range: 75M
Speed: 75M/S
Duration: User Rank Max
Description: The user slams the blade into the ground and causes a large pillar of ice to burst up from the ground, trapping all targets caught inside it and immobilising them for a single post, as well as have their physical and magical resistance lowered by half an user rank active debuff each for the duration of the spell.

Name: Ice Wave
Rank: User Rank (Up to S)
Category: Offensive
Type: Multi Target
Damage: User Rank Multi Target Damage
Range: User Rank Multi Target Range
Speed: User Rank Multi Target Speed
Duration: User Rank Max
Description: The user swings the blade and causes a wave of ice to fly in the direction of their choice. All enemies struck by the wave will have spell speed and range lowered by half an a user rank active debuff each. They will also lose 5% of their maximum HP per post. The debuff and additional damage last for the duration of the spell.

Name: Warrior Of The Frozen Lands
Rank: User Rank (Up to H)
Category: Offensive
Type: Multi Target
Damage: User Rank Multi Target
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: User Rank Max
Description: By touching their back with the blade of the sword, the user sprouts a pair of large ice like wings. While this spell is active, the wielder is granted an user rank active buff to their spell damage and every strike from Ventum Arctica will do multi target user rank damage instead of physical damage and as such, scales off of the user's magical buffs rather than physical. At H rank, attacks from the blade will also drain the foe of 5% of their maximum HP for the remainder of the spell's duration.

Desiree wrote:Name:
Ventum Arctica

Rank:
Mythical

Type:
Sword

Proof of purchase:
Here

Description:
A sword named for the freezing north winds themselves, for the weapon can be just as deadly if wielded correctly. Forged in an iceberg by a master magicsmith from Enca, the weapon is no ordinary blade. In fact, embedded within its hilt is a lacrima that constantly cools down and freezes its surroundings, producing a blade of pure ice akin to an icicle that extends from the hilt itself. This ice, magically enhanced by the enchantments placed upon the weapon, makes it all the more deadly. Harder than any ordinary steel and imbued with magic so skillfully made even advanced scholars of the subject struggle to comprehend its intricacies the blade is an extremely useful tool both when wielded in combat and when used to channel its inherent abilities, easily turning most surroundings, even the scorching hot sands of Desierto, into a frozen wasteland.



Abilities:

Name: Shock Frost
Rank: D
Category: Auxiliary
Type: AoE, Immobilization
Damage: N/a
Range: 30 m
Speed: 15 m/s
Duration: 1 posts
Description: The user swings the weapon through the air, thereby unleashing some of its inherent frosty enchantments instantly. This cools down the air within the ability's range rapidly and so much so that any opponents caught within it will begin to freeze up. While the spell cannot uphold the state of freezing cold for long, it nevertheless is enough to immobilize all opponents within the ability's range for a single post, bypassing all shields and counter-effects to immobilizations. This ability can only be used to freeze a given opponent every other post.

Name: Arctic Bite
Rank: User Rank (Up to C)
Category: Auxiliary
Type: Multi Target, MP Drain, HP Drain, Debuff
Damage: N/a
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: User Rank Max
Downside: 1 additional effect in exchange for range and speed
Description: Channeling the lacrima's magical energy through the blade of the sword, the icy weapon begins to glow in a deep ice-blue, flakes of snow and frost appearing in an aura of cold around it. For the duration of the ability, every melee strike delivered with the weapon inflicts an almost burning magical frostbite, inflicting targets hit with the blade with a user rank active debuff to speed as well as a 5% drain to both MP and HP that occurs once per post for the duration of the ability. Both the drains and the debuff cannot stack if a given target is hit multiple times, but can be reapplied should the target rid themselves of these effects. The strong enchantment makes both the debuff and the drains unaffected by counter-effects designed to lessen their effectiveness.

Name: Glacial Ice
Rank: User Rank (Up to B)
Category: Defensive
Type: Single Target, Anti-Piercing
Durability: User Rank Single Target Damage + 50%
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Duration: User Rank Max
Downside: 50% more durability in exchange for range and speed
Description: The user twists the handle of the blade, ice and frost streaming over their body and clinging to their form, covering it almost entirely. This forms a layer of magical ice around the user that acts as a defensive shield, protecting the user from outside attacks and harm. This shield is especially strong thanks to the enchantment placed on the sword, the shield thus being granted the ability to be unaffected by spells and abilities utilizing piercing effects.

Name: Frozen Prison
Rank: User Rank (Up to A)
Category: Offensive
Type: Burst
Damage: 100HP
Range: 75M
Speed: 75M/S
Duration: User Rank Max
Description: The user slams the blade into the ground and causes a large pillar of ice to burst up from the ground, trapping all targets caught inside it and immobilising them for a single post, as well as have their physical and magical resistance lowered by half an user rank active debuff each for the duration of the spell.

Name: Ice Wave
Rank: User Rank (Up to S)
Category: Offensive
Type: Multi Target
Damage: User Rank Multi Target Damage
Range: User Rank Multi Target Range
Speed: User Rank Multi Target Speed
Duration: User Rank Max
Description: The user swings the blade and causes a wave of ice to fly in the direction of their choice. All enemies struck by the wave will have spell speed and range lowered by half an a user rank active debuff each. They will also lose 5% of their maximum HP per post. The debuff and additional damage last for the duration of the spell.

Name: Warrior Of The Frozen Lands
Rank: User Rank (Up to H)
Category: Offensive
Type: Multi Target
Damage: User Rank Multi Target
Range: Melee
Speed: Melee
Duration: User Rank Max
Description: By touching their back with the blade of the sword, the user sprouts a pair of large ice like wings. While this spell is active, the wielder is granted an user rank active buff to their spell damage and every strike from Ventum Arctica will do multi target user rank damage instead of physical damage and as such, scales off of the user's magical buffs rather than physical. At H rank, attacks from the blade will also drain the foe of 5% of their maximum HP for the remainder of the spell's duration.