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    Indiana Jones
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    Post by Indiana Jones 4th March 2014, 3:46 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Void Break
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:  A place of desolation and horror, the void has spewed forth countless of horrific beasts and creatures, though never had a being gained the voids power, by being taken there. Though it happened and the being absorbed the power, which fused with his magical power, creating a magic called Void Break. 

    Void Break uses the evil powers of the void plains. The magic is capable of incredible feats, causing the user to deal massive damage during a very small gap of time. Void Break covers a wide range of attack types and makes the user more durable overall. The magic has no element of it's own, but is considered one of the most unholy substances in the world. Void Break has really powerful combo potential, most of the spells work really well together with each other and there is great synergy with abilities. 

    Void Break itself has a green or purple color to it's spells. Sometime black color sinks in as well. The magic has an evil aura all around it when in use and even when not in use. It can be felt by anyone, even the user, who is the source of the aura. The magic itself causes the user's eyes take a purplish glow and the veins of the user will also start to glow in a bright purple light.  

    Strengths:

    • Combo powerhouse: Void Break's spells and abilities form combos incredibly well.
    • No Element: Has no real element, so lacks elemental weaknesses.
    • Destruction: The magic is highly destructive.
    • Constant Damage: The magic can keep putting out damage constantly, as most spells are duration based and not instant.

    Weaknesses:

    • Elemental Strength: As there is no element, the user lacks any kind of elemental strength/resistance.
    • Holy stuff: Holy stuff seems to sting more though, giving a 25% damage increase to magic, that is purely holy.
    • No Utility or support: The magic provides no backup to the allies.
    • Allies, fear me: All damage can hit allies, including all AOE spells.
    • The terror, that's inside of me: The magic causes the user to be driven mad while in combat, making the user attack his allies or kill innocent bystanders.

    Lineage:
    Caine's Descent:
    Description: Long ago there were two brothers who were loved by the gods their name was Abel and Caine. Everything was alright since both were content with what they had, a demon jealous of the affection these two mortals receive from deities decided to meddle with their lives. It decided to create a rift between the brothers love. The rift cause rivalry between both brothers and with the aide of the demon, Caine won and accidentally killed his brother in the process. The gods learned what Caine and the demon had done so they cursed them both. The demon Shamashu and Caine were to share the same body, giving Caine longevity in exchange for the thirst for blood, and the demon only allowed to roam free only once Caine is feeds upon blood.
    Ability: Gives the user the ability Bloodrage an ability that transforms the user into a demon with tremendous strength and the ability to heal serious wounds rapidly upon consumption of blood. During this state, the user becomes insane, and will attack anything they see.
    Usage: Once per thread the caster can use Bloodrage. Bloodrage starts upon consumption of blood and lasts for 4 posts. Cant cast spells while in demon mode. User regenerates half of his health within 3 posts, and has increased physical strength by 75%.

    Demon form's look:

    Unique Abilities:

    • Nothing stops the void: Every 3rd spell that is cast or every 4th attack made with a duration type of spell, ignores all armor.
    • OVERPOWER:The user can overpower one of their spells, but only spells that have an instant cast or then the first attack of a duration spell. Overpower doubles the damage of that spell. Cool down is 6 posts.
    • I AM FOREVER: The user of this magic is immortal by any means. If they are killed, either in battle or by some problem, they can regenerate from a singular cell. But this takes time and won't happen in the same thread, for that thread they can be treated as dead. During the regeneration, which usually takes a few threads or well, a couple of weeks ic time, the user's body is building itself back, so flesh can be seen regrowing. As the skeleton regenerates first, they can still be effective in combat during it.  
    • Void Coated Body: The user takes reduced damage depending on the rank of the hit taken.
      For 2 ranks lower: 40% damage reduction
      1 rank lower: 30% damage reduction
      Equal rank: 20% damage reduction
      1 rank higher: 10% damage reduction
      Anyone higher: Nothing.


    Signature Spell:

    D-rank Spells:

    C-rank Spells:

    Do not grade the B-rank spells, i want to keep these for when i reach B-rank. They are just here from my previous magic.

    B-rank Spells:


    Last edited by Indiana Jones on 5th July 2016, 7:23 am; edited 87 times in total
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    Void Break Empty Re: Void Break

    Post by Indiana Jones 23rd August 2014, 8:26 am

    The revamp has been finished, basically everything is new. Also the 2nd post is just there for reference for me, so that i will know the cool-downs and whatnot for the threads i have going atm.

    But bump.


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    Post by Felicity 24th August 2014, 9:36 pm

    Indiana Jones wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Metallic God Slayer
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    God Slayer Magic (滅神魔法 Metsujin Mahō) is a form of lost magic, that is said to have been granted to the humans by the gods. This magic however, was lost, and forgotten, having nothing about it's origin or how to obtain it, only few chosen ones may control it. Every type of god slayer magic is restricted to a single element. The element is stronger than the one dragon slayers use, but god slayer elements are always black in color. Though god slayer magic is equivalent to it's counter part, the demon slayer magic.

    Metallic God Slayer magic was thought to Indar, by his grandfather, the Metallic God Ombrias. Due to this Indar has the genes of the Metallic God in him and has the control of the Metallic God Slayer magic as well. This creates a deadly combination, as Indar can tap into all the secrets of this magic and can use it like it was a literal part of him.

    The metal, that this magic uses, is god metal, originating from the metal god and from his heaven. This metal has a shadowy glow to it when Indar uses it, otherwise it's a stainless steel kinda color, with seemingly no imperfections what so ever. It is one of the toughest metals ever recorded and can't be melted with fire, unless it reaches incredible temperatures. The metal also is unstable in earthland and thanks to that can go from liquid to solid at will of the user. When the metal forms any kind of weapon or object, blue or green lights appear on it, like energy in the object. With the shadowy glow they are quite easy to see. When anything is formed with the metal, it doesn't just appear. Liquid form of the metal will flow out from small cuts on the user's arms or legs, depending where the spell is cast from and will then form the weapon or object while becoming solid. The process is incredibly quick and can't usually be disrupted, though the disruption is possible.

    The magic itself is considered unholy in nature, though being from a holy origin, if you can consider the metallic god holy. It has a unholy feel whenever it is used and a feeling that it shouldn't belong in this world. It feels alien. The magic is highly destructive and brutal in it's nature and can't really be considered flashy or beautiful. It was meant to kill, destroy and annihilate and that's what it will do. Some great description here; its always nice to see the personal touch xD

    Strengths:

    • Annihilation: Highly destructive in it's nature.
    • Hit me: Can be incredibly defensive, so the user can take multiple hits.
    • I can go for a long time: Most duration spells have a high duration, making them very efficient.
    • Buff city: The magic has quite a few buffs for it's user and can make regular hand to hand combat favorable to the user.
    • A god as a god slayer: Due to being of godly origin, Indar has amazing control over the magic.


    Weaknesses:

    • With great duration, come great cool-downs: The spells have fairly high cool-downs, which usually are a huge weakness.
    • Venom = Bad: Anyone with a magic that utilizes poison or venom, deals 25% extra damage and one hit from a venom/poison spell can knock down a duration of a spell by one post. This weakness also goes for any corrosion type spell or magic. 
    • Magma = Very Bad: Magma is the greatest elemental weakness to the metal. It can easily melt it and deal extra damage. Magma deals 50% more damage to Indar and lower duration's by 2 posts.
    • In your face: The magic is close ranged most of the time, with the exception of a few spells. This creates fighting at long range very difficult.
    • Heavyweight: Spells of this magic, add weight when used, due to being made of metal and thus heavy. This causes gravity magic and other magic that uses weight against the user, to deal 25% more damage. It does not effect the speed of the user though.
    • No can eat: Can't consume their own metal or the metal of the metallic demon slayer.
    • Lightning Rod: As the user has a massive amount of metal in their body, all lightning magic has a much higher chance of hitting him and makes dodging lightning or electricity much harder. 


    Abilities/Powers:

    • God Force: After consuming enough metal, the user can enter god force. While in god force, the user has increased strength and durability. Also spells consume no mp. God Force lasts for 7 posts and when the user comes out of god force, he/she has 10% mp remaining. 5%, mate.
    • Enhanced senses: Being a God Slayer, the user has enhanced sense of hearing, smell and sight.
    • I will resist: The user has a big resistance to fire and lightning magic and a smaller resistance to wind and water magic. I think you just... messed this up. Shouldn't it be like, more resistance to water / wind and less resistance to fire / lightning? Reason is, you can block water and wind (which posses the property of fluidity) and act as an obstruction for them. However, metal is a good conductor of lightning and fire (due to less resistance). This is what I feel, but you can debate this if you feel like.

      Lightning and Fire resistance:
      D-rank magic: 60%
      C-rank magic: 50%
      B-rank magic: 40%
      A-rank magic: 30%
      S-rank magic: 20%
      H-rank magic: 5%

      Wind and Water resistance:
      D-rank magic: 40%
      C-rank magic: 30%
      B-rank magic: 20%
      A-rank magic: 10%
      S-rank magic: No Resistance
      H-rank magic: No Resistance
    • Consuming of metal: The user can consume any source of metal, expect demon slayer metal or his own. When consumed, the metal restores the user's mp, depending on the amount of metal consumed.
    • Iron Man: The user has a resistance to falling damage or things falling on them and depending on their weight at the time, a small resistance to knock backs. These resistances come from the fact, that Indar's skeleton is infused with the god metal passively.

      Fall damage resistance: 50%

      Things falling on the user resistance: 40% (Only non magical things count, for example rubble.)

      Knock back resistance:
      With no spell up: 0%
      1 spell up: 10%
      2 spells up 25%
      3 spells up 40%
      (Only spells that manipulate the users body, for example Ravager Blades, count for this.)
    • Overdrive: The user makes the metal in their body move around and cause reactions with the organic tissue, causing a cleansing pulse in the body of the user that removes debuffs. It wipes off all debuffs caused by spells of the same rank or lower, knocks off 50% of the duration of all debuffs added by one rank higher spells. If there is a difference of more than one rank higher, nothing will happen. Overdrive costs 5% of the user's hp to cast, as it uses up tissue from the user's body. This can only be used twice per thread and has an 8 post cool-down.
    • Ironed Skin: The user's skin has melded with the the metal flowing in their body and created a sort of protective shell, that isn't very powerful. It blocks weak weapons and lower ranked strong weapons from making cuts into the user's body, blocking 20% of the damage they do. Also the impact from people's fists is reduced by 30%, aka the user feels them less, though he still takes full damage. 
    • Increased Stats: The user has 50% increased strength and durability. 


    Signature Spell:

    D-rank spells.:

    C-rank spells.:

    B-rank spells.:

    This has been balanced quite nicely. Its just a very few spells that need attention and that one ability that I'm a bit unsure about. Bump when you're done or just Skype me. Edits are in THIS color.


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    Age : 28
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    First Skill: Ragnarök
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    Third Skill:

    Void Break Empty Re: Void Break

    Post by Indiana Jones 25th August 2014, 12:53 am

    Bump, changes have been made. : D


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    Post by Felicity 25th August 2014, 5:15 am

    After discussing this on Skype for one last time, I deem this as...

    Void Break 4ptemh


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    Post by Cirven 12th October 2014, 12:53 pm

    Unlocked for changes.


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    Post by Indiana Jones 16th November 2014, 7:24 am

    Changes done finally, took me over a month.


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    Void Break Empty Re: Void Break

    Post by Indiana Jones 16th November 2014, 2:25 pm

    Bumping again, as i made some changes and removed one C-rank spell.


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    Second Skill: Aphyon Jivven
    Third Skill: Vir'ednith

    Void Break Empty Re: Void Break

    Post by Cirven 16th November 2014, 3:30 pm

    *will review more after his brain is not fried*


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    Cirven
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    Devil's Advocate

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    Age : 35
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Devil's Zeal
    Second Skill: Aphyon Jivven
    Third Skill: Vir'ednith

    Void Break Empty Re: Void Break

    Post by Cirven 18th November 2014, 5:13 pm

    *runs in, trips and skids on his face the rest of the way in. He then gets up like nothing happened.*


    Yo Indi, reviewing now!

    Edits are in THIS color.


    Indiana Jones wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Void Break
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:  A place of desolation and horror, the void has spewed forth countless of horrific beasts and creatures, though never had a being gained the voids power, by being taken there. Though it happened and the being absorbed the power, which fused with his magical power, creating a magic called Void Break. 

    Void Break uses the evil powers of the void plains. The magic is capable of incredible feats, causing the user to deal massive damage during a very small gap of time. Void Break covers a wide range of attack types and makes the user more durable overall. The magic has no element of it's own, but is considered one of the most unholy substances in the world. Void Break has really powerful combo potential, most of the spells work really well together with each other and there is great synergy with abilities. 

    Void Break itself has a green or purple color to it's spells. Sometime black color sinks in as well. The magic has an evil aura all around it when in use and even when not in use. It can be felt by anyone, even the user, who is the source of the aura. The magic itself causes the user's eyes take a purplish glow and the veins of the user will also start to glow in a bright purple light.  

    Innate Abilities:

    • Ability to talk in the language of the Void. (Ignore this, it is not a thing.)
    • Ability to sense any kind of Void relate objects/creatures nearby.(Ignore this, it is not a thing.)

    Aura Type: The user's aura also releases a purple haze into the battlefield, in the radius of the aura burst. The haze stays for 2 posts and blocks vision of everyone but the user.  (Ignore this, it is not a thing.) Lower the blocked vision to a 20% vision impairment instead. These are only minor effects.
    Strengths:

    • Combo powerhouse: Void Break's spells and abilities form combos incredibly well.
    • No Element: Has no real element, so lacks elemental weaknesses.
    • Destruction: The magic is highly destructive.
    • High damage in a small window: Can deal massive damage in a very short span of time.

    Weaknesses:

    • Elemental Strength: As there is no element, the user lacks any kind of elemental strength/resistance.
    • Holy stuff: Holy stuff seems to sting more though, giving a 25% damage increase to magic, that is purely holy.
    • No Utility or support: The magic provides no backup to the allies.
    • Allies, fear me: All damage can hit allies, including all AOE spells.
    • The terror, that's inside of me: The magic causes the user to be driven mad while in combat, making the user attack his allies or kill innocent bystanders.

    Lineage:
    Caine's Descent:
    Description: Long ago there were two brothers who were loved by the gods their name was Abel and Caine. Everything was alright since both were content with what they had, a demon jealous of the affection these two mortals receive from deities decided to meddle with their lives. It decided to create a rift between the brothers love. The rift cause rivalry between both brothers and with the aide of the demon, Caine won and accidentally killed his brother in the process. The gods learned what Caine and the demon had done so they cursed them both. The demon Shamashu and Caine were to share the same body, giving Caine longevity in exchange for the thirst for blood, and the demon only allowed to roam free only once Caine is feeds upon blood.
    Ability: Gives the user the ability Bloodrage an ability that transforms the user into a demon with tremendous strength and the ability to heal serious wounds rapidly upon consumption of blood. During this state, the user becomes insane, and will attack anything they see.
    Usage: Once per thread the caster can use Bloodrage. Bloodrage starts upon consumption of blood and lasts for 4 posts. Cant cast spells while in demon mode. User regenerates half of his health within 3 posts, and has increased physical strength by 75%.

    Demon form's look:

    Unique Abilities:

    • Nothing stops the void: Every 3rd spell that is cast or every 4th attack made with a duration type of spell, ignores all armor.
    • My poison, wait, is it poison, ah whatever: Every spell or attack applies a damage over time effect, that does a rank worth of damage over 2 posts. The rank of damage depends on the spell used for this. When a person gets affected by this, the duration can not be extended and they are immune to the effect for 3 posts after the duration ends.
    • OVERPOWER: 2 times per thread, the user can overpower one of their spells, but only spells that have an instant cast or then the first attack of a duration spell. Overpower doubles the damage of that spell. This needs more of a weakness in order to use this. Also you should add a CD between uses.
    • I AM FOREVER: The user of this magic is immortal by age or illness.
      Meaning that he can only die in battle or by execution, an accident would kill him as well.  
    • The power of isolation: When engaging a target, who has no one around them in a 200 feet radius, Void Break gains a 15% damage bonus to all of it's damaging spells. Lower this amount to 10%.


    Signature Spell:

    D-rank Spells:

    C-rank Spells:

    B-rank Spells:


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    Void Break Empty Re: Void Break

    Post by Indiana Jones 19th November 2014, 7:01 am

    Bump.

    The passives are both still passive. And SILENCE is going to stay at 2 for B and 3 for C and lower. I added another weakness to balance this out.


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    Devil's Advocate

    Moderator- VIP- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Guild Master- Demon Slayer- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : The Devil Jester
    Position : None
    Posts : 2448
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Age : 35
    Experience : 833,050

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Devil's Zeal
    Second Skill: Aphyon Jivven
    Third Skill: Vir'ednith

    Void Break Empty Re: Void Break

    Post by Cirven 19th November 2014, 1:52 pm

    Approved.

    Void Break Kaito_zps67bf947f


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    Void Break Empty Re: Void Break

    Post by Chaotic Rumble 23rd November 2014, 3:06 pm

    Unlocked and moved upon request


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    Void Break Empty Re: Void Break

    Post by Felicity 4th December 2014, 12:00 am

    - Decrease the HP received from Consume (D Rank) to 10%.
    - You're missing one weakness for Blood Pact (D Rank)

    And that's it. I almost feel bad to make a post for such small edits, since otherwise this seems like a brilliantly balanced magic xD

    Bump / Skype when done.


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    Void Break Empty Re: Void Break

    Post by Indiana Jones 6th December 2014, 6:30 am

    Bump, Changes done : D


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    Void Break Empty Re: Void Break

    Post by Felicity 6th December 2014, 6:37 am

    You're blessed by the almighty me.

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    Void Break Empty Re: Void Break

    Post by King Elyx 2nd July 2016, 6:50 am

    Indiana Jones wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Void Break
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:  A place of desolation and horror, the void has spewed forth countless of horrific beasts and creatures, though never had a being gained the voids power, by being taken there. Though it happened and the being absorbed the power, which fused with his magical power, creating a magic called Void Break. 

    Void Break uses the evil powers of the void plains. The magic is capable of incredible feats, causing the user to deal massive damage during a very small gap of time. Void Break covers a wide range of attack types and makes the user more durable overall. The magic has no element of it's own, but is considered one of the most unholy substances in the world. Void Break has really powerful combo potential, most of the spells work really well together with each other and there is great synergy with abilities. 

    Void Break itself has a green or purple color to it's spells. Sometime black color sinks in as well. The magic has an evil aura all around it when in use and even when not in use. It can be felt by anyone, even the user, who is the source of the aura. The magic itself causes the user's eyes take a purplish glow and the veins of the user will also start to glow in a bright purple light.  

    Innate Abilities:

    • Ability to talk in the language of the Void.
    • Ability to sense any kind of Void relate objects/creatures nearby.

    Aura Type: The user's aura also releases a purple haze into the battlefield, in the radius of the aura burst. The haze stays for 2 posts and blocks 20% vision of everyone but the user.
    Strengths:

    • Combo powerhouse: Void Break's spells and abilities form combos incredibly well.
    • No Element: Has no real element, so lacks elemental weaknesses.
    • Destruction: The magic is highly destructive.
    • High damage in a small window: Can deal massive damage in a very short span of time.

    Weaknesses:

    • Elemental Strength: As there is no element, the user lacks any kind of elemental strength/resistance.
    • Holy stuff: Holy stuff seems to sting more though, giving a 25% damage increase to magic, that is purely holy.
    • No Utility or support: The magic provides no backup to the allies.
    • Allies, fear me: All damage can hit allies, including all AOE spells.
    • The terror, that's inside of me: The magic causes the user to be driven mad while in combat, making the user attack his allies or kill innocent bystanders.

    Lineage:
    Caine's Descent:
    Description: Long ago there were two brothers who were loved by the gods their name was Abel and Caine. Everything was alright since both were content with what they had, a demon jealous of the affection these two mortals receive from deities decided to meddle with their lives. It decided to create a rift between the brothers love. The rift cause rivalry between both brothers and with the aide of the demon, Caine won and accidentally killed his brother in the process. The gods learned what Caine and the demon had done so they cursed them both. The demon Shamashu and Caine were to share the same body, giving Caine longevity in exchange for the thirst for blood, and the demon only allowed to roam free only once Caine is feeds upon blood.
    Ability: Gives the user the ability Bloodrage an ability that transforms the user into a demon with tremendous strength and the ability to heal serious wounds rapidly upon consumption of blood. During this state, the user becomes insane, and will attack anything they see.
    Usage: Once per thread the caster can use Bloodrage. Bloodrage starts upon consumption of blood and lasts for 4 posts. Cant cast spells while in demon mode. User regenerates half of his health within 3 posts, and has increased physical strength by 75%.

    Demon form's look:

    Unique Abilities:

    • Nothing stops the void: Every 3rd spell that is cast or every 4th attack made with a duration type of spell, ignores all armor.
    • My poison, wait, is it poison, ah whatever: Every spell or attack applies a damage over time effect, that does a rank worth of damage over 2 posts. The rank of damage depends on the spell used for this. When a person gets affected by this, the duration can not be extended and they are immune to the effect for 3 posts after the duration ends.
    • OVERPOWER: 2 times per thread, the user can overpower one of their spells, but only spells that have an instant cast or then the first attack of a duration spell. Overpower doubles the damage of that spell. Cool down is 4 posts.
    • I AM FOREVER: The user of this magic is immortal by age or illness.
      Meaning that he can only die in battle or by execution, an accident would kill him as well.  
    • Void Coated Body: The user takes reduced damage depending on the rank of the hit taken.
      For 2 ranks lower: 40% damage reduction
      1 rank lower: 30% damage reduction
      Equal rank: 20% damage reduction
      1 rank higher: 10% damage reduction
      Anyone higher: Nothing.


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    D-rank Spells:

    C-rank Spells:

    B-rank Spells:

    Unlocked at the Request of the User
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    Void Break Empty Re: Void Break

    Post by Indiana Jones 5th July 2016, 7:25 am

    Edited. Removed one passive and changed ''I AM FOREVER''.

    Moved Void Rift from signature to C-rank. Added in a new signature and two new D-ranks, these being Void Arm and Void Mark. Everything else is the same and wasn't touched since the last approval.


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    Void Break Empty Re: Void Break

    Post by King Elyx 6th July 2016, 9:36 am

    Indiana Jones wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Void Break
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:  A place of desolation and horror, the void has spewed forth countless of horrific beasts and creatures, though never had a being gained the voids power, by being taken there. Though it happened and the being absorbed the power, which fused with his magical power, creating a magic called Void Break. 

    Void Break uses the evil powers of the void plains. The magic is capable of incredible feats, causing the user to deal massive damage during a very small gap of time. Void Break covers a wide range of attack types and makes the user more durable overall. The magic has no element of it's own, but is considered one of the most unholy substances in the world. Void Break has really powerful combo potential, most of the spells work really well together with each other and there is great synergy with abilities. 

    Void Break itself has a green or purple color to it's spells. Sometime black color sinks in as well. The magic has an evil aura all around it when in use and even when not in use. It can be felt by anyone, even the user, who is the source of the aura. The magic itself causes the user's eyes take a purplish glow and the veins of the user will also start to glow in a bright purple light.  

    Strengths:

    • Combo powerhouse: Void Break's spells and abilities form combos incredibly well.
    • No Element: Has no real element, so lacks elemental weaknesses.
    • Destruction: The magic is highly destructive.
    • Constant Damage: The magic can keep putting out damage constantly, as most spells are duration based and not instant.

    Weaknesses:

    • Elemental Strength: As there is no element, the user lacks any kind of elemental strength/resistance.
    • Holy stuff: Holy stuff seems to sting more though, giving a 25% damage increase to magic, that is purely holy.
    • No Utility or support: The magic provides no backup to the allies.
    • Allies, fear me: All damage can hit allies, including all AOE spells.
    • The terror, that's inside of me: The magic causes the user to be driven mad while in combat, making the user attack his allies or kill innocent bystanders.

    Lineage:
    Caine's Descent:
    Description: Long ago there were two brothers who were loved by the gods their name was Abel and Caine. Everything was alright since both were content with what they had, a demon jealous of the affection these two mortals receive from deities decided to meddle with their lives. It decided to create a rift between the brothers love. The rift cause rivalry between both brothers and with the aide of the demon, Caine won and accidentally killed his brother in the process. The gods learned what Caine and the demon had done so they cursed them both. The demon Shamashu and Caine were to share the same body, giving Caine longevity in exchange for the thirst for blood, and the demon only allowed to roam free only once Caine is feeds upon blood.
    Ability: Gives the user the ability Bloodrage an ability that transforms the user into a demon with tremendous strength and the ability to heal serious wounds rapidly upon consumption of blood. During this state, the user becomes insane, and will attack anything they see.
    Usage: Once per thread the caster can use Bloodrage. Bloodrage starts upon consumption of blood and lasts for 4 posts. Cant cast spells while in demon mode. User regenerates half of his health within 3 posts, and has increased physical strength by 75%.

    Demon form's look:

    Unique Abilities:

    • Nothing stops the void: Every 3rd spell that is cast or every 4th attack made with a duration type of spell, ignores all armor.
    • OVERPOWER:The user can overpower one of their spells, but only spells that have an instant cast or then the first attack of a duration spell. Overpower doubles the damage of that spell. Cool down is 6 posts.
    • I AM FOREVER: The user of this magic is immortal by any means. If they are killed, either in battle or by some problem, they can regenerate from a singular cell. But this takes time and won't happen in the same thread, for that thread they can be treated as dead. During the regeneration, which usually takes a few threads or well, a couple of weeks ic time, the user's body is building itself back, so flesh can be seen regrowing. As the skeleton regenerates first, they can still be effective in combat during it.  
    • Void Coated Body: The user takes reduced damage depending on the rank of the hit taken.
      For 2 ranks lower: 40% damage reduction
      1 rank lower: 30% damage reduction
      Equal rank: 20% damage reduction
      1 rank higher: 10% damage reduction
      Anyone higher: Nothing.


    Signature Spell:

    D-rank Spells:

    C-rank Spells:

    Do not grade the B-rank spells, i want to keep these for when i reach B-rank. They are just here from my previous magic.

    B-rank Spells:

    That was surprisingly easy owo APPROVED!

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