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    Genesis Flame

    Bravo
    Bravo

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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Divinity Blade
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Genesis Flame

    Post by Bravo 7th March 2015, 11:53 am

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Genesis Flame
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Genesis Flame was the first form of fire magic to ever exist. It is the birthing system behind the only Mage that uses its power, Bravo, and has literally made him a human-disguised form of fire. Its power was limited the moment Bravo was discovered on human grounds so the surface he walked on would not be burned in flames simply by his footsteps, nor would any of his surroundings face an extreme amount of heat. Bravo was literally born on the Sun, and reincarnated by the creator of fire to live a proper human life in a human disguise in Fiore; where all extraordinary humans exist.

    Bravo uses Genesis Flame by expanding its components amongst his surroundings, utilizing its properties on himself, or simply unleashing flames with his bare hands. He can reform himself into fire, increase his own heat or his surroundings in certain range, and burn whatever he sets foot on, naturally. Not to mention he can even burn him his own adrenaline to increase it. Should Bravo use the completed state of fire against his enemies, he will often copy what a Molding Mage could do, and reform the flames, or use it by means of full-out offensive activity, and launch the fire away towards his opponent. It depends on his mood.
    Strengths:

    • Ice- Genesis Flame is twice as effective on ice as it is, by comparison, the stronger element in the element table.
    • Fire- Genesis Flame users are immune to natural fire, though only resistant by various percentages on magically-enhanced flames. For example, normally this magic would be 50% resistant against fire-based magic of equal rank, or completely immune to fire-based magic ranked lower.
    • Versatile- There are countless options a Genesis Flame user can produce from the fire in his own body, whether it would be reform, self-utilization techniques, separating components, or even making other sculptures out of fire.


    Weaknesses:

    • Water- Water-based magic is twice as effective against Genesis Flame users. In fact, Genesis Flame users cannot even touch water.
    • Health-Draining: Because the user is literally using fire from his own body- his soul- each spell lowers his health by various percentages.
    • Single-Targeting: There is a concept known as "overdrive" to Genesis Flame users that prohibits them from using their flames on more than one target at a time. This is to prevent the fire in their body from becoming outrageous, and doing such things as burning whatever the user steps on instantly, or increasing the heat surrounding the user exponentially.
    • Fire Slayers- Fire Dragon Slayers, Flame God Slayers, or Flame Demon Slayers are able to eat the flames Bravo produces, though not the ones in his body.


    Lineage:
    Knight of Destiny
    Description: One of the Seven Knights of King Kuroryu, this Knight could predict the future and knows one's destiny leading to the name of the lineage. Using his power, the knight was able to evade death and survive many battles he otherwise wouldn't have, which lead him to grow old, settle down, marry a woman, and have children. His offspring are said to have a similar ability to the knight's name, though it is weaker then before.
    Ability: Allows the user to dodge any spell except for S-Ranks and above three times per a thread.
    Usage: Upon a spell being targeted at the user of the lineage, the user can choose to activate the lineage and dodge it a maximum of three times per a thread. Has no cooldown.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Meltdown- This allows the user to harmlessly burn through whatever can be burned through instantaneously (except people).
    • Reform- This allows the user to freely reform their body into fire, which can then travel at the speed of natural fire as if in its fastest scenario; a flame front in gas- the speed of sound. The user cannot use magic while in this state, nor do any physical damage to the opponent(s).
    • Fired Up- The user can literally ignite the adrenaline in his body to increase all forms of speed (casting speed, running speed, reaction speed, movement, etc) by 20% while magic is present.



    D-Ranked Spells:

    C-Ranked Spells:

    B-Ranked Spells:

    A-Ranked Spells:



    Spell Fusions:


    Signature Spell:
    Bravo
    Bravo

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Destiny
    Position : None
    Posts : 83
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Divinity Blade
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Genesis Flame

    Post by Bravo 8th March 2015, 3:02 pm

    Bump for Chaotic Rumble to review (we discussed him being the judge)
    Bravo
    Bravo

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Destiny
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    Posts : 83
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    Age : 28
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Divinity Blade
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Genesis Flame

    Post by Bravo 14th March 2015, 5:07 pm

    Bumping for a review (this time from anyone)
    Bravo
    Bravo

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    Age : 28
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Divinity Blade
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Genesis Flame

    Post by Bravo 19th March 2015, 3:33 pm

    Bumping again
    Felicity
    Felicity

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    Age : 25
    Experience : 75987.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Toxic Scourge
    Second Skill:
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    Completed Re: Genesis Flame

    Post by Felicity 22nd March 2015, 12:31 pm

    Marking this as my territory. Will go over it as soon as possible.


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    WE'LL HELP TONIGHT TO SPLIT ITS SEAMS
    GIVE THE BRUISES OUT LIKE GIFTS, YOU'LL GET THE PICTURE OF YOUR DREAMS
    Genesis Flame  ObrztW

    Felicity
    Felicity

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Slayer- Dragon Slayer- Dark Guild Ace- S-Rank- A-Rank- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Advertisement Achievement Badge- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Evil Angel
    Position : None
    Posts : 2984
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 25
    Experience : 75987.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Toxic Scourge
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Genesis Flame

    Post by Felicity 23rd March 2015, 3:21 am

    Yo Kichi, waited for too long, eh? Apologizing on the staff's part. owo


    Bravo wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Genesis Flame
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Genesis Flame was the first form of fire magic to ever exist. It is the birthing system behind the only Mage that uses its power, Bravo, and has literally made him a human-disguised form of fire. Its power was limited the moment Bravo was discovered on human grounds so the surface he walked on would not be burned in flames simply by his footsteps, nor would any of his surroundings face an extreme amount of heat. Bravo was literally born on the Sun, and reincarnated by the creator of fire to live a proper human life in a human disguise in Fiore; where all extraordinary humans exist.

    Bravo uses Genesis Flame by expanding its components amongst his surroundings, utilizing its properties on himself, or simply unleashing flames with his bare hands. He can reform himself into fire, increase his own heat or his surroundings in certain range, and burn whatever he sets foot on, naturally. Not to mention he can even burn him his own adrenaline to increase it. Should Bravo use the completed state of fire against his enemies, he will often copy what a Molding Mage could do, and reform the flames, or use it by means of full-out offensive activity, and launch the fire away towards his opponent. It depends on his mood.
    Strengths:

    • Ice- Genesis Flame is twice as effective on ice as it is, by comparison, the stronger element in the element table.
    • Fire- Genesis Flame users are immune to natural fire, though only resistant by various percentages on magically-enhanced flames. For example, normally this magic would be 50% resistant against fire-based magic of equal rank, or completely immune to fire-based magic ranked lower. < I would rather prefer if you set up varying percentages for different lower ranks. So, if you have 20% immunity against D Rank then its 10% immunity against C Rank. Start with 50% for equal rank and distribute for the lower ranks as you see fit.
    • Versatile- There are countless options a Genesis Flame user can produce from the fire in his own body, whether it would be reform, self-utilization techniques, separating components, or even making other sculptures out of fire.


    Weaknesses:

    • Water- Water-based magic is twice as effective against Genesis Flame users. In fact, Genesis Flame users cannot even touch water.
    • Health-Draining: Because the user is literally using fire from his own body- his soul- each spell lowers his health by various percentages.
    • Single-Targeting: There is a concept known as "overdrive" to Genesis Flame users that prohibits them from using their flames on more than one target at a time. This is to prevent the fire in their body from becoming outrageous, and doing such things as burning whatever the user steps on instantly, or increasing the heat surrounding the user exponentially. < You understand that it means no AoE, right?
    • Fire Slayers- Fire Dragon Slayers, Flame God Slayers, or Flame Demon Slayers are able to eat the flames Bravo produces, though not the ones in his body.


    Lineage:
    Knight of Destiny
    Description: One of the Seven Knights of King Kuroryu, this Knight could predict the future and knows one's destiny leading to the name of the lineage. Using his power, the knight was able to evade death and survive many battles he otherwise wouldn't have, which lead him to grow old, settle down, marry a woman, and have children. His offspring are said to have a similar ability to the knight's name, though it is weaker then before.
    Ability: Allows the user to dodge any spell except for S-Ranks and above three times per a thread.
    Usage: Upon a spell being targeted at the user of the lineage, the user can choose to activate the lineage and dodge it a maximum of three times per a thread. Has no cooldown.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Meltdown- This allows the user to harmlessly burn through whatever can be burned through instantaneously (except people). < Non-combative, please.
    • Reform- This allows the user to freely reform their body into fire, which can then travel at the speed of natural fire as if in its fastest scenario; a flame front in gas- the speed of sound. The user cannot use magic while in this state, nor do any physical damage to the opponent(s).
    • Fired Up- The user can literally ignite the adrenaline in his body to increase all forms of speed (casting speed, running speed, reaction speed, movement, etc) by 20% while magic is present.



    D-Ranked Spells:

    C-Ranked Spells:

    B-Ranked Spells:

    A-Ranked Spells:



    Spell Fusions:


    Signature Spell:

    Alright, so, you've tried to make this balanced, I see that and I appreciate it too. But I feel that in the process of balancing, you've actually made it under-powered and that is -absolutely- unnecessary. The whole "losing HP equal to spell rank damage" feels like a bit too much to me. Infact, I'll offer you an idea that I find acceptable in this case--- change it to -half- the damage dealt by the spell you're using. So, instead of losing 12% HP when you use an A Ranked spell, you'll only lose 6% while your opponent loses 12%. Now, I know that 12% is a figure -I- find acceptable and it may actually be much lesser in someone else's eyes, but I guess members will have to depend on the reviewing mod's views in cases such as this until the Stat system comes out.

    Also, over-drive, as I said before, seems unnecessary as well. But, I think its related to the "concept" of this magic that you have in your head, so I'm not gonna make any suggestions regarding it. Just explain it a bit better for me though. >3<


    _____________________________________________________________________________________


    WE'LL HELP TONIGHT TO SPLIT ITS SEAMS
    GIVE THE BRUISES OUT LIKE GIFTS, YOU'LL GET THE PICTURE OF YOUR DREAMS
    Genesis Flame  ObrztW

    Bravo
    Bravo

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Destiny
    Position : None
    Posts : 83
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Divinity Blade
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Genesis Flame

    Post by Bravo 23rd March 2015, 10:13 am

    Requesting deletion. It has come to my mind recently that magic such as this is too basic (just fire) for someone who wants to be creative, such as I, to use. I realized this further after the review may not be the best for me, so I am asking that somebody delete it. Thank you.

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