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    Melon

    Leila Vergious
    Leila Vergious

    Eden's Rose


    Eden's Rose

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    Lineage : Child of Eden
    Posts : 1599
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 30
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,806,570

    Melon Empty Melon

    Post by Leila Vergious 26th November 2017, 10:37 am


    Melon

    Rank:
    Ethereal

    Species:
    Wolf

    Type:
    Combat pet

    Proof of ownership:
    Obtained in this job, approved here

    Description & Appearance:
    Melon is a young female wolf who was found by Leila on the Floating Continent. When she was found, the cub was gravely injured and required immediate medical attention. Ever since being helped, the wolf cub seemed to have become emotionally attached to Leila and followed her back into the camp, refusing to leave no matter what was said or done. From that point onward, this creature became the witch's loyal companion who does not think ill of her master no matter her actions.

    Just like all other creatures from the floating continent, Melon's body naturally gathers ethernano in a very similar way to that of a regular mage, meaning she is perfectly capable of using magic. Growing attuned to Leila's own element and being connected to the nature around her allows Melon to cast nature-based spells that can be even more powerful than abilities of the more seasoned mages.






    Abilities


    Combat:

    Plot:


    Last edited by Leila Vergious on 30th November 2017, 5:14 am; edited 2 times in total


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    Lilium
    Lilium

    Player 
    Posts : 816
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 6

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: αєgιѕ - тнє мιи∂
    Second Skill: муѕтι¢ - тнє вσ∂у
    Third Skill: ραиα¢єα - тнє ѕσυℓ

    Melon Empty Re: Melon

    Post by Lilium 27th November 2017, 7:13 pm

    Hi Leila! I'm Hikari as you know from my avatar addiction but I'll be the mod looking at your cute pet today! My comments will be in this colour and without further ado, let's get started.

    Spoiler:

    When finished editing please bump the thread for evaluation! Thank you!


    Last edited by Hikari on 28th November 2017, 2:08 pm; edited 1 time in total


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    Melon QOmg1XE


    Leila Vergious
    Leila Vergious

    Eden's Rose


    Eden's Rose

    Developer/GFX Artist- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Guild Master- Zodiac Key- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Lineage Making Contest Participant- Rich- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Hero- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Child of Eden
    Posts : 1599
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 30
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,806,570

    Melon Empty Re: Melon

    Post by Leila Vergious 28th November 2017, 1:50 am

    Bump, adjusted the damage value so it's more fitting for a passive ability. Also, could I please request the next grading, if you do find it still not good enough, to be in a spoiler to avoid having too long of posts here for the sake of the app looking a bit more clean?


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    Lilium
    Lilium

    Player 
    Posts : 816
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 6

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: αєgιѕ - тнє мιи∂
    Second Skill: муѕтι¢ - тнє вσ∂у
    Third Skill: ραиα¢єα - тнє ѕσυℓ

    Melon Empty Re: Melon

    Post by Lilium 28th November 2017, 4:34 pm

    Spoiler:

    Sorry about the non-spoiler the first time. But once ready for grading, please bump the thread and I'll get back to you ASAP


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    Melon QOmg1XE


    Lilium
    Lilium

    Player 
    Posts : 816
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 6

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: αєgιѕ - тнє мιи∂
    Second Skill: муѕтι¢ - тнє вσ∂у
    Third Skill: ραиα¢єα - тнє ѕσυℓ

    Melon Empty Re: Melon

    Post by Lilium 1st December 2017, 2:51 pm

    Spoiler:

    Melon 3gvMyfo


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    Melon QOmg1XE


    kittykool75
    kittykool75

    Player 
    Posts : 1219
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: ⛧ Fallen God Slayer ⛧ ⛧ First Generation ⛧
    Second Skill: ⛧ Shadow Dragon Slayer ⛧ Second Generation ⛧
    Third Skill:

    Melon Empty Re: Melon

    Post by kittykool75 21st May 2018, 12:44 pm

    Spoiler:

    Unlocked at user's request.


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