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    Bandit Knife and Mail Breaker

    Anon Brier
    Anon Brier

    Player 
    Lineage : Arm of Destiny
    Position : None
    Posts : 12
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Light Make Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Bandit Knife and Mail Breaker Empty Bandit Knife and Mail Breaker

    Post by Anon Brier 19th July 2017, 9:17 pm

    Name: Bandit's Knife
    Rank: Weak
    Type: Dagger
    Description:
    Spoiler:
    The blade is twelve inches long in total, and three inches wide. This blade has a wicked tip and sharp edges.
    Strengths:

    • Sharp, slicing attacks. Able to be swung quickly and cut through flesh moderately easily

    Weaknesses:

    • Armor Negates these strikes
    • Very little area to defend with, mostly negligible defense

    Abilities: None

    Name: Mail Breaker
    Rank: Weak
    Type: Dagger
    Description:
    Spoiler:
    Blade is fourteen inches long with guard curving to allow parrying of weapon strikes if need be. Blade is circular and pointed at the tip, like a needle, reaching a max thickness of two inches at base.
    Strengths:

    • Able to pierce through same rank armor to do damage.

    Weaknesses:

    • Has no slicing power, only stabbing
    • Very little hard defense area, negligible area for defending

    Abilities: None
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    Last edited by Anon Brier on 20th July 2017, 11:49 am; edited 1 time in total


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    Bandit Knife and Mail Breaker Empty Re: Bandit Knife and Mail Breaker

    Post by Leila Vergious 20th July 2017, 5:29 am

    Hi there, Anon! I'm VindStot / Leila and I'll be grading your weapons. Only a few things need to be fixed, they're written down below in this color! When you're done with the changes, bump the app~

    Anon Brier wrote:Name: Bandit's Knife
    Rank: Weak
    Type: Dagger
    Description:
    Spoiler:
    The blade is twelve inches long in total, and three inches wide. This blade has a wicked tip and sharp edges.
    Strengths:

    • Sharp, slicing attacks. Able to be swung quickly and cut through flesh moderately easily
    • Stabbing causes a wound that will bleed the target for 2HP each turn until treated This would be an ability and thus cannot be in your strengths. Please, remove this completely or replace with another general strength.

    Weaknesses:

    • Armor Negates these strikes
    • Quick striking weapon, does 50% of modifier damage (1HP instead of 2) Same as above, this should be part of an ability once you upgrade the weapon rather than a weakness.
    • Very little area to defend with, mostly negligible defense
      Abilities: None

      Name: Mail Breaker
      Rank: Weak
      Type: Dagger
      Description:
      Spoiler:
      Blade is fourteen inches long with guard curving to allow parrying of weapon strikes if need be. Blade is circular and pointed at the tip, like a needle, reaching a max thickness of two inches at base.
      Strengths:

      • Able to pierce through same rank armor to do damage.
      • Able to parry strikes of weapons of same rank.
      • Possibility of double damage if organs are hit(dependent on organ hit.) Same as above, these strengths sound like abilities to me (Though parrying is something you can do against NPCs or with permission on PCs).

      Weaknesses:

      • Has no slicing power, only stabbing
      • Negligible damage to armor of at least one rank higher
      • Quick strikes can not be parried.
      • Very little hard defense area, negligible area for defending

      Abilities: None



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    Leila Vergious
    Leila Vergious

    Eden's Rose


    Eden's Rose

    Developer/GFX Artist- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Guild Master- Zodiac Key- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Lineage Making Contest Participant- Rich- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Hero- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Child of Eden
    Posts : 1599
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 30
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,806,570

    Bandit Knife and Mail Breaker Empty Re: Bandit Knife and Mail Breaker

    Post by Leila Vergious 21st July 2017, 8:49 am

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