Leonard's, Requip:Bladestorm

Primary Magic: Requip: Bladestorm
Secondary Magic:
Caster or Holder: Caster and Holder
Description: A simple requip magic that changes the standard sword Leonard carries around into a different kind of sword. Although, when necessary, Requip: Bladestorm allows the caster to summon all of his blades to the extent of summoning every weapon the caster has in his arsenal. It also allows the caster to change the size of the weapon. For instance, a simple shortsword can be transformed into a greatsword. And lastly, Requip: Bladestorm gives the caster the ability to control his swords from any distance so long as it is in his line of sight.
Strengths: The magic is very useful in facing multiple enemies and confusing single targets. Since the swords can be wielded telekinetically, some attacks may come from anywhere
Weaknesses: Since it can only summon weapons it has low defensive capabilities and the strength of each weapon varies for each weapon.
Abilities/Powers:

• Enhanced Strength

• Enhanced Speed

[b]Name: Reshape: Wings
Rank: D
Type: Support
Description: A Blue magic circle will appear on Leonard's back. After the circle has disappeared, 30 of his swords will appear,15 on the right and 15 on the left. The swords will form wings giving him the ability to fly.
Strengths: Leonard can fly up to the air to do aerial attacks. Or come from the air unnoticed, swooping down at the enemy.
Weaknesses: Swords are heavy, even one-handed swords. Since Leonard has 30 of them on his back, his land movement and lift-of are slowed, big time.
Duration: 5 Posts
Cooldown: 10 Posts

Name: Reshape: Blade Armor
Rank: D
Type: Armor
Description: A Blue magic circle will appear on the ground below Leonard. Then 100 of Leonard's swords will appear surrounding him, the swords will then shine and spin around Leonard. After that, the shine will fade and the swords by then have turned into armor
Strengths: The armor gives a defensive boost to Leonard since his magic focuses on the offensive. Since the armor is made of swords, it can be used to parry melee attacks.
Weaknesses: Like Reshape: Wings, this spell will also slow Leonard's movement. It will also deny Leonard some movement like jumping. And the armor will break depending on the rank of the spell used to hit it. B rank and up spells can instantly break the armor while C will need to land 2 and 3 for D
Duration: 3 Posts
Cooldown: 3 Posts

Name: Telekinesis
Rank: D
Type: Support
Description: Leonard is able to control his swords with his mind. He doesn't need to stretch his out his hand to do so
Strengths: If one of Leonard's swords are out of reach, he may wield them from afar if he can't get close to the enemy. Also it is necessary to perform some spells in the future if he gets stronger.
Weaknesses: His telekinesis can only grab a maximum of 100 swords. Enough to cast blade armor. And if the swords aren't in his line of sight or near him, he won't be able to use telekinesis on them.
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 1 Post

Name: Re-size/Re-shape
Rank: D
Type: Support
Description: Leonard has the ability to change the size and shape of weak weapons that he wields. He will simply think of another shape or size of the sword he wields and swing the sword on his side in a clockwise motion. The shape and size of the sword he is thinking of must exist in order for it to change. Except for the wings and armor which Leonard created himself.
Strengths: This skill allows Leonard to adapt to a given situation. Should he need a large weapon or a small light one.
Weaknesses: Though the size and shape will change, the abilities, strengths and weaknesses of the sword stays. He can only use this spell on weak weapons and should he think of a non-existent shape for the sword, it will turn to dust.
Cooldown: 3 Post

It seems as though this type of magic is a little... OP for a D-rank. Iunno, just my opinion.

So is there any advice to give me on what to change?

Definitely change your spells to the point where they are not really such strong attacks but more like support for your body or your weapons.
Have you read the rules on requip magic?

OK I edited the spells of the magic, can you please check it out and tell me if I still need to change them.

Um... How many swords are you starting out with? That, and some of your spells are still OP for D-rank. Fire Spin would be C, Sword Barrage would be C or B, Blade Wall would be C or B, Scatter Shot would be C. The only things I see that would fit D-rank spells are Blade Fury and Burning Boomerang.

Also, D-rank mages shouldn't know that many spells in the first place. Normally they should know like... 4 max? Just my opinion.

I start with 500 normal weak swords. *Sighs* Still not good enough huh? And when last looked at the rules, a D-Rank Mage can have 6 D-Rank Spells max. I'll have to give a lot of time to fix the spells.

Just because you're allowed 6 techniqes doesn't mean you need to fill up all 6. If you want to keep these spells, you're gonna have to weaken them, except for the two I approved of. Also, add duration and cooldowns in post. (EX: Blade fury has a 2 post cooldown.)

OK I understand, I'll get to work on them.

Another edit of this magic complete. I hope this time it gets through.

Well as you probably have read there are 4 types of Spells a Requip Mage has.
Armor, Support, Special and Techniques. Not Normal/Air and whatever else you have there. Please adjust it so I can review it accordingly.

Techniques take up Spell Slots for Requip Mages so they should be posted here as well should you have any already.

What's the duration of the wings?

I think one hit from even a B Rank would break the Armor, it's just D after all.
2 C Rank attacks should be able to get through the Armor as well I think.
Duration of this one?

The thing with Telekenesis, I will allow you to use it for other Spells, but I won't allow you to use it for offense in a way that you would have 30 blades flying around attacking your opponent while you're not even moving. Do you understand what I'm saying here?
Duration and cooldown ( can be just 1 post ) of this?

Re-size/shape could be easily abused once you have stronger weapons. This one should be of a higher level if you want to apply it on weapons that are stronger than Weak Weapons. As a D Rank, this is Weak Weapon only, and it should have a quite a cooldown for a D Rank.

OK Sorry for those little errors.

Another tune-up done, please come and check it out.

PLOT TWIST!

The Rules on Requip Magic have changed again. Drastically.
I'm very sorry for the troubles, but it is a complicated issue.
Please read the rules again:
http://fairytailrpg.forumotion.co.uk/t30-magic-rules-information#57
http://fairytailrpg.forumotion.co.uk/t53-weapon-pet-rules-information

I think this is in your favor and you should be able to adjust your spells for the better.

I've read the new rules and I don't think I can come up with any more additions. Because I'm just D rank for now and I don't have strong weapons. Think I'll stick with these for the time being...

Looks good. But for Telekenesis he can only attack with maximum 2 weapons at a time. Ok?

OK I understand

Approved