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    Cometfall, Token of Trials

    Takumi Yoshino
    Takumi Yoshino

    Guardian of Storms


    Guardian of Storms

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Player 
    Lineage : Blessing of the Gods
    Position : None
    Posts : 1143
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Mentor : Iris, Goddess of Rainbows
    Experience : 675

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Ice
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Takumi Yoshino 17th May 2016, 7:51 am

    Name: Cometfall, Token of Trials
    Rank: Artifact(won from the raffle)
    Type: sword
    Description: Cometfall is 3 feet of wicked sharp steel, gleaming bright, glowing with a strange light, almost as if it were made of fire. It's hilt is simple, with leather wrappings and no ornate design.
    Strengths:
    -close range fighting
    -deadly sharp
    -almost blinding light comes from the sword
    Weaknesses:
    -the light from the sword can blind allies as well as enemies, including the wielder
    -useless at long range
    -gives off heat that may burn the hands of the wielder
    -very heavy, may slightly slow the user(by 5-10 % at least)
    Abilities: ( List all the abilities it has, make sure that the list is clear and understandable. See Misc rules for how many you can have)
    [spoiler=Ability]
    Name: Void Beast: Flaming charge
    Rank: S rank
    Duration:instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description:The spell creates flaming spirit wolves to charge the enemy, going about 100 meters and traveling at speeds of about 20 m/s. Damage is reduced to the user's rank if the user's rank is lower than the ability's rank.  Burn effect of 5% for 3-4 posts when the wolf strikes the opponent.
    Strengths:
    - +50% in damage to ice magic
    -spell is unable to be dodged by those of equal to or lower in rank.
    Weaknesses:
    -water magic has a +50% in damage to this ability
    -may charge allies as well as enemies (gives up to 100% damage if not blocked, at least 50% damage)
    -Fire Slayers are able to eat the fire the wolf is made out of

    [Spoiler=Ability 2]
    Name: Void Beast: Crushing March
    Rank: A rank
    Duration: instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: void beast: crushing march creates earthen spirit boars to charge the enemy. The boars go 75 metres at max and move at 15 m/s. Around 6-7 boars are summoned.
    Strengths:
    -long range attack
    Weaknesses:
    -close range attack
    -those with blood magic could potentially control them (blood and earth)


    Last edited by LeoOfTheLionPalace on 12th June 2016, 6:59 am; edited 6 times in total


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    Cometfall, Token of Trials Empty Re: Cometfall, Token of Trials

    Post by Guest 21st May 2016, 5:10 pm

    I apologize for forgetting to grade this, anyway, anything in this color is meant to be edited.
    LeoOfTheLionPalace wrote:Name: Cometfall, Token of Trials
    Rank: Artifact(won from the raffle)
    Type: sword
    Description: Cometfall is 3 feet of wicked sharp steel There are things a lot sharper than steel, just saying, like obsidian or tungsten, gleaming bright, glowing with a strange light, almost as if it were made of fire. It's hilt is simple, with leather wrappings and no ornate design.
    Strengths:
    -elemental attacks
    -close range fighting
    -deadly sharp
    -almost blinding light comes from the sword
    Weaknesses:
    -the light from the sword can blind allies as well as enemies, including the wielder
    -useless at long range fighting
    -darkness based attacks, for it is of light The sword isn't made out of light, so this wouldn't really affect the weapon itself. What you want to focus on is the weaknesses of the weapon, itself. (i.e the weapon is made out of weak metal, so it can easily break)
    -gives off heat that may burn the hands of the wielder
    -very heavy, may slightly slow the user How much would say their speed is reduced by?
    Abilities: ( List all the abilities it has, make sure that the list is clear and understandable. See Misc rules for how many you can have)
    Ability:

    I know you don't want a second ability, but I really suggest that you have it, as it'll give you more variety and damage for your sword when PvPing with people. Overall, I'm just trying to help you make these weapons strong.
    Takumi Yoshino
    Takumi Yoshino

    Guardian of Storms


    Guardian of Storms

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Player 
    Lineage : Blessing of the Gods
    Position : None
    Posts : 1143
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Mentor : Iris, Goddess of Rainbows
    Experience : 675

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Ice
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Takumi Yoshino 12th June 2016, 6:40 am

    Edited


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    Post by Guest 12th June 2016, 6:46 am

    You need one more weakness for the weapon or one less strength.
    How many boars are summoned?
    Takumi Yoshino
    Takumi Yoshino

    Guardian of Storms


    Guardian of Storms

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Player 
    Lineage : Blessing of the Gods
    Position : None
    Posts : 1143
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Mentor : Iris, Goddess of Rainbows
    Experience : 675

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Ice
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Takumi Yoshino 12th June 2016, 6:59 am

    Edited


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    Post by Guest 12th June 2016, 7:04 am

    Cometfall, Token of Trials AESz729

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