Rena NightWatchers Secondary Magic (jewels already transford)

Teen Sin wrote:Primary Magic: Forest LightSworn
Secondary Magic: Trigram
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: This is a "physical enhancement" type magic. It gives you to ability to see your opponents pressure points and weak spots, it then gives you the ability to find away to attack all of them. It also enhances the physical strength and the speed of your fists
Strengths:
- see opponent weak spots <-- Explain in the description exactly HOW you see the weak spots.
- able to use them against the opponent
- can weaken your opponent
- speed of fists is increased, making it harder to block. <--- How is this done/happening?
- the strength of the hits are increased. <--- How is this done/happening?
Weaknesses:
- only useful for hand to hand combat
- user can suffer from dizziness
- is block-able
- not the best with defense
- not good against heavy armor
- speed magic
Abilities/Powers:

Name: Twin Lion Fists
Rank: D
Type: Physical
Description: After gathering magic in the users fists, the user will skillfully spin towards their target to avoid attacks and strike them. Spectral lion heads will then form around her fists.
Strengths:
- really fast
- increases evasiveness <-- By how much?
- turns hands into strong weapons
Weaknesses:
-the attacks only work on hand to hand combat
-speed magic <-- this is a completely different magic all together. It would get confusing, find another way to describe it.
- can only dodge hand to hand combat hits
- only usable for hand to hand combat.
Duration & Cooldowns
- lasts 3 posts <-- You are telling me that you spin towards the opponent and continuously attack them for three posts whilst increasing evasiveness? Please edit.
- 3 post cool down
- must start storing magic in hands for at least 2 posts, and they have to post that they are storing magic.

Teen Sin wrote:Primary Magic: Forest LightSworn
Secondary Magic: Trigram
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: This is a "physical enhancement) type magic. It gives you to ability to see your opponents pressure points and week spots, it then gives you the ability to find away to attack all of them. It also enhances the physical strength and the speed of your fists
Strengths:
- The magic flows into the users eyes, letting them see some of the opponents weak spots How do you see them? Do they glow? Also, do you have to focus to use this? Please place this as an ability of the magic
- able to use them against the opponent
- can weaken your opponent Remove this because pretty much every magic could do this if applied correctly
- magic power flows threw the fists, increasing the speed of the fists Through not threw
- magic power flows threw the fist making the strength of the hits are increased Same as above
Weaknesses:
- only useful for hand to hand combat
- user can suffer from dizziness Why?
- is block-able Remove. All magic is blockable
- not the best with defense
- not good against heavy armor
- is weak against speed magic Why?
Abilities/Powers:

Name: Twin Lion Fists
Rank: D
Type: Physical
Description: After gathering magic in the users fists, the user will skillfully spin towards their target to avoid attacks and strike them. Spectral lion heads will then form around her fists. The user dodges the first move and continues hitting the opponent. The Lions increase physical attack to strong weapons.
Strengths:
- really fast
- increases evasiveness by no higher than 45%
- turns hands into strong weapons
Weaknesses:
- the attacks only work on hand to hand combat
- speed magic
- can only dodge hand to hand combat hits
- only usable for hand to hand combat.
Duration & Cooldowns
- the twin lions last 3 posts
- 3 post coll down
- must start storing magic in hands for at least 2 posts, and they have to post that they are storing magic.

Teen Sin wrote:Primary Magic: Forest LightSworn
Secondary Magic: Trigram
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: This is a "physical enhancement) type magic that enhances the physical strength and the speed of your fists , causing you to cause great damage towards your aponent with nothing but your fists. <-- Opponent not aponent
Strengths:
- magic power flows threw the fists, increasing the speed of the fists <--- Through not threw
- magic power flows threw the fist making the strength of the hits are increased <--- Through not threw
Weaknesses:
- only useful for hand to hand combat
- user can suffer from dizziness due to the speed of the fists.
- not good against heavy armor
Abilities/Powers:

Name: Twin Lion Fists
Rank: D
Type: Physical
Description: After gathering magic in the users fists, the user will skillfully spin towards their target to avoid attacks and strike them. Spectral lion heads will then form around her fists. The user dodges the first move and continues hitting the opponent. The Lions increase physical attack to strong weapons.
Strengths:
- really fast
- increases evasiveness by no higher than 45%
- turns hands into strong weapons
Weaknesses:
- the attacks only work on hand to hand combat
- can only dodge hand to hand combat hits
- only usable for hand to hand combat.
Duration & Cooldowns
- the twin lions last 3 posts
- 3 post coll down
- must start storing magic in hands for at least 2 posts, and they have to post that they are storing magic.