Tetsu Spells #2

Name: Lightning Bolt [S-rank TO be bought]
Rank: S
Type: Lightning
Description: The user picks a designated spot for lightning to strike.
Strengths: The user picks a designated spot for lightning to strike. A huge lightning bolt will hit the target, and either use it as a way to move them by making them appear in any area where a storm or other lightning bolt is about to strike. This can also be used to shock or paralyze people.
Weaknesses: When transporting people, everyone will receive high voltage of lightning. The lightning will hurt you and may paralyze you for a post. When used as an attack, the user will also get a lower voltage hit because he is manipulating the weather, and this may upset the clouds and mother nature.
Cooldown: 9 posts

Name: Lighting Eruption
Rank: B
Type: Lightning
Description: The user lifts one hand, and then a ball of lightning comes from the ground.It circles the target before going above the opponent's head and swiftly begins to shock them. It has a 10 yard radius.
Strengths: This spell is a good sneak attack because all you will see is a magic circle below you, and a lightning circle around you, before appearing above your head.
Weaknesses: It can be blocked by Earth magic.
Cooldown: 4 posts

Name: Lightning Storm
Rank: C
Type: Lightning
Description: The user creates lightning in his hands, allowing him to manipulate lightning that is sparking around him to hit a opponent,.
Strengths: The attack is sent in random directions. It creates some lightning around the user, making it somewhat hard to get to him.
Weaknesses: The user is surrounded by lightning and must stay in position if he is using this spell. There are open spots in which a person can squeeze through to pierce through his defense and attack him.
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: 2 posts

Name: Lightning Barrier
Rank: C
Type: Lightning
Description: The user holds both hands out, creating a lightning barrier in front of him. This buys him time to maneuver from a blast. It holds all blasts from spells up to A-Rank for about 5 seconds. C-Ranks spells shatter it after 1 post, spells that are D-Rank take 2 posts to shatter it. Any other ranks will break through it the second it goes up. It shocks anything that attempts to go through it.
Strengths: It makes a good protection, and helps buy time. If someone is coming straight at you it will shock them.
Weaknesses: It can't hold strong spells for long.
Cooldown: 3 posts

Run a Spell Check first and make sure your sentences cleary describe what happens. Increase the Cooldown of the S Rank Spell to 9 posts.
You might want to add a duration to Lightning Barrier and Lightning Storm.

I ran it through a spellcheck and there was only one error which was forgetting a S on the chatter, all my other spelling was right. For lightning Barrier I already included my duration in the description.. All the description is straight to the point and tells you exactly what it does. I guess I could make the Duration for the storm 2 post, but honestly I wouldn't use it for more then one.

bump..

This sentence from Lightning Eruption's description doesn't really make sense. "..and then lighting ball that bass a 10 yard radius
comes from the ground above the target or opponent head swiftly and
begins to shock them". Please rephrase that....

You have " there are some open spots that a person can squeeze through to get in" as part of the Strength's section of Lightning Storm. That would be a weakness.

In Lightning Barrier's description you say "C-rank shatters it after 2\1 post". What is a 2/1 post? Do you mean 1 to 2 posts?