Stating it now, I HATE people that split up apps into multiple posts. Makes grading an unpleasant thing to do as we have to either multi-quote for grading AND approvals.
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Lucian wrote:Water Dragon Slayer (2nd Gen)
Primary Magic: Water Dragon Slayer (2nd Gen)
Secondary Magic: N/A
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Lucian uses Water Dragon Slayer magic that was granted to him via a lacrima. His particular specialty is in defensive magic, and magic used to support others and protect them in combat. The few offensive spells he does use are very direct and offensive and tend to unfortunately cover larger areas and can leave collateral damage. Lucian doesn’t know much of the base magic, or it’s intent besides that is was created and used to fight dragons, so he has taken it in his own personal direction and made it his own.
Also as an Undine, he also is granted a unique power to control water naturally.Gonna need to use a UA to be able to control water other than your own. This coupled with his water slayer magic increases it's effects and grants him better control over the water and spells the magic contains.
Strengths:
*Extremely Defensive: Lucian’s particular brand of water magic is very defensive in nature
*Strong against Fire: Water is naturally strong against fire. Too vague. For all I know this is gonna put out any fire spell. It's fine if ALL your spells state something instead.
Weaknesses:
*Lacks many offensive spells: Since Lucian focuses on defensive magic, he lacks very many offensive type spells.
*Weak to Lightning: As a water user, and an Undine he and his magic is weak to lightning. Same as above.
*Hard to Conceal: Almost all of Lucian's spells and effects are impossible to conceal.
Lineage:
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Elemental Wrath:
Description: There was once a powerful old wizard capable of using all the four basic elements of the land: Fire, Water, Wind, and Earth. He was extremely powerful and feared by all of Earthland. He once took on 5 dragons at once. The mighty magus defeated them, but ended up losing his arms in the process. Having no children, he passed his knowledge of controlling multiple elements at once to a wandering mage, who passed it down and kept it within his family for generations
Ability: Allows the user the ability to cast 1 spell of each element. 1 D rank earth, one C rank wind, one B rank water, and one A rank fire. The user can also combine all four elements into one S rank meteor type spell, capable of causing severe damage.
Each spell is made in the magic app as normal spells of the respective elements. The meteor cannot be a signature and can deals 1.5 S-rank damage but is usable once per thread.
Usage: The spells are made in addition to the user’s spell based on their own rank. Spells dependant on their own CD/Durations besides the S-rank meteor spell which has to be a once per thread use.
Unique Abilities:
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Name: Living Water Defense
Type: Passive
Duration: N/A
Cool-Down: 1 posts
Description: Lucian’s control over water is not only limited to his spells, but all forms of water around him. Not only does he have control over water, but being a creature of water means water around him naturally comes to life. This effect manifests itself in the form of water naturally coming to his defense in combat.
When any amount of water is near or around Lucian it will automatically “come to life” and defend him. It will form a living wall of water that will move and block any form of incoming attack, and will reform and continue to do so as long as Lucian is in danger.
Effects: Any water around Lucian will come to life and swirl around his feet and will move and form a wall to block an incoming attack. This will block 1 D rank attack magical or physical. It will fall to the floor around his feet like before, and after the cooldown it will automatically perform the task, over and over until Lucian is no longer in danger. This is a shield, needs a number for how much it can block. Just 'D rank' allows it to tank an unlimited amount of damage from a single D rank spell. Vague = no
Name: Water mastery
Type: Passive
Duration: N/A
Cool-Down: N/A
Description: Lucian’s control over water not only stems from his use of Water Dragon Slayer magic, but also being an Undine. This mastery manifests itself as a passive effect that strengthens a;; of Lucian’s magical spells.
Effect: Lucian’s offensive water spells are all increased by a 50% increase to damage. Also All of Lucian’s defensive spells can take an extra user ranked attack before dispelling. Max 25% increase to damage. No go on extra user ranked attack on the shield.
You can add the 25% increase to them though.
Name: Aquarian Race
Type: Passive
Duration: N/A
Cool-Down: N/A
Description: Being an Undine, which is an Aquarian race, rather than human, means it grants him a few minor differences, and natural abilities. Lucian can breathe underwater, as well as walk across water and use it to move him from place to place. However, the biggest difference is his physical makeup. Lucian is far more durable than a normal human, and take more damage before he is hurt.
Effect: Lucian is granted minor abilities such as walking on water, moving it under him to move around, and breathing under water. However, its biggest advantage is he is more durable. Lucian reduces all incoming damage from spells and attacks by 50%. This effect is negated for spells or attacks that are 2 ranks higher than his current rank.25% damage resist. 50% is the absolute max without lineage. You're not gonna get it in one UA without super drawbacks.
Lucian wrote:Unique/Special Spells
Signature Spells:
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N/A
Elemental Wrath Spells:
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Name: Earth Wall
Rank: D Rank
Element: Earth
Type: Defensive
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: Lucian slams his hand down onto the earth and a wall rises from the ground and blocks an incoming spell.
Effect(s): Lucian slams his hand onto the ground and instantly creates a walls that is 3 meters tall by 3 meters wide, and 1 meter thick. The wall cannot move, but can block incoming attackers and make them have to come around, or over the wall. It can also block incoming magical attacks. The wall and take 3 D Rank attacks before being destroyed. Vague, need numbers cause 3 D rank attacks could be any amount of damage.
Strengths:
*Strong Defense: The wall of earth is a strong defense against incoming magic attacks, and also grants Lucian time to think when forcing physical attackers to move around it to attack.
Weaknesses:
*Can’t Move: The wall can’t move, so if the battle moves, the wall becomes useless.
*Can’t see past it: While behind the wall Lucian can’t see anything past it.
Lucian wrote:Spells
D Rank Spells:
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Name: Water Dragon Scales
Rank: D Rank
Element: Water
Type: Defensive
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: With the wave of his hand, Lucian is able to move water at his command and use it to block incoming attacks
Effect(s): Lucian’s race, as well as well as his magic grants his amazing control over water, and this spell allows him to channel magic into his hand and with a wave of his hand he can move water around to use it as a wall or shield to block incoming attacks, both magic and physical. The wall/shield can be used to block 3 incoming magic or physical attack of D Rank. Vague again, need a number. 3x D rank spell damage (60) would be fine, blocking '3' D rank hits is not, as it could end up blocking 100+ damage at some point. Also,
need a max range for moving it around as, generally, shields are just directly around you. (You have it as moveable.
Strengths:
*Movable: Since Lucian can control the water with just a wave of his hand, he can move it it around with ease and makes it a strong defensive spell.
Weaknesses:
*Limited Blocking Area: Despite being a strong defense, and moveable. The spell can only block one direction at a time so large area attacks, or multiple attacks from different sides at the same time can get around this.
*Defensive Only: This control over water for this spell can only be used for defensive effects and blocking.
*No Offensive: While using this spell for it’s full 2 post duration, Lucian can’t use any offensive spells.
Name: Water Dragon Rage
Rank: D Rank
Element: Water
Type: Offensive
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: Lucian creates a large Dragon made of water. He then uses this dragon to attack his target.
Effect(s): Lucian creates a large Chinese style dragon made of water that is about 3 meters long. The dragon will let out a roar and then it will fly at Lucian’s target at 45 meters per second, for a distance up to 60 meters. Upon impact it will explode in a small burst of 2 meters focusing all damage on the single target of the spell. The dragon can change course and move to hit it’s target.
Strengths:
*Homing Effect: The dragon can move and alter it’s course to try and hit a moving target. (This doesn’t mean it is an auto hit, but rather just very hard to dodge.)
Weaknesses:
*Large: The dragon is very large, and is therefore impossible to hide.
*Loud: The dragon makes a loud roar, so it is impossible to be stealthily with this spell.
*Single Target: Despite the dragon being fairly large, it only focuses on one target and all of it’s damage is focused on a single target.
Name: Water Dragon Breath
Rank: D Rank
Element: Water
Type: Offensive
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: Lucian uses his water dragon magic to create a water type breath attack.
Effect(s): Lucian takes a deep breath and brings his hands to his mouth and creates a dragon breath attack made of water. The breath attacks in the form of a cone that is 1 meter wide that shoots at the target at 45 meters per second, for a distance up to 60 meters.
Strengths:
*Ranged: This spells is a ranged, focused attack.
Weaknesses:
*Single Target: The cone is only 1 meter wide, therefore can only target 1 target at a time.
*Open to Attacks: While performing this attack, Lucian’s attention is focused in front of him, so he can easily be attacked from the sides of back.
Name: Water Skin
Rank: D Rank
Element: Water
Type: Defensive
Duration: 3 Posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: Lucian uses water to create a extremely thin layer of water that covers his whole body and provides a layer of armor from incoming attacks. This layer is impossible to see with the naked eye.
Effect(s): Lucian creates a thin layer of armor over his whole body that protects him from an incoming attacks, both magical and physical. The armor can take a max of 3 D rank attacks before it breaks, or it can be released by Lucian at any time. The armor will last up to 3 posts before it dispels on it’s own and goes on cooldown. Because water is clear, and the armor is thin, it is invisible to the naked eye, and only someone who can see magic can see the armor. Another shield, cool. Same thing as last ones.
Strengths:
*Invisible: The armor is invisible to the naked eye.
Weaknesses:
*Lightning: if Lucian is hit with lightning, since the armor is made of water he will take an additional 25% damage.
*Defensive Only: This armor offers no effect except to block incoming attacks.
