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    Leila Vergious
    Leila Vergious

    Eden's Rose


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    Post by Leila Vergious 3rd December 2017, 12:12 pm


    Name:
    Rose's Thorn

    Rank:
    Multi-part weapon

    Type:
    Shape-shifting weapon

    Used parts:
    Legendary(+) weapon , Artifact(+) weapon, Artifact(+) item

    Description:
    A special weapon formed from a talon of a deceased Rose dragon, attuned to its magic. Along with a crystallized heart, it was a gift to Leila from the dragon for trying to save it in its last moments. As such, it is not only a weapon for the girl who now wields it but also an important memento which reminds her of that fated day every single time she gazes upon it. It reminds her that when everyone else simply wished to hunt the dragon down and claim its head as an unparalleled prize, she was the only who attempted to save it despite the immense challenge ahead of her. Such memories are often an important source of motivation for what might lie ahead and a reminder that one should always do what they feel is just, no matter how difficult it might be.

    As the weapon is forged by the magic from the heart, it is useable only be the one actually wielding the magic of a rose dragon. Those without such power present in their body would never be able to draw out the rose's true potential. The dragon's talon is also unique in the way it functions. While it does have a constant shape that it always seems to return to, the weapon itself is capable of dispersing itself back into the absolute origin state of pure magical energy, reforming itself in any shape or form the user might require.

    The only downside of the talon being reformed as a weapon is that its powers have lost some of their effectiveness. While it is still perfectly capable of channeling the spells that once belonged to the great rose dragon, they no longer count as actual dragon magic spells. This separation weakens the overall effectiveness of the blade, whatever form it might be in, though it also makes it usable by humanoid users. Only a very small amount of creatures would be able to wield an actual dragon's talon as their weapon of choice, after all. And who knows, perhaps some of the dragon's real strength still remains dormant within the rose steel, awaiting a chance to show itself.

    Abilities:
    Name: Shape of a Rose
    Rank: A
    Type: Self ; Buff
    Duration: Passive
    Description: As a weapon that can be instantly reforged by the one wielding rose dragon's magic, the blade can instantly be changed into any other type of weapon desired. Regardless of the shape, the weapon will still follow default burst range/speed. But not only this, the fact that its shape can be so easily changed allows Leila to form only the most dangerous and high-quality of weapons, enhancing the thorn's weapon damage by 55%.

    Name: Field of blooming ruin
    Rank: A+
    Type: Burst ; Offense
    Damage: 150
    Range: 110 m
    Speed: 110 m/s
    Duration: 9 posts
    Description: Taking hold of the weapon, Leila can either attack right in front of her to form a cone or spin for a shockwave of red mist that covers the entire range area, leaving behind a field of roses. Those hit by the attack suffer damage and will have their body covered by this mist as well, roses suddenly blooming all over them and their vines immobilizing them for a single post. Those repeated hit by the attack can only be immobilized once every two posts.

    Name: Grasp of Thorns
    Rank: S
    Type: Multi-target ; Offense
    Damage: 90
    Range: 300 m
    Speed: 225 m/s
    Duration: Instant
    Description: A special attack that is performed by slashing the weapon vertically twice. The first slash aimed toward the ground sends an invisible wave of energy that upon reaching desired or maximal range will form into several giant thorns with a second slash aimed toward the skies. Once formed, these thorns will start quickly moving back toward Leila, damaging and dragging those in their way. The pull effect will be seen as variation of immobilization and thus can affect targets only once every other post when recasting.

    Name: Dragon's return
    Rank: S
    Type: Self ; Buff
    Duration: Instant
    Description: Both the crystallized heart and the talon came from a single dragon and are still drawn toward one another. In desperate situations, Leila can choose to temporarily reunite these two by stabbing this weapon into her own heart. This will naturally deal full weapon damage to her, as well as disintegrating the weapon. Once this is done, Leila will immediately enter dragon force and follow it's own duration and rules. During this, the weapon can no longer be used and only returns once the force has been canceled or the user runs out of MP required to maintain it. (This ability requires OOC permission from everyone in the thread where it is used)

    Name: Twin-tail resonation
    Rank: S+
    Type: Multi-target ; Offense
    Damage: 135
    Range: 450 m
    Speed: 340 m/s
    Duration: 12 posts
    Description: Taking hold of the weapon with both of her hands, Leila can divide it into two identical pieces. Once this is done, one of them can be stabbed into the ground to form a stationary magical circle in which Leila's attacks gain a secondary nature. As long as she remains inside, swings of her weapon will also send out shockwaves that travel at the spell's speed and until they hit the border of the circle, dealing spell damage to those who are hit. The created copy can also be taken from the ground and relocated if the need arises, but the spell has no effect unless it rests in the ground. This copy can also not be used to deal damage.


    Last edited by Leila Vergious on 17th June 2019, 8:08 am; edited 12 times in total


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    Post by Godlike Frederik 17th December 2017, 5:04 am

    My apologies for my late reaction, I had to read up on the multi-weapon part rules and life got a bit in the way. Either way, let's get to it.

    Active abilities look good and are nicely balanced already. You could even have the first two Heavy Impact and Overcharge have a shorter cooldown. The duration of those posts are 1 and 2 posts and you have a cooldown that is 8. A tad long for my taste, you can that at least at 6.

    Inner Paradise sounds more like an active than a passive ability tho, even if its duration is infinite. It might be better to list it as an active than a passive. Also if this is an infinite ability it means you do need to have a bigger cooldown than 5 posts, I would at least lean somewhere close to the 8/9 posts. And state that you can't deal more than 1.5 rank damage on a target per post.


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    Leila Vergious
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    Eden's Rose


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    Post by Leila Vergious 17th December 2017, 5:32 am

    At some point or another, I was told that equipment has to follow the same rules on min cooldown / max duration as regular spells, hence the 8 posts of cooldown. But if I'm allowed 6, then I'll happily take it.
    Inner Paradise was completely changed since multi-part requires 2 passives. Hopefully, the new one will suit the idea of a passive more.

    Bump


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    Post by Godlike Frederik 20th December 2017, 8:54 am

    oh my apologies, if it says so in the rule then it should be 8 posts cooldown, sometimes I am still used to an older way of grading.

    The new passive looks fine, nothing to add there. So if you can change the cooldowns to a minimum of 8, then it is good to go.


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    Post by Leila Vergious 20th December 2017, 10:45 am

    Bump


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    Post by Godlike Frederik 25th December 2017, 11:48 am

    approved


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    Post by kittykool75 21st May 2018, 12:48 pm

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    Post by kittykool75 27th May 2018, 5:21 pm

    Ello Leila, you know me already, I'll be the one grading your multi-par weapon. All edits will be in this color, if you have any questions ask on this thread or pm me onsite. Once you've made the requested edits, bump this thread. With that, let's get started.

    First of all you have a total of six abilities, four active and two passive, and as can be seen in the equipment rules. You are only allowed to have five, so you're going to have to remove one of your abilities.


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    Post by Leila Vergious 28th May 2018, 12:50 am


    The equipment rules must have changed at some point without me noticing, I apologize. Bump!


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    Post by kittykool75 29th May 2018, 4:27 pm

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    Post by MarkusEldridge 12th June 2019, 4:20 pm

    Moved and Unlocked at user request.
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    Post by MarkusEldridge 17th June 2019, 10:17 am

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