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    Heavenly Body Magic (Complete)

    Haruhi Kanashimi
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    Post by Haruhi Kanashimi 19th September 2015, 2:08 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Heavenly Body Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    This magic allows the caster to use the properties of many astronomical objects for battle.The caster can create powerful light blasts or beams of great destructive power, that could be confused as starlight, at their opponents. The caster is also capable of using the power of gravity against the opponent; the strength can be comparable to a black hole. The use of such Magic can be used to enhance the caster's own physical skills drastically for various purposes.
    Haruhi uses this magic in order to deal massive damage, and cause major havoc in the world around her. She uses this magic to enhance her physical characteristics in order to make her dimiutive frame much more power. She uses this magic in ways that would shock her enemies, and keep them guessing in the spastic nature of a child. She uses this magic to alter the celestial bodies or the physical properites of celestial bodies to change her own physical properties.
    Strengths:
    * Destructive: This magic is destructive it causes a lot of explosions, and attacks with various ranges.
    * Holy: This magic counts as both holy magic, and light magic thus doing serious damage to things that would suffer from this kind of magic.
    * Outside: This magic excels at combat that is outside thus while outside she has far more powerful spells at her disposal.

    Weaknesses:
    * Build off: This magic has several spells that build off of each other in order to even work.
    * Outside: This magic has to use it's biggest spells while outside with access to the sky.
    * Destructive: This magic is destructive and has a very large chance to do a lot of collateral damage, and harm allies.
    * No Defense: There is no spell in her arsenal that is defensive in nature.

    Lineage:
    Magician's Spirit:
    Description: The first human gifted with the ability of magic became a powerful Sage of wisdom, and was the messenger of the Gods. Able to lift up mountains, part the oceans, conjure meteors, summon massive tornadoes, Open black holes out of thin air, call upon the stars themselves to come to his aid. However, he was not immortal, and though he did magnificent deeds and told the word of the Gods; he knew he would not live forever and that they would choose another. Unable to let go of his duties, he chained his spirit to the physical world so it can inherit a new host, and transfer his powers to them. Doing this however, relinquished all of his omni-potent power. Those who inherit his spirit, will gain him as a mentor of guidance; but will need to unlock the power of the magic themselves.
    Ability: 25% increase to magical power, ability to identify the enemies magic. Ability to summon mage to fight, able to communicate with an ancient spirit with vast information.
    Usage: The user will passively gain a large increase of magical power, as well as have the old Sage share their body for guidance. They can however, summon the mage to perform a powerful spell in times of great crises once per thread. Doing this however, will drain the user of their available magic, and relinquish the Sage's wisdom and guidance for 10 posts.
    Spell: Flare of Solaria- Crash of the Majestic Sun; The Sage will appear next to the user and conjures a Meteor to fall from the sky upon a 30 meter radius with an explosion of fifteen meter radius.
    Unique Abilities:
    * Gravity Flight: Haruhi manipulates the gravity around herself in order to allow her to lift off of the ground and fly up to 50 meters in the air, and she can hover as little as a foot off of the ground.
    * Astrophysics: This magic gives Haruhi an extensive knowledge of Astrophysics, and that gives her an advantage when using her magic, or fighting someone who uses a magic similar to it.
    * Gravity Immune: Being as Haruhi can manipulate her own personal gravity it becomes impossible to force her gravity to change. For anyone her rank or lower.
    Spells:


    Signature Spell
    Name: Heavenly Slap
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Duration:1
    Cooldown:2
    Description:
    For this spell Haruhi infuses her hand with a far denser gravitational field that also causes her hand to glow with a bright golden light. This causes her hand to become much harder and she will slap it across someone's face, or any other part of their body she can hit. This causes her to send someone flying if they are a rank lower than the spell's rank. Otherwise she will just knock them back slightly. This spell deals S rank damage.
    Strengths:
    * You Just Got Slapped: You just got slapped by a 12 year old girl. You are so ashamed it takes 1 post to recover from the embarrassment (You are stunned 1 post. Unless you are higher ranked than the spell
    * Knockback: If this spell connects it will send any target weaker than Haruhi flying, and it will slightly knockback any target as strong as she is.
    * Access: Haruhi always has access to this spell no matter where she is.
    Weaknesses:
    * Melee: This attack is only able to reach as far as Haruhi's arm is.
    * No Boost: This spell gets no boost when used under a star filled sky.
    * Hand: If Haruhi doesn't have the use of her hands she can't use this spell.
    * Armor: If Haruhi slaps someone wearing Artifact Armor this spell gains a cooldown of 2 in order for Haruhi to nurse her throbbing hand.

    D Ranks
    D Rank:

    C Rank
    C Rank:
    B Rank
    B Rank:

    A Rank
    A Rank:
    S Rank
    S Rank:


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 22nd September 2015, 4:43 am

    Haruhi Kanashimi wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Heavenly Body Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    This magic allows the caster to use the properties of many astronomical objects for battle.The caster can create powerful light blasts or beams of great destructive power, that could be confused as starlight, at their opponents. The caster is also capable of using the power of gravity against the opponent; the strength can be comparable to a black hole. The use of such Magic can be used to enhance the caster's own physical skills drastically for various purposes.
    Haruhi uses this magic in order to deal massive damage, and cause major havoc in the world around her. She uses this magic to enhance her physical characteristics in order to make her dimiutive frame much more power. She uses this magic in ways that would shock her enemies, and keep them guessing in the spastic nature of a child. She uses this magic to alter the celestial bodies or the physical properites of celestial bodies to change her own physical properties.
    Strengths:
    * Destructive: This magic is destructive it causes a lot of explosions, and attacks with various ranges.
    * Holy: This magic counts as both holy magic, and light magic thus doing serious damage to things that would suffer from this kind of magic.
    * Starry sky: This magic gains 25% extra strength when it is used under a star-filled sky. This would need to be a unique ability rather than a strength of the magic
    * Gravity Immune: Haruhi is immune to gravity changes that are forced upon her by anyone her rank or lower. This would need to be a unique ability rather than a strength of the magic

    Weaknesses:
    * Build off: This magic has several spells that build off of each other in order to even work.
    * Outside: This magic has to use it's biggest spells while outside with access to the sky.
    * Starless-sky: This magic suffers a 25% damage reduction penalty while it is used without stars in the sky. This contradicts another strength. You've said it gains 25% strength when under a star filled sky, but you somehow also lose 25% when not under a star filled sky so you can never have your base amount? Also as said this should be under a unique ability
    * Destructive: This magic is destructive and has a very large chance to do a lot of collateral damage, and harm allies.
    * No Defense: There is no spell in her arsenal that is defensive in nature.

    Lineage:
    Magician's Spirit:
    Description: The first human gifted with the ability of magic became a powerful Sage of wisdom, and was the messenger of the Gods. Able to lift up mountains, part the oceans, conjure meteors, summon massive tornadoes, Open black holes out of thin air, call upon the stars themselves to come to his aid. However, he was not immortal, and though he did magnificent deeds and told the word of the Gods; he knew he would not live forever and that they would choose another. Unable to let go of his duties, he chained his spirit to the physical world so it can inherit a new host, and transfer his powers to them. Doing this however, relinquished all of his omni-potent power. Those who inherit his spirit, will gain him as a mentor of guidance; but will need to unlock the power of the magic themselves.
    Ability: 25% increase to magical power, ability to identify the enemies magic. Ability to summon mage to fight, able to communicate with an ancient spirit with vast information.
    Usage: The user will passively gain a large increase of magical power, as well as have the old Sage share their body for guidance. They can however, summon the mage to perform a powerful spell in times of great crises once per thread. Doing this however, will drain the user of their available magic, and relinquish the Sage's wisdom and guidance for 10 posts.
    Spell: Flare of Solaria- Crash of the Majestic Sun; The Sage will appear next to the user and conjures a Meteor to fall from the sky upon a 30 meter radius with an explosion of fifteen meter radius.
    Unique Abilities:
    * Gravity Flight: Haruhi manipulates the gravity around herself in order to allow her to lift off of the ground and fly up to 50 meters in the air, and she can hover as little as a foot off of the ground.
    * Astrophysics: This magic gives Haruhi an extensive knowledge of Astrophysics, and that gives her an advantage when using her magic, or fighting someone who uses a magic similar to it.
    * Astronomy: This magic gives Haruhi an amazing knowledge of Astronomy allowing her to identify every astrological figure in the sky. I feel this isn't really needed as a unique ability. It doesn't give you any advantages. Just have this as something you know IC
    * Gravity: This magic allows Haruhi to manipulate the gravity around herself and other bodies, items, or debris that has been through space. This needs some serious clarification as so far there are no limits and no mechanics to this

    Spells:
    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS
    Signature Spell
    Name: Heavenly Slap
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Duration:1
    Cooldown:6 This is way too high. Drop it to three or even two
    Description:
    For this spell Haruhi infuses her hand with a far denser gravitational field that also causes her hand to glow with a bright golden light. This causes her hand to become much harder and she will slap it across someone's face, or any other part of their body she can hit. This causes her to send someone flying if they are a rank lower than her Than the rank of the spell. Otherwise she will just knock them back slightly. Also I assume this does base D rank damage?
    Strengths:
    * You Just Got Slapped: You just got slapped by a 12 year old girl. You are so shamed it takes 1 post to recover from the embarassment (You are stunned 1 post)This needs some rank to it as higher ranks shouldn't receive as much stun as a normal mage
    * Knockback: If this spell connects it will send any target weaker than Haruhi flying, and it will slightly knockback any target as strong as she is.
    * Access: Haruhi always has access to this spell no matter where she is.
    Weaknesses:
    * Melee: This attack is only able to reach as far as Haruhi's arm is.
    * No Boost: This spell gets no boost when used under a star filled sky.
    * Hand: If haruhi doesn't have the use of her hands she can't use this spell.
    * Penalty: She still suffers the penalty of her magic if she uses this spell without stars in the sky. As the 'boosted by starlight thing' should be a unique ability I can't really accept this as a weakness. Also your magic's weaknesses should not be the same as your spells.

    D Ranks
    D Rank:

    C Rank
    C Rank:
    B Rank
    B Rank:

    A Rank
    A Rank:
    S Rank
    S Rank:

    I've made comments on your magic, unique abilities and D ranks. Fix those and use them as reference for other spells then bump this and i'll review the rest :) Also sorry for the wait.


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    Post by Haruhi Kanashimi 22nd September 2015, 9:02 am

    Bump.

    Also as a note Heavenly Slap is my signature, and I'm an SS ranked Mage.


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    Rosetta Crawford
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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 22nd September 2015, 11:59 am

    Haruhi Kanashimi wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Heavenly Body Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    This magic allows the caster to use the properties of many astronomical objects for battle.The caster can create powerful light blasts or beams of great destructive power, that could be confused as starlight, at their opponents. The caster is also capable of using the power of gravity against the opponent; the strength can be comparable to a black hole. The use of such Magic can be used to enhance the caster's own physical skills drastically for various purposes.
    Haruhi uses this magic in order to deal massive damage, and cause major havoc in the world around her. She uses this magic to enhance her physical characteristics in order to make her dimiutive frame much more power. She uses this magic in ways that would shock her enemies, and keep them guessing in the spastic nature of a child. She uses this magic to alter the celestial bodies or the physical properites of celestial bodies to change her own physical properties.
    Strengths:
    * Destructive: This magic is destructive it causes a lot of explosions, and attacks with various ranges.
    * Holy: This magic counts as both holy magic, and light magic thus doing serious damage to things that would suffer from this kind of magic.
    * Outside: This magic excels at combat that is outside thus while outside she has far more powerful spells at her disposal.

    Weaknesses:
    * Build off: This magic has several spells that build off of each other in order to even work.
    * Outside: This magic has to use it's biggest spells while outside with access to the sky.
    * Destructive: This magic is destructive and has a very large chance to do a lot of collateral damage, and harm allies.
    * No Defense: There is no spell in her arsenal that is defensive in nature.

    Lineage:
    Magician's Spirit:
    Description: The first human gifted with the ability of magic became a powerful Sage of wisdom, and was the messenger of the Gods. Able to lift up mountains, part the oceans, conjure meteors, summon massive tornadoes, Open black holes out of thin air, call upon the stars themselves to come to his aid. However, he was not immortal, and though he did magnificent deeds and told the word of the Gods; he knew he would not live forever and that they would choose another. Unable to let go of his duties, he chained his spirit to the physical world so it can inherit a new host, and transfer his powers to them. Doing this however, relinquished all of his omni-potent power. Those who inherit his spirit, will gain him as a mentor of guidance; but will need to unlock the power of the magic themselves.
    Ability: 25% increase to magical power, ability to identify the enemies magic. Ability to summon mage to fight, able to communicate with an ancient spirit with vast information.
    Usage: The user will passively gain a large increase of magical power, as well as have the old Sage share their body for guidance. They can however, summon the mage to perform a powerful spell in times of great crises once per thread. Doing this however, will drain the user of their available magic, and relinquish the Sage's wisdom and guidance for 10 posts.
    Spell: Flare of Solaria- Crash of the Majestic Sun; The Sage will appear next to the user and conjures a Meteor to fall from the sky upon a 30 meter radius with an explosion of fifteen meter radius.
    Unique Abilities:
    * Gravity Flight: Haruhi manipulates the gravity around herself in order to allow her to lift off of the ground and fly up to 50 meters in the air, and she can hover as little as a foot off of the ground.
    * Astrophysics: This magic gives Haruhi an extensive knowledge of Astrophysics, and that gives her an advantage when using her magic, or fighting someone who uses a magic similar to it.
    * Gravity Immune: Being as Haruhi can manipulate her own personal gravity it becomes impossible to force her gravity to change. For anyone her rank or lower.
    Spells:


    Signature Spell
    Name: Heavenly Slap
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Duration:1
    Cooldown:2
    Description:
    For this spell Haruhi infuses her hand with a far denser gravitational field that also causes her hand to glow with a bright golden light. This causes her hand to become much harder and she will slap it across someone's face, or any other part of their body she can hit. This causes her to send someone flying if they are a rank lower than the spell's rank. Otherwise she will just knock them back slightly. This spell deals S rank damage.
    Strengths:
    * You Just Got Slapped: You just got slapped by a 12 year old girl. You are so ashamed it takes 1 post to recover from the embarrassment (You are stunned 1 post. Unless you are higher ranked than the spell
    * Knockback: If this spell connects it will send any target weaker than Haruhi flying, and it will slightly knockback any target as strong as she is.
    * Access: Haruhi always has access to this spell no matter where she is.
    Weaknesses:
    * Melee: This attack is only able to reach as far as Haruhi's arm is.
    * No Boost: This spell gets no boost when used under a star filled sky.
    * Hand: If Haruhi doesn't have the use of her hands she can't use this spell.
    * Armor: If Haruhi slaps someone wearing Artifact Armor this spell gains a cooldown of 2 in order for Haruhi to nurse her throbbing hand.

    D Ranks
    D Rank:

    C Rank
    C Rank:
    B Rank
    B Rank:

    A Rank
    A Rank:
    S Rank
    S Rank:

    Ok i've gone over this to some extent and there are a few things.

    Firstly you get:
    1 S rank sig spell (your rank maxing at S)
    1 D rank sig spell(stays at D rank)

    Secondly:
    Cooldowns seem a bit high on most of these spells

    Thirdly:
    I'm not happy with these 'pierces all armor and defenses spells' as that just means its impossible to defend against your spells.
    I can be ok with it ignoring part of defense or armor, and if the armor or weapon is low enough it ignoring the defense (or just smashing through it) but....equal rank should be able to block it to some extent.
    Also with how armor works now even if their armor takes the blow they still get some damage.


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    Post by Haruhi Kanashimi 22nd September 2015, 6:40 pm

    Bump:

    Notes

    Firstly- Do I have to put it in now? Or can I put it in later?

    Second- I figured over shooting would be less offensive than undershooting.

    Lastly- If you notice all of my most powerful spells are only useable while Meteor is active. Meteor is giving them a power boost like it seems to do in the anime. Also Meteor has a short duration compared to some of the full takeovers, and some other spells I've seen. It also has a very long cooldown so for the most part my extremely powerful spells won't be available to me. That's kinda the whole focal point of my magic. Insane burst damage, and suffering a lot of backlash after the burst is done.


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 23rd September 2015, 7:12 am

    Firslty: Nope. Your choice.
    secondly: That's fine. There is a guideline in the rules on rough cooldowns and durations
    Thirdly: Even if it does rely on another spell. I'm not having you ignore all armor and defenses of a mage of that rank. Its just ridiculously too much. That means your S rank spells are essentially unblockable except by (at an estimate) five people on site only two or three of which are active. Thats just...not gonna fly. Ignore part of defenses sure. ignore defenses of two ranks below you...fine. Ignore one rank below...maybe. Ignore rank of the spell? No


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    Post by Haruhi Kanashimi 23rd September 2015, 8:50 am

    I went through and edited my spells to make it so they only ignored defense that is 2 ranks below them. Yet, if I see someone of B rank saying they avoid my S rank spells with magic defenses, or armor, then I'm going to come to you to talk about it.


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 23rd September 2015, 11:06 am

    Haruhi Kanashimi wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Heavenly Body Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    This magic allows the caster to use the properties of many astronomical objects for battle.The caster can create powerful light blasts or beams of great destructive power, that could be confused as starlight, at their opponents. The caster is also capable of using the power of gravity against the opponent; the strength can be comparable to a black hole. The use of such Magic can be used to enhance the caster's own physical skills drastically for various purposes.
    Haruhi uses this magic in order to deal massive damage, and cause major havoc in the world around her. She uses this magic to enhance her physical characteristics in order to make her dimiutive frame much more power. She uses this magic in ways that would shock her enemies, and keep them guessing in the spastic nature of a child. She uses this magic to alter the celestial bodies or the physical properites of celestial bodies to change her own physical properties.
    Strengths:
    * Destructive: This magic is destructive it causes a lot of explosions, and attacks with various ranges.
    * Holy: This magic counts as both holy magic, and light magic thus doing serious damage to things that would suffer from this kind of magic.
    * Outside: This magic excels at combat that is outside thus while outside she has far more powerful spells at her disposal.

    Weaknesses:
    * Build off: This magic has several spells that build off of each other in order to even work.
    * Outside: This magic has to use it's biggest spells while outside with access to the sky.
    * Destructive: This magic is destructive and has a very large chance to do a lot of collateral damage, and harm allies.
    * No Defense: There is no spell in her arsenal that is defensive in nature.

    Lineage:
    Magician's Spirit:
    Description: The first human gifted with the ability of magic became a powerful Sage of wisdom, and was the messenger of the Gods. Able to lift up mountains, part the oceans, conjure meteors, summon massive tornadoes, Open black holes out of thin air, call upon the stars themselves to come to his aid. However, he was not immortal, and though he did magnificent deeds and told the word of the Gods; he knew he would not live forever and that they would choose another. Unable to let go of his duties, he chained his spirit to the physical world so it can inherit a new host, and transfer his powers to them. Doing this however, relinquished all of his omni-potent power. Those who inherit his spirit, will gain him as a mentor of guidance; but will need to unlock the power of the magic themselves.
    Ability: 25% increase to magical power, ability to identify the enemies magic. Ability to summon mage to fight, able to communicate with an ancient spirit with vast information.
    Usage: The user will passively gain a large increase of magical power, as well as have the old Sage share their body for guidance. They can however, summon the mage to perform a powerful spell in times of great crises once per thread. Doing this however, will drain the user of their available magic, and relinquish the Sage's wisdom and guidance for 10 posts.
    Spell: Flare of Solaria- Crash of the Majestic Sun; The Sage will appear next to the user and conjures a Meteor to fall from the sky upon a 30 meter radius with an explosion of fifteen meter radius.
    Unique Abilities:
    * Gravity Flight: Haruhi manipulates the gravity around herself in order to allow her to lift off of the ground and fly up to 50 meters in the air, and she can hover as little as a foot off of the ground.
    * Astrophysics: This magic gives Haruhi an extensive knowledge of Astrophysics, and that gives her an advantage when using her magic, or fighting someone who uses a magic similar to it.
    * Gravity Immune: Being as Haruhi can manipulate her own personal gravity it becomes impossible to force her gravity to change. For anyone her rank or lower.
    Spells:


    Signature Spell
    Name: Heavenly Slap
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Duration:1
    Cooldown:2
    Description:
    For this spell Haruhi infuses her hand with a far denser gravitational field that also causes her hand to glow with a bright golden light. This causes her hand to become much harder and she will slap it across someone's face, or any other part of their body she can hit. This causes her to send someone flying if they are a rank lower than the spell's rank. Otherwise she will just knock them back slightly. This spell deals S rank damage.
    Strengths:
    * You Just Got Slapped: You just got slapped by a 12 year old girl. You are so ashamed it takes 1 post to recover from the embarrassment (You are stunned 1 post. Unless you are higher ranked than the spell
    * Knockback: If this spell connects it will send any target weaker than Haruhi flying, and it will slightly knockback any target as strong as she is.
    * Access: Haruhi always has access to this spell no matter where she is.
    Weaknesses:
    * Melee: This attack is only able to reach as far as Haruhi's arm is.
    * No Boost: This spell gets no boost when used under a star filled sky.
    * Hand: If Haruhi doesn't have the use of her hands she can't use this spell.
    * Armor: If Haruhi slaps someone wearing Artifact Armor this spell gains a cooldown of 2 in order for Haruhi to nurse her throbbing hand.

    D Ranks
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    C Rank
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    B Rank
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    A Rank
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    S Rank
    S Rank:

    Ok for the most part this looks good, but I need you to put how much damage each spell does. Particularly if it is multi hit or aoe.


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    Heavenly Body Magic (Complete) Empty Re: Heavenly Body Magic (Complete)

    Post by Haruhi Kanashimi 23rd September 2015, 1:15 pm

    I have gone and edited the spell damages. If I missed one then please point it out for me. Otherwise I believe this is ready to be approved.


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