Ocean Emperor

by **sagey** 27th September 2017, 7:09 am

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Ocean Emperor

by sagey 27th September 2017, 7:09 am

❈Magic❈

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❈Magic Name❈
Ocean Emperor

❈Magic Type❈
Ancient (Solitary Benefit: +50% Spell Damage)

❈Description❈
There was an Egyptian priest that was lost and accidentally found the City of Atlantis. The King of Atlantis, son of the God Poseidon and Mortal Cleito, Atlas, gave refuge to the priest. Being fond towards the priest, he thought him the immensely powerful magic of the Ocean Gods. When Atlantis was under attack, the priest survived and went back to Earthland. He then thought the people of Earthland the magic that was thought be the semi-god Atlas.

❈Lineage: Neptune's Wrath❈
✧Description✧
A powerful water mage, who called himself Neptune The Great, plunged his people into war after the assassination of his wife and daughter. According to the legends he flooded the entire land of his enemies and swept them away. Upon his death he cast his power into an amulet that was to be given to his best friend's son, who had become more like family to him as well. The moment the young man put the amulet around his neck, he claimed that some sort of energy had entered his body. In times of distress, he could briefly control the water around him to release the anger he felt within. The water would come together in a big wave directed to a target he had chosen in his mind.
✧Ability:✧
Allows the user to redirect any water type magic of their rank or less(S Max) by spending 20% MP which then forms it into a huge wave with power equal to the user's rank. The wave is 20 meters wide.
Gains one spell slot for a water elemental spell equal to the user's rank (S-max) in addition to their spells.
✧Usage:✧
Redirection has a 5 post cooldown. Spell has to be made a water familiar but other than that is dependent on the user.

❈Unique Abilities❈

✧Potent Magic✧
Sage gains +1% Spell Damage for every 1 HP lost from Sage's max HP (caps at 70%).

✧Water, Life's Essence✧
Sage regenerates 5% of his max HP and MP per post. He also gain 50% spell cost reduction.

❈Signature Spells❈

✧Name✧
Water Slicer
✧Rank✧
B
✧Type✧
Burst
✧Damage✧
80 HP
✧Range✧
50 Meters
✧Speed✧
50 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
1 Post
✧Description✧
Sage moves his arm in a way. Water will form and move according to his arm movement, dealing damage along the way.

❈Lineage Spell❈

✧Name✧
Tidal Wave
✧Rank✧
B
✧Type✧
Area of Effect
✧Damage✧
40 HP
✧Range✧
100 Meters
✧Speed✧
50 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
1 Post
✧Description✧
Sage positions his palm towards a target area. At the targeted area a wave will then magically form from the ground making an arc first before crashing damaging everything in the area, targets hit will be immobilize for the post as they are at the wave's mercy. But they still can escape by logical means after being hit hence they are not immobilized during the post.

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Code:: [center][color=#006994][font=Times New Roman][size=18][u][b]❈Magic❈[/b][/u][/size] [img]https://i.pinimg.com/originals/31/95/45/3195457a276a15840e5f6e53ab823a36.gif[/img] [b]❈Magic Name❈[/b] Ocean Emperor [b]❈Magic Type❈[/b] Ancient [i]([u]Solitary Benefit:[/u] +50% Spell Damage)[/i] [b]❈Description❈[/b] There was an Egyptian priest that was lost and accidentally found the City of Atlantis. The King of Atlantis, son of the God Poseidon and Mortal Cleito, Atlas, gave refuge to the priest. Being fond towards the priest, he thought him the immensely powerful magic of the Ocean Gods. When Atlantis was under attack, the priest survived and went back to Earthland. He then thought the people of Earthland the magic that was thought be the semi-god Atlas. [b]❈Lineage: Neptune's Wrath❈[/b] [b]✧Description✧[/b] A powerful water mage, who called himself Neptune The Great, plunged his people into war after the assassination of his wife and daughter. According to the legends he flooded the entire land of his enemies and swept them away. Upon his death he cast his power into an amulet that was to be given to his best friend's son, who had become more like family to him as well. The moment the young man put the amulet around his neck, he claimed that some sort of energy had entered his body. In times of distress, he could briefly control the water around him to release the anger he felt within. The water would come together in a big wave directed to a target he had chosen in his mind. [b]✧Ability:✧[/b] Allows the user to redirect any water type magic of their rank or less(S Max) by spending 20% MP which then forms it into a huge wave with power equal to the user's rank. The wave is 20 meters wide. Gains one spell slot for a water elemental spell equal to the user's rank (S-max) in addition to their spells. [b]✧Usage:✧[/b] Redirection has a 5 post cooldown. Spell has to be made a water familiar but other than that is dependent on the user. [u][b]❈Unique Abilities❈[/b][/u] [b]✧Potent Magic✧[/b] Sage gains +1% Spell Damage for every 1 HP lost from Sage's max HP. [b]✧Water, Life's Essence✧[/b] Sage regenerates 5% of his max HP and MP per post. He also gain 50% spell cost reduction. [b][u]❈Signature Spells❈[/u][/b] [b]✧Name✧[/b] Water Slicer [b]✧Rank✧[/b] B [b]✧Type✧[/b] Burst [b]✧Damage✧[/b] 80 HP [b]✧Range✧[/b] 50 Meters [b]✧Speed✧[/b] 50 Meters Per Second [b]✧Duration✧[/b] 1 Post [b]✧Description✧[/b] Sage moves his arm in a way. Water will form and move according to his arm movement, dealing damage along the way. [b][u]❈Lineage Spell❈[/u][/b] [b]✧Name✧[/b] Tidal Wave [b]✧Rank✧[/b] B [b]✧Type✧[/b] Area of Effect [b]✧Damage✧[/b] 40 HP [b]✧Range✧[/b] 100 Meters [b]✧Speed✧[/b] 50 Meters Per Second [b]✧Duration✧[/b] 1 Post [b]✧Description✧[/b] Sage positions his palm towards a target area. At the targeted area a wave will then magically form from the ground making an arc first before crashing damaging everything in the area, targets hit will be immobilize for the post as they are at the wave's mercy. But they still can escape by logical means after being hit hence they are not immobilized during the post. [/font][/color][/center]

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Re: Ocean Emperor

by sagey 27th September 2017, 7:12 am

❈D Ranked Spells❈

✧Name✧
Water Whisperer
✧Rank✧
D
✧Type✧
Effect
✧Range✧
30 Meters
✧Speed✧
15 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
1 Post
✧Description✧
Sage can use his mind to control the surrounding water, water vapors and ice, shaping them and changing its molecular state at his will. (This spell is for role playing purposes but can be used in a fight if the water source isn't a spell of another's and this spell can't deal damage nor take damage.)

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✧Name✧
Scald
✧Rank✧
D
✧Type✧
Buff, Burn Effect
✧Duration✧
3 Posts
✧Description✧
Sage clenches his fist and the next water spell he cast during that same post will be of boiling water dealing an additional [5% of the target's max MP] damage every post for 3 posts.

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✧Name✧
Hydrated
✧Type✧
Passive
✧Rank✧
D
✧Description✧
Sage max HP is increased by 25%.

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✧Name✧
Water Cycle
✧Rank✧
D+
✧Type✧
Buff
✧Duration✧
5 Posts
✧Description✧
Sage licks his soft palate twice and he gets +50% Spell Damage.

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Re: Ocean Emperor

by sagey 27th September 2017, 7:12 am

❈C Ranked Spells❈

✧Name✧
Merman
✧Rank✧
C
✧Type✧
Buff, Effect
✧Duration✧
5 Posts
✧Description✧
Sage licks his hard palate twice and his Movement Speed increases by 25% and he can breathe underwater.

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✧Name✧
Slippery Feet
✧Rank✧
C
✧Type✧
Movement Speed Buff
✧Duration✧
5 Post
✧Description✧
Sage taps one of his toe against his other feet and his Movement Speed will increase by 55%.

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✧Name✧
Sweep
✧Rank✧
C
✧Type✧
Area of Effect, Control Effect
✧Damage✧
15HP
✧Range✧
60 Meters
✧Speed✧
30 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
5 Posts
✧Description✧
Sage swipes his arm in a direction and wave will magically appear at the targeted area sweeping everything in its way, anything that it hits will be trapped inside of it, the wave will then turns into a giant water sphere and floats in the air, its outer layer will be gushing water and has a C Rank durability. The spell will end after 5 Posts or if Sage decides to drop the water sphere, crashing onto the ground, the impact will make the targets inside the sphere unable to move freely for 1 Post.

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✧Name✧
Riptide
✧Rank✧
C+
✧Type✧
Area of Effect, Immobilization Effect
✧Damage✧
25 HP
✧Range✧
90 Meters
✧Speed✧
45 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
6 Post
✧Description✧
Sage points his palm at a direction and a magic circle will appear at the targeted location, wave will form at either side of the circle, depending on Sage, the wave will force anything it hits to be immobilized due to its current and they can only escape by using logical means but not strength as it has no effect against water. Sage can control the direction of the current using his mind and the wave will dissipate if an equivalent of C Rank Single Target Spell Damage or more is inflicted upon it.

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Code:: [center][color=#006994][font=Times New Roman][b][u]❈C Ranked Spells❈ [/u][/b] [b]✧Name✧[/b] Merman [b]✧Rank✧[/b] C [b]✧Type✧[/b] Buff, Effect [b]✧Duration✧[/b] 5 Posts [b]✧Description✧[/b] Sage licks his hard palate twice and his Movement Speed increases by 25% and he can breathe underwater. - [b]✧Name✧[/b] Slippery Feet [b]✧Rank✧[/b] C [b]✧Type✧[/b] Movement Speed Buff [b]✧Duration✧[/b] 5 Post [b]✧Description✧[/b] Sage taps one of his toe against his other feet and his Movement Speed will increase by 55%. - [b]✧Name✧[/b] Sweep [b]✧Rank✧[/b] C [b]✧Type✧[/b] Area of Effect, Control Effect [b]✧Damage✧[/b] 15HP [b]✧Range✧[/b] 60 Meters [b]✧Speed✧[/b] 30 Meters Per Second [b]✧Duration✧[/b] 5 Posts [b]✧Description✧[/b] Sage swipes his arm in a direction and wave will magically appear at the targeted area sweeping everything in its way, anything that it hits will be trapped inside of it, the wave will then turns into a giant water sphere and floats in the air, its outer layer will be gushing water and has a C Rank durability. The spell will end after 5 Posts or if Sage decides to drop the water sphere, crashing onto the ground, the impact will make the targets inside the sphere unable to move freely for 1 Post. - [b]✧Name✧[/b] Riptide [b]✧Rank✧[/b] C+ [b]✧Type✧[/b] Area of Effect, Immobilization Effect [b]✧Damage✧[/b] 25 HP [b]✧Range✧[/b] 90 Meters [b]✧Speed✧[/b] 45 Meters Per Second [b]✧Duration✧[/b] 6 Post [b]✧Description✧[/b] Sage points his palm at a direction and a magic circle will appear at the targeted location, wave will form at either side of the circle, depending on Sage, the wave will force anything it hits to be immobilized due to its current and they can only escape by using logical means but not strength as it has no effect against water. Sage can control the direction of the current using his mind and the wave will dissipate if an equivalent of C Rank Single Target Spell Damage or more is inflicted upon it.[/font][/color][/center]

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Re: Ocean Emperor

by sagey 27th September 2017, 7:13 am

❈B Ranked Spells❈

✧Name✧
Tyrant
✧Rank✧
B
✧Type✧
Passive
✧Description✧
Sage's Spell Damage increases by 50%.

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✧Name✧
Vortex
✧Rank✧
B
✧Damage✧
40 HP
✧Type✧
Area Of Effect
✧Range✧
100 Meters
✧Speed✧
50 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
1 Post
✧Description✧
Sage places his palm at the direction of the target area, a magic circle will form beneath the targeted area while simultaneously a water vortex will form shooting up towards the sky dealing damage to everything in the area and knocking them upwards up to 10 Meters high.

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✧Name✧
Ocean Roar
✧Rank✧
B
✧Type✧
Burst
✧Damage✧
80 HP
✧Range✧
50 Meters
✧Speed✧
50 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
1 Post
✧Description✧
Sage moves his arm like he is punching and a small wave will form beside him moving according to his movement earlier, dealing damage to anything it hits, knocking it 2 Meters backwards.

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✧Name✧
Protection Layer
✧Rank✧
B+
✧Type✧
Defensive
✧Damage Threshold✧
360 HP
✧Speed✧
300 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
8 Posts
✧Description✧
Sage raises his hand a little and 0.5 Meter beneath him water will form. If harm is near Sage the water will travel to block the harm from Sage. It will dissipate once it receives its total Damage Threshold.

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Re: Ocean Emperor

by sagey 27th September 2017, 7:13 am

reserved for future purposes

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by **sagey** 27th September 2017, 7:16 am

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Re: Ocean Emperor

by sagey 27th September 2017, 7:16 am

reserved for future purposes

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by **Jiyu Kazehime** 27th September 2017, 5:46 pm

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Re: Ocean Emperor

by Jiyu Kazehime 27th September 2017, 5:46 pm

Hello, Jiyu Kazehime here, I grade in this color, if you don't understand feel free to PM me, with that said let's get your magic ready to use!~

Sage Elm wrote:
Magic

Primary Magic: Water Magic
Secondary Magic: None yet
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: The user of this magic can manipulate and create water using their magic power, the user usually uses their mind and body to do this. At higher levels, the user may even control the water inside of plants but not the water inside of a living soul, the user may even control the whole sea if he is a master in this magic.

Strengths:

Great Defence
Strong against Fire.
Endless Variety/Useful in any sort of way there is.

Weaknesses:

Weak against Lightning
May hurt own ally if it is not used properly.
May hurt the user's own body as it needs full capability of moving the user's body.

Lineage:
Wrath of Neptune

Spoiler:

Unique Abilities:

Blessing of the Water Goddess:

Ruler of the Ocean:

Ocean's Protection:
Please have the cooldown increase to 8 posts as you rank because when this reaches higher ranks as by SS rank it functions the same as an S rank spell thus can't have a cooldown of only three.

Spells:

D Rank:

List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

Name Name of the Spell )
Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)

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Ocean Emperor Miku_chibi_by_kenneos-d4l2s2w

by **sagey** 28th September 2017, 7:38 am

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Re: Ocean Emperor

by sagey 28th September 2017, 7:38 am

bump

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by **Jiyu Kazehime** 28th September 2017, 7:11 pm

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Re: Ocean Emperor

by Jiyu Kazehime 28th September 2017, 7:11 pm

Alright, just a few more edits and we'll be there.

Sage Elm wrote:
Magic

Primary Magic: Water Magic
Secondary Magic: None yet
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: The user of this magic can manipulate and create water using their magic power, the user usually uses their mind and body to do this. At higher levels, the user may even control the water inside of plants but not the water inside of a living soul, the user may even control the whole sea if he is a master in this magic.

Strengths:

Great Defence
Strong against Fire.
Endless Variety/Useful in any sort of way there is.

Weaknesses:

Weak against Lightning
May hurt own ally if it is not used properly.
May hurt the user's own body as it needs full capability of moving the user's body.

Lineage:
Wrath of Neptune

Spoiler:

Unique Abilities:

Blessing of the Water Goddess:

Ruler of the Ocean:
You'll have to forgive me as this is clearly a hitch I missed the first round of edits. Please make sure the movement of this water does not exceed the speed of normal spells or state it can't be used for combat.

Ocean's Protection:

Spells:

D Rank:

List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

Name Name of the Spell )
Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)

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by **sagey** 29th September 2017, 3:32 pm

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Re: Ocean Emperor

by sagey 29th September 2017, 3:32 pm

bump, made the speed for the Ruler of the Ocean ability to less than the max speed of a spell.

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by **Jiyu Kazehime** 1st October 2017, 6:37 pm

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Re: Ocean Emperor

by Jiyu Kazehime 1st October 2017, 6:37 pm

Approved

Spoiler:

Sage Elm wrote:
Magic

Primary Magic: Water Magic
Secondary Magic: None yet
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: The user of this magic can manipulate and create water using their magic power, the user usually uses their mind and body to do this. At higher levels, the user may even control the water inside of plants but not the water inside of a living soul, the user may even control the whole sea if he is a master in this magic.

Strengths:

Great Defence
Strong against Fire.
Endless Variety/Useful in any sort of way there is.

Weaknesses:

Weak against Lightning
May hurt own ally if it is not used properly.
May hurt the user's own body as it needs full capability of moving the user's body.

Lineage:
Wrath of Neptune

Spoiler:

Unique Abilities:

Blessing of the Water Goddess:

Ruler of the Ocean:

Ocean's Protection:

Spells:

D Rank:

List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

Name Name of the Spell )
Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)

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Re: Ocean Emperor

by ivyleaf33 21st November 2018, 5:22 am

Spoiler:

Sage Elm wrote:
Magic

Primary Magic: Water Magic
Secondary Magic: None yet
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: The user of this magic can manipulate and create water using their magic power, the user usually uses their mind and body to do this. At higher levels, the user may even control the water inside of plants but not the water inside of a living soul, the user may even control the whole sea if he is a master in this magic.

Strengths:

Great Defence
Strong against Fire.
Endless Variety/Useful in any sort of way there is.

Weaknesses:

Weak against Lightning
May hurt own ally if it is not used properly.
May hurt the user's own body as it needs full capability of moving the user's body.

Lineage:
Wrath of Neptune

Spoiler:

Unique Abilities:

Blessing of the Water Goddess:

Ruler of the Ocean:

Ocean's Protection:

Spells:

D Rank:

List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

Name Name of the Spell )
Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
Type: ( Fire, Water, etc. Offensive, Defensive, Supportive.)
Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)

Unlocked and moved at user's request.

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Post n°13

Re: Ocean Emperor

by Blood Plus 23rd November 2018, 1:34 pm

'Ello, 'ello. Cool magic, I'll be responsible for grading it so it seems. I'll be making any edits that are necessary for you to make in this colour.

Let's begin.

Spoiler:

Sage Elm wrote:
Magic

Magic Name: Ocean Emperor
Magic Type: Ancient (Solitary Benefit: +50% Magical Damage)
Description: There was an Egyptian priest that was lost and accidentally found the City of Atlantis. The King of Atlantis, son of the God Poseidon and Mortal Cleito, Atlas, gave refuge to the priest. Being fond towards the priest, he thought him the immensely powerful magic of the Ocean Gods. When Atlantis was under attack, the priest survived and went back to Earthland. He then thought the people of Earthland the magic that was thought be the semi-god Atlas.
Unique Abilities:

Potent Magic: All of the effects of the user's spell will increase by 50%.

Lineage:
Neptune's Wrath
Spoiler:

D-Rank Spells:

Name: Scald
Rank: D
Type: Buff, Effect
Damage: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Duration: Up to 3 Posts
Description: The user clenches their fist and their next water spell will be boiling water which will result in burning. If the user's spell hits a target even though the spell is not an offensive type, the spell will deal an extra 5% of the caster's Magic Power.

Name: Core
Rank: D
Type: Passive
Damage: -
Range: Up to 30 Meters
Speed: -
Duration: -
Description: Up to 5 meters radius around the user, they will always have a water orb the size of a baseball around them. They can draw water from the orb or move the orb around using their mind. They can also turn the orb into water vapor which will form mists. The orb contain limitless amount of water.

Name: Storm
Rank: D
Type: Single Target
Damage: 40HP
Range: 60 Meters
Speed: 60 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their palm towards a direction and water droplets will shoot out towards the direction in a straight line. Specify a certain number of water droplets. They're essentially bullets considering the speed at which they travel and having too many could turn this spell into a multi-target (thereby decreasing all of the stats above). If it's a small number like 5-7 and they cannot change course then I'll let it slide.

Name: Water Serpent
Rank: D+
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60HP
Range: 90 Meters
Speed: 90 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their hand towards a target and from a nearby water source, a serpent-like figure of water will jump out to the target. The serpent-like figure can move according to the user's hand. So does this dissipate upon contact with it's target? This needs to be specified because if the user can just control it according to their will and repeatedly hit their opponents then this is more similar to a summon rather than a single-target spell.

Sage Elm wrote:Signature Spell:

Name: Ocean Spirits
Rank: C
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60HP
Range: 120 Meters
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their hand over a water source and a water orb the size of a ball will form and move towards a target, the user can redirect the orb using their hand.

C-Rank Spells:

Name: Barrier
Rank: C
Type: Defensive
Damage: -
Range: Up to 120 Meters
Speed: -
Duration: Up to 5 Posts
Description: The user place their palm at a direction and a water barrier the size of up to 10 meters diameter will form and can take up to 3 C rank damage. Might be easier for you to write 180HP of damage to avoid confusion though this isn't mandatory. Worth describing the shape of the barrier too. Does it form a complete sphere over the user so you can't be struck from any angle or is it more similar to a wall in shape?

Name: Wave
Rank: C
Type: Offensive This is essentially an Area of Effect spell (though you've followed the stats for that regardless).
Damage: 30HP
Range: Up to 60 Meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user moves his hand at an angle around him and waves will form knocking back everything in that direction 10 meters backwards.

Name: Switch
Rank: C
Type: Instant
Damage: -
Range: Up to 120 Meters
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user whispers 'Soteria' and the user can swap their position with any of the water source in range. The swapping can only happen if there's the same amount of mass of water within range.

Name: Sweep
Rank: C+
Type: Offensive AoE again.
Damage: 45HP
Range: Up to 90 Meters
Speed: 45 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user swings his hand and at the desired location, a 10 meter tall wave will form magically sweeping everything in the area and knocking them 20 meters sideways.

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Post n°14

Re: Ocean Emperor

by sagey 23rd November 2018, 10:42 pm

edited all things necessary ^^

bump.

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Post n°15

Re: Ocean Emperor

by Blood Plus 24th November 2018, 9:09 pm

Looks good, mate.

Approved~

Spoiler:

Sage Elm wrote:
Magic

Magic Name: Ocean Emperor
Magic Type: Ancient (Solitary Benefit: +50% Spell Damage)
Description: There was an Egyptian priest that was lost and accidentally found the City of Atlantis. The King of Atlantis, son of the God Poseidon and Mortal Cleito, Atlas, gave refuge to the priest. Being fond towards the priest, he thought him the immensely powerful magic of the Ocean Gods. When Atlantis was under attack, the priest survived and went back to Earthland. He then thought the people of Earthland the magic that was thought be the semi-god Atlas.
Unique Abilities:

Potent Magic: All of the effects of the user's spell will increase by 50%.

Lineage:
Neptune's Wrath
Spoiler:

D-Rank Spells:

Name: Scald
Rank: D
Type: Buff, Effect
Damage: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Duration: Up to 3 Posts
Description: The user clenches their fist and their next water spell will be boiling water which will result in burning. If the user's spell hits a target even though the spell is not an offensive type, the spell will deal an extra 5% of the caster's Magic Power.

Name: Core
Rank: D
Type: Passive
Damage: -
Range: Up to 30 Meters
Speed: -
Duration: -
Description: Up to 5 meters radius around the user, they will always have a water orb the size of a baseball around them. They can draw water from the orb or move the orb around using their mind. They can also turn the orb into water vapor which will form mists. The orb contain limitless amount of water.

Name: Storm
Rank: D
Type: Multiple Target
Damage: 30HP
Range: 45 Meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their finger towards a direction and water droplets will shoot out towards the direction in a straight line.

Name: Water Serpent
Rank: D+
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60HP
Range: 90 Meters
Speed: 90 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their hand towards a target and from a nearby water source, a serpent-like figure of water will jump out to the target. The serpent-like figure can move according to the user's hand and will dissipate upon contact.

Sage Elm wrote:Signature Spell:

Name: Ocean Spirits
Rank: C
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60HP
Range: 120 Meters
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their hand over a water source and a water orb the size of a ball will form and move towards a target, the user can redirect the orb using their hand. The orb will dissipate upon contact.

C-Rank Spells:

Name: Barrier
Rank: C
Type: Defensive
Damage: 180HP
Range: Up to 120 Meters
Speed: -
Duration: Up to 5 Posts
Description: The user place their palm at a direction and a round shield made of water the size of up to 10 meters diameter will form at the direction.

Name: Wave
Rank: C
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 30HP
Range: Up to 60 Meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user moves his hand at an angle around him and waves will form knocking back everything in that direction 10 meters backwards.

Name: Swap
Rank: C
Type: Instant
Damage: -
Range: Up to 120 Meters
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user whispers 'Soteria' and the user can swap their position with any of the water source in range. The swapping can only happen if there's the same amount of mass of water within range.

Name: Sweep
Rank: C+
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 45HP
Range: Up to 90 Meters
Speed: 45 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user swings his hand and at the desired location, a 10 meter tall wave will form magically sweeping everything in the area and knocking them 20 meters sideways.

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Post n°16

Re: Ocean Emperor

by Shen Kadokawa 15th December 2018, 2:13 am

Moved and unlocked at the user's request

Spoiler:

Sage Elm wrote:
Magic

Magic Name: Ocean Emperor
Magic Type: Ancient (Solitary Benefit: +50% Spell Damage)
Description: There was an Egyptian priest that was lost and accidentally found the City of Atlantis. The King of Atlantis, son of the God Poseidon and Mortal Cleito, Atlas, gave refuge to the priest. Being fond towards the priest, he thought him the immensely powerful magic of the Ocean Gods. When Atlantis was under attack, the priest survived and went back to Earthland. He then thought the people of Earthland the magic that was thought be the semi-god Atlas.
Unique Abilities:

Potent Magic: All of the effects of the user's spell will increase by 50%.

Lineage:
Neptune's Wrath
Spoiler:

D-Rank Spells:

Name: Scald
Rank: D
Type: Buff, Effect
Damage: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Duration: Up to 3 Posts
Description: The user clenches their fist and their next water spell will be boiling water which will result in burning. If the user's spell hits a target even though the spell is not an offensive type, the spell will deal an extra 5% of the caster's Magic Power.

Name: Core
Rank: D
Type: Passive
Damage: -
Range: Up to 30 Meters
Speed: -
Duration: -
Description: Up to 5 meters radius around the user, they will always have a water orb the size of a baseball around them. They can draw water from the orb or move the orb around using their mind. They can also turn the orb into water vapor which will form mists. The orb contain limitless amount of water.

Name: Storm
Rank: D
Type: Multiple Target
Damage: 30HP
Range: 45 Meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their finger towards a direction and up to 10 water droplets will shoot out towards the direction in a straight line.

Name: Water Serpent
Rank: D+
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60HP
Range: 90 Meters
Speed: 90 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their hand towards a target and from a nearby water source, a serpent-like figure of water will jump out to the target. The serpent-like figure can move according to the user's hand and will dissipate upon contact.

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by **Yuu Blitzkrieg** 15th December 2018, 10:48 pm

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Post n°17

Re: Ocean Emperor

by Yuu Blitzkrieg 15th December 2018, 10:48 pm

Hello! Ill be grading your magic today. Any requested changes will be in this color. Once you've made the changes make sure to bump this thread.

Sage Elm wrote:
Magic

Magic Name: Ocean Emperor
Magic Type: Ancient (Solitary Benefit: +50% Spell Damage)
Description: There was an Egyptian priest that was lost and accidentally found the City of Atlantis. The King of Atlantis, son of the God Poseidon and Mortal Cleito, Atlas, gave refuge to the priest. Being fond towards the priest, he thought him the immensely powerful magic of the Ocean Gods. When Atlantis was under attack, the priest survived and went back to Earthland. He then thought the people of Earthland the magic that was thought be the semi-god Atlas.
Unique Abilities:

Potent Magic: All of the effects of the user's spell will increase by 50%.

Lineage:
Neptune's Wrath
Spoiler:

D-Rank Spells:

Name: Scald
Rank: D
Type: Buff, Effect
Damage: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Duration: Up to 3 Posts
Description: The user clenches their fist and their next water spell will be boiling water which will result in burning. If the user's spell hits a target even though the spell is not an offensive type, the spell will deal an extra 5% of the caster's Magic Power.

Name: Core
Rank: D
Type: Passive
Damage: -
Range: Up to 30 Meters
Speed: -
Duration: -
Description: Up to 5 meters radius around the user, they will always have a water orb the size of a baseball around them. They can draw water from the orb or move the orb around using their mind. They can also turn the orb into water vapor which will form mists. The orb contain limitless amount of water.

Name: Storm
Rank: D
Type: Multiple Target
Damage: 30HP
Range: 45 Meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their finger towards a direction and up to 10 water droplets will shoot out towards the direction in a straight line.

Name: Water Serpent
Rank: D+
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60HP
Range: 90 Meters
Speed: 90 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their hand towards a target and from a nearby water source, a serpent-like figure of water will jump out to the target. The serpent-like figure can move according to the user's hand and will dissipate upon contact.

Sage Elm wrote:C-Rank Spells:

Name: Barrier
Rank: C
Type: Defensive
Damage: Can take up to 180HP worth of Damage
Range: Up to 120 Meters
Speed: -
Duration: Up to 5 Posts
Description: The user place their palm at a direction and a round shield made of water the size of up to 10 meters diameter will form at the direction.

Name: Wave
Rank: C
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 30HP
Range: Up to 60 Meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user moves his hand at an angle around him and waves will form knocking back everything in that direction 10 meters backwards.

Name: Swap
Rank: C
Type: Instant
Damage: -
Range: Up to 120 Meters
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user whispers 'Soteria' and the user can swap their position with any of the water source in range. The swapping can only happen if there's the same amount of mass of water within range.

Name: Sweep
Rank: C+
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 45HP
Range: Up to 90 Meters
Speed: 45 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user swings his hand and at the desired location, a 10 meter tall wave will form magically sweeping everything in the area and knocking them 20 meters sideways.

Sage Elm wrote:B-Rank Spells:

Name: Abundance
Rank: B
Type: Passive
Damage: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Duration: -
Description: The user has +50% of their max magical power.

Name: Tyrant
Rank: B
Type: Passive
Damage: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Duration: -
Description: The user's magical damage will increase +50%.

Name: Smash
Rank: B
Type: Instant Please specify whether it is Single Target, Multi Target, AOE, or Burst. I'm assuming its Single Target since those are the damage and speed parameters you used, but it still needs to be clarified. If it's any other type, make sure to change the stats accordingly.
Damage: 80 HP
Range: Up to 200 Meters
Speed: 200 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their palm at the direction of the target, a magic circle will form beneath the target while simultaneously a water vortex will form, dealing 40 HP damage to anything that touches it due to its strong current. After one second, the vortex closes in to the center dealing damage to the target and dissipates after doing so.

Name: Drought
Rank: B+
Type: Area of Effect, Drain
Damage: -
Range: Up to 150 Meters
Speed: 75 mps
Duration: Up to 9 Posts Can only be up to 8 posts
Description: The user places their hand on a plane and focuses an area within range. They then chant:

"Inflict your wrath upon my enemies
oh God of the Drought
Secetă!"

A magic circle will then form at the wanted area and all the water in the area will evaporate quickly dealing 5% of the user's max magical power every post to every living being that depends on water to live.

Signature Spell:

Name: Ocean Spirits
Rank: B
Type: Single Target
Damage: 80HP
Range: 150 Meters
Speed: 200 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: Its range is shorter than normal spells.
Description: The user glances at a water source and a water orb the size of a ball will form and move towards a target, the user can redirect the orb using their mind. The orb will dissipate upon contact. (Every turn the user can create this orb and if they decide to not hit a target with it yet they can choose to just form it and the orb will float around them. The created orb can be used anytime the user wanted to regardless of the post it was made on.)

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by **sagey** 15th December 2018, 11:43 pm

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Post n°18

Re: Ocean Emperor

by sagey 15th December 2018, 11:43 pm

all edits done senpaii

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by **Yuu Blitzkrieg** 16th December 2018, 1:22 pm

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Post n°19

Re: Ocean Emperor

by Yuu Blitzkrieg 16th December 2018, 1:22 pm

Sage Elm wrote:B-Rank Spells:

Name: Abundance
Rank: B
Type: Passive
Damage: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Duration: -
Description: The user has +50% of their max magical power.

Name: Tyrant
Rank: B
Type: Passive
Damage: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Duration: -
Description: The user's magical damage will increase +50%.

Name: Smash
Rank: B
Type: Single Target
Damage: 80 HP
Range: Up to 200 Meters
Speed: 200 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their palm at the direction of the target, a magic circle will form beneath the target while simultaneously a water vortex will form, dealing 40 HP damage to anything that touches it due to its strong current. After one second, the vortex closes in to the center dealing damage to the target and dissipates after doing so. I should have mentioned this before but if its a single target spell then it cant deal damage to anything it touches. Either change it to where it it can only affect one target or change it to an AoE spell

Name: Drought
Rank: B+
Type: Area of Effect, Drain
Damage: -
Range: Up to 150 Meters
Speed: 75 mps
Duration: Up to 8 Posts
Description: The user places their hand on a plane and focuses an area within range. They then chant:

"Inflict your wrath upon my enemies
oh God of the Drought
Secetă!"

A magic circle will then form at the wanted area and all the water in the area will evaporate quickly dealing 5% of the user's max magical power every post to every living being that depends on water to live.

Signature Spell:

Name: Ocean Spirits
Rank: B
Type: Single Target
Damage: 80HP
Range: 150 Meters
Speed: 200 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: Its range is shorter than normal spells.
Description: The user glances at a water source and a water orb the size of a ball will form and move towards a target, the user can redirect the orb using their mind. The orb will dissipate upon contact. (Every turn the user can create this orb and if they decide to not hit a target with it yet they can choose to just form it and the orb will float around them. The created orb can be used anytime the user wanted to regardless of the post it was made on.)

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by **sagey** 17th December 2018, 1:10 am

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Post n°20

Re: Ocean Emperor

by sagey 17th December 2018, 1:10 am

spell edited and added a unique ability cause i just realized i got one when im B rank,

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by **Yuu Blitzkrieg** 18th December 2018, 4:27 pm

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Post n°21

Re: Ocean Emperor

by Yuu Blitzkrieg 18th December 2018, 4:27 pm

Sage Elm wrote:
Magic

Magic Name: Ocean Emperor
Magic Type: Ancient (Solitary Benefit: +50% Spell Damage)
Description: There was an Egyptian priest that was lost and accidentally found the City of Atlantis. The King of Atlantis, son of the God Poseidon and Mortal Cleito, Atlas, gave refuge to the priest. Being fond towards the priest, he thought him the immensely powerful magic of the Ocean Gods. When Atlantis was under attack, the priest survived and went back to Earthland. He then thought the people of Earthland the magic that was thought be the semi-god Atlas.
Unique Abilities:

Potent Magic: All of the effects of the user's spell will increase by 50%.
Riptide: All physical damage that the user deal will be converted into spell damage dealing spell damage of the user's rank. This costs no mana. I'm sorry but I have to put a hard no on this one. This is far too powerful for a unique ability. The best I could let you do is an additional 50% physical damage.

Lineage:
Neptune's Wrath
Spoiler:

D-Rank Spells:

Name: Scald
Rank: D
Type: Buff, Effect
Damage: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Duration: Up to 3 Posts
Description: The user clenches their fist and their next water spell will be boiling water which will result in burning. If the user's spell hits a target even though the spell is not an offensive type, the spell will deal an extra 5% of the caster's Magic Power.

Name: Core
Rank: D
Type: Passive
Damage: -
Range: Up to 30 Meters
Speed: -
Duration: -
Description: Up to 5 meters radius around the user, they will always have a water orb the size of a baseball around them. They can draw water from the orb or move the orb around using their mind. They can also turn the orb into water vapor which will form mists. The orb contain limitless amount of water.

Name: Storm
Rank: D
Type: Multiple Target
Damage: 30HP
Range: 45 Meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their finger towards a direction and up to 10 water droplets will shoot out towards the direction in a straight line.

Name: Water Serpent
Rank: D+
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60HP
Range: 90 Meters
Speed: 90 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their hand towards a target and from a nearby water source, a serpent-like figure of water will jump out to the target. The serpent-like figure can move according to the user's hand and will dissipate upon contact.

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by **sagey** 18th December 2018, 10:49 pm

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Post n°22

Re: Ocean Emperor

by sagey 18th December 2018, 10:49 pm

Bump

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by **Yuu Blitzkrieg** 19th December 2018, 2:47 pm

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Post n°23

Re: Ocean Emperor

by Yuu Blitzkrieg 19th December 2018, 2:47 pm

Spoiler:

Sage Elm wrote:
Magic

Magic Name: Ocean Emperor
Magic Type: Ancient (Solitary Benefit: +50% Spell Damage)
Description: There was an Egyptian priest that was lost and accidentally found the City of Atlantis. The King of Atlantis, son of the God Poseidon and Mortal Cleito, Atlas, gave refuge to the priest. Being fond towards the priest, he thought him the immensely powerful magic of the Ocean Gods. When Atlantis was under attack, the priest survived and went back to Earthland. He then thought the people of Earthland the magic that was thought be the semi-god Atlas.
Unique Abilities:

Potent Magic: All of the effects of the user's spell will increase by 50%.
Waves of Attack: The user can pay the MP to cast the same spell again during the same post. The user gains +25% extra max magic power. (Doesn't apply to signature spells or UA.)

Lineage:
Neptune's Wrath
Spoiler:

D-Rank Spells:

Name: Scald
Rank: D
Type: Buff, Effect
Damage: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Duration: Up to 3 Posts
Description: The user clenches their fist and their next water spell will be boiling water which will result in burning. If the user's spell hits a target even though the spell is not an offensive type, the spell will deal an extra 5% of the caster's Magic Power.

Name: Core
Rank: D
Type: Passive
Damage: -
Range: Up to 30 Meters
Speed: -
Duration: -
Description: Up to 5 meters radius around the user, they will always have a water orb the size of a baseball around them. They can draw water from the orb or move the orb around using their mind. They can also turn the orb into water vapor which will form mists. The orb contain limitless amount of water.

Name: Storm
Rank: D
Type: Multiple Target
Damage: 30HP
Range: 45 Meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their finger towards a direction and up to 10 water droplets will shoot out towards the direction in a straight line.

Name: Water Serpent
Rank: D+
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60HP
Range: 90 Meters
Speed: 90 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their hand towards a target and from a nearby water source, a serpent-like figure of water will jump out to the target. The serpent-like figure can move according to the user's hand and will dissipate upon contact.

Sage Elm wrote:C-Rank Spells:

Name: Barrier
Rank: C
Type: Defensive
Damage: Can take up to 180HP worth of Damage
Range: Up to 120 Meters
Speed: -
Duration: Up to 5 Posts
Description: The user place their palm at a direction and a round shield made of water the size of up to 10 meters diameter will form at the direction.

Name: Wave
Rank: C
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 30HP
Range: Up to 60 Meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user moves his hand at an angle around him and waves will form knocking back everything in that direction 10 meters backwards.

Name: Swap
Rank: C
Type: Instant
Damage: -
Range: Up to 120 Meters
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user whispers 'Soteria' and the user can swap their position with any of the water source in range. The swapping can only happen if there's the same amount of mass of water within range.

Name: Sweep
Rank: C+
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 45HP
Range: Up to 90 Meters
Speed: 45 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user swings his hand and at the desired location, a 10 meter tall wave will form magically sweeping everything in the area and knocking them 20 meters sideways.

Sage Elm wrote:B-Rank Spells:

Name: Abundance
Rank: B
Type: Passive
Damage: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Duration: -
Description: The user has +50% of their max magical power.

Name: Tyrant
Rank: B
Type: Passive
Damage: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Duration: -
Description: The user's magical damage will increase +50%.

Name: Vortex
Rank: B
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 40 HP
Range: Up to 100 Meters
Speed: 50 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their palm at the direction of the target area, a magic circle will form beneath the targeted area while simultaneously a water vortex will form shooting up towards the sky dealing damage to everything in the area and knocking them upwards up to 10 Meters high.

Name: Drought
Rank: B+
Type: Area of Effect, Drain
Damage: -
Range: Up to 150 Meters
Speed: 75 mps
Duration: Up to 8 Posts
Description: The user places their hand on a plane and focuses an area within range. They then chant:

"Inflict your wrath upon my enemies
oh God of the Drought
Secetă!"

A magic circle will then form at the wanted area and all the water in the area will evaporate quickly dealing 5% of the user's max magical power every post to every living being that depends on water to live.

Signature Spell:

Name: Ocean Spirits
Rank: B
Type: Single Target
Damage: 80HP
Range: 150 Meters
Speed: 200 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: Its range is shorter than normal spells.
Description: The user glances at a water source and a water orb the size of a ball will form and move towards a target, the user can redirect the orb using their mind. The orb will dissipate upon contact. (Every turn the user can create this orb and if they decide to not hit a target with it yet they can choose to just form it and the orb will float around them. The created orb can be used anytime the user wanted to regardless of the post it was made on.)

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by **Shen Kadokawa** 20th December 2018, 9:59 am

Shen Kadokawa

Shen Kadokawa: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
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Posts : 11951
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Cosmic Coins : 505
Dungeon Tokens : 0
Age : 27
Experience : 3,283,767

Character Sheet
First Skill: Infinite Arcana
Second Skill: Vox Universum
Third Skill: Disciple of War

Post n°24

Re: Ocean Emperor

by Shen Kadokawa 20th December 2018, 9:59 am

Moved and unlocked for edits

Spoiler:

Sage Elm wrote:
Magic

Magic Name: Ocean Emperor
Magic Type: Ancient (Solitary Benefit: +50% Spell Damage)
Description: There was an Egyptian priest that was lost and accidentally found the City of Atlantis. The King of Atlantis, son of the God Poseidon and Mortal Cleito, Atlas, gave refuge to the priest. Being fond towards the priest, he thought him the immensely powerful magic of the Ocean Gods. When Atlantis was under attack, the priest survived and went back to Earthland. He then thought the people of Earthland the magic that was thought be the semi-god Atlas.
Unique Abilities:

Potent Magic: All of the effects of the user's spell will increase by 50%.
Waves of Attack: The user can pay the MP to cast the same spell again during the same post. The user gains +25% extra max magic power. (Doesn't apply to signature spells or UA.)

Lineage:
Neptune's Wrath
Spoiler:

D-Rank Spells:

Name: Scald
Rank: D
Type: Buff, Effect
Damage: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Duration: Up to 3 Posts
Description: The user clenches their fist and their next water spell will be boiling water which will result in burning. If the user's spell hits a target even though the spell is not an offensive type, the spell will deal an extra 5% of the caster's Magic Power.

Name: Core
Rank: D
Type: Passive
Damage: -
Range: Up to 30 Meters
Speed: -
Duration: -
Description: Up to 5 meters radius around the user, they will always have a water orb the size of a baseball around them. They can draw water from the orb or move the orb around using their mind. They can also turn the orb into water vapor which will form mists. The orb contain limitless amount of water.

Name: Storm
Rank: D
Type: Multiple Target
Damage: 30HP
Range: 45 Meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their finger towards a direction and up to 10 water droplets will shoot out towards the direction in a straight line.

Name: Water Serpent
Rank: D+
Type: Single Target
Damage: 60HP
Range: 90 Meters
Speed: 90 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their hand towards a target and from a nearby water source, a serpent-like figure of water will jump out to the target. The serpent-like figure can move according to the user's hand and will dissipate upon contact.

Sage Elm wrote:C-Rank Spells:

Name: Barrier
Rank: C
Type: Defensive
Damage: Can take up to 180HP worth of Damage
Range: Up to 120 Meters
Speed: -
Duration: Up to 5 Posts
Description: The user place their palm at a direction and a round shield made of water the size of up to 10 meters diameter will form at the direction.

Name: Wave
Rank: C
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 30HP
Range: Up to 60 Meters
Speed: 30 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user moves his hand at an angle around him and waves will form knocking back everything in that direction 10 meters backwards.

Name: Swap
Rank: C
Type: Instant
Damage: -
Range: Up to 120 Meters
Speed: 120 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user whispers 'Soteria' and the user can swap their position with any of the water source in range. The swapping can only happen if there's the same amount of mass of water within range.

Name: Sweep
Rank: C+
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 45HP
Range: Up to 90 Meters
Speed: 45 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user swings his hand and at the desired location, a 10 meter tall wave will form magically sweeping everything in the area and knocking them 20 meters sideways.

Sage Elm wrote:B-Rank Spells:

Name: Abundance
Rank: B
Type: Passive
Damage: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Duration: -
Description: The user has +50% of their max magical power.

Name: Tyrant
Rank: B
Type: Passive
Damage: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Duration: -
Description: The user's magical damage will increase +50%.

Name: Vortex
Rank: B
Type: Area of Effect
Damage: 40 HP
Range: Up to 100 Meters
Speed: 50 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Description: The user places their palm at the direction of the target area, a magic circle will form beneath the targeted area while simultaneously a water vortex will form shooting up towards the sky dealing damage to everything in the area and knocking them upwards up to 10 Meters high.

Name: Drought
Rank: B+
Type: Area of Effect, Drain
Damage: -
Range: Up to 150 Meters
Speed: 75 mps
Duration: Up to 8 Posts
Description: The user places their hand on a plane and focuses an area within range. They then chant:

"Inflict your wrath upon my enemies
oh God of the Drought
Secetă!"

A magic circle will then form at the wanted area and all the water in the area will evaporate quickly dealing 5% of the user's max magical power every post to every living being that depends on water to live.

Signature Spell:

Name: Ocean Spirits
Rank: B
Type: Single Target
Damage: 80HP
Range: 150 Meters
Speed: 200 mps
Duration: 1 Post
Downside: Its range is shorter than normal spells.
Description: The user glances at a water source and a water orb the size of a ball will form and move towards a target, the user can redirect the orb using their mind. The orb will dissipate upon contact. (Every turn the user can create this orb and if they decide to not hit a target with it yet they can choose to just form it and the orb will float around them. The created orb can be used anytime the user wanted to regardless of the post it was made on.)

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by **Shen Kadokawa** 27th December 2018, 8:16 pm

Shen Kadokawa

Shen Kadokawa: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
Position : None
Faction : The Rune Knights
Posts : 11951
Guild : Guildless
Cosmic Coins : 505
Dungeon Tokens : 0
Age : 27
Experience : 3,283,767

Character Sheet
First Skill: Infinite Arcana
Second Skill: Vox Universum
Third Skill: Disciple of War

Post n°25

Re: Ocean Emperor

by Shen Kadokawa 27th December 2018, 8:16 pm

Hello Sage. You know me and what I do. Edits in THIS colour

Spoiler:

Sage Elm wrote:
❈Magic❈

❈Magic Name❈
Ocean Emperor

❈Magic Type❈
Ancient (Solitary Benefit: +50% Spell Damage)

❈Description❈
There was an Egyptian priest that was lost and accidentally found the City of Atlantis. The King of Atlantis, son of the God Poseidon and Mortal Cleito, Atlas, gave refuge to the priest. Being fond towards the priest, he thought him the immensely powerful magic of the Ocean Gods. When Atlantis was under attack, the priest survived and went back to Earthland. He then thought the people of Earthland the magic that was thought be the semi-god Atlas.

❈Lineage: Neptune's Wrath❈
✧Description✧
A powerful water mage, who called himself Neptune The Great, plunged his people into war after the assassination of his wife and daughter. According to the legends he flooded the entire land of his enemies and swept them away. Upon his death he cast his power into an amulet that was to be given to his best friend's son, who had become more like family to him as well. The moment the young man put the amulet around his neck, he claimed that some sort of energy had entered his body. In times of distress, he could briefly control the water around him to release the anger he felt within. The water would come together in a big wave directed to a target he had chosen in his mind.
✧Ability:✧
Allows the user to redirect any water type magic of their rank or less(S Max) by spending 20% MP which then forms it into a huge wave with power equal to the user's rank. The wave is 20 meters wide.
Gains one spell slot for a water elemental spell equal to the user's rank (S-max) in addition to their spells.
✧Usage:✧
Redirection has a 5 post cooldown. Spell has to be made a water familiar but other than that is dependent on the user.

❈Unique Abilities❈

✧Waves of Spells✧
Sage can pay the MP cost to cast the same spell again during the same post. Sage gains +25% extra max MP. (Doesn't apply to signature spells or UA.) (You can only cast a spell a maximum of once per post. Please change this)

✧Water, Life's Essence✧
Sage regenerates 5% of his max HP and MP per post. He also gain 50% spell cost reduction.

❈Signature Spells❈

✧Name✧
Pacific Orbs
✧Rank✧
B
✧Type✧
Single Target
✧Damage✧
80 HP
✧Range✧
200 Meters
✧Speed✧
200 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
1 Post
✧Description✧
Sage clenches his fist then opens it, a water orb the size of a ball will form near his palm and move towards a target, he can redirect the orb using his mind. The orb will dissipate after dealing its total damage. (Every turn Sage can create this orb and if he decides to not hit a target with it yet he can choose to just form it and the orb will float around him. The created orb can then be used anytime he wants to regardless of the post it was made on.) (This is a workaround for durations. I'll have to ask you to scrap this)

❈Lineage Spell❈

✧Name✧
Tidal Wave
✧Rank✧
B
✧Type✧
Area of Effect
✧Damage✧
40 HP
✧Range✧
100 Meters
✧Speed✧
50 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
1 Post
✧Description✧
Sage positions his palm towards a target area. At the targeted area a wave will then magically form from the ground making an arc first before crashing damaging everything in the area, targets hit will be immobilize for the post as they are at the wave's mercy. But they still can escape by logical means after being hit hence they are not immobilized during the post.

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Sage Elm wrote:
❈D Ranked Spells❈

✧Name✧
Water Whisperer
✧Rank✧
D
✧Type✧
Effect
✧Range✧
30 Meters
✧Speed✧
15 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
1 Post
✧Description✧
Sage can use his mind to control the surrounding water, water vapors and ice, shaping them and changing its molecular state at his will. (This spell is for role playing purposes but can be used in a fight if the water source isn't a spell of another's and this spell can't deal damage nor take damage.)

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✧Name✧
Scald
✧Rank✧
D
✧Type✧
Buff, Burn Effect
✧Duration✧
3 Posts
✧Description✧
Sage clenches his fist and the next water spell he cast during that same post will be of boiling water dealing an additional [5% of Sage's max MP] damage every post for 3 posts. (Change this to 5% of the target's MP)

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✧Name✧
Hydrated
✧Type✧
Passive
✧Rank✧
D
✧Description✧
Sage max HP is increased by 25%.

-

✧Name✧
Water Cycle
✧Rank✧
D+
✧Type✧
Buff
✧Duration✧
5 Posts
✧Description✧
Sage licks his soft palate twice and he gets 50% MP Cost Reduction.(You cannot push your magic cost reduction beyond 50%. Seeing that one of your UA's is already giving you a 50% cost reduction, this spell is wholly redundant)

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Sage Elm wrote:
❈C Ranked Spells❈

✧Name✧
Merman
✧Rank✧
C
✧Type✧
Buff, Effect
✧Duration✧
5 Posts
✧Description✧
Sage licks his hard palate twice and his Movement Speed increases by 25% and he can breathe underwater.

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✧Name✧
Slippery Feet
✧Rank✧
C
✧Type✧
Movement Speed Buff
✧Duration✧
5 Post
✧Description✧
Sage taps one of his toe against his other feet and his Movement Speed will increase by 55%.

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✧Name✧
Sweep
✧Rank✧
C
✧Type✧
Area of Effect, Control Effect
✧Damage✧
15HP
✧Range✧
60 Meters
✧Speed✧
30 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
5 Posts
✧Description✧
Sage swipes his arm in a direction and wave will magically appear at the targeted area sweeping everything in its way, anything that it hits will be trapped inside of it, the wave will then turns into a giant water sphere and floats in the air, its outer layer will be gushing water and takes a C Rank strength (C Rank strength is not a thing. If you mean the sphere has C rank spell durability, please mark it as such) to break through the gushing water. The spell will end after 5 Posts or if Sage decides to drop the water sphere, crashing onto the ground, the impact will make the targets inside the sphere unable to move freely for 1 Post.

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✧Name✧
Riptide
✧Rank✧
C+
✧Type✧
Area of Effect, Control
✧Damage✧
25 HP
✧Range✧
90 Meters
✧Speed✧
45 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
6 Post
✧Description✧
Sage points his palm at a direction and a magic circle will appear at the targeted location, wave will form at either side of the circle, depending on Sage, the wave will force anything it hits to follow its current and they can only escape by using logical means but not strength as it has no effect against water (Is this an immobilization effect ? If so please specify). Sage can control the direction of the current using his mind and the wave will dissipate if an equivalent of C Rank Single Target Spell Damage or more is inflicted upon it.

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Sage Elm wrote:
❈B Ranked Spells❈

✧Name✧
Tyrant
✧Rank✧
B
✧Type✧
Passive
✧Description✧
Sage's Spell Damage increases by 50%.

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✧Name✧
Vortex
✧Rank✧
B
✧Damage✧
40 HP
✧Type✧
Area Of Effect
✧Range✧
100 Meters
✧Speed✧
50 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
1 Post
✧Description✧
Sage places his palm at the direction of the target area, a magic circle will form beneath the targeted area while simultaneously a water vortex will form shooting up towards the sky dealing damage to everything in the area and knocking them upwards up to 10 Meters high.

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✧Name✧
Ocean Roar
✧Rank✧
B
✧Type✧
Burst
✧Damage✧
80 HP
✧Range✧
50 Meters
✧Speed✧
50 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
1 Post
✧Description✧
Sage moves his arm like he is punching and a small wave will form beside him moving according to his movement earlier, dealing damage to anything it hits, knocking it 2 Meters backwards.

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✧Name✧
Protection Layer
✧Rank✧
B+
✧Type✧
Defensive
✧Damage Threshold✧
360 HP
✧Speed✧
300 Meters Per Second
✧Duration✧
8 Posts
✧Description✧
Sage raises his hand a little and 0.5 Meter beneath him water will form. If harm is near Sage the water will travel to block the harm from Sage. It will dissipate once it receives its total Damage Threshold.

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Gimme a bump when you are done

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