The Angel Hidden In the Blood

Chiyo Kuroki wrote:Primary Magic: The Angel Hidden In The Blood
Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
Caster or Holder: caster
Description: The Angel hidden in the blood is a water and darkness based magic. It is an offensive magic, a powerful one capable of incapacitating an enemy quite easily. This magic has been called evil, and many fear it's power. I would like a little more description on this magic, such as what it exactly does, how it affects people and/or the user, how it came to be, et cetera.

Chiyo uses it to strike at the very heart of enemy ranks, causing mass panic amoung them. She uses it to sow chaos so that her allies can more easily take the enemy out. I would also like a little bit more information on how Chiyo uses this magic to strike fear into her enemies. For instance, what exactly would "sowing chaos" be to Chiyo when using the magic?
Strengths:
-stunning (in a way)
-sowing chaos
-immobilizing an enemy
Weaknesses:
-takes large amounts of magical energy.
-requires full attention of the user,leaving them vulnerable while using it
-if used too often can create physical stress for the user.
-may temporarily blind the user if too much magical energy is poured into it.
Lineage: Wrath Of Neptune https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t4006-volume-iv-the-being
Unique Abilities:
-The first unique ability this magic provides is known as Bloodwings, giving the user wings made of black blood, which are about 15 feet in wingspan. These wings allow flight, but are not an offensive ability.
-the second unique ability allowed by this magic is the ability to control one's own blood. The user controls their own blood only after it has been spilled, however.
-the third ua is the need for far less bood than any normal human. Chiyo needs up to 25% less blood, therefore enabling her to use her own blood as a weapon. I'm not entirely certain the point of this UA, as blood isn't a calculated stat on the site, so I'm going to suggest that you change it.
Spells:
Spell Template
Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS. As a starter character at D rank, you start off with 4 spells.

Name: Bloodbending
Rank:D
Type: offensive,
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: This technique allows the user to control the very blood running through another person's veins, causing immobilization and physical pain If it paralyzes the target, I suggest paralyzing for a single post. This spell is instant If the spell is instance, I suggest changing the duration from 3 posts to Instant, once the target has been locked it is very hard to fight off the user's will, who by that point may very well be controlling the target's body like a puppet.
Strengths:
-immobilzing the target
-controlling the target's body
Weaknesses:
-the user is also rendered nearly immobile, as it requires much attention
-takes a great deal of energy
you need one more weakness than strength

Name: Twisting eruption of the Dual phantom
Rank:D
Type: offensive/defensive
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: A huge bust of energy is required for this spell. This spell creates a pair of beings of water, that charge and destroy everything in thier path, with a range of 15 meters at d rank, increasing by 10 for every rank after D range of spells do not increase as the user ranks up. If you want a stronger, more ranged spell, you have to upgrade the rank of the spell each time you rank up.
Strengths:
-destroying large targets
- +25% damage against fire wizards
Weaknesses:
-ice magic
-takes a great deal of energy
You need one more weakness than strength

Name: Blood control
Rank:D
Type: offensive/defensive
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: This spell allows the user to control their own blood as a weapon. It may take the form of a sword or a whip, but it is guaranteed to hurt.
Strengths:
-Targeting single enemies.
-Dealing damage to a single enemy from close range.
Weaknesses:
-long range combat
-takes a great deal of energy
You need one more weakness than strength

Name: Ragged whirlwind drain
Rank:D
Type: offensive/defensive
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: This spell allows the user to drain some blood from an enemy to use as a weapon, which normally takes the form of a bullet. The bullet moves at speeds of 40m/s This needs a range and speed for D rank spells is usually half the range or the full range, itself.
Strengths:
-Targeting single enemies.
-Dealing damage to a muliple enemies from a long range
Weaknesses:
-close range range combat
-takes a great deal of energy
You need one more weakness than strength