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    Sayrn
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    Post by Sayrn 11th December 2017, 3:36 pm

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    Smoking Zone

    Secondary Magic: N/A

    Caster or Holder: Holder/Caster

    Description: Caroline using the pipe given to her as a gift from her father is capable of focusing her magic into a combative form known as Smoking Zone. The magic allows Caroline to do many different things while in possession of a pipe or smoking instrument though she does prefer her special pipe. The magic is unique in that some things can be done while Caroline is not in possession of her pipe though it is not very much as a lot of it requires the instrument to work. The magic itself focuses on an aspect of slow offense and meticulous planning, oft the spells do not go very fast but are quite devastating and have a very large area of effect allowing Caroline to move her own pace. Because of this while spells are larger and do more damage a lot of them suffer from taking time to set up and being obvious as smoke tends to be. But Caroline is no woman to be trifled with easily and will make sure you do not have an easy time fighting her.

    Strengths:

    - Allows for a large capability of damage due to her sacrificing speed for the power and range -

    - Makes it hard to avoid her when in close combat situations -

    - Has options even when the holder item is removed from her hands -

    Weaknesses:

    - Despite the damage and range a fast opponent can still out maneuver the spells -

    - A wind mage can blow away the smoke and flames that she makes -

    - Her magic is not exactly made with others in mind and will harm them just as much her enemies with no regard -

    - Being a smoke and flame based magic she struggles to use it during rain as it quickly deals with her smoke and flame -

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    Gold Rush:

    Unique Abilities:

    ~ Smoke & Mirror: Using her magic's abilities Caroline is capable of turning parts of or her entire body into smoke making physical forms of attack pass through her harmlessly but making her completely incapable of attacking. Along with this while she is in her smoke form she can still take damage from magic based around non-physical things like fire, water, lightning etc. Combined with this ability Caroline is capable of avoiding a single spell of her rank or lower directed at her once per post by turning the portion it would hit into smoke and forcing it to dissipate as it it were blown by wind. ~

    ~ Smoking Hazard: Caroline has a natural effect of her magic on her at all times causing her to be capable of exhaling smoke on command, though if used to cast her spells instead of her pipe cause 50% less damage, along with this if Caroline uses a spell with an AoE effect or a single target spell she is capable of adding 20m to the AoE or adding a 5m splash to the single target spell (splash does 50% less damage) this range increases by 20 for the AoE per level and the splash range is static. ~

    ~ Where There's Smoke: All of the magic Caroline uses has a secondary effect of causing flame damage which deals 25% of the spells rank damage bonus to them, though this effect is nullified if the Caroline is not using her pipe. Along with this Caroline is capable of walking through most natural forms of fire without feeling it's effects and in fact finds it quite nice, though magic based flame will still harm her quite naturally in fact, perhaps it's the ethernano? ~

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    Jiyu Kazehime
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    Post by Jiyu Kazehime 11th December 2017, 7:51 pm

    Hello, I'm Jiyu/Kitty, my grading is done in this color, lets get you ready to roll.

    Lady Caroline wrote:
    Smoking Zone 204437-umineko-no-naku-koro-ni-beatrice
    Smoking Zone

    Secondary Magic: N/A

    Caster or Holder: Holder/Caster

    Description: Caroline using the pipe given to her as a gift from her father is capable of focusing her magic into a combative form known as Smoking Zone. The magic allows Caroline to do many different things while in possession of a pipe or smoking instrument though she does prefer her special pipe. The magic is unique in that some things can be done while Caroline is not in possession of her pipe though it is not very much as a lot of it requires the instrument to work. The magic itself focuses on an aspect of slow offense and meticulous planning, oft the spells do not go very fast but are quite devastating and have a very large area of effect allowing Caroline to move her own pace. Because of this while spells are larger and do more damage a lot of them suffer from taking time to set up and being obvious as smoke tends to be. But Caroline is no woman to be trifled with easily and will make sure you do not have an easy time fighting her.

    Strengths:

    - Allows for a large capability of damage due to her sacrificing speed for the power and range -

    - Makes it hard to avoid her when in close combat situations -

    - Has options even when the holder item is removed from her hands -

    Weaknesses:

    - Despite the damage and range a fast opponent can still out maneuver the spells -

    - A wind mage can blow away the smoke and flames that she makes -

    - Her magic is not exactly made with others in mind and will harm them just as much her enemies with no regard -

    - Being a smoke and flame based magic she struggles to use it during rain as it quickly deals with her smoke and flame -

    Lineage:

    Gold Rush:

    Unique Abilities:

    ~ Smoke & Mirror: Using her magic's abilities Caroline is capable of turning parts of or her entire body into smoke making her immune to most physical forms of attack but making her completely incapable of attacking. Along with this while she is in her smoke form she can still take damage from magic based around non-physical things like fire, water, lightning etc. Combined with this ability Caroline is capable of avoiding a single spell of her rank or lower directed at her once per post by turning the portion it would hit into smoke and forcing it to dissipate as it it were blown by wind. ~ Please remove the word immune, as 'immunity's' are banned and this could cause confusion in the future.

    ~ Smoking Hazard: Caroline has a natural effect of her magic on her at all times causing her to be capable of exhaling smoke on command, though if used to cast her spells instead of her pipe cause 50% less damage, along with this if Caroline uses a spell with an AoE effect or a single target spell she is capable of adding 20m to the AoE or adding a 5m splash to the single target spell (splash does 50% less damage) this range increases by 20 for the AoE per level and the splash range is static. ~ If I am understanding correctly she can either add the 20 meters or the 5 meter splash, not both at once? I want to be sure I am reading right before I decide if anything need's done.

    ~ Where There's Smoke: All of the magic Caroline uses has a secondary effect of causing flame damage which deals 25% of the spells rank damage bonus to them, though this effect is nullified if the Caroline is not using her pipe. Along with this Caroline is capable of walking through most natural forms of fire without feeling it's effects and in fact finds it quite nice, though magic based flame will still harm her quite naturally in fact, perhaps it's the ethernano? ~

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    D-Rank:


    As far as I can tell, I have to applaud you on the wonderful job I see here of balancing the power you want with a decent down side. Everything besides the one little nit pick I want changed for safety, seems to be fine.


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    Post by Sayrn 11th December 2017, 10:51 pm

    Bump, and yes the second effect means that an AoE spell gains more AoE, a Single Target gets splash, these act indipendantly and AoE gets only the ine effect while Single gets the other, no stacking shenanigans.


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    Jiyu Kazehime
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    Post by Jiyu Kazehime 13th December 2017, 4:34 pm

    Approved.

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