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    Marshmallow Wings of JUSTICE!

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    Post by Shipping Goddess 8th August 2016, 6:07 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Marshmallow Wings of Justice! (Hold your applause, I know it's the best name ever)
    Secondary Magic: -
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: This isn't your average Holder Magic, one that utilizes an item to perform her magic. Instead, the magic is performed through not an external source as an item, but instead an entirely seperate being: Marshmallow, Lilian's pet wyvern.
    Named Marshmallow for its white color, the wyvern was found rampaging in a forest one day by Lilian, and is the reason she has the three... Unsavory claw marks on her back and shoulder. After fighting with, and eventually taming the beast, Lilian learned over time to utilize the wyvern to its fullest potential, and learning how to channel magic through it.
    Marshmallow is an all-white wyvern, a cousin of the dragon species which has wings in the place of arms, however still has hind legs that it could stand on. It is much smaller than the dragons we all think of - those things bigger than Castles and all that, no Marshmallow is merely three times the size of an average male adult human when measured from tail to head, and has a wingspan of a foot longer than that. Marshmallow has a saddle on it (for Lilian to ride) and wears a silver headguard (provides no defense unless I register it later) with metal plating along its body for protection (again, adds no defense AORN).
    The magic itself is Lilian channeling her magic into the wyvern to be able to amplify its normal abilities, breathing fire, slashing with its claws, etc. While Lilian fights alongside or atop the wyvern, she can also have spells active at the same time, at the expense of extreme focus. Another way she can use the magic is the opposite of what was explained above. Instead of using her power to amplify Marshmallow's powers, she can use certain spells on herself, therefore making herself have the powers of the wyvern that she rides. This could be giving herself tougher skin or the likes of letting her use a fire spell, or something along the sort.
    With that being said, the magic suffers greatly against Wind users and Dragonslayers, thanks to the Bond ability the magic posseses. This makes not only the wyvern, but Lilian also both suceptable to Dragonslayer Magic, as well as wind magic.
    The magic's applications are used to overwhelm the opponent with Marshmallow and Lilian throwing wave after wave of punishment while one of the two uses spells while the other focuses on melee damage. When not riding the wyvern, the two could do a sort of team fighting strategy, being able to attack from multiple angles at the same time.

    Strengths:
    *As it's a wyvern it can... You know... FLY! Adding aerial fighting to the two's arsenal

    *Marshmallow can deal (Lilian's rank) melee damage with basic claws and bites, making spells not the only source of the wyvern's usefulness

    •Attacking with two people, one wyvern or not, is an advantage over a one-on-one fight

    *Spells can be used for both Lilian and Marshmallow, allowing for situational control

    Weaknesses:

    •Dragonslayers. 'Nuff said.

    •When in combat Marshmallow can't fly anymore than 10 meters off the ground when engaged in combat (Has no limit when not in combat)

    •The two (Marshmallow and Lilian) share HP, meaning if one KOs, they both do.

    •Lilian and Marshmallow take 20% more HP's worth of damage from Wind Spells

    *Marshmallow can't perform spells on her own. If you were to incapacitate Lilian, Marshmallow would be next to useless

    Lineage: Aspect of Pluto
    Aspect of Pluto:

    Unique Abilities:

    •Bond: Lilian and Marshmallow have 50% extra hp from a mage of her rank. The drawback being both she and Marshmallow share an HP gague, making it easier for her to die / get KOd, and all of her spells cost 50% more MP to use.

    *Dragonspeed: Marshmallow moves 50% faster than a mage of Lilian's rank.

    *Dracomirror: Every spell Lilian uses has two effects - on if used on Marshmallow, and one if used on herself. For the most part, it is 90% the same, with a little tidbit separating the two. Lilian can only activate one of the two effects, and that's how the spell plays out.

    *Tough Scales: Marshmallow takes 10 less damage from every melee attack.

    D Rank Spells:

    C Rank Spells:

    Signature Spell(s):
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    Post by Shipping Goddess 8th August 2016, 6:10 pm

    Completed! All extra spell slots have been purchased (you're gonna have to go with me on that, if I searched through all the archives of every purchase I made it'd take me forever, I literally took the exact amount of spells from my past magic) so that's why I kept the C Rank in there. No C rank spells, and to whatever mod decides to look over this Make sure you grade the Lineage Signature Spell at the bottom


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    Post by Guest 9th August 2016, 10:07 am

    Hey there! All corrections are marked in this color. Please edit and bump once you are finished. ^.^

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    Post by Shipping Goddess 9th August 2016, 11:07 am

    Added another weakness

    Bond - Just letting you know, I didn't mean I have 150% EXTRA hp, I had 150% the hp. That and 50% extra Hp are one and the same. For example. If i had 200 hp, 150% of that would be 300. 50% extra would also be 300. However an EXTRA 150% of 200 would boost the hp to 500, and that's just damn outrageous. I did mean it as the same buff you did, however i changed it to make it more clear. Also i added in the drawback you said.

    Claws of Justice - Added in the tidbit about the first initial attack. Also, saying D Rank Melee damage is not what i intended for the spell, i intended it to be a single slash of Spell damage. Dealing D Rank Melee damage would be wasting a spell slot... As i can simply do that by punching somebody

    Flames of Purity - To clarify, Marshmallow's spell is AoE and Lilian's is DoT. Marshmallow's is more suited to fighting crowds, Lilians for 1v1. Also edited the range

    Corruption-Breaking Frost Breath - changed what you said to

    Rest of Ambition - To clarify, I don't heal off any HP (I said that in a weakness.). Healing 100% of total HP would be outrageous, I only heal the physical wounds of my body. For example: If i took 75 damage and have cuts all over my body, the cuts would dissapear and i can fight like I have 0 damage, however the 75 would still be there. If you still want me to change, i will.

    SO I'LL CALL DIS A BUMP


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    Post by Guest 9th August 2016, 12:24 pm

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    Post by Guest 24th August 2016, 1:01 pm

    Unlocked at user's request.
    Kissos wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Marshmallow Wings of Justice! (Hold your applause, I know it's the best name ever)
    Secondary Magic: -
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: This isn't your average Holder Magic, one that utilizes an item to perform her magic. Instead, the magic is performed through not an external source as an item, but instead an entirely seperate being: Marshmallow, Lilian's pet wyvern.
    Named Marshmallow for its white color, the wyvern was found rampaging in a forest one day by Lilian, and is the reason she has the three... Unsavory claw marks on her back and shoulder. After fighting with, and eventually taming the beast, Lilian learned over time to utilize the wyvern to its fullest potential, and learning how to channel magic through it.
    Marshmallow is an all-white wyvern, a cousin of the dragon species which has wings in the place of arms, however still has hind legs that it could stand on. It is much smaller than the dragons we all think of - those things bigger than Castles and all that, no Marshmallow is merely three times the size of an average male adult human when measured from tail to head, and has a wingspan of a foot longer than that. Marshmallow has a saddle on it (for Lilian to ride) and wears a silver headguard (provides no defense unless I register it later) with metal plating along its body for protection (again, adds no defense AORN).
    The magic itself is Lilian channeling her magic into the wyvern to be able to amplify its normal abilities, breathing fire, slashing with its claws, etc. While Lilian fights alongside or atop the wyvern, she can also have spells active at the same time, at the expense of extreme focus. Another way she can use the magic is the opposite of what was explained above. Instead of using her power to amplify Marshmallow's powers, she can use certain spells on herself, therefore making herself have the powers of the wyvern that she rides. This could be giving herself tougher skin or the likes of letting her use a fire spell, or something along the sort.
    With that being said, the magic suffers greatly against Wind users and Dragonslayers, thanks to the Bond ability the magic posseses. This makes not only the wyvern, but Lilian also both suceptable to Dragonslayer Magic, as well as wind magic.
    The magic's applications are used to overwhelm the opponent with Marshmallow and Lilian throwing wave after wave of punishment while one of the two uses spells while the other focuses on melee damage. When not riding the wyvern, the two could do a sort of team fighting strategy, being able to attack from multiple angles at the same time.

    Strengths:
    *As it's a wyvern it can... You know... FLY! Adding aerial fighting to the two's arsenal

    *Marshmallow can deal (Lilian's rank) melee damage with basic claws and bites, making spells not the only source of the wyvern's usefulness

    •Attacking with two people, one wyvern or not, is an advantage over a one-on-one fight

    *Spells can be used for both Lilian and Marshmallow, allowing for situational control

    Weaknesses:

    •Dragonslayers. 'Nuff said.

    •When in combat Marshmallow can't fly anymore than 10 meters off the ground when engaged in combat (Has no limit when not in combat)

    •The two (Marshmallow and Lilian) share HP, meaning if one KOs, they both do.

    •Lilian and Marshmallow take 20% more HP's worth of damage from Wind Spells

    *Marshmallow can't perform spells on her own. If you were to incapacitate Lilian, Marshmallow would be next to useless

    Lineage: Aspect of Pluto
    Aspect of Pluto:

    Unique Abilities:

    •Bond: Lilian and Marshmallow have 50% extra hp from a mage of her rank. The drawback being both she and Marshmallow share an HP gague, making it easier for her to die / get KOd, and all of her spells cost 50% more MP to use.

    *Dragonspeed: Marshmallow moves 50% faster than a mage of Lilian's rank.

    •Wyvern Mirror: Every spell Lilian uses has two effects - on if used on Marshmallow, and one if used on herself. For the most part, it is 90% the same, with a little tidbit separating the two. Lilian can only activate one of the two effects, and that's how the spell plays out.

    D Rank Spells:

    C Rank Spells:

    Signature Spell(s):
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    List of Spell Fusions (locked until B rank):
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    Post by Shipping Goddess 25th August 2016, 1:37 pm

    Ready to be graded!

    Things I did:

    Added the Tough Scales UA
    Upgraded Scales, Flames, Frost Breath, Venom Bite, and Claws to C Rank

    Added Acid Spit as a C Rank Spell

    Added Strength, Dragon Eyes, Tolerance, Chills, and Heat as D rank spells

    Added Sacred Ice and Sacred Poison as Signature spells


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    Post by redheadedstepchild 25th August 2016, 6:47 pm

    Yo, you know how this works and know where to find me if you have any questions. Edits needed will be in this color, good luck!

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    Post by Shipping Goddess 25th August 2016, 8:22 pm

    "pump notification"


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    Post by redheadedstepchild 25th August 2016, 8:29 pm

    Approved. I won't put the stamp. :P

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