La Doncella de los Vientos Angélicos || Completed

• Offensive spells deal 20% more damage to dark or unholy beings.
  
• Healing spells restore 20% more HP to holy or divine beings.
  
• Chakrams provide a constant source of damage output if the user is unable to cast spells at any given time.
  

• Healing spells restore 20% less HP or MP to dark or unholy beings.
  
• Offensive spells deal 20% less damage to holy or divine beings.
  
• Damage from spells is (typically) broken up with multiple chakrams, usually in groups of two or three, making it difficult to cast a spell to its full effect.
  
• Statuses rely on the chakrams being able to hit their targets.
  

Aspect of Jupiter:

• Halo Chakram Summon- La Doncella relies heavily on this ability, as it summons the rings of energy that many spells rely on to hit their intended target. By themselves, the chakrams glow white and deal the user's base melee damage at a given rank (max S rank). Unless otherwise stated in the spell description, normal spell damage is combined with that of the chakrams. (Active, no cooldown.)
  
• Wind Manipulation- Kistiñe retains her ability to manipulate the winds, thus allowing her to cast wind spells if need be.
  
• Baile de la Ninfa- A family legend says that one of Kistiñe's ancestors was a nymph; regardless of whether it is true or not, she has a passive 25% buff to movement speed and agility, and appears to be a bit hardier than her peers with 20% more HP.
  
• El Beso de la Doncella- A kiss is such a simple gesture, but one that can be effective in its purpose. In this case, the kiss is supposed to completely infatuate and seduce an opponent for a limited amount of time; how long that is depends on the rank of the mage. Typically, the effect is applied via a kiss on the cheek, although the lips and forehead are also viable targets--anywhere else, and the magic does not take hold of Kistiñe's opponent. (Active ability, may only be used once per thread. Infatuation lasts 3 posts on mages of equal rank, with one post subtracted until the duration is equal to one; one post of duration may be added for each rank beneath the user's. Infatuated targets will find it difficult, but not impossible, to attack the user for the duration of the effect.)
  
• Rasgos Angelicales***- This ability allows Kistiñe to create a pair of angel wings, made from light. These wings may be used for flight inside and outside of battle for a limited amount of time, but afterwards take a long time to recharge. Her movements also seem to be more graceful, with many motions performed with ease. (Wings last for six posts and allow Kistiñe to fly before disintegrating, with seven posts of recharge; adds a passive 25% speed buff regardless if the wings are being used).
  

Halo Damage Calculation:

Signature Spells:

D-rank Spells:

C Rank Spells:

Corvus wrote:La Doncella de los Vientos Angélicos

Primary Magic: La Doncella de los Vientos Angélicos (Maiden of the Angelic Winds)
Secondary Magic: N/A
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: How ironic that a woman such as Kistiñe would develop a magic such as La Doncella de los Vientos Angélicos. It is a magic that would make one think of angels, or perhaps a priestess--not a flirt and adulterer. Did her time as a bird cause some kind of an internal change to bring out a holy nature in her magical abilities, or was it something else? Her family ties to the clergy? Whatever the case may be, it seems as though her magic has become more potent in general than before.

This magic is intended to be able to take on the duties of offense and support. The halo “chakrams” that can be generated do very little damage on their own, and thus require additional spells to make them of use; however, the chakrams are not the only avenue by which magic can be used. Certain spells are completely separate from the glowing white discs, while some are completely reliant on it. Many of the spells for the halos are meant to cause status effects on enemies--there are exceptions, of course--and spells that are not reliant on the halos can either cause direct damage to an opponent or act as buffs for Kistiñe's attributes.

Strengths:

• Offensive spells deal 20% more damage to dark or unholy beings. Define this by rank, so provide a percentage for each rank
  
• Healing spells restore 20% more HP to holy or divine beings. This should be defined by rank
  
• Chakrams provide a constant source of damage output if the user is unable to cast spells at any given time.
  

Weaknesses:

• Healing spells restore 20% less HP or MP to dark or unholy beings. Should be defined by rank, so provide percentages for each rank
  
• Offensive spells deal 20% less damage to holy or divine beings. Same as above.
  
• Damage from spells is (typically) broken up with multiple chakrams, usually in groups of two or three, making it difficult to cast a spell to its full effect.
  
• Statuses rely on the chakrams being able to hit their targets.
  

Lineage:

Aspect of Jupiter:

Unique Abilities:

• Halo Chakram Summon- La Doncella relies heavily on this ability, as it summons the rings of energy that many spells rely on to hit their intended target. By themselves, the chakrams glow white and deal the user's base melee damage at a given rank (max S rank). Unless otherwise stated in the spell description, normal spell damage is combined with that of the chakrams. (Active, no cooldown.)
  
• Wind Manipulation- Kistiñe retains her ability to manipulate the winds, thus allowing her to cast wind spells if need be.
  
• Baile de la Ninfa- A family legend says that one of Kistiñe's ancestors was a nymph; regardless of whether it is true or not, she has a passive 25% buff to movement speed and agility, at the cost of having 25% less health than her peers.
  

A Word on Damage Calculation:

   
Spells:

uno:

dos:

tres:

cuatro:

Original:

Original:

La Doncella del Viento Angélico

Primary Magic: La Doncella del Viento Angélico (Maiden of the Angelic Wind)
Secondary Magic: N/A
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: How ironic that a woman such as Kistiñe would develop a magic such as La Doncella del Viento Angélico. It is a magic that would make one think of angels, or perhaps a priestess--not a flirt and adulterer. Did her time as a bird cause some kind of an internal change to bring out a holy nature in her magical abilities, or was it something else? Her family ties to the clergy? Whatever the case may be, it seems as though her magic has become more potent in general than before.

This magic is intended to be able to take on the duties of offense and support. The halo “chakrams” that can be generated do very little damage on their own, and thus require additional spells to make them of use; however, the chakrams are not the only avenue by which magic can be used. Certain spells are completely separate from the glowing white discs, while some are completely reliant on it. Many of the spells for the halos are meant to cause status effects on enemies--there are exceptions, of course--and spells that are not reliant on the halos can either cause direct damage to an opponent or act as buffs for Kistiñe's attributes.

Strengths:

• Offensive spells deal 20% more damage to dark or unholy beings.
  
• Healing spells restore 20% more HP to holy or divine beings.
  
• Chakrams provide a constant source of damage output if the user is unable to cast spells at any given time.
  

Weaknesses:

• Healing spells restore 20% less HP or MP to dark or unholy beings.
  
• Offensive spells deal 20% less damage to holy or divine beings.
  
• Damage from spells is (typically) broken up with multiple chakrams, usually in groups of two or three, making it difficult to cast a spell to its full effect.
  
• Statuses rely on the chakrams being able to hit their targets.
  

Lineage:

Aspect of Jupiter:

Unique Abilities:

• Halo Chakram Summon- La Doncella relies heavily on this ability, as it summons the rings of energy that many spells rely on to hit their intended target. By themselves, the chakrams glow white and deal the user's base melee damage at a given rank (max S rank). Unless otherwise stated in the spell description, normal spell damage is combined with that of the chakrams. (Active, no cooldown.)
  
• Wind Manipulation- Kistiñe retains her ability to manipulate the winds, thus allowing her to cast wind spells if need be.
  
• Baile de la Ninfa- A family legend says that one of Kistiñe's ancestors was a nymph; regardless of whether it is true or not, she has a passive 25% buff to movement speed and agility, and appears to be a bit hardier than her peers with 20% more HP.
  
• El Beso de la Doncella- A kiss is such a simple gesture, but one that can be effective in its purpose. In this case, the kiss is supposed to completely infatuate and seduce an opponent for a limited amount of time; how long that is depends on the rank of the mage. Typically, the effect is applied via a kiss on the cheek, although the lips and forehead are also viable targets--anywhere else, and the magic does not take hold of Kistiñe's opponent. (Active ability, may only be used once per thread. Infatuation lasts 3 posts on mages of equal rank, with one post subtracted until the duration is equal to one; one post of duration may be added for each rank beneath the user's. Infatuated targets will find it difficult, but not impossible, to attack the user for the duration of the effect.)
  

Halo Damage Calculation:

   
Spells:

Signature Spells:

D-rank Spells:

C Rank Spells:

First and foremost, why must I put damage values in percentages versus writing out the HP values. C-rank damage is equivalent to 40HP (w/o charge-up or other factors taken into account), and all the damage values I have written are identical or lesser than to what you have suggested in percentages. I see no point in these edits.

Secondly, why does it matter if I put the flat damage instead of "Two C-rank spells/Four D-rank spells"? They are equivalent in value, so I see no reason for this to have been pointed out.

Please note, I am not intending to be rude or argumentative with this post: I am merely curious about some of the reasoning behind these specific edits before I continue with them.

Kistiñe Ibáñez wrote:La Doncella del Viento Angélico

Primary Magic: La Doncella del Viento Angélico (Maiden of the Angelic Wind)
Secondary Magic: N/A
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: How ironic that a woman such as Kistiñe would develop a magic such as La Doncella del Viento Angélico. It is a magic that would make one think of angels, or perhaps a priestess--not a flirt and adulterer. Did her time as a bird cause some kind of an internal change to bring out a holy nature in her magical abilities, or was it something else? Her family ties to the clergy? Whatever the case may be, it seems as though her magic has become more potent in general than before.

This magic is intended to be able to take on the duties of offense and support. The halo “chakrams” that can be generated do very little damage on their own, and thus require additional spells to make them of use; however, the chakrams are not the only avenue by which magic can be used. Certain spells are completely separate from the glowing white discs, while some are completely reliant on it. Many of the spells for the halos are meant to cause status effects on enemies--there are exceptions, of course--and spells that are not reliant on the halos can either cause direct damage to an opponent or act as buffs for Kistiñe's attributes.

Strengths:

• Offensive spells deal 20% more damage to dark or unholy beings.
  
• Healing spells restore 20% more HP to holy or divine beings.
  
• Chakrams provide a constant source of damage output if the user is unable to cast spells at any given time.
  

Weaknesses:

• Healing spells restore 20% less HP or MP to dark or unholy beings.
  
• Offensive spells deal 20% less damage to holy or divine beings.
  
• Damage from spells is (typically) broken up with multiple chakrams, usually in groups of two or three, making it difficult to cast a spell to its full effect.
  
• Statuses rely on the chakrams being able to hit their targets.
  

Lineage:

Aspect of Jupiter:

Unique Abilities:

• Halo Chakram Summon- La Doncella relies heavily on this ability, as it summons the rings of energy that many spells rely on to hit their intended target. By themselves, the chakrams glow white and deal the user's base melee damage at a given rank (max S rank). Unless otherwise stated in the spell description, normal spell damage is combined with that of the chakrams. (Active, no cooldown.)
  
• Wind Manipulation- Kistiñe retains her ability to manipulate the winds, thus allowing her to cast wind spells if need be.
  
• Baile de la Ninfa- A family legend says that one of Kistiñe's ancestors was a nymph; regardless of whether it is true or not, she has a passive 25% buff to movement speed and agility, and appears to be a bit hardier than her peers with 20% more HP.
  
• El Beso de la Doncella- A kiss is such a simple gesture, but one that can be effective in its purpose. In this case, the kiss is supposed to completely infatuate and seduce an opponent for a limited amount of time; how long that is depends on the rank of the mage. Typically, the effect is applied via a kiss on the cheek, although the lips and forehead are also viable targets--anywhere else, and the magic does not take hold of Kistiñe's opponent. (Active ability, may only be used once per thread. Infatuation lasts 3 posts on mages of equal rank, with one post subtracted until the duration is equal to one; one post of duration may be added for each rank beneath the user's. Infatuated targets will find it difficult, but not impossible, to attack the user for the duration of the effect.)
  

Halo Damage Calculation:

   
Spells:

Signature Spells:

D-rank Spells:

C Rank Spells:

Kistiñe Ibáñez wrote:La Doncella del Viento Angélico

Primary Magic: La Doncella del Viento Angélico (Maiden of the Angelic Wind)
Secondary Magic: N/A
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: How ironic that a woman such as Kistiñe would develop a magic such as La Doncella del Viento Angélico. It is a magic that would make one think of angels, or perhaps a priestess--not a flirt and adulterer. Did her time as a bird cause some kind of an internal change to bring out a holy nature in her magical abilities, or was it something else? Her family ties to the clergy? Whatever the case may be, it seems as though her magic has become more potent in general than before.

This magic is intended to be able to take on the duties of offense and support. The halo “chakrams” that can be generated do very little damage on their own, and thus require additional spells to make them of use; however, the chakrams are not the only avenue by which magic can be used. Certain spells are completely separate from the glowing white discs, while some are completely reliant on it. Many of the spells for the halos are meant to cause status effects on enemies--there are exceptions, of course--and spells that are not reliant on the halos can either cause direct damage to an opponent or act as buffs for Kistiñe's attributes.

Strengths:

• Offensive spells deal 20% more damage to dark or unholy beings.
  
• Healing spells restore 20% more HP to holy or divine beings.
  
• Chakrams provide a constant source of damage output if the user is unable to cast spells at any given time.
  

Weaknesses:

• Healing spells restore 20% less HP or MP to dark or unholy beings.
  
• Offensive spells deal 20% less damage to holy or divine beings.
  
• Damage from spells is (typically) broken up with multiple chakrams, usually in groups of two or three, making it difficult to cast a spell to its full effect.
  
• Statuses rely on the chakrams being able to hit their targets.
  

Lineage:

Aspect of Jupiter:

Unique Abilities:

• Halo Chakram Summon- La Doncella relies heavily on this ability, as it summons the rings of energy that many spells rely on to hit their intended target. By themselves, the chakrams glow white and deal the user's base melee damage at a given rank (max S rank). Unless otherwise stated in the spell description, normal spell damage is combined with that of the chakrams. (Active, no cooldown.)
  
• Wind Manipulation- Kistiñe retains her ability to manipulate the winds, thus allowing her to cast wind spells if need be.
  
• Baile de la Ninfa- A family legend says that one of Kistiñe's ancestors was a nymph; regardless of whether it is true or not, she has a passive 25% buff to movement speed and agility, and appears to be a bit hardier than her peers with 20% more HP.
  
• El Beso de la Doncella- A kiss is such a simple gesture, but one that can be effective in its purpose. In this case, the kiss is supposed to completely infatuate and seduce an opponent for a limited amount of time; how long that is depends on the rank of the mage. Typically, the effect is applied via a kiss on the cheek, although the lips and forehead are also viable targets--anywhere else, and the magic does not take hold of Kistiñe's opponent. (Active ability, may only be used once per thread. Infatuation lasts 3 posts on mages of equal rank, with one post subtracted until the duration is equal to one; one post of duration may be added for each rank beneath the user's. Infatuated targets will find it difficult, but not impossible, to attack the user for the duration of the effect.)
  

Halo Damage Calculation:

   
Spells:

Signature Spells:

D-rank Spells:

C Rank Spells:

Anastasia Isayev wrote:Howdy!  Anastasia here.
About your last ability, I'll be willing to allow you to also have flight with those wings during said duration if you'd like.  

Or if you don't want flight, I'll allow you to have up to 40% bonus speed while they are active.