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    Dark Fireplume

    LeylinFarlier
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    Post by LeylinFarlier 13th January 2018, 5:11 pm

    Magic


    Primary Magic: Dark Fireplume(Black Flames)
    Secondary Magic: -
    Caster or Holder: Lost Magic; Caster.
    Description: The Dark Fireplume is a type of magic that was lost to the world decades ago, as well as the Farlier family that had been able to use it. It had originated from Antonin Farlier, a man who was supposedly a man with a great innate ability to wield fire. His ability to wield fire as well as he did came from an ancient beast called a Fireplume, bearing heavy resemblance to the Phoenix. His connection to this ancient bird gave him an unmatched connection over flames, gaining him a reputation. This was during a time the first child of the Shadows of Anarchy was born and, though this piece of information had been lost to time, the two forces had crossed at some point. When Antonin was bestowed with this power it had changed the Flames that he wielded, the two forces melding together and his flames becoming tainted by the dark power granted by the Shadow User, causing a stronger power to be created in Antonin's Bloodline. When this power manifested completely, there was a black marking left somewhere on his body, a mark that would spread along along his body whenever he tapped into the darkness of his powers more. But the powers of the Shadow User didn't just taint Antonin, it also directly affected and tainted the Ancient Fireplume Bird. While binding it to the Farlier Family and their taint, the bird grew in strength and malice, forever turning into a pure black color. It was clear that whatever had happened to him had changed his bloodline forever, seeing as upon having his first child, it had also been born with a similar marking of its own. The dark flames that he possessed and their power, as well as his Karma Alignment taking a shift afterwards, caused his family to be known as group of Dark Magic users and to be isolated in old times. While the family had gotten larger, it wasn't long until they were suddenly starting to get picked off one by one. It wasn't until there was only a few descendants left that they seemed to disappear off the face of the planet that they were no longer pursued, disappearing beneath the tides of time and leaving a small imprint on history itself.

    The Flames of the Farlier Family had been said to burn brighter and stronger than any other type of fire, seemingly being able to devour other flames that they came in contact with as well as adopting the ability to be created from shadows, leaving these flames as a dangerous power. Although it is said that prolonged usage of the dark flames can cause the deterioration of the mind, it is hard to say how true this statement is. Although the Dark Fireplume Magic is unique to the Farlier Family, it does not stop them from being able to manipulate normal flames. The ability to use normal flames is what has helped the Farlier Family slip away into obscenity over the years, a useful trick.


    Leylin Farlier is the first of the Family to begin openly using this lost piece of magic, although when he does manipulate the flames of the Dark Fireplume he makes sure to do so underneath his alias. The Flames that Leylin controls are powerful and show the promise to live up to the infamous Antonin Farlier, his primary use for this flames being heavy offense. But even with that being the case, there is no denying that the dark flames are more than capable of defending him as well. Although he claims to need a staff to use his fire powers, this is just a facade, the man being able to not only release the flames from his hands but also summon them at will, similar to the way that a Shadow User can manipulate shadows without eccentric hand gestures and the such.

    Strengths:

    - The Flames of the Dark Fireplume have shown to be stronger than the normal flames of other Fire Magic Users, though this only goes for when the user is actually utilizing the black flames of the family. If not, then the strength of their flames is usually about the same of a normal fire magic user.

    - Although the Dark Fireplume is known for its black flames, a user of this ability can still use the attacks from their bloodline in the shade of normal flames, allowing them to hide the fact that they are a Dark Magic User.

    - Similar to the Shadows of Anarchy, the flames of the Dark Fireplume can be created within a certain distance from the user and from the shadows. This allows the shadow strikes of the users to become even more deadly than normal.

    Weaknesses:

    - Due to the Darkness affinity that fuels the Dark Fireplume's Flames, this has caused the fire to not only have a weakness towards water but also to Light Magic. Meaning that with the increased strength, there is also more ways to stop these flames.

    - Similar to the Shadows of Anarchy, no flames can be created from the shadows of a person directly or any of their equipment directly. There has been no way to break the binds between the two abilities, forever bound by these rules.

    - Prolonged usage of the Dark Fireplume flames at a single time can cause physical exhaustion, eventually leading to the person losing consciousness and leaving them vulnerable, especially if the threat they were fighting wasn't completely eliminated. Those that don't collapse risk a much more horrible fate.

    - The users of the Dark Fireplume had always been known to have a darker nature by instinct, easily corrupt and manipulated when influenced by the right forces. Prolonged usage of the dark flames at a single time can actually cause a person to go temporarily mad, some times even permanently...


    Lineage:
    Shadows Of Anarchy:

    Unique Abilities:

    Protection of the Dark Fireplume: With each person's bird essentially living inside of them, though as pure magical essence, that makes it easier to call upon the powers gifted to them. With this, the user is able to call upon the powerful flames of the Dark Fireplume to protect themselves from a single spell of the same rank of the user. This includes created a wall of flames, a circle around the use of fire, or even coating their body in some type of flames to do such. The flames are only capable of protecting the user from a single spell or physical attack and after being used, have a small time before they can be used again(1 post cool down).

    Dark Fireplume Weapon Creation: This ability to create a weapon made of pure flames allows Leylin to protect himself if he is rendered item-less and against someone wielded a weapon. The weapons created share the same weaknesses of his fire in general, as well as their strengths. The weapons created by Leylin are only as strong as a weapon of his requip strength would be, as well as sharing durability of the same rank. If the weapon is destroyed unwillingly, then there is a two post cooldown before he can create another.

    Dark Fireplume Summoning: This is an ability granted to all the users of the Dark Fireplume, a direct connection to the ancient beast itself, even if it doesn't exactly exist anymore. Each user as a Dark Fireplume bird within their own body, one that grows stronger with the user as they grow stronger. It is similar to summoning a weapon except that there is a direct connection between the host and bird, meaning that any damage the bird takes so does the user. Although it is risky to summon one's bird, it also allows them to share vision with it as well as cast spells through them. It is rumored that, as well as growing stronger with the user, it also becomes closer and closer to resembling the real Dark Fireplume. The strength of the Dark Fireplume that is summoned correlates with the user's rank, meaning it follows all the rules and restrictions of a summons of that rank.

    Wings of the Dark Fireplume: When it was alive and free, the Fireplume could easily take to the skies with large and elegant wings. Sharing a body with the host, they are able to grant this same ability to them. A pair of wings that are several feet long spread from Leylin's back, letting off a faint heat that emanates through the air. These wings grant him mobility through the air with perfect control, allowing him to still use his magic freely while moving. While flying, Leylin's speed is increased by 50% of his max speed while on ground. The wings are as strong as a single spell of Leylin's rank, being destroyed if struck by one of the same level or stronger. If destroyed, the wings have a cool down of 3 Posts, otherwise after being deactivated the wings have a cool down of 2 Posts.

    Spells:

    Signature Spells:

    D-Rank Spells:

    C-Rank Spell:



    Advanced Spells:

    Spell Template:

    Fusion Spells:


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    Faction : The Luminous Covenant
    Posts : 1555
    Guild : ☽ luminous rose guild mistress ☾
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 336
    Mentor : ☽ diamandis stellavera ☾
    Experience : 915,017

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: ☽ blooms of chrysalis: crystal rose demon slayer ☾
    Second Skill: ☽ pink dominion ☾
    Third Skill: ☽ gemstone serpentine ☾

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    Post by desirée 24th January 2018, 6:26 pm

    Hello LeylinFarlier, I am Desirée Blooms, and I am grading your magic today. All edits will be in this color.
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    Lineage : Shadows of Anarchy
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    Experience : 150

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    Post by LeylinFarlier 27th January 2018, 1:14 pm

    Alright, so while I am working on some of the stuff here I have a few questions and comments.

    About my Fireplume shield, I was told that having it only have one post cool down is fine since it only protects against one attack, unlike normal defensive ability that protect against three attacks of the same rank. And have seen an ability just like this approved for a one post cool down. I can make it two, but then I'd also like to actually buff the strength of the shield.

    What is the difference between Instant and 1 Post spells? They both happen in one post, and no where on the magic guide does it say they work differently o.o So I'm gonna need to have that explained to me.

    I'll work on the other stuff while I wait for a response o:


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    Post by LeylinFarlier 27th January 2018, 1:36 pm

    I finished all the other things besides the questions I had above :3



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    Player 
    Faction : The Luminous Covenant
    Posts : 1555
    Guild : ☽ luminous rose guild mistress ☾
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 336
    Mentor : ☽ diamandis stellavera ☾
    Experience : 915,017

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: ☽ blooms of chrysalis: crystal rose demon slayer ☾
    Second Skill: ☽ pink dominion ☾
    Third Skill: ☽ gemstone serpentine ☾

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    Post by desirée 27th January 2018, 11:24 pm

    An Instant spell happens instantly in that post, while a 1 post spell happens during the entirety of that post. I hope that is easy to understand. As Instant things happen instantly, they follow burst ranges, such as a punch to the face or a teleport. While 1 post spells are generally larger, such as a giant whirlpool of water, it would be used in the entirety of the post besides dialogue and other plot elements, of course.

    As for the Unique Ability, I have decided to allow one post. Just please don't abuse this.

    After these have been acknowledged, we can resume grading~


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    LeylinFarlier
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    Post by LeylinFarlier 28th January 2018, 1:29 pm

    That makes total sense, actually ^^ It just doesn't say how that works on the magic guide, or maybe I just missed that. But thanks for explaining it to me~ I made the proper fixes, so all of your initial edits are done :3

    And thanks, regarding my UA! I won't let you down~


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    Player 
    Faction : The Luminous Covenant
    Posts : 1555
    Guild : ☽ luminous rose guild mistress ☾
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 336
    Mentor : ☽ diamandis stellavera ☾
    Experience : 915,017

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: ☽ blooms of chrysalis: crystal rose demon slayer ☾
    Second Skill: ☽ pink dominion ☾
    Third Skill: ☽ gemstone serpentine ☾

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    Post by desirée 29th January 2018, 7:49 pm

    Almost finished with edits, let's get your magic approved soon <33
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    LeylinFarlier
    LeylinFarlier

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    Lineage : Shadows of Anarchy
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    Post by LeylinFarlier 30th January 2018, 9:45 am

    I decided to make the Javelin 1 post and remove the instant part o: So hopefully that works how it is.

    And yeah, that was just an error with my bursting dash. I edited it so that it says instant~


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    Leylin's Bank
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    Leylin's Magic
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    Crystals


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    Player 
    Faction : The Luminous Covenant
    Posts : 1555
    Guild : ☽ luminous rose guild mistress ☾
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 336
    Mentor : ☽ diamandis stellavera ☾
    Experience : 915,017

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: ☽ blooms of chrysalis: crystal rose demon slayer ☾
    Second Skill: ☽ pink dominion ☾
    Third Skill: ☽ gemstone serpentine ☾

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    Post by desirée 1st February 2018, 2:10 pm

    Spoiler:
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    First Skill: ⛧ Fallen God Slayer ⛧ ⛧ First Generation ⛧
    Second Skill: ⛧ Shadow Dragon Slayer ⛧ Second Generation ⛧
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    Post by kittykool75 13th March 2018, 1:21 pm

    Spoiler:

    Unlocked at user's request.


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    Player 
    Faction : The Luminous Covenant
    Posts : 1555
    Guild : ☽ luminous rose guild mistress ☾
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 336
    Mentor : ☽ diamandis stellavera ☾
    Experience : 915,017

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: ☽ blooms of chrysalis: crystal rose demon slayer ☾
    Second Skill: ☽ pink dominion ☾
    Third Skill: ☽ gemstone serpentine ☾

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    Post by desirée 22nd June 2018, 4:21 pm

    Long time no see! You already know me, so I'm just going to dive right in~ All edits will be in this lovely shade of blue.
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    Dark Fireplume IY2eFxu

    LeylinFarlier
    LeylinFarlier

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Player 
    Lineage : Shadows of Anarchy
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    Posts : 48
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Experience : 150

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    Post by LeylinFarlier 24th June 2018, 2:30 pm

    Yeah, happy to have you look at my magic again :3 Hope things have been well!

    And I edited everything except the Healing Flames, D-Rank Signature.

    I wasn't sure if I should actually edit the move because it only works on physical contact, so there isn't really a range. Maybe a speed o.o

    But if you want me to change it still, I'll come up with another drawback, just let me know~


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    Leylin Farlier
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    Leylin's Bank
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    Leylin's Magic
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    desirée
    desirée

    Crystals


    Crystals

    Player 
    Faction : The Luminous Covenant
    Posts : 1555
    Guild : ☽ luminous rose guild mistress ☾
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 336
    Mentor : ☽ diamandis stellavera ☾
    Experience : 915,017

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: ☽ blooms of chrysalis: crystal rose demon slayer ☾
    Second Skill: ☽ pink dominion ☾
    Third Skill: ☽ gemstone serpentine ☾

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    Post by desirée 24th June 2018, 2:34 pm

    Spoiler:
    Dark Fireplume 4MERye9


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