Domini D'Voglia's Character

Name: Domini D'Voglia
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Birthday: December 24
Sexuality: Bisexual
Special Characteristics: A halo-shaped scar on his right shoulder, a serpent around his left, and a tattoo of flaming gauntlets on his hips.  Numerous amounts of wound and burn scars all over his body.

Personality:
To many, Domini D’Voglia is a simple, straightforward, cutthroat man.  However, Domini keeps himself extremely distant and reserved from everyone he meets, even fellow guild members.  The man is quite mysterious, and often disappears for days, almost weeks on end, almost always returning with hefty reward, as if he had just finished a quest without anyone else’s knowledge. Whispers in the streets call him a Robin Hood, as that is the reputation he leaves after completing a mission.  But many other places call him a good man who will go to extreme measures for justice.
He speaks as much as he sleeps, which is little to nothing.  Yet, Domini’s voice is raspy and hoarse, as if he’s done a lifetime of yelling, but it is only from the strenuous tasks he pushes through.  Domini has many fears, but he chooses not to let them overcome his conscience, and never truly learned to cope.  His loyalty is limitless to those he deems respectable and worthy of his trust.  He is also clueless in many cases, most of the time to jokes or innuendos.  He is also oblivious to the many titles people have given him, as he leaves a mission as soon as he starts it.  On a team, he'll take silent leadership, literally meaning he'll take the group to their mission without a word.
He also uses hand gestures and body language to get his point across, and takes an aggresive approach to missions.  As a follower, or supporting member of a team though, Domini will do as he is asked, only if it meets a parameter he finds respectable.  If it's a half-hazard choice, he'll do his best to improve it.  And if the leader is clearly unreliable, he'll assume it himself, but otherwise serves total loyalty to a trustworthy leader.  In a fight, he is nearly unpredictable.  His facial expressions and thoughts are unreadable, and his movements are almost erratic.  He tends to use false steps to fake-out his opponent, and is not one to depend on his magic.  Domini is excellent at sreetfighting, and silent assassination, but lacks in restraint.
Domini is prideful in everything he does, though not boisterous.  As someone who believes actions speak louder than words, he will prove his worth without uttering a single word.  In the end, he will only ask, “Now, what was that you were saying?”  Though he believes in fate, he also believes that the end is not the end, and only gives up after someone outside offers to help.  He also has an endless amount of candor, or brutal honesty.  If you succeed in getting him to speak, he does so with brutal, unfiltered honesty.  Offensive or not, he will offer great advice, but is otherwise a great listener.
Domini is also committed to justice, especially meddling in local problems.  A single injustice will warrant him to bring hell down on a society, as if he were a mercy killer.  He is extremely rash, and his temper often gets in the way of his morality.  He rarely does anything for personal gain, and always shares his profit from a mission with the society he has helped.  Domini has also kept a daily log of his hour-to-hour events, as he fears in forgetting his very identity.  He also maintains a strict routine, to ensure nothing is misplaced.  Though he never outwardly expresses it, he is very paranoid throughout the day.  He is startled easily, especially with his quick reflexes.
Around friends, or the closest acquaintances he keeps, he enjoys teasing, and always has a snarky remark at an insult.  He also plays ‘hard-to-get’ when he does not mean to, which makes relationships hard for him, whether it is with a man or a woman.  Most of the time, however, he wanders around alone, but he never feels lonely.  On the inside, he feels little remorse, feels mercy is not concrete enough to trust, and has the most inner anxiety.

Likes:
Coffee - Domini rarely sleeps, as his rest is always plagued by nightmares. So, he drinks coffee throughout the day, especially at night, when he enjoys sitting outside to watch the stars.  Rather than sweets, he enjoys the bitter drink.

Astrology - As a heavy believer in fate, Domini revels in the stars and their will.  He also enjoys researching the zodiacs, though the type of magic is not in his forte.

Meddling - Though it's more for the self-satisfaction, Domini has a habit of anonymously solving local gang crimes, corruption, or monster problems for free.

Justice - Yet another reason he tends to meddle, Domini believes that everyone will get what they deserve; criminals, innocents, and corrupted courts.

Keeping a log/diary - Having had amnesia before, keeping a diary, or log as he likes to call it, helps him stay on track, and puts him at ease.


Dislikes:
Personal Gain - As somewhat of a Robin Hood, Domini thinks that the spoils of a quest should be shared equally through a team, or that the innocents involved also receive compensation.

Dishonesty - A lie typically means an empty promise, which would mean Domini wouldn't receive a share in profit or reputation, and as a believer in justice and equity, he will force the truth out of anyone if he has to.

Favoritism - Domini believes in the equal treatment of all people, whether he likes the person or not.

Varying from routine - As a man of tradition, straying from set instructions or making heavy changes frustrates Domini.


Motivations:
Robin Hood - Though he might be considered 'upper class' in many circles, his priority is the equal profit to the less-priveleged, or to those who deserve it at least.

Pride - Nothing would bother Domini more than an incomplete mission, and it would impact the way he sees himself negatively.  He'll exaggerate failure to the worst extent and blame himself.

Proving a Point - Many times, he'll try to complete something as best he can, even if it requires pointles effort, to prove someone wrong.



Fears:
Losing control - Perhaps Domini's worst fear; letting his anger Take him Over and injuring those around him.

Attachment - Domini tends to keep at a distance from most people, maintaining only acquaintances, and it seems his enemies know him better than his friends. He's afraid to fall for someone who will betray him, or that he will disappoint.

Forgetting - Most of all, Domini fears forgetting everything he knows, and even worse, he fears that he won't know when he has forgotten it.


General Appearance

Height:6' (189 cm)
Weight:150 lbs. (60 kg)
Hair: Black, it darkens towards the tips. Wavy and shaggy, hangs in front of his face almost.
Eyes: Dark, faded purple.
Skin Tone: Olive
Appearance: Domini is a tall, almost lanky 21 year old. He's extremely lean, and written with numerous scars in various places, aside from the signature halo and gauntlet tattoos. His wardrobe consists of a long navy blue cloak, that drawls behind him and flickers like a shadow at the end. He wears two silver ear cuffs over his left, a burgundy colored button-up underneath his cloak, dark blue skinny pants, and leather black loafers.

Guild/Council

Guild:Sabertooth
Tattoo: Right pectoral, neon blue.
Rank: D

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Di_Angelo wrote:Name: Domini D'Voglia
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Birthday: December 24
Sexuality: Bisexual
Special Characteristics: A halo-shaped scar on his right shoulder, a serpent around his left, and a tattoo of flaming gauntlets on his hips.  Numerous amounts of wound and burn scars all over his body.

Personality:
To many, Domini D’Voglia is a simple, straightforward, cutthroat man.  However, Domini keeps himself extremely distant and reserved from everyone he meets, even fellow guild members.  The man is quite mysterious, and often disappears for days, almost weeks on end, almost always returning with hefty reward, as if he had just finished a quest without anyone else’s knowledge. Whispers in the streets call him a Robin Hood, as that is the reputation he leaves after completing a mission.  But many other places call him a good man who will go to extreme measures for justice.
He speaks as much as he sleeps, which is little to nothing.  Yet, Domini’s voice is raspy and hoarse, as if he’s done a lifetime of yelling, but it is only from the strenuous tasks he pushes through.  Domini has many fears, but he chooses not to let them overcome his conscience, and never truly learned to cope.  His loyalty is limitless to those he deems respectable and worthy of his trust.  He is also clueless in many cases, most of the time to jokes or innuendos.  He is also oblivious to the many titles people have given him, as he leaves a mission as soon as he starts it.
Domini is prideful in everything he does, though not boisterous.  As someone who believes actions speak louder than words, he will prove his worth without uttering a single word.  In the end, he will only ask, “Now, what was that you were saying?”  Though he believes in fate, he also believes that the end is not the end, and only gives up after someone outside offers to help.  He also has an endless amount of candor, or brutal honesty.  If you succeed in getting him to speak, he does so with brutal, unfiltered honesty.  Offensive or not, he will offer great advice, but is otherwise a great listener.
Domini is also committed to justice, especially meddling in local problems.  A single injustice will warrant him to bring hell down on a society, as if he were a mercy killer.  He is extremely rash, and his temper often gets in the way of his morality.  He rarely does anything for personal gain, and always shares his profit from a mission with the society he has helped.  Domini has also kept a daily log of his hour-to-hour events, as he fears in forgetting his very identity.  He also maintains a strict routine, to ensure nothing is misplaced.  Though he never outwardly expresses it, he is very paranoid throughout the day.  He is startled easily, especially with his quick reflexes.
Around friends, or the closest acquaintances he keeps, he enjoys teasing, and always has a snarky remark at an insult.  He also plays ‘hard-to-get’ when he does not mean to, which makes relationships hard for him, whether it is with a man or a woman.  Most of the time, however, he wanders around alone, but he never feels lonely.  On the inside, he feels little remorse, feels mercy is not concrete enough to trust, and has the most inner anxiety.

This is a good description, but there's a couple things that need to be added:
1)  Need to explain how he is like as a leader
2)  need to explain how he is like as a follower.
3)  Need to explain how he is like in a fight.


Likes:
Coffee - Domini rarely sleeps, as his rest is always plagued by nightmares. So, he drinks coffee throughout the day, especially at night, when he enjoys sitting outside to watch the stars.  Rather than sweets, he enjoys the bitter drink.

Astrology - As a heavy believer in fate, Domini revels in the stars and their will.  He also enjoys researching the zodiacs, though the type of magic is not in his forte.

Meddling - Though it's more for the self-satisfaction, Domini has a habit of anonymously solving local gang crimes, corruption, or monster problems for free.

Justice - Yet another reason he tends to meddle, Domini believes that everyone will get what they deserve; criminals, innocents, and corrupted courts.

Keeping a log/diary - Having had amnesia before, keeping a diary, or log as he likes to call it, helps him stay on track, and puts him at ease.


Dislikes:
Personal Gain - As somewhat of a Robin Hood, Domini thinks that the spoils of a quest should be shared equally through a team, or that the innocents involved also receive compensation.

Dishonesty - A lie typically means an empty promise, which would mean Domini wouldn't receive a share in profit or reputation, and as a believer in justice and equity, he will force the truth out of anyone if he has to.

Favoritism - Domini believes in the equal treatment of all people, whether he likes the person or not.

Varying from routine - As a man of tradition, straying from set instructions or making heavy changes frustrates Domini.


Motivations:
Robin Hood - Though he might be considered 'upper class' in many circles, his priority is the equal profit to the less-priveleged, or to those who deserve it at least.

Pride - Nothing would bother Domini more than an incomplete mission, and it would impact the way he sees himself negatively.  He'll exaggerate failure to the worst extent and blame himself.

Proving a Point - Many times, he'll try to complete something as best he can, even if it requires pointles effort, to prove someone wrong.



Fears:
Losing control - Perhaps Domini's worst fear; letting his anger Take him Over and injuring those around him.

Attachment - Domini tends to keep at a distance from most people, maintaining only acquaintances, and it seems his enemies know him better than his friends. He's afraid to fall for someone who will betray him, or that he will disappoint.

Forgetting - Most of all, Domini fears forgetting everything he knows, and even worse, he fears that he won't know when he has forgotten it.


General Appearance

Height:6' (189 cm)
Weight:150 lbs. (60 kg)
Hair: Black, it darkens towards the tips. Wavy and shaggy, hangs in front of his face almost.
Eyes: Dark, faded purple.
Skin Tone: Olive
Appearance: Domini is a tall, almost lanky 21 year old. He's extremely lean, and written with numerous scars in various places, aside from the signature halo and gauntlet tattoos. His wardrobe consists of a long navy blue cloak, that drawls behind him and flickers like a shadow at the end. He wears two silver ear cuffs over his left, a burgundy colored button-up underneath his cloak, dark blue skinny pants, and leather black loafers.

Guild/Council

Guild:Sabertooth
Tattoo: Right pectoral, neon blue.
Rank: D

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