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    Ice Make

    Shane Stern
    Shane Stern

    Player 
    Lineage : Super Soldier
    Posts : 789
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 623,530

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Plus Ultra
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Shane Stern 9th March 2019, 10:41 am

    Obtaining his second magic

    Magic

    Magic Name: Ice Make
    Magic Type: Caster
    Description: A form of molding magic that utilizes the element of ice. As a solid element, Shane is able to use ice to create objects for offensive, defensive or miscellaneous purpose. In combat, the objects created from Ice Make are magically enhanced to be stronger and lighter than common weapons and shields made out of metal. The sturdiness of the material is only determined by the user’s own will but subjected to extreme force, far beyond Shane’s ability to stand against, is still bound to shatter. Outside of combat, the application of the ice molding magic is limited by Shane’s own imagination, with the most common usage as methods to staunch bleeding, to dress wounds and to prevent injuries from swelling among others.
    Unique Abilities:

    • Frozen Immunity: Any spells involving ice or low to freezing temperatures deal 50% less damage to Shane. Does not stack.
    • Freezing Touch: Every time the target is hit by a spell, the residual ice stays stuck to their body. After taking hits from four ice spells, the target suffers from a 60% speed debuff for 6 posts.
    • LOCKED: Huntsman of the Ice: After every four ice spells that Shane casts, a critical effect will occur on the fifth spell increasing the spell damage by 60%


    Spells:

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    Last edited by Shane Stern on 18th March 2019, 4:52 am; edited 3 times in total


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 11th March 2019, 3:19 pm

    Hey Shane, I'm Nessa and I'll be grading your magic for you, all edits will be made in this colour! Once you've made the recommended edits, bump the thread and I'll took a look.

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    Shane Stern
    Shane Stern

    Player 
    Lineage : Super Soldier
    Posts : 789
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 623,530

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Plus Ultra
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Ice Make Empty Re: Ice Make

    Post by Shane Stern 11th March 2019, 6:21 pm

    Hi Nessa, thanks for grading my stuff.

    Edits made as per what you have pointed out. Please look at it again and let me know if there's anything else needed to be changed.


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 15th March 2019, 6:01 am

    Hey again, just a few edits got missed and some other tweaks needed, once you've done this. bump the thread and I'll go through it. ^^

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    Ice Make 60582_s

    Shane Stern
    Shane Stern

    Player 
    Lineage : Super Soldier
    Posts : 789
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 623,530

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Plus Ultra
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Ice Make Empty Re: Ice Make

    Post by Shane Stern 17th March 2019, 12:02 am

    Hi Nessa, edits made. Please give it a look again. Thanks.


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    Shane Stern
    Shane Stern

    Player 
    Lineage : Super Soldier
    Posts : 789
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 623,530

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Plus Ultra
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Ice Make Empty Re: Ice Make

    Post by Shane Stern 18th March 2019, 4:53 am

    Hi Nessa, as we discussed in Discord, edits made to White Hound and Glacial Ascension. Thanks!


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Ice Make Empty Re: Ice Make

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 18th March 2019, 4:58 am

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