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    Susanoo

    Luna Jaeger
    Luna Jaeger

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    Susanoo Empty Susanoo

    Post by Luna Jaeger Sat 9 Jul - 1:36

    Susanoo
    Rank: Artifact +
    Type: Weapon & Weapon & Magic Item
    Damage: As User's Rank
    Proof of Purchase: Artifact + Weapon; Artifact Item; Artifact Weapon
    Constructed from the metal found contained within a meteorite, the Susanoo is a masterpiece mechanical arm that was originally constructed by Erek Jaeger who was a famous mechanical craftsman and the grandfather to Luna Jaeger. Raijin Type 0 incorporates technology which is nearly unheard-of except by those who live in the neutral grounds with a miniature tesla coil powering the various systems and mechanical parts within the arm. The outer shell consists of smooth lines of the metal 'Hybrasil' formed as an ovaloid cylinder down from the top of the forearm to the wrist, where a smaller joint with four hydraulic rods hook up to the plate that forms the palm and hand with individual fingers riveted in for full articulation. At the elbow-plate is the face of a phoenix, which serves as the mouth-piece for the holder's soul. Underneath the plates of metal consist a series of connectors which attach to the arm's nerves and go to the wires and mechanical parts which move in such a way as to perfectly mimic the movement of the lower arm from the elbow down of a person. Any time, the arm is able to look like real flesh with synthetic skin and muscle, with the elbow plate looking like a piece of armor. The arm counts as a melee weapon with spikes running along the knuckles, with a durability of three-hundred forty (340) HP and resistance against B-rank and lower attacks.
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    Name: Strength to Steel
    Rank: User Rank (Max of S)
    Description: The Susano'o arm has been implemented with strong exterior of meteorite metal which increases the capacity of what the arm can pull while the fine artificial nerves increases the input of muscle and movement by four times, resulting in an arm that is stronger and can easily resist the pull of power on it.

    • D-Rank • +5% to Strength
    • C-Rank • +15% to Strength
    • B-Rank • +25% to Strength
    • A-Rank • +35% to Strength
    • S-Rank • +45% to Strength


    Name: Adamant Resolve
    Rank: User Rank (Max of S)
    Description: The Susanoo arm is fitted with Hybrasil, an unknown ore from a meteorite which bears an increased density per cubic inch, durability, and defensive property, protecting the arm and it's inside components from heavy damage. This is represented in the damage resistance of the arm, cutting all damage by 25% and +5% per rank above D-rank.
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    Last edited by Luna Jaeger on Wed 6 Feb - 9:43; edited 18 times in total


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    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Guest Mon 11 Jul - 11:17

    Hello there, Luna Jaeger!

    Nothing's wrong with your application so far, I'd just like for you to state a few things in the abilities before I go about approving your application. You can find such requests in this color, and don't be afraid to question why I asked it.

    - Marshy
    Luna Jaeger wrote:Name: Raijin Type 0
    Rank: Artifact
    Type: Weapon
    Description: Constructed from the metal found contained within a meteorite, the Raijin Type 0 is a masterpiece mechanical arm that was originally constructed by Erek Jaeger who was a famous mechanical craftsman and the grandfather to Luna Jaeger. Raijin Type 0 incorporates technology which is nearly unheard-of except by those who live in the neutral grounds with a miniature tesla coil powering the various systems and mechanical parts within the arm. The outer shell consists of smooth lines of the metal 'Hybrasil' formed as an ovaloid cylinder down from the top of the forearm to the wrist, where a smaller joint with four hydraulic rods hook up to the plate that forms the palm and hand with individual fingers riveted in for full articulation. At the elbow-plate is the face of a phoenix, which serves as the mouth-piece for the holder's soul. Underneath the plates of metal consist a series of connectors which attach to the arm's nerves and go to the wires and mechanical parts which move in such a way as to perfectly mimic the movement of the lower arm from the elbow down of a person. Any time, the arm is able to look like real flesh with synthetic skin and muscle, with the elbow plate looking like a piece of armor. The arm counts as a melee weapon with spikes running along the knuckles dealing two melee damage and increasing by two melee damage per rank above D-rank, with a durability of one-hundred eighty (180) HP and resistance against B-rank and lower attacks.
    Strengths:

    • The arm is able to move just as a flesh-and-blood real arm would, with full articulation to the joints and fingers.
    • The arm may become incognito, mimicing the look and feel of a real arm which mean it's extremely difficult to detect.

    Weaknesses:

    • The synthetic skin and muscle layers are easy to remove with any sustained damage to them.
    • The arm is easy to detect as an artificial prosthetic when it is not incognito as it looks mechanical.
    • While the arm is unbreakable, it can be damaged resulting in slower movements when it has 0 HP.

    Abilities:
    Ability:
    Ability 2:

    Luna Jaeger
    Luna Jaeger

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    Posts : 289
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Age : 41
    Experience : 1262.5

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    First Skill: Sky God Slayer
    Second Skill:
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    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Luna Jaeger Tue 12 Jul - 20:20

    Bump, Fixed


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    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Guest Tue 12 Jul - 21:02

    Susanoo AESz729
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    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Guest Mon 25 Jul - 10:43

    Unlocked at user's request.

    Luna Jaeger wrote:Name: Raijin Type 0
    Rank: Artifact
    Type: Weapon
    Description: Constructed from the metal found contained within a meteorite, the Raijin Type 0 is a masterpiece mechanical arm that was originally constructed by Erek Jaeger who was a famous mechanical craftsman and the grandfather to Luna Jaeger. Raijin Type 0 incorporates technology which is nearly unheard-of except by those who live in the neutral grounds with a miniature tesla coil powering the various systems and mechanical parts within the arm. The outer shell consists of smooth lines of the metal 'Hybrasil' formed as an ovaloid cylinder down from the top of the forearm to the wrist, where a smaller joint with four hydraulic rods hook up to the plate that forms the palm and hand with individual fingers riveted in for full articulation. At the elbow-plate is the face of a phoenix, which serves as the mouth-piece for the holder's soul. Underneath the plates of metal consist a series of connectors which attach to the arm's nerves and go to the wires and mechanical parts which move in such a way as to perfectly mimic the movement of the lower arm from the elbow down of a person. Any time, the arm is able to look like real flesh with synthetic skin and muscle, with the elbow plate looking like a piece of armor. The arm counts as a melee weapon with spikes running along the knuckles dealing two melee damage and increasing by two melee damage per rank above D-rank, with a durability of one-hundred eighty (180) HP and resistance against B-rank and lower attacks.
    Strengths:

    • The arm is able to move just as a flesh-and-blood real arm would, with full articulation to the joints and fingers.
    • The arm may become incognito, mimicing the look and feel of a real arm which mean it's extremely difficult to detect.

    Weaknesses:

    • The synthetic skin and muscle layers are easy to remove with any sustained damage to them.
    • The arm is easy to detect as an artificial prosthetic when it is not incognito as it looks mechanical.
    • While the arm is unbreakable, it can be damaged resulting in slower movements when it has 0 HP.

    Abilities:
    Ability:
    Ability 2:

    Luna Jaeger
    Luna Jaeger

    Knight VIP Status- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- God Slayer- Magic Application Approved!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Obtain A Lineage!- Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Destiny
    Position : None
    Posts : 289
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 41
    Experience : 1262.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sky God Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Luna Jaeger Mon 25 Jul - 16:06

    Ready for approval


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    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Guest Tue 26 Jul - 20:58

    Heyo, Luna! I'll be grading your app, so you know what's to come! Anything in this color is a request.
    Luna Jaeger wrote:
    Ni•Hachifusa

    Rank: Artifact
    Type: Weapon & Magic Item
    Damage: As User
    Proof of Purchase: Artifact Weapon; Artifact Item
    Constructed from the metal found contained within a meteorite, the Raijin Type 0 is a masterpiece mechanical arm that was originally constructed by Erek Jaeger who was a famous mechanical craftsman and the grandfather to Luna Jaeger. Raijin Type 0 incorporates technology which is nearly unheard-of except by those who live in the neutral grounds with a miniature tesla coil powering the various systems and mechanical parts within the arm. The outer shell consists of smooth lines of the metal 'Hybrasil' formed as an ovaloid cylinder down from the top of the forearm to the wrist, where a smaller joint with four hydraulic rods hook up to the plate that forms the palm and hand with individual fingers riveted in for full articulation. At the elbow-plate is the face of a phoenix, which serves as the mouth-piece for the holder's soul. Underneath the plates of metal consist a series of connectors which attach to the arm's nerves and go to the wires and mechanical parts which move in such a way as to perfectly mimic the movement of the lower arm from the elbow down of a person. Any time, the arm is able to look like real flesh with synthetic skin and muscle, with the elbow plate looking like a piece of armor. The arm counts as a melee weapon with spikes running along the knuckles, with a durability of one-hundred eighty (180) HP and resistance against B-rank and lower attacks.
    Strengths:

    • The arm is able to move just as a flesh-and-blood real arm would, with full articulation to the joints and fingers.
    • The arm may become incognito, mimicking the look and feel of a real arm which mean it's extremely difficult to detect.

    Weaknesses:

    • The synthetic skin and muscle layers are easy to remove with any sustained damage to them.
    • The arm is easy to detect as an artificial prosthetic when it is not incognito as it looks mechanical.
    • While the arm is unbreakable, it can be damaged resulting in slower movements when it has 0 HP.

    Passives wrote:
    N/A
    Blitzrute:

    Gespanntheit:

    Zundenblitz:

    Luna Jaeger
    Luna Jaeger

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    Posts : 289
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 41
    Experience : 1262.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sky God Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Luna Jaeger Wed 27 Jul - 11:12

    Bump


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    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Guest Wed 27 Jul - 11:46

    Susanoo AESz729
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    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Guest Fri 19 Aug - 21:38

    Spoiler:

    Unlocked at the user's request.
    Luna Jaeger
    Luna Jaeger

    Knight VIP Status- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- God Slayer- Magic Application Approved!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Obtain A Lineage!- Player 
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    Position : None
    Posts : 289
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 41
    Experience : 1262.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sky God Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Luna Jaeger Sun 4 Dec - 13:09

    Ready for Review


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    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Guest Tue 6 Dec - 15:28

    Susanoo RwhSA4C
    Jiyu Kazehime
    Jiyu Kazehime

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    First Skill: Wind Magic
    Second Skill: Demonic Takeover
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    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Jiyu Kazehime Tue 12 Dec - 18:09

    Moved and unlocked at user's request.

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    Luna Jaeger
    Luna Jaeger

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    Guild : Sabertooth
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    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 41
    Experience : 1262.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sky God Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Luna Jaeger Sat 28 Apr - 20:49

    This is ready to be re-approved


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    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Guest Sun 29 Apr - 22:55

    The only thing i see wrong here, is for Gespanntheit. The cool down and duration seems to be different as described in the description.
    Change that and we should be good to go.
    Luna Jaeger
    Luna Jaeger

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    Position : None
    Posts : 289
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 41
    Experience : 1262.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sky God Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Luna Jaeger Mon 30 Apr - 10:18

    Fixed ^_^


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    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Guest Mon 30 Apr - 12:16

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    Susanoo Empty Re: Susanoo

    Post by Shen Kadokawa Tue 5 Feb - 13:03

    Moved and unlocked at the user's request

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