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    Cr1tikal
    Cr1tikal

    Player 
    Posts : 1756
    Cosmic Coins : 8
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 34
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: FrostFire Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill: Cosmic Slayer
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Cr1tikal 22nd August 2017, 12:57 am

    Stating it now, I HATE people that split up apps into multiple posts. Makes grading an unpleasant thing to do as we have to either multi-quote for grading AND approvals.

    Note in this color.

    Lucian wrote:Water Dragon Slayer (2nd Gen)
    Primary Magic: Water Dragon Slayer (2nd Gen)
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Lucian uses Water Dragon Slayer magic that was granted to him via a lacrima. His particular specialty is in defensive magic, and magic used to support others and protect them in combat. The few offensive spells he does use are very direct and offensive and tend to unfortunately cover larger areas and can leave collateral damage. Lucian doesn’t know much of the base magic, or it’s intent besides that is was created and used to fight dragons, so he has taken it in his own personal direction and made it his own.
    Also as an Undine, he also is granted a unique power to control water naturally.Gonna need to use a UA to be able to control water other than your own. This coupled with his water slayer magic increases it's effects and grants him better control over the water and spells the magic contains.

    Strengths:
    *Extremely Defensive: Lucian’s particular brand of water magic is very defensive in nature
    *Strong against Fire: Water is naturally strong against fire. Too vague. For all I know this is gonna put out any fire spell. It's fine if ALL your spells state something instead.
    Weaknesses:
    *Lacks many offensive spells: Since Lucian focuses on defensive magic, he lacks very many offensive type spells.
    *Weak to Lightning: As a water user, and an Undine he and his magic is weak to lightning. Same as above.
    *Hard to Conceal: Almost all of Lucian's spells and effects are impossible to conceal.

    Lineage:
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    Unique Abilities:
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    Lucian wrote:Unique/Special Spells

    Signature Spells:
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    Elemental Wrath Spells:
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    Lucian wrote:Spells

    D Rank Spells:
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    derperino MQNhOUw

    Lucian
    Lucian

    Player 
    Lineage : Elemental Wrath
    Position : None
    Posts : 39
    Guild : Black Sails
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

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    Post by Lucian 22nd August 2017, 3:32 am

    Requested Edits Made.
    Sorry about the multi-post thing.
    Cr1tikal
    Cr1tikal

    Player 
    Posts : 1756
    Cosmic Coins : 8
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 34
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: FrostFire Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill: Cosmic Slayer
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Cr1tikal 22nd August 2017, 10:59 am

    Noticed this morning;
    Cooldown need to be a post higher than duration. Fix those.

    And 25% increase to effects was not there the first time. When you add you need to state it so I know to regrade something. Gonna say no to it though as it's super easy to abuse.

    After work I'll double check again, as on phone right now.


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    derperino MQNhOUw

    Lucian
    Lucian

    Player 
    Lineage : Elemental Wrath
    Position : None
    Posts : 39
    Guild : Black Sails
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    derperino Empty derperino

    Post by Lucian 22nd August 2017, 11:54 am

    Ok, yeah, sorry about that. It wasnt added in the intent to sneak it by you, i didnt think to mention it. Sorry about that again. I removed it as you do have a fair about the abuse thing. I intended it as like effect durations, and effects such as %s from a debuff.

    The cooldowns/durations have also been updated unless i missed something.

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