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    Keira's Crescent Sword Application

    Keiratenshii Nightingale
    Keiratenshii Nightingale

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    Post by Keiratenshii Nightingale 25th October 2014, 8:58 am

    Name: Crescent
    Rank: Strong
    Type: Sword [+]
    Description: History says that Crescent got stuck on a very high mountain 1500 years ago in a war but actually got no idea on why it got free from the mountain. Legend says that it got sealed by the moon guardian but some people said that it was sealed by someone. Crescent glows blue when the moon's rays touched it.
    Crescent is wrapped with a violet cloth and transforms into a dagger when not in use.
    Spoiler:

    Strengths:
    >Crescent becomes stronger when the rays of the moon touched the blade of the sword.
    >Winter season help Crescent to be easier to wield and carry it in battles.
    >Music is another example of the sword since Keira found out that sword has another legend that it originally came from the 9 singing Goddesses "μ's" (pronounced as muse). It also glows but not blue , it glows cerulean.

    Weaknesses:
    >Crescent doesn't transform when the temperature of the atmosphere becomes high.
    >If a single drop of sea water is on Crescent the one wielding it become electrocuted.
    >Summer season makes Crescent heavier and harder to wield.
    >When the sword touch fire , it becomes untouchable since even a fire mage can't even touch it because the one that holds the sword becomes hurt physically.

    Abilities:
    >Tornado - the sword creates a tornado when the wielder twirls it. 50 feet tall , last for 3 posts.
    Cool down: 5 posts
    Weakness: Boulders, Earth Magic, Walls, Wind Magic
    Strength: Wind, Moonlight, Cool Place

    Name: Tornado
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description: ( How the spell is cast, what it looks like, what it does, extra info. Make sure to get into detail. You are required to list a given Speed, Range, Area of Effect, and any applicable measurements (such as the size of a created barrier). All of these are as appropriate. Some spells wont have a speed, some wont have an AoE. But include all that apply.)
    Strengths: ( List all the positive aspects of the spell Like above, list all of the strengths of the spell. You must have at least three strengths. Remember to separate each individually and bullet point them.)
    Weaknesses: ( List all the negative aspects of the spell + THE DURATION AND COOLDOWN list all the weaknesses like above as well. You must have at least one more weakness than strengths. Remember to separate them individually and bullet point them.)


    Last edited by Keiratenshii Nightingale on 29th November 2014, 11:22 pm; edited 7 times in total
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    Post by Cirven 25th October 2014, 10:42 am

    Edits will be in THIS color.

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    Keiratenshii Nightingale
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    Post by Keiratenshii Nightingale 29th October 2014, 12:58 am

    Bump
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    Post by Cirven 29th October 2014, 2:13 pm

    Edits in THIS color. Bump after.

    Keiratenshii Nightingale wrote:Name: Crescent
    Rank: Strong
    Type: Sword
    Description: History says that Crescent got stuck on a very high mountain 1500 years ago in a war but actually got no idea on why it got free from the mountain. Legend says that it got sealed by the moon guardian but some people said that it was sealed by someone. Crescent glows blue when the moon's rays touched it.
    Crescent is wrapped with a violet cloth and transforms into a dagger when not in use.
    Spoiler:

    Strengths:
    >Crescent becomes stronger when the rays of the moon touched the blade of the sword.
    Will need at least two more strengths here.
    Weaknesses:
    >Crescent doesn't transform when the temperature of the atmosphere becomes high.
    >If a single drop of sea water is on Crescent the one wielding it become electrocuted.
    Will need at least 2 more weaknesses here.
    Abilities:
    >Tornado - the sword creates a tornado when the wielder twirls it. Need more details in this. How much damage does the tornado do? How big is it? How long does it stay active?
    Cool down: 5 posts
    Weakness: Boulders
    Strength: Wind
    I need you to have 3 strengths and 4 weaknesses here. Also I will need you to explain them in a sentence at least.
    >Moon's power - The sword increases the power of the owner. I take it you mean 'power' as in the sword does more damage, right? If so how much more damage does it do?
    Cool down: 6 posts
    Weakness: Sunlight
    Strength: Moonlight
    Same as above. I need more details in both of them and need 3 strengths and 4 weaknesses at least. They also should be different weaknesses and strengths.
    >Glow - it only glows when the moonlight touched it and it increases the strength of the sword.
    Weakness: Sunlight, Day
    Strengths: Moonlight, Night
    Last thing, you only get one ability with a strong weapon so you will need to pick which ability above you want to have.


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    Keiratenshii Nightingale
    Keiratenshii Nightingale

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    Post by Keiratenshii Nightingale 30th October 2014, 2:36 am

    Bump
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    Post by Keiratenshii Nightingale 28th November 2014, 5:31 am

    bumpingbumpingbuuuuuumping
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    Post by Cirven 28th November 2014, 8:36 am

    Sorry it took me so long to reply to this. Don't know how this got jumbled up with other things.

    So for your ability it needs to be in a spell format and state its rank as well have a 3-4 ratio for strengths and weaknesses. Also damage here goes by rank and depending on the rank of the spell is dependent on the damage it does among some other things. The rank of the spell should be D-rank seeing as weapon abilities/spells scale with the user which means the damage the spell causes will usually be D-rank.

    Lower the duration of the spell to 3 posts too and the damage will have to be messed with more seeing as it is a damage spell with a duration.

    Please edit this spell as such.


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    Keiratenshii Nightingale
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    Post by Keiratenshii Nightingale 28th November 2014, 9:05 am

    Bump .3.
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    Post by Cirven 29th November 2014, 9:07 pm

    Your ability needs to be in a spell template like the one below. Also this needs to state how much damage it does per turn in this template and the rank of the spell should be known which is D-rank seeing as it scales with your rank. Bump after you make the edits.

    Spell Template:



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    Post by Jiyu Kazehime 16th December 2017, 6:10 pm

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