Raiores dragryder's fire-make magic

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Raiores wrote:Magic
Primary Magic: fire make
Secondary Magic: none.for now at least
Caster or Holder: caster
Description: this magic can create tools and animals out of fire.its user is strong against some elements but weak against other elements
Strengths: -can make solid animals and tools out of fire and choose who gets burnt by it and who doesn't
-fire does less to no damage against him and metal can be melted by it this is a unique ability, please place it in the unique abilities section
-its user cannot be affected by temperature
Weaknesses: -is weak against water and his animals/tools can't easily break through non metal solids.a liquid other than water that doesn't contain oxygen will put the fire off instead of just weaken it like regular water
-needs both hands to use
-a creature or tool he creates with that move can't be over 30 metres away from him This isn't a weakness, please change it.
-will be weak in extremely cold places but not very weak I suggest making this weaker by 25%
Lineage: Phoenix fire

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Unique Abilities:

You need 3 unique abilities here, as I have described, you need abilities that are unique to you and your magic. Kind of like how all of dr eggman's robots have unique abilities with all his machines and their punching motions etc are the spells. I imagine stuff like this all the time so it should work ^.^

Name: fire sync
Rank: D
Type: fire,I don't think it belongs to any of these types This would be fire and utility
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: changes his body into fire.often used to make a strong spell with these flames.a fire-make spell is made by the fires of his own body,it'll be twice as strong as a regular spell I suggest to make it increased by 25%
Strengths: -can be controlled not to hurt friends
-spells made by it aren't limited by range as he is inside the spell
-the attack is stronger if made.by these flames
Weaknesses: -slayers and those who don't get affected by fire won't get damaged by it or ell get reduced damage
-it can't be used for long
-it goes on a 3 post cool down after use This... isn't a weakness, I suggest to change it, why not the most obvious one about slayers?? :)
-If in that form,the fire weakened,it might hurt him when he's back to his original form but it won't kill him.if the fire is completely out off he gets back to his original form and will be hurt I suggest to just make him weaker by 25% during this time, and I suggest to make this weakness have a duration of 1 post
Spells:
Name: fire-make:horse
Rank: D
Type: it's type.depends on how it's used.element is fire Fire, offensive, transport
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: creates a horse out of fire.it can be mounted by those he doesn't want to burn or anyone who isn't affected by fire.it can also be used to defend against an attack or to attack the opponent Since this can 'attack the opponents' I suggest adding that it can attack for unarmed D rank melee damage as this can hit others for as many times as they want for 2 posts
Strengths: -can be mounted as transportation but slayers can still ride it
-can control it not to hurt friends
-can be solid like all fire make moves but it still burns
Weaknesses: -the flames will be put off like all his fire make moves if it gets over 30 metres away from him change this to 15m and not 30m please ^^
-anyone who isn't affected by fire can ride it even if he doesn't want then to but he can still stop
-it goes on a 3 post cool down after use this isn't a weakness, please change it

Name: fire make:birds
Rank: D
Type: fire,offensive unless used in a different way Fire, Offensive, Utility
Duration: 2 posts or till it hits something just make this 2 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: creates many birds out if fire that he can control.they're usually.used in offense but can he used to watch someone. I suggest giving out a solid number of birds, I suggest 2 birds and these birds deal half D rank damage when they attack a target
Strengths: -can do damage from a distance Due to how you originally written the spell, (look at your weakness) I suggest to change this strength into something else
-might burn the opponent Add that it will burn the opponent
-can control the birds to use them in other ways.
Weaknesses: -the birds can't hit something and remain Add that normal cooldown begins when they both hit something before duration ends
-it goes on a 3 post cooldoown after use This isn't a weakness
-like all other fire make moves,its range is limited to 30 metres Change this to 15m and we're good to go

Name: fire make:lance
Rank: D
Type: fire,offensive
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: creates a lance made of fire that he can control from a distance I suggest adding that you can control it from a distance from 15m, I also suggest to make it so that it deals 15% increased melee damage
Strengths: -can attack from a distance
-can hurt even those who aren't affected by fire attacks
Weaknesses: -as all fire make moves,its distance can't exceed 30 metres 15m and were good to go
-it goes on a 3 post cooldoown after use this isn't a weakness, please change it
-unlike other fire make moves,it can hurt even those he sees as friends.

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Raiores wrote:Magic
Primary Magic: fire make
Secondary Magic: none.for now at least
Caster or Holder: caster
Description: this magic can create tools and animals out of fire.its user is strong against some elements but weak against other elements
Strengths: -can make solid animals and tools out of fire and choose who gets burnt by it and who doesn't
-its user cannot be affected by temperature
-Will be stronger by 25% at extremely hot places
Weaknesses: -is weak against water and his animals/tools can't easily break through non metal solids.a liquid other than water that doesn't contain oxygen will put the fire off instead of just weaken it like regular water
-needs both hands to use
-a creature or tool he creates with that move must stay within spell's range
-will be weakened by 25% at extremely cold places
Lineage: Phoenix fire

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Name: fire sync
Rank: D
Type: fire,utility
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: changes his body into fire.often used to make a strong spell with these flames.a fire-make spell is made by the fires of his own body,it'll be 25% stronger than regular spells
Strengths: -can be controlled not to hurt friends
-spells made by it aren't limited by range as he is inside the spell
-the attack is 25% stronger if made by these flames
Weaknesses: -slayers and those who don't get affected by fire won't get damaged by it or ell get reduced damage
-it can't be used for long
-if a dragon slayer attempts to eat him,he'll be changed back to his original state instantly and will be 25% weaker with a 2 post cool down instead of 1 you kinda combined this weakness and the weakness below together, might want to seperate them more
-when he gets to his original state,he'll be 25% weaker for 1 post this is the weakness I was talking about

Name: fire explosion
Rank: D
Type: fire,offensive
Duration: instant damage
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: creates an aura of fire that repels outwards causing damage to whatever it hits.
Strengths: -does D rank damage to everyone who is caught in it
-people who,by his will,are close enough won't get hurt
- covers a good area which is the D rank spell radius best put that in description instead, dont just say D rank spell radius, just say 15m
Weaknesses: -slayers and those who don't get affected by fire won't get damaged by it or ell get reduced damage
-cannot be controlled like other spells to not hurt those he sees friendly but it can be around the center of the attack
-he can't use any other spell after he uses this one for 1 post(this one still goes on cool down
) and all spells he used before will be cancelled and their cool down will start but will be decreased no. no decreased cooldown is allowed with the way this was written.
-can not work under water

Name: fire blast
Rank: D
Type: fire,offensive
Duration: instant damage
Cooldown: 2
Description: shots fire balls from any part.of his body to deal damage to the opponent
Strengths: -can be shoot from any limb
-can fire as many as he wants before cool down starts but the sum of damage dealt before cool down starts=D rank damage no decreased cooldown
Weaknesses: -will hurt even those he sees as friends if not aimed well
-will be weakened under water and will not work if there's no oxygen weaker by 25%
-they can't be shot any further than the maximum spell range this isn't a weakness ><

Spells:
Name: fire-make:horse
Rank: D
Type: fire,offensive,transport
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: creates a horse out of fire.it can be mounted by those he doesn't want to burn or anyone who isn't affected by fire.it can also be used to defend against an attack or to attack the opponent causing D rank melee range
Strengths: -can be mounted as transportation but slayers and those who don't herb hurt by fire can still ride it
-can control it not to hurt friends
-can be solid like all fire make moves but it still burns
Weaknesses: -the flames will be put off like all his fire make moves if it gets out of the spell radius
-anyone who isn't affected by fire can ride it even if he doesn't want then to but he can still stop
-its weakened under water and can't be used where there's no oxygen by 25%
Need one more weakness

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Raiores wrote:Magic
Primary Magic: fire make
Secondary Magic: none.for now at least
Caster or Holder: caster
Description: this magic can create tools and animals out of fire.its user is strong against some elements but weak against other elements
Strengths: -can make solid animals and tools out of fire and choose who gets burnt by it and who doesn't
-its user cannot be affected by temperature Since this is an immunity, I cannot allow you to have this since immunities are not allowed on the site anymore (it was implimented yesterday, please check patches for more information) I can however allow a 25% resistance to the temperature instead
-Will be stronger by 25% at extremely hot places
Weaknesses: -is weak against water and his animals/tools can't easily break through non metal solids.a liquid other than water that doesn't contain oxygen will put the fire off instead of just weaken it like regular water
-needs both hands to use
-a creature or tool he creates with that move must stay within spell's range
-will be weakened by 25% at extremely cold places
Lineage: Phoenix fire

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Unique Abilities:
fire sync:changes his body into fire.moves mares with the fire of his body are not limited by range and are 25% stronger.after he reverts to his human form,he gets 3 posts cool down and is 15% weaker for 2 posts.he can't stay in that form for 2 posts.of a slayer eats him,he reverts back and is 25% weaker instead of 15.(I checked another post which happens to be your own and all unique abilities were passives which didn't use slots (I think) so making passive moves in unique abilities isn't a problem right?) Take out the OOC, that isn't even nessessary, ALL UA's are passive and the max you can have at D is 3.

As for this UA, combined with your strength and this UA, this makes it 50% stronger under extreme weather?? I don't think this is a good idea while being a D rank mage so I suggest you change it slightly. x)

Fire enchant:due to his lineage,the Phoenix fire, and his magic,the fire-make, he can enchant weapons in his range so that they burn whoever they hit.it can't be used underwater unlike other moves which are only weakened underwater but do work. Because this is involved with Phoenix Fire, i cannot allow this since phoenix fire is your lineage and not UA

Heat control:he can control his body heat increasing it enough to even melt metals but not iron slayer magic but can't decrease it enough to make it colder than a regular human.this has nothing to do with feeling hot and/or cold I don't want this to trigger your extreme temperatures, just mention that here
Spells:
Name: fire explosion
Rank: D
Type: fire,offensive
Duration: instant damage
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: creates an aura of fire that repels outwards causing damage to whatever it hits. Within 15m
Strengths: -does D rank damage to everyone who is caught in it
-people who,by his will,are close enough won't get hurt
Weaknesses: -slayers and those who don't get affected by fire won't get damaged by it or ell get reduced damage
-cannot be controlled like other spells to not hurt those he sees friendly but it can be around the center of the attack
-he can't use any other spell after he uses this one for 1 post(this one still goes on cool down
) and all spells he used before will be cancelled but will still have a cool down
-can not work under water

Name: fire blast
Rank: D
Type: fire,offensive
Duration: instant damage
Cooldown: 2
Description: shots fire balls from any part.of his body to deal damage to the opponent within 15m
Strengths: -can be shoot from any limb
-each fire ball does damage equal to 1/5 D rank damage.after 5 uses cool down starts(this is what I meant but a little different to make it easier to explain.I didn't decrease cool down)
Weaknesses: -will hurt even those he sees as friends if not aimed well
-will be weakened under water by 25% and will not work if there's no oxygen
-can't hurt other fire users unless they were 2 ranks or more power than him and it can be eaten by slayers

Name: fire-make:horse
Rank: D
Type: fire,offensive,transport
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: creates a horse out of fire.it can be mounted by those he doesn't want to burn or anyone who isn't affected by fire.it can also be used to defend against an attack or to attack the opponent causing D rank melee range within 15m
Strengths: -can be mounted as transportation but slayers and those who don't herb hurt by fire can still ride it
-can control it not to hurt friends
-can be solid like all fire make moves but it still burns
Weaknesses: -the flames will be put off like all his fire make moves if it gets out of the spell radius
-anyone who isn't affected by fire can ride it even if he doesn't want then to but he can still stop
-its weakened under water by 25% and can't be used where there's no oxygen
-if he is angry he might lose control of it and burn his friends who are riding the horse (took me quiet long to come up with this XD) remove the OOC bracket, but I do like this weakness xD

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