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    Black Art - Black Magic

    Zeref Kage
    Zeref Kage

    Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Honor
    Position : None
    Posts : 40
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Black Magic
    Second Skill: Unavailable
    Third Skill: Unavailable

    Completed Black Art - Black Magic

    Post by Zeref Kage 17th May 2019, 7:08 am



    Black Art - Black Magic Black_10

    Magic Type:
    Ancient Magic
    Description:
    When magic first arose there was a such thing as Black Arts Magic, though there are various different types of magic beneath this overall category. One of the magics under the Black Arts category is Black Magic, an Ancient magic that has found its way to survive the various years of its existence. It is said that the magic is only obtainable when one spends their life trying to unravel the importance and value of light and dark magics along with the measure of others lives. Which in the case of Zeref is how he was able to obtain the Black Magic, due to his split personality caused by his inner darkness. The split allows Zeref to see both sides of light and dark in people and various magics, with this knowledge he was able to release the Black Magic from with in his very being.
    Unique Abilities:
    (List the abilities it provides, make sure to separate each ability! Abilities are like passive traits, or a hidden power that can be activated for a very limited amount of time. These abilities are Unique to your characters specific use of the magic! As a starting D rank character, you can have 1 unique ability.
    Ability:
    Black Magic - Controlled Death Predation
    Black Art - Black Magic Death_10
    This is an ability obtained by Zeref after training to understand and control the impulse of magic that desires to engulf the world around it. Originally the Death Predation was a curse to those who studied black magic, however with great willpower Zeref was able to gain control of the destructive wave and make a personal ability of it. Allowing for one in battle use where he releases the massive burst of black magic to wipe out the wildlife in the vicinity, of course causing damage to nearby opponents and equipment that comes into contact with the effective wave. This ability is capable of reaching a maximum ranking of S, capping it's power permanently. This ability once activated has a duration equal to the Zeref's rank (I.e. D-Rank = 3 posts). When a enemy comes into contact it creates a debuffing effect of 25% decrease to enemy speed and 25% decrease to enemy attack prowess (aka Melee Damage), this ability moves at a speed of 10 meters per second. The final effect of the Death Predation is the slight damage it causes to those who allow it to come into contact with them, the damage being a measly 10 damage to the effected. Death Predation has an effect area equal to Zeref's rank (I.e. D-Rank = 15 Meters) making it a rather effective ability for taking a field advantage.
    Ability:
    Ability:

    Black Art - Black Magic Coolte11

    (Did not include Solidarity Perk of +50% to Strength/Spell Damage/Spell Healing/Spell Defense)

    D-Rank Spells:

    C-Rank Spells:

    A-Rank Spells(Locked):

    +D-Rank Spells:

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    Last edited by Zeref Kage on 24th May 2019, 5:13 pm; edited 4 times in total
    Saraphina
    Saraphina

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    Completed Re: Black Art - Black Magic

    Post by Saraphina 22nd May 2019, 12:17 pm

    Hi there Zeref! I'm Saraphina and I'll be grading your magic today ^^ Before i begin, may you tweak your coding a bit since its not compatible with the site? Maybe a < /div >< /div > at the end?
    My gradings will be in this color, so keep an eye out for it. If you have any questions, you can dm me or ask in the thread. Once the edits are done, please bump the thread.

    I'm going to start by saying that the MP cost of the spells isn't a downside and doesn't need to be listed as one, unless you're saying you're doubling the MP cost?

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    Zeref Kage
    Zeref Kage

    Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Honor
    Position : None
    Posts : 40
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Black Magic
    Second Skill: Unavailable
    Third Skill: Unavailable

    Completed Re: Black Art - Black Magic

    Post by Zeref Kage 22nd May 2019, 2:23 pm

    Bump

    Edited the following:

    • Added < / div > to the end hope it fixes it
    • Removed MP costs as downside
    • Edited Death Predation to have a duration, appropriate debuff, and a range
    • Edited Black Magic Gauntlets to be a single target, removed the damage section, and edited in spell deflection
    • Edited Breath of Black Magic to be an area of effect spell to be more fitting to description


    So should be better now thank you and have a look for anything further.


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    Saraphina
    Saraphina

    The White Queen


    The White Queen

    Administrator- Moderator- Main Account- Quality Badge Level 1 - Quality Badge Level 2 - Quality Badge Level 3 - Guild Master- S-Rank- A-Rank- Job Creator- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Unknown Powerhouse- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Lineage Making Contest Participant- Magic Application Approved!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved! - Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage! - Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Player 
    Lineage : Blizzard's Frostburn
    Position : None
    Posts : 4942
    Guild : Errings Rising - GM
    Cosmic Coins : 555
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1,361,997

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Aspect of Divinity
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Black Art - Black Magic

    Post by Saraphina 23rd May 2019, 11:00 am

    Maybe see about adding < /DIV >< /center >< /div > at the end to fix it the rest of the way? And there's one last thing you have to fix ^^

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    Zeref Kage
    Zeref Kage

    Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Honor
    Position : None
    Posts : 40
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Black Magic
    Second Skill: Unavailable
    Third Skill: Unavailable

    Completed Re: Black Art - Black Magic

    Post by Zeref Kage 24th May 2019, 5:16 pm

    Bump, Finished edits as requested.


    • Edited code to include < /div > [ /center ] < /div >
    • Added level cap to "Controlled Death Predation


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    Saraphina
    Saraphina

    The White Queen


    The White Queen

    Administrator- Moderator- Main Account- Quality Badge Level 1 - Quality Badge Level 2 - Quality Badge Level 3 - Guild Master- S-Rank- A-Rank- Job Creator- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Unknown Powerhouse- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Lineage Making Contest Participant- Magic Application Approved!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved! - Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage! - Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Player 
    Lineage : Blizzard's Frostburn
    Position : None
    Posts : 4942
    Guild : Errings Rising - GM
    Cosmic Coins : 555
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1,361,997

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Aspect of Divinity
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Black Art - Black Magic

    Post by Saraphina 25th May 2019, 8:23 am

    Spoiler:

    Black Art - Black Magic SaraphinaStampsES


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